You
guys really like Ella, don't you? Thanks for all the reviews. Anyone willing to
Beta-read for me? If so, e-mail me at stargirl324@hotmail.com
, please, I'm in desperate need of one. Here's chapter one of 'Ella and the
Passing' (Why did I call it that?)
Ella and the Passing~
Reacquainted with the past~
You
won't believe what I saw.
Or
maybe you knew this was coming.
The
familiar scene of Areida's did not surprise me, but there was an edition to the
table, 7 editions, to be correct.
I
let out a gasp when I looked at the end of the table. There were men, all so
very familiar to me, but one stood out in particular. And his name was Char.
Only
Areida noticed that I was standing in the doorway of her dining room, and she
started to get up to greet me. I turned my head, and walked around, praying
that Areida would not say my name. I walked in and out of the reception hall,
and out to the stables, where I had left Apple. By this time, I was running,
with nothing going through my head except that I must get away. The father Char
is away from me, the better.
I
jumped onto Apple's back, and was about to grab the rope around him, when I
felt a tug on it. I looked down, and Areida was looking at me, with a surprised
look on her face, and confusion in her eyes.
"What
are you doing here? And why are you leaving?" Areida asked with her heavy
Ayorthaian accent.
"I
just, well, I wanted to visit you, but then I realized that I didn't have any
money to get a room." I said, hoping she would ignore my shaky voice.
"Don't
worry about that, I'm sure mother would let you stay free of charge." Areida
said, getting my hand, and trying to help me down.
"No,
really, I'll just go back, and I'll…" I tried to say, letting go of Areida's
hand, but she still had her other hand on the rein around Apple. I felt guilty
for lying to her; especially since this was the first time I'd seen her in
almost 2 years. Then the world started to rock, or maybe that was me.
"Nonsense.
I won't hear of it." Areida said, as I was trying to grasp for breath. Then a
memory flooded into my mind.
'You shouldn't associate yourself with the
lower orders, like that wench from Ayortha.' Hattie told me
'Areida is a higher order than you
are, and I choose my own friends.' I spat back at her
'My dear, my dear. I hate to cause
you grief, but you must end your friendship with her.'
I was about to
faint. It felt like the world was ending, and this is how the world felt.
"I
forgot something at the manor, I'll be back." I said, letting go of Arieda's
hand, and taking the rein out of her other hand. I didn't feel guilty for doing
so, seeing as I wasn't supposed to be her friend. I gave Apple a small kick,
and we were off.
How
could I forget that? How could it still affect me after all that time? These
questions arose as I rode back into Kyrria. I was able to hold my head high,
since there were no fears of Char sighting me, but it was still down. I had
lost a best friend, a true love, and my entire life.
Right
then and there, I declared myself a full puppet.
The
pain that I had when Char told me that he loved me came back again. I
desperately wanted to see him, or get a letter from him. I wanted to be apart
of his life again.
But
I kept reminding myself how dangerous I would be to Char. That was the only
thought that kept me from riding to the castle, and declaring my love for Char.
The
days went on as usual. Sorrel enamored in that book she plans to publish, and
her mother, Lady Marie, off on a trip to the finer stores in Kyrria. I did what
I usually did, mop the floor, and wash windows, and then I would help Mandy
with whatever needed another hand. I hated it.
I
wanted more than this. I wasn't living life like I used to with mother, not
even when I was with father. There was no enjoyment in it.
One
night, March 27 to be exact, I was fed up with what my life had become. I was
so tired of what I was putting into the world, and what I was getting back,
which was merely little. It was 6:32 exactly, and the sun was about to set. I
looked out the small window that was in my room, my only light from the
outside. It looked like a typical sunset, but it felt magical, like there was
more to it. It made me feel that somewhere far from here, magical and great
things were happening.
I
wanted to be apart of those great things. Life must have more meaning than
sitting and cleaning. So I packed up my things, and without leaving any
warning, I left, and I was determined to get as far away from Kyrria as I
could.
I was thinking of ending the chapter here for now, but my
fingers made me
keep typing.
Marry,
marry someone else. Think nothing of her. That was over 2 years ago. Move on,
forget her.
As
hard as I tried, I couldn't. I thought her a mutant, but I wanted her to be
with me so badly. I thought her a minx for lying to me, but I would have
forgiven her in an instant. Life was just not worth living without her.
She
was my only companion, and if she was still around, she still would be. The
only maiden to treat me like an ordinary citizen was her, and that's what made
me fall for her.
I
started to spend more and more time in Ayortha, but that only made me think of
my longing for her when I was stationed there. I came back to Kyrria, and only
thought about her, hoping to bump into her on the road and make her explain
herself. That's all I ever thought about. My world was centered on a lass that
I would probably never have.
I
went to her old manor for some reason thinking I could find comfort there.
But,
boy was I wrong.
Lousy
chapter, I know, but more will happen when I stop with all these little
cliffhangers. Sorry for taking so long to write, but my computer has been down,
and I hadn't the chance to write.
I'd
like to thank everyone who r/r-ed my story, and please do the same and tell me
what you think should happen.
Laterz-MG
