A/n: yup...ive decided to write this chapter over! The last ending was SO bad...I flamed myself! (sort of.....)anyway.....
*Jaken pops out of nowhere*
Jaken: Hey! Stop beating me up!
Me: eh???
Jaken: you wont admit it??!! Well face the wrath of my (the stick with 2 heads..forgot what it was called...heh...heh...)
*Jaken throws huge ball of flame at Me*
Me:AAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*runs for life*
Me: eh...while im running away from Jaken...*gasp* go on and read this *pant* fan fic....
*keeps running for life*
Jaken: You won't get away from me THIS time!!
*~Alternate Ending(Starring Fluffy and Kagome) Part I~*
Kagome was walking in the woods with Seshoumaru.
*something is missing......* She thought.
*Hmm....It's too quiet...* Seshoumaru thought.
Suddenly, both realized what was going on.....
"Wheres Rin and Jaken?!?!" both cried.
Rin and Jaken were lost in a swamp.
"Im scared!!" cried Rin.
"Be quiet you stinky girl!" Jaken nervously said. (sorry about the stinky part...couldn't think of anything...v_v)
"Where are we???" Rin said again.
"Somewhere!" yelled Jaken.
"WWWWWAAAHHHHH!!!!!!" Rin started crying.
"AAAHH!!! Stop that noise!!" Jaken covered his ears and cried. (Does he have ears....hmm....most likely eh??)
"WWWWAAAAHHHH!!!!" the sound rung through the woods, and Kagome and Seshoumaru immediately ran toward the sound.
Kagome was the first to reach Rin. (Lets just say Seshoumaru let Kagome go first...)
"RIN!" She shouted happily.
She ran towards the little girl.....closer...closer....a few more steps.....*STEP!*
Kagome stepped on Jakens head, smooshing him face first into the swamp (HA! Eat mud Jaken!!)
Kagome, not caring about Jaken, came up to Rin.
"WWAAHH!!! I was so scared!!" Rin cried as she ran to Kagome.
Seshoumaru slowly walked up to Jaken.
"Jaken" Seshoumaru said.
"Y-Yes m'lord?" Jaken said as he quickly stood up.
Seshoumaru looked at Jaken. Jaken was covered with mud, from head to toe. Jaken looked just like a mud youkai except for the two round eyes that stood out against the mud.
"Jaken" Seshoumaru said, "Go wash yourself"
"Right away Seshoumaru-sama!!" Jaken ran to find a lake he could wash in.
~~~~
Inuyasha, extremely depressed, was just lying in a tree, thinking when....
"WWWWAAAAHHHH!!!!"
Inuyasha ear's perked up.*Twitch* *Twitch*(I just had to put that..hehe..)
*A little girl is crying! She must be in danger!* Inuyasha thought.
He could smell a youkai around her (It was Jaken but Jaken was covered in mud so Inuyasha couldn't really smell him...)
Inuyasha ran towards the little girl, and saw....
"Kagome..."
****
Kagome picked up Rin, who was amazingly clean for once (It's a miracle!!)
"Youre okay now Rin" Kagome said softly.
Seshoumaru walked up to Kagome and took Rin from her.
"Rin, don't run off like that again." He said sternly.
"Hai!(yes)" Rin said and she saluted.
Seshoumaru sniffed....
"Inuyasha...."
"huh?" Kagome said.
"Inuyasha, come out." Seshoumaru said. "I know youre here"
Inuyasha stepped out of the shadows.
"Kagome...youre still with that....that cold-hearted bastard?" he said.
"Shut up, you miserable half human before I kill you. Kagome, lets go." Seshoumaru said.
"No..."Inuyasha pleaded. "Come with me"
"Kagome" Seshoumaru said.
"Lets go" Inuyasha said.
"Don't listen to this wimpy hanyou....remember how he hurt you."
"Don't listen to him! He's just using you!"
"Temme.....you think that I, Seshoumaru, would stand your lies?"
"Shut up"
And the two bickered on......
Kagome listened to both of them, and her head was pounding with confusion.
*Who.....Who should I go with??*
*Inuyasha...I loved him once...but he hurt me*
*Seshoumaru....he was my enemy...but hes changed......*
*Who should I go with?!?!?!?*
Under the strain, she snapped.
