Kiss Me, Creep 4
authors notes:
I'm sorry if this is short but...you see I finished this chapter right.
I saved it and all but when i tried opening it, it wouldn't work so I have to write it all over again!
I had 1,976 words in it too!
Well...anyways r&r.
Kiss me, Creep 4
"What is up with you two?" Sabrina asked as we were taking a shower in the locker room.
"I've never seen a guy get under your skin the way Ash does."
"It's simple," I said. "We can't stand each other."
"I tihnk he's cute," said Melody.
"You think everyone is cute," cut in Erica. "I'll bet you'd even go out with Mitch if he asked."
Melody made a face. Mitch was the president of the chess club; he's the kind of bot who wears his pants up to his armpits and under whose name in the yearbook is written:
"My goal in life is to outdo Einstein." He's actually a pretty nice kid, but definitely out of it, if you know what I mean. Melody is boy crazy, but not that boy crazy.
"Ash and Mitch aren't exactly in the same category," Melody protested. "Malcolm's fromo another planet."
Erica had her bushy dark hair lathered into a mound of shampoo suds. She molded it into an extravagant style, then strutted around the shower pretending to be one of the coneheads from "Saturday Night Live." She's the real comic of our crowd.
Most of the time all she has to do is look at us a certain way, and we break up into uncontrollable hysterics.
"Yeah," said Melody, "I know a lot of girls who would kill for the chance to go out with Ash."
"yeah and he just wants me to be the next one." Misty stated meanly.
"You really don't like him, do you?" Sabrina peered at me through billows of stream.
"I hate him!"
"Mrs.whitman says that when a person says they hate someone it's really kind of backward love," said Melody.
"Mrs.Whitman is our Social Studies teacher. She wears her brown hair in a low ponytail and talks all the time. I think she has a secret crush on the principle.
"You could turn Ash upside down, and I still wouldn't like him," I assured her. "And I'm sure the feeling is mutual. We can't even look at each other without getting into an argument."
Sabrina interrupted. "It sounds romantic."
"The two of you are both too stubborn to admit you could probably like each other if you ever gave it a try," said Erica.
"Somebody has to start first," joined in Sabrina.
"It might as well be you."
I made a loud, strangled noise. "Will you guys please let up? What is this--Down on Misty day?"
"Don't be so sensitive," Melody said. "You know we love you just the way you are. If it wasn't for your stubbornness, we wouldn't have won first place in the cheerleading regionals. You never gave out aching muscles a break."
We'd gotten out of the shower and were towling off.
"Speaking of competition,"yelled Erica about the whir of Sabrina's hair dryer, "I hear the results of the senior poll are coming out in this weeks paper."
The senior poll was one of the highlights of the semester.
All the seniors had gotten a chance to vote for a boy and a girl in each several categories.
Mitch would probably get Most likely to succeed.
Sabrina had a good shot at most prettiest.
And Erica would have a cinch on making it to the funniest
and Melody would have a good chance on making it to the most talented.
And me..well..me...I dunno.
"I'll bet Misty wins cutest smile," speculated Sabrina.
What I really didn't like about Ash was his assumptions about people, I mean. He was one of those people who thought that if a girl was popular, she was automatically stuck-up.
And if she was stuck-up, then she was just a big hot air balloon waiting to be deflated. Ash was always trying to deflate me, and a lot of time he succeeded, only I wouldn't dream of ever letting him know it. It would only make him more conceited than he already was.
"Is Richie taking you to the senior prom?" Sabrina asked me as we left the gym building and went to crafts together.
I shrugged. "I guess so. He hasn't really asked. He just assumes I know he's going to."
I'd only been dating Richie since the beginning of the year, but sometimes I felt as if we had know each other forever. Richie is a real dynamo--on the swim team, captain of varsity track. Everything comes easily to him, so he takes a lot for granted--- including me.
Sabrina gave me on of those funny looks that told me she was on the verge of asking me something I might not like...I was right.
"Are you really in love with Richie?" she asked.
