I fixed SEVERAL errors with the document, and thanks to the positive
review I got, I'm going to upload them, one chapter at a time. Main error:
Spell check confused Debora (big ugly red guy) with Deborah (woman's
name), so I finally fixed it. Ch 8 is short, I know. PLEASE R&R FOR THE
LOVE OF GOD!
"Next up: Vegeta and Goku!" The announcer said.
"Alright Goku. Lets see how much training you did." Vegeta announced.
"You're on!" Goku said competitively. As Goku walked to the arena, Piccolo stayed back in the waiting room.
"I wonder why the Supreme Kai backed out? I thought he would be strong, but I guess that energy blast got to him. I scared him, didn't I?" Piccolo said with a grin.
"Who's He?" Goten asked anxiously.
"Shin. He was a very powerful warrior; I sensed it. But I wonder why he backed out? The blast wasn't that hard," Piccolo recited as if he put a lot of thought into it.
"I think it was pretty hard, it DID knock him to the ground," Trunks added.
Piccolo moved to the other side of the room, saying, "I wonder where Gohan went? He and Videl just flew off with that guy."
"I think he's in LOVE," Goten commented with enthusiasm.
"Really? It didn't seem that obvious to me," Trunks said extremely sarcastically. "By the way, who was that guy? I didn't catch his name..."
"Neither did I. Did you, Piccolo?" Goten asked.
"I forgot... But he knew Spopovitch. I heard that guy was really weak last tournament, and also much smaller. I wonder why he just disappeared in the middle of his match with Videl..." Piccolo said.
"That was odd, how he just disappeared. Oh hey, there's your brother, Goten! And his GIRLFRIEND too!" Trunks added onto Piccolo's saying.
"Hey, Gohan! Vegeta and Goku's match is just about to start! What's up?" Goten said to Gohan.
Gohan waked over to the waiting area from the side of the ring, where he landed. Videl slowly landed after him and followed, looking like she just saw a ghost. "That was a little odd. Right when I told Videl it was I who killed Cell, and not her father, Kibito disappeared..."
"Kibito is the big red guy that you and Videl flew off with?" Goten asked his brother.
"Yes. After I told her it was not her dad that killed Cell, she was not surprised. But when I said it was I, she didn't believe it. She eventually believed it, but looked shocked. Right when her face changed into that shocked state, Kibito disappeared, into thin air. Not like a gradual Instant Transmission, but just vanished! A purple light flashed, and he was gone! Videl screamed out loud, and I was pretty shocked. Since neither of us knew where we were going, we just headed back. I carried Videl most of the way, but she managed on her own after a while. So, what happened with Piccolo's match? Did he win?" Gohan finally finished.
"No, Shin backed out, so I won on a forfeit. I only fired one blast..."Piccolo was cut off.
"And they're off!" The announcer said. Goku did nothing. Vegeta took one step, but then stopped. All they did was stare.
"Its a stare-down, ladies and gentlemen!" The announcer said. They both did nothing still. "Could you guys uhh... start fighting? The crowd is getting restless." Some cans flew from the audience while a slight boo gathered near the northwest side of the stands and started spreading.
"Gladly," Vegeta said. He then flew fast and hit Goku on the chest with his punch. It did nothing.
"That was supposed to hurt?" Goku said.
"ARGHH!" Vegeta growled. Goku rose slowly, when he reached an adequate height he charged up an energy blast. Vegeta slowly moved out of the way, and Goku re-adjusted his aim.
"This is a slow-paced battle!" The announcer said. Some cheers from the north wing and boo's from the west wing signified an agreement. Goku's energy blast fired. Vegeta easily dodged. As Goku slowly charged up another, Vegeta rushed up to Goku's hand and grabbed it.
"Hah," He said, then twisted Goku's arm behind his back. Goku did not even emit a cry, but instead twisted his body and punched Vegeta with his remaining hand. A loud sound was emitted, causing Vegeta to let go and grab his jaw. Goku threw a few more, all blocked.
"Goku seems to be on the offensive!" The announcer said. Cheers came from every wing.
