Thanks to the reviews you guys gave me I shut off my brain by accident. This is the result. Part 2 of a one-parter O_o Anyway, this story might get twisted because I don't want to make this one a threesome (not this one ) so I had to find a way of writing this without getting irrational. So I will be working with dreams, flashbacks and other weird stuff I come across while writing this.
" yada yada yada" =direct speech
/bubble bubble bubble/ = thoughts
`blablabla......' beginning of memory etc `......blablabla' end of memory
Did anyone actually understand that?
Secret Emotions pt. 2
By White Angel
He was running.
He had to get to the DHD.
He had to safe Jack.
All around him the world seemed to explode.
He dove for cover behind the Dialing Home Device, waiting for a quiet period to dial without dieing. When he felt it was as safe as it could get he stood, frantically punching the symbols on the device. When the Gate began to move he turned only to see Jack flying towards him, landing hard on his back mere meters from the DHD and from him.
Daniel ran for his Colonel and upon falling to his knees at his side he saw the giant gap in the other's dark green military uniform, blood staining the rim a dark crimson.
/Again! It is happening again!/
Daniel's eyes widened and he tried to check on the injury when Jack's hand touched his cheek, smearing blood on his skin. Daniel wrapped the hand in his own, holding on tight to the weak grasp of his lover.
"D-danny... I..." Daniel cradled the older man in his arms, held on tight and scanned the area for the others. Upon seeing Teal'c he shouted for the tall warrior, tears stinging in his eyes as he rocked the body in his arms.
"Jack. Jack... please Jack, hold on..... we'll be home soon..... please hold on.... I love you....." he whispered desperately into the Colonel's ear, feeling the body going limp in his arms.
Teal'c was at his side, trying to get him to release the unconcious form to carry him through the Event Horizon. Daniel was close behind. He felt numb. The gunfire behind him was just a blur at the corner of his vision. His thoughts centered only around his lover, who was being carried by the Jaffa before him.
Sam was hurrying in behind them and when the Event Horizon closed Dr. Fraiser was there to take over.
She went to work right away, tending to Jack's wounds.
He was being brought to the infirmary and Daniel wanted to follow but Teal'c stopped him with one strong hand on his shoulder.
General Hammond entered the gate-room and ordered them for a debriefing within the next 5 minutes.
Daniel was desperate to check on Jack but the older man would not like it if he was that obvious. He was supposed to be only a friend so he followed the General into the debriefing room, shoulders slumped, head hanging to hide the painful sting of tears in his eyes.
He swore he wouldn't leave the base before checking for the injured man who was being operated right then.
Tbc...
I'm an ass, ne? Okay, now you folks have a problem. Hen I write a oneshot it usually is all fluffy and thoughtful... but when there comes a second part it usually gets angsty Then again, maybe that's what you want?
But look what you made me do!!!!
Now they are suffering because I can't be stopped now BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
No, seriously.
Review please so I can write faster
" yada yada yada" =direct speech
/bubble bubble bubble/ = thoughts
`blablabla......' beginning of memory etc `......blablabla' end of memory
Did anyone actually understand that?
Secret Emotions pt. 2
By White Angel
He was running.
He had to get to the DHD.
He had to safe Jack.
All around him the world seemed to explode.
He dove for cover behind the Dialing Home Device, waiting for a quiet period to dial without dieing. When he felt it was as safe as it could get he stood, frantically punching the symbols on the device. When the Gate began to move he turned only to see Jack flying towards him, landing hard on his back mere meters from the DHD and from him.
Daniel ran for his Colonel and upon falling to his knees at his side he saw the giant gap in the other's dark green military uniform, blood staining the rim a dark crimson.
/Again! It is happening again!/
Daniel's eyes widened and he tried to check on the injury when Jack's hand touched his cheek, smearing blood on his skin. Daniel wrapped the hand in his own, holding on tight to the weak grasp of his lover.
"D-danny... I..." Daniel cradled the older man in his arms, held on tight and scanned the area for the others. Upon seeing Teal'c he shouted for the tall warrior, tears stinging in his eyes as he rocked the body in his arms.
"Jack. Jack... please Jack, hold on..... we'll be home soon..... please hold on.... I love you....." he whispered desperately into the Colonel's ear, feeling the body going limp in his arms.
Teal'c was at his side, trying to get him to release the unconcious form to carry him through the Event Horizon. Daniel was close behind. He felt numb. The gunfire behind him was just a blur at the corner of his vision. His thoughts centered only around his lover, who was being carried by the Jaffa before him.
Sam was hurrying in behind them and when the Event Horizon closed Dr. Fraiser was there to take over.
She went to work right away, tending to Jack's wounds.
He was being brought to the infirmary and Daniel wanted to follow but Teal'c stopped him with one strong hand on his shoulder.
General Hammond entered the gate-room and ordered them for a debriefing within the next 5 minutes.
Daniel was desperate to check on Jack but the older man would not like it if he was that obvious. He was supposed to be only a friend so he followed the General into the debriefing room, shoulders slumped, head hanging to hide the painful sting of tears in his eyes.
He swore he wouldn't leave the base before checking for the injured man who was being operated right then.
Tbc...
I'm an ass, ne? Okay, now you folks have a problem. Hen I write a oneshot it usually is all fluffy and thoughtful... but when there comes a second part it usually gets angsty Then again, maybe that's what you want?
But look what you made me do!!!!
Now they are suffering because I can't be stopped now BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
No, seriously.
Review please so I can write faster