"Kick me in the shins for saying so, but it just seems like you two are just right, I don't know--too perfect. Like you never fight. And you always know where he's taking you on Saturady night. It's like pancakes and maple syrup."
"What?"
I shouldn't have been surprised, really. Sabrina was always coming up with these strange ideas. Like the time she dared me at one of our slumber parties to go down to the corner grocery in my pajamas for oreaos and milk.
I did it, but Sabrina said it was cheating because I wore my coat.
"OK," she said. "What do you think of when someone says pancakes? Maple syrup, right? It's like you always know when you eat pancakes, you're going to put maple syrup on top."
"Sabrina, what are you talking about?"
"Pancakes with peanut butter and whipped cream!" she cried, fling her arms out. "Pancakes and rocky road ice cream! I don't know-anything-something different. Something exciting and unpredictable. Isn't that what being in love is suppose to be about?"
"I never heard being in love compared to pancakes and peanut butter."
"Well, do you know what I mean or don't you?"
I sighed. "Yeah, well, I guess in the fireworks department, Richie and I aren't exactly up there with you and Brock."
Sabrina and her boyfriend, Brock, were always either in the middle of a fight or making up--usually right in the middle of a corridor during the lunch-hour rush. I'd never known one of their break-ups to last more than a couple of hours.
Sabrina grinned sheepishly. "Well, at least no one could ever accuse us of being boring."
"That's for sure!"
"Look, Mist," Sabrina said as she looped an affectionate arm around my shoulders, "I'm sorry if it seems like I'm getting on your case. I guess it really is none of my business. I just want to be sure you're really happy, that's all."
I thought about it for a moment, then said.
"Well, at least I don't think I'm unhappy."
"Do Richie's kisses set you on fire?"
"SABRINA!"
"Well, do they?"
"Sabrina, stop it!"
We were both laughing so hard that I bumped straight into Ash and concidently out lips touched and we both stayed like that for a long time not knowing what to do next. Quickly I pulled away and ran off to my next class.
----------Ash's pov-----------------
Wow I can't actually believe that we kissed! This wasn't my first time but I never knew it would happen again so quickly! I should bump into her often. And with the kiss behind him he went straight to his next class.
--------Sabrina's pov-----
I should hook those two up. They look like a mighty fine couple!
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to be continued...
authors notes:
So..Love it? Hate it? Come on peeps Review!! I have 2 things to say right now.
1) From now on I'm going to write my chapters slower or faster....it's really your power to do it.
(confused?)
Okay! From now on if I get 10 reviews for this chapter then I'll Write my chapter in about 6 weeks. If I get 20 reviews for this chapter I'll write my chapter and send it in about 4 weeks.
30 reviews..ummm...in about 3 weeks.
40 reviews.....well.....in about 1 week.
sorry but i just need to know how badly you guys might want it. But~! If someone writes something very nice in a review than....I'll put it up less than 2 weeks. okay? I'm sorry.
This is only for this chapter and maybe the next.
I'll give you guys..umm...till July/31/2001 for the reviews.
today is Friday the 13th!
2) I'm having a contest so please participate:
rules:
Hi! my name is christina aka Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto. I'm having a contest!
Whoever writes the cutest summer Ash/Misty romance fic will win!
1- has to be Ash/Misty
2-summer fic
3- over 1000 words
4-due on the 31st.......July 31st
5-It has to be cute!
6- You have to say for the summary that I Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto challeneged for it,, like.....
- This story was challenged by Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto
-so on and so on.
7-please e-mail me if you posted it up so I can find it faster.
ashyboylova@yahoo.com
and for the heading write- the contest
8- PLEASE FOLLOW THE RULES
9-PLEASE PARTICIPATE!!
- If you have any questions, flames,or anything to tell me please review and tell me or e-mail me at
ashyboylova@yahoo.com
I'm not that kind of person that says e-mail me and never writes back. I do write back.
Also just to tell you obiwankatie and I are going to be the judge, so I'm going to need about 2 more if you want it please e-mail me. at
ashyboylova@yahoo.com
heading-judge
thanks! bye bye!
authors notes:
I'm sorry if this is short but...you see I finished this chapter right.