Goku threw some more. Finally one hit, Vegeta's hand. The other hit his other hand. They were in an arm lock. Both of them kicked, hit, and fell back. Goku immediately flew up, then back down smashing into Vegeta taking them both to the floor of the arena. Goku got up, flew about 5 feet up, and threw a
"Ka me ha me HA!" It was a fast one, traveling to Vegeta. It barely missed, Vegeta rolling to the side just in time. A return energy blast was a kick in mouth for Goku, who threw it to the side. Goku went back down and kicked Vegeta in the chest, causing him to fly to the edge of the arena. He stopped, and lay for a minute. Then he got up, Goku already charging up another blast. Vegeta was pissed, and charged up. He went all they way to Super Sayian and started throwing punches and kicks at Goku. Goku, being overwhelmed, let out a war cry, broke away and charged up to Super Sayian status also.
"What are they doing?" Goten said, remembering the pact they made on the plane. They all agreed not to charge up to Super Sayian.
"Do they want to wreck the whole arena?" Piccolo said angrily. He started charging to the arena to try to stop them.
"No, Piccolo, don't!" Gohan yelled while he grabbed Piccolo. Goten and Trunks jumped in to help him. Goku started throwing punches at Vegeta, who blocked them all. He finally kicked and landed it, causing Vegeta to fall back. Goku then grabbed him tightly, flew up went in a rounded turn and flew back down, ending the fight quickly by dropping him out of the ring. He then flew back in to prevent a ring out of himself too.
"And Goku wins by a Ring out!" Fans start cheering.
"That was a little short, my father normally would have put up more of a fight. What happened?" Gohan said. He let go of Piccolo and both Trunks and Goten followed him. They all walked into the ring to greet Goku and his win. Gohan asked him before anyone else said anything, "What happened? The father that I know would have put up more a fight, not just drop his opponent out of the ring."
Goku answered "I felt something not right, like a big bad vibe, something happened, it just wasn't..." Everyone paused. There it came again.
"Did you feel that?" Piccolo asked, looking at Goku.
"Yes, that's the same vibe I felt right before I dropped Vegeta out of the ring." Goku answered. A big thud and a fairly loud roar erupted from the east, where Goku dropped Vegeta.
"Next up: Vegeta and Goku!" The announcer said.
"Alright Goku. Lets see how much training you did." Vegeta announced.
"You're on!" Goku said competitively. As Goku walked to the arena, Piccolo stayed back in the waiting room.
"I wonder why the Supreme Kai backed out? I thought he would be strong, but I guess that energy blast got to him. I scared him, didn't I?" Piccolo said with a grin.
"Who's He?" Goten asked anxiously.
"Shin. He was a very powerful warrior; I sensed it. But I wonder why he backed out? The blast wasn't that hard," Piccolo recited as if he put a lot of thought into it.
"I think it was pretty hard, it DID knock him to the ground," Trunks added.
Piccolo moved to the other side of the room, saying, "I wonder where Gohan went? He and Videl just flew off with that guy."
"I think he's in LOVE," Goten commented with enthusiasm.
"Really? It didn't seem that obvious to me," Trunks said extremely sarcastically. "By the way, who was that guy? I didn't catch his name..."
"Neither did I. Did you, Piccolo?" Goten asked.
"I forgot... But he knew Spopovitch. I heard that guy was really weak last tournament, and also much smaller. I wonder why he just disappeared in the middle of his match with Videl..." Piccolo said.
"That was odd, how he just disappeared. Oh hey, there's your brother, Goten! And his GIRLFRIEND too!" Trunks added onto Piccolo's saying.
"Hey, Gohan! Vegeta and Goku's match is just about to start! What's up?" Goten said to Gohan.
Gohan waked over to the waiting area from the side of the ring, where he landed. Videl slowly landed after him and followed, looking like she just saw a ghost. "That was a little odd. Right when I told Videl it was I who killed Cell, and not her father, Kibito disappeared..."
"Kibito is the big red guy that you and Videl flew off with?" Goten asked his brother.