"I DON'T WANT TO GO WITH EITHER OF YOU!!!!" she screamed.
She ran out of the woods and jumped back into the well.
She had a pounding headache. She jumped out of the well and went into her room. She fell into a deep sleep....
Seshoumaru stared at the fire. Rin was sleeping and Jaken was guarding the area.
Seshoumaru remembered what had happened earlier.
*Why was I so persistent in making her come with me? Shes only a human*
**Snicker* *chuckle* Seshoumaru, I cant believe you don't know it yet...* his conscience said.
*Shut up..Who are you* He asked
*O..nothing...just your conscience...*
*Well what are you talking about*
*nothing...just how you don't know...or should I say...don't want to admit...*
*Get to the point*
*oo...you wouldn't want to know* His conscience said teasingly.
*Tell me now*
*Don't think im too harsh but...* his conscience drawled*
*I said..tell me NOW* Seshoumaru growled threatingly in his mind..
*hmph* his conscience huffed *youre no fun...fine ill say it...*
*You love Kagome*
"WHAT?!?!?!??!?!?!"
A/N: okay..that's the end!
Seshoumaru: Hey..I want to know more
Rin: wheres jaken sama?
Me: eh...nothing...I just tied him to a tree...and stole his staff....and beat him on the head with it.....
*everyone sweatdrops*
Fluffy: anyway....hurry up and write before I use my poison claws and kill you
Me: *evil grin* you wouldn't want to do that...
Fluffy: Give me a reason why
Me: *whips out laptop and starts typing* Inuyasha comes by...
*inuyasha comes by*
ME: Suddenly, Inuyasha faints
*inuyasha faints*
Me: Seshoumaru catches him
*seshie does just that*
Me: and his face gets closer..closer...
Seshie: STOP! I cant believe im being shamed by a human girl...fine fine...you get your way...ggrr....
Inuyasha: *wakes up* bleah...your breath smells like dog breath
Seshie: Shut up
well R&R okay?? I think this is a lot better then the last alternate ending...
Everyone: DUH!!
*readers bonk author on the head that says..."DUH!!"*
*Jaken pops out of nowhere*
Jaken: Hey! Stop beating me up!
Me: eh???
Jaken: you wont admit it??!! Well face the wrath of my (the stick with 2 heads..forgot what it was called...heh...heh...)
*Jaken throws huge ball of flame at Me*
Me:AAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*runs for life*
Me: eh...while im running away from Jaken...*gasp* go on and read this *pant* fan fic....
*keeps running for life*
Jaken: You won't get away from me THIS time!!
*~Alternate Ending(Starring Fluffy and Kagome) Part I~*
Kagome was walking in the woods with Seshoumaru.
*something is missing......* She thought.
*Hmm....It's too quiet...* Seshoumaru thought.
Suddenly, both realized what was going on.....
"Wheres Rin and Jaken?!?!" both cried.
Rin and Jaken were lost in a swamp.
"Im scared!!" cried Rin.
"Be quiet you stinky girl!" Jaken nervously said. (sorry about the stinky part...couldn't think of anything...v_v)
"Where are we???" Rin said again.
"Somewhere!" yelled Jaken.
"WWWWWAAAHHHHH!!!!!!" Rin started crying.
"AAAHH!!! Stop that noise!!" Jaken covered his ears and cried. (Does he have ears....hmm....most likely eh??)
"WWWWAAAAHHHH!!!!" the sound rung through the woods, and Kagome and Seshoumaru immediately ran toward the sound.
Kagome was the first to reach Rin. (Lets just say Seshoumaru let Kagome go first...)
"RIN!" She shouted happily.
She ran towards the little girl.....closer...closer....a few more steps.....*STEP!*
Kagome stepped on Jakens head, smooshing him face first into the swamp (HA! Eat mud Jaken!!)
Kagome, not caring about Jaken, came up to Rin.
"WWAAHH!!! I was so scared!!" Rin cried as she ran to Kagome.
Seshoumaru slowly walked up to Jaken.
"Jaken" Seshoumaru said.
"Y-Yes m'lord?" Jaken said as he quickly stood up.