I saved it and all but when i tried opening it, it wouldn't work so I have to write it all over again!
I had 1,976 words in it too!
Well...anyways r&r.
Kiss me, Creep 4
"What is up with you two?" Sabrina asked as we were taking a shower in the locker room.
"I've never seen a guy get under your skin the way Ash does."
"It's simple," I said. "We can't stand each other."
"I tihnk he's cute," said Melody.
"You think everyone is cute," cut in Erica. "I'll bet you'd even go out with Mitch if he asked."
Melody made a face. Mitch was the president of the chess club; he's the kind of bot who wears his pants up to his armpits and under whose name in the yearbook is written:
"My goal in life is to outdo Einstein." He's actually a pretty nice kid, but definitely out of it, if you know what I mean. Melody is boy crazy, but not that boy crazy.
"Ash and Mitch aren't exactly in the same category," Melody protested. "Malcolm's fromo another planet."
Erica had her bushy dark hair lathered into a mound of shampoo suds. She molded it into an extravagant style, then strutted around the shower pretending to be one of the coneheads from "Saturday Night Live." She's the real comic of our crowd.
Most of the time all she has to do is look at us a certain way, and we break up into uncontrollable hysterics.
"Yeah," said Melody, "I know a lot of girls who would kill for the chance to go out with Ash."
"yeah and he just wants me to be the next one." Misty stated meanly.
"You really don't like him, do you?" Sabrina peered at me through billows of stream.
"I hate him!"
"Mrs.whitman says that when a person says they hate someone it's really kind of backward love," said Melody.
"Mrs.Whitman is our Social Studies teacher. She wears her brown hair in a low ponytail and talks all the time. I think she has a secret crush on the principle.
"You could turn Ash upside down, and I still wouldn't like him," I assured her. "And I'm sure the feeling is mutual. We can't even look at each other without getting into an argument."
Sabrina interrupted. "It sounds romantic."
"The two of you are both too stubborn to admit you could probably like each other if you ever gave it a try," said Erica.
"Somebody has to start first," joined in Sabrina.
"It might as well be you."
I made a loud, strangled noise. "Will you guys please let up? What is this--Down on Misty day?"
"Don't be so sensitive," Melody said. "You know we love you just the way you are. If it wasn't for your stubbornness, we wouldn't have won first place in the cheerleading regionals. You never gave out aching muscles a break."
We'd gotten out of the shower and were towling off.
"Speaking of competition,"yelled Erica about the whir of Sabrina's hair dryer, "I hear the results of the senior poll are coming out in this weeks paper."
The senior poll was one of the highlights of the semester.
All the seniors had gotten a chance to vote for a boy and a girl in each several categories.
Mitch would probably get Most likely to succeed.
Sabrina had a good shot at most prettiest.
And Erica would have a cinch on making it to the funniest
and Melody would have a good chance on making it to the most talented.
And me..well..me...I dunno.
"I'll bet Misty wins cutest smile," speculated Sabrina.
What I really didn't like about Ash was his assumptions about people, I mean. He was one of those people who thought that if a girl was popular, she was automatically stuck-up.
And if she was stuck-up, then she was just a big hot air balloon waiting to be deflated. Ash was always trying to deflate me, and a lot of time he succeeded, only I wouldn't dream of ever letting him know it. It would only make him more conceited than he already was.
"Is Richie taking you to the senior prom?" Sabrina asked me as we left the gym building and went to crafts together.
I shrugged. "I guess so. He hasn't really asked. He just assumes I know he's going to."
I'd only been dating Richie since the beginning of the year, but sometimes I felt as if we had know each other forever. Richie is a real dynamo--on the swim team, captain of varsity track. Everything comes easily to him, so he takes a lot for granted--- including me.
Sabrina gave me on of those funny looks that told me she was on the verge of asking me something I might not like...I was right.
"Are you really in love with Richie?" she asked.