"Yes. After I told her it was not her dad that killed Cell, she was not surprised. But when I said it was I, she didn't believe it. She eventually believed it, but looked shocked. Right when her face changed into that shocked state, Kibito disappeared, into thin air. Not like a gradual Instant Transmission, but just vanished! A purple light flashed, and he was gone! Videl screamed out loud, and I was pretty shocked. Since neither of us knew where we were going, we just headed back. I carried Videl most of the way, but she managed on her own after a while. So, what happened with Piccolo's match? Did he win?" Gohan finally finished.
"No, Shin backed out, so I won on a forfeit. I only fired one blast..."Piccolo was cut off.
"And they're off!" The announcer said. Goku did nothing. Vegeta took one step, but then stopped. All they did was stare.
"Its a stare-down, ladies and gentlemen!" The announcer said. They both did nothing still. "Could you guys uhh... start fighting? The crowd is getting restless." Some cans flew from the audience while a slight boo gathered near the northwest side of the stands and started spreading.
"Gladly," Vegeta said. He then flew fast and hit Goku on the chest with his punch. It did nothing.
"That was supposed to hurt?" Goku said.
"ARGHH!" Vegeta growled. Goku rose slowly, when he reached an adequate height he charged up an energy blast. Vegeta slowly moved out of the way, and Goku re-adjusted his aim.
"This is a slow-paced battle!" The announcer said. Some cheers from the north wing and boo's from the west wing signified an agreement. Goku's energy blast fired. Vegeta easily dodged. As Goku slowly charged up another, Vegeta rushed up to Goku's hand and grabbed it.
"Hah," He said, then twisted Goku's arm behind his back. Goku did not even emit a cry, but instead twisted his body and punched Vegeta with his remaining hand. A loud sound was emitted, causing Vegeta to let go and grab his jaw. Goku threw a few more, all blocked.
"Goku seems to be on the offensive!" The announcer said. Cheers came from every wing.
Goku threw some more. Finally one hit, Vegeta's hand. The other hit his other hand. They were in an arm lock. Both of them kicked, hit, and fell back. Goku immediately flew up, then back down smashing into Vegeta taking them both to the floor of the arena. Goku got up, flew about 5 feet up, and threw a
"Ka me ha me HA!" It was a fast one, traveling to Vegeta. It barely missed, Vegeta rolling to the side just in time. A return energy blast was a kick in mouth for Goku, who threw it to the side. Goku went back down and kicked Vegeta in the chest, causing him to fly to the edge of the arena. He stopped, and lay for a minute. Then he got up, Goku already charging up another blast. Vegeta was pissed, and charged up. He went all they way to Super Sayian and started throwing punches and kicks at Goku. Goku, being overwhelmed, let out a war cry, broke away and charged up to Super Sayian status also.
"What are they doing?" Goten said, remembering the pact they made on the plane. They all agreed not to charge up to Super Sayian.
"Do they want to wreck the whole arena?" Piccolo said angrily. He started charging to the arena to try to stop them.
"No, Piccolo, don't!" Gohan yelled while he grabbed Piccolo. Goten and Trunks jumped in to help him. Goku started throwing punches at Vegeta, who blocked them all. He finally kicked and landed it, causing Vegeta to fall back. Goku then grabbed him tightly, flew up went in a rounded turn and flew back down, ending the fight quickly by dropping him out of the ring. He then flew back in to prevent a ring out of himself too.
"And Goku wins by a Ring out!" Fans start cheering.
"That was a little short, my father normally would have put up more of a fight. What happened?" Gohan said. He let go of Piccolo and both Trunks and Goten followed him. They all walked into the ring to greet Goku and his win. Gohan asked him before anyone else said anything, "What happened? The father that I know would have put up more a fight, not just drop his opponent out of the ring."
Goku answered "I felt something not right, like a big bad vibe, something happened, it just wasn't..." Everyone paused. There it came again.
"Did you feel that?" Piccolo asked, looking at Goku.
"Yes, that's the same vibe I felt right before I dropped Vegeta out of the ring." Goku answered. A big thud and a fairly loud roar erupted from the east, where Goku dropped Vegeta.