GohipZ: Chapter 1: The beginning.
Before I start, I want to say that DragonballZ belongs to Akira Toriyama, Bird Studio, and Bandai. I just took some ideas for my own rather pointless reasons. If you know me, you know I have a comic of the same people but a different plot. If you don't, keep checking my site at [1]www.geocities.com/veggeto88200 because I might scan them and post them. Let's get started!
First things first: The cast: Gohip is the main character and the most powerful saiyan! (Most of the people are saiyans and can turn SSJ). Gojo is Gohip's friend and pupil. He is strong, but not as strong as Gohip. Trinkma is and evil character who likes to kill people. An evil force possesses him. That's about it, but when new characters come I'll describe them.
Let's get started! Oh, and (a place here) means a scenery change.
One day Gohip and Gojo were training just in case Trinkma comes. Suddenly B-BOOOM! They look in the direction and see that a city is on fire!!!! They fly to the city.
(The burning city)
Gohip, "I wonder what happened here?"
Gojo, "I just sensed an enormous power coming from that deserted desert over there! (Pun intended!)"
Gohip, " Let's check it out!"
(The desert)
An unknown person is yelling, " YAAA!!! Take that, Arkunza! Your precious city is no more!!!! Ha ha, HAAAA!!"
Gohip exclaims, " Just who the hell is that??"
And Gojo asks, " And who the F*** is Arkunza?" (Notice the censored bad word, which will never happen again!)
The person senses them and says, " Who's there? Show yourselves, cowards!"
Gohip and Gojo at the same time say, " Tell us who you are and we'll tell you who we are!"
He says, " I am Trunksano! The brother of Trinkma!!!"
Next time on GohipZ: What the hell? See you then! And please give me good reviews! If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything! I will get the next chapter on my site. Put reviews in my guestbook and fanfiction.net.
References
1. http://www.geocities.com/veggeto88200
Before I start, I want to say that DragonballZ belongs to Akira Toriyama, Bird Studio, and Bandai. I just took some ideas for my own rather pointless reasons. If you know me, you know I have a comic of the same people but a different plot. If you don't, keep checking my site at [1]www.geocities.com/veggeto88200 because I might scan them and post them. Let's get started!
First things first: The cast: Gohip is the main character and the most powerful saiyan! (Most of the people are saiyans and can turn SSJ). Gojo is Gohip's friend and pupil. He is strong, but not as strong as Gohip. Trinkma is and evil character who likes to kill people. An evil force possesses him. That's about it, but when new characters come I'll describe them.
Let's get started! Oh, and (a place here) means a scenery change.
One day Gohip and Gojo were training just in case Trinkma comes. Suddenly B-BOOOM! They look in the direction and see that a city is on fire!!!! They fly to the city.
(The burning city)
Gohip, "I wonder what happened here?"
Gojo, "I just sensed an enormous power coming from that deserted desert over there! (Pun intended!)"
Gohip, " Let's check it out!"
(The desert)
An unknown person is yelling, " YAAA!!! Take that, Arkunza! Your precious city is no more!!!! Ha ha, HAAAA!!"
Gohip exclaims, " Just who the hell is that??"
And Gojo asks, " And who the F*** is Arkunza?" (Notice the censored bad word, which will never happen again!)
The person senses them and says, " Who's there? Show yourselves, cowards!"
Gohip and Gojo at the same time say, " Tell us who you are and we'll tell you who we are!"
He says, " I am Trunksano! The brother of Trinkma!!!"
Next time on GohipZ: What the hell? See you then! And please give me good reviews! If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything! I will get the next chapter on my site. Put reviews in my guestbook and fanfiction.net.
References
1. http://www.geocities.com/veggeto88200