"Kick me in the shins for saying so, but it just seems like you two are just right, I don't know--too perfect. Like you never fight. And you always know where he's taking you on Saturady night. It's like pancakes and maple syrup."
"What?"
I shouldn't have been surprised, really. Sabrina was always coming up with these strange ideas. Like the time she dared me at one of our slumber parties to go down to the corner grocery in my pajamas for oreaos and milk.
I did it, but Sabrina said it was cheating because I wore my coat.
"OK," she said. "What do you think of when someone says pancakes? Maple syrup, right? It's like you always know when you eat pancakes, you're going to put maple syrup on top."
"Sabrina, what are you talking about?"
"Pancakes with peanut butter and whipped cream!" she cried, fling her arms out. "Pancakes and rocky road ice cream! I don't know-anything-something different. Something exciting and unpredictable. Isn't that what being in love is suppose to be about?"
"I never heard being in love compared to pancakes and peanut butter."
"Well, do you know what I mean or don't you?"
I sighed. "Yeah, well, I guess in the fireworks department, Richie and I aren't exactly up there with you and Brock."
Sabrina and her boyfriend, Brock, were always either in the middle of a fight or making up--usually right in the middle of a corridor during the lunch-hour rush. I'd never known one of their break-ups to last more than a couple of hours.
Sabrina grinned sheepishly. "Well, at least no one could ever accuse us of being boring."
"That's for sure!"
"Look, Mist," Sabrina said as she looped an affectionate arm around my shoulders, "I'm sorry if it seems like I'm getting on your case. I guess it really is none of my business. I just want to be sure you're really happy, that's all."
I thought about it for a moment, then said.
"Well, at least I don't think I'm unhappy."
"Do Richie's kisses set you on fire?"
"SABRINA!"
"Well, do they?"
"Sabrina, stop it!"
We were both laughing so hard that I bumped straight into Ash and concidently out lips touched and we both stayed like that for a long time not knowing what to do next. Quickly I pulled away and ran off to my next class.
----------Ash's pov-----------------
Wow I can't actually believe that we kissed! This wasn't my first time but I never knew it would happen again so quickly! I should bump into her often. And with the kiss behind him he went straight to his next class.
--------Sabrina's pov-----
I should hook those two up. They look like a mighty fine couple!
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
to be continued...
authors notes:
So..Love it? Hate it? Come on peeps Review!! I have 2 things to say right now.
1) From now on I'm going to write my chapters slower or faster....it's really your power to do it.
(confused?)
Okay! From now on if I get 10 reviews for this chapter then I'll Write my chapter in about 6 weeks. If I get 20 reviews for this chapter I'll write my chapter and send it in about 4 weeks.
30 reviews..ummm...in about 3 weeks.
40 reviews.....well.....in about 1 week.
sorry but i just need to know how badly you guys might want it. But~! If someone writes something very nice in a review than....I'll put it up less than 2 weeks. okay? I'm sorry.
This is only for this chapter and maybe the next.
I'll give you guys..umm...till July/31/2001 for the reviews.
today is Friday the 13th!
2) I'm having a contest so please participate:
rules:
Hi! my name is christina aka Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto. I'm having a contest!
Whoever writes the cutest summer Ash/Misty romance fic will win!
1- has to be Ash/Misty
2-summer fic
3- over 1000 words
4-due on the 31st.......July 31st
5-It has to be cute!
6- You have to say for the summary that I Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto challeneged for it,, like.....
- This story was challenged by Sakura Avalon or Kinomoto
-so on and so on.
7-please e-mail me if you posted it up so I can find it faster.
ashyboylova@yahoo.com
and for the heading write- the contest
8- PLEASE FOLLOW THE RULES
9-PLEASE PARTICIPATE!!
- If you have any questions, flames,or anything to tell me please review and tell me or e-mail me at
ashyboylova@yahoo.com
I'm not that kind of person that says e-mail me and never writes back. I do write back.
Also just to tell you obiwankatie and I are going to be the judge, so I'm going to need about 2 more if you want it please e-mail me. at
ashyboylova@yahoo.com
heading-judge
thanks! bye bye!