Seshoumaru looked at Jaken. Jaken was covered with mud, from head to toe. Jaken looked just like a mud youkai except for the two round eyes that stood out against the mud.
"Jaken" Seshoumaru said, "Go wash yourself"
"Right away Seshoumaru-sama!!" Jaken ran to find a lake he could wash in.
~~~~
Inuyasha, extremely depressed, was just lying in a tree, thinking when....
"WWWWAAAAHHHH!!!!"
Inuyasha ear's perked up.*Twitch* *Twitch*(I just had to put that..hehe..)
*A little girl is crying! She must be in danger!* Inuyasha thought.
He could smell a youkai around her (It was Jaken but Jaken was covered in mud so Inuyasha couldn't really smell him...)
Inuyasha ran towards the little girl, and saw....
"Kagome..."
****
Kagome picked up Rin, who was amazingly clean for once (It's a miracle!!)
"Youre okay now Rin" Kagome said softly.
Seshoumaru walked up to Kagome and took Rin from her.
"Rin, don't run off like that again." He said sternly.
"Hai!(yes)" Rin said and she saluted.
Seshoumaru sniffed....
"Inuyasha...."
"huh?" Kagome said.
"Inuyasha, come out." Seshoumaru said. "I know youre here"
Inuyasha stepped out of the shadows.
"Kagome...youre still with that....that cold-hearted bastard?" he said.
"Shut up, you miserable half human before I kill you. Kagome, lets go." Seshoumaru said.
"No..."Inuyasha pleaded. "Come with me"
"Kagome" Seshoumaru said.
"Lets go" Inuyasha said.
"Don't listen to this wimpy hanyou....remember how he hurt you."
"Don't listen to him! He's just using you!"
"Temme.....you think that I, Seshoumaru, would stand your lies?"
"Shut up"
And the two bickered on......
Kagome listened to both of them, and her head was pounding with confusion.
*Who.....Who should I go with??*
*Inuyasha...I loved him once...but he hurt me*
*Seshoumaru....he was my enemy...but hes changed......*
*Who should I go with?!?!?!?*
Under the strain, she snapped.
"I DON'T WANT TO GO WITH EITHER OF YOU!!!!" she screamed.
She ran out of the woods and jumped back into the well.
She had a pounding headache. She jumped out of the well and went into her room. She fell into a deep sleep....
Seshoumaru stared at the fire. Rin was sleeping and Jaken was guarding the area.
Seshoumaru remembered what had happened earlier.
*Why was I so persistent in making her come with me? Shes only a human*
**Snicker* *chuckle* Seshoumaru, I cant believe you don't know it yet...* his conscience said.
*Shut up..Who are you* He asked
*O..nothing...just your conscience...*
*Well what are you talking about*
*nothing...just how you don't know...or should I say...don't want to admit...*
*Get to the point*
*oo...you wouldn't want to know* His conscience said teasingly.
*Tell me now*
*Don't think im too harsh but...* his conscience drawled*
*I said..tell me NOW* Seshoumaru growled threatingly in his mind..
*hmph* his conscience huffed *youre no fun...fine ill say it...*
*You love Kagome*
"WHAT?!?!?!??!?!?!"
A/N: okay..that's the end!
Seshoumaru: Hey..I want to know more
Rin: wheres jaken sama?
Me: eh...nothing...I just tied him to a tree...and stole his staff....and beat him on the head with it.....
*everyone sweatdrops*
Fluffy: anyway....hurry up and write before I use my poison claws and kill you
Me: *evil grin* you wouldn't want to do that...
Fluffy: Give me a reason why
Me: *whips out laptop and starts typing* Inuyasha comes by...
*inuyasha comes by*
ME: Suddenly, Inuyasha faints
*inuyasha faints*
Me: Seshoumaru catches him
*seshie does just that*
Me: and his face gets closer..closer...
Seshie: STOP! I cant believe im being shamed by a human girl...fine fine...you get your way...ggrr....
Inuyasha: *wakes up* bleah...your breath smells like dog breath
Seshie: Shut up
well R&R okay?? I think this is a lot better then the last alternate ending...
Everyone: DUH!!
*readers bonk author on the head that says..."DUH!!"*