Hi (again)! Here's the next installment of my first ever fanfic! Well, since fanfiction.net has been down for a while, I haven't been able to get feedback.... so if anyone has suggestions, read and review! Please? That's all there is to it ^_^.
I prefer script format for ease of dialogue. If it bothers you, let me know.
I use quite a few of Japanese vocab in here. If you need to, refer to the list at the bottom of the page, or go back to the first chapter to learn what you missed!
Oh yeah.... before I forget:
Disclaimer: I don't own Cardcaptor Sakura or any of its awesome characters. Otherwise, I'd be on near goddess status with Clamp. ^_^
Name: ....... or "......" - Dialogue
*.........* - Thoughts
[......] or (......) - Description or action
That's it! (Hope you
didn't fall asleep there) Here we goooooo! Ikimashoooooooooooooo!
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Advice
(and other funny things)
a fanfic by Noelle
Chapter Two: Super Happy Tomoyo-chan!
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"RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!!"
Nakuru: Suppi-chan! Get the phone!
Suppi: Ummm...no. You get it.
Nakuru: No...I believe I asked YOU first!
Suppi: You're closer to it...so BEEDAH! (Sticks tongue out and closes one eye)
Nakuru & Suppi: Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....
"Hello? Yes. This is he."
Nakuru & Suppi: (stopping their quarrel for just a moment) Huh?
Eriol: Oh! Daidouji-san! It's been a while. What? Well...if it has anything to do with those two....
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Seijou High - Morning
The sun was shining, the wind was blowing, and cherry blossoms littered the sky. Sure, it was a beautiful day but to Tomoyo, something else made today quite magical.
[Tomoyo comes in to class with a big grin plastered on her face.]
Tomoyo: Ohayo Sakura-chan! Ohayo Li-kun!
Sakura & Syaoran: (blinks a few times in unison and look at each other for a moment)
Sakura: (in a low voice) Um..Tomoyo-chan's a happy person, but never this happy. Ne, Syaoran-kun?
Syaoran: (blushing yet again from the closeness of their faces) U-un.
Sakura: *I wonder what it is that made her so happy? I mean, she hasn't even called me 'cute' or wanted to videotape me all morning! I mean, what could it be?*
Tomoyo: (in some sort of dreamy bliss) *Sigh...Hiiragizawa-kuuuuuuun.... *
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Seijou High - After school
[The day was over, students were going home and...Syaoran and Sakura somehow got into yet another blushing bout and were both looking in totally different directions. This was Tomoyo's time to intervene if any...]
Tomoyo: Ne, Sakura-chan, do you feel like going shopping? I saw this absolutely fabulous outfit the other day and now it's on sale!
Sakura: Sure, Tomoyo-chan, but I thought you already got all the new outfits you wanted already?
Tomoyo: No, Sakura-chan, I was talking about you! (smiles)
Sakura: (sweatdrops)*At least she's back to normal...sort of. * Can we at least take Syaoran-kun?
Tomoyo: (with a glint in her eye) Of course!
[Syaoran smiles at this, silently thanking Tomoyo... yet again.]
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Tomoeda - Shopping District
Syaoran never really liked shopping much, his Chinese clothes looked better on him than anything he could buy in Japan...(A/N Girls, you know what I mean ^_^) There was one thing that made it worth it, he had to admit, because it was one of the only activities that he could be close to her without being such an obvious blushing fool. He wished that maybe one day things could change....
(A/N: No...I won't make Syaoran sing a cute song like he did in the elevator episode. Though it was cute...)
Oh yes. One more thing Syaoran liked about shopping? At least he could tell Sakura she looked good in anything she wears. Well, because it was the truth...in his eyes anyway.
"Syaoran-kun!"
[Syaoran snaps back from his thoughts]
Syaoran: Nanda?
Sakura: Mou! Syaoran-kun! I was asking if you wanted to go to the movies with me tomorrow?
Syaoran: (looks around with a quizzical look) What happened to Daidouji?
Sakura: Oh, Tomoyo-chan said she had some things to do at home with her mom...or something. She sounded kinda suspicious, but she has been weirdly happy all day because of something...
[while Sakura was talking away...]
Syaoran: (with a big grin) *Daidouji, you're the best!*
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On the way to Tomoyo's house - Evening
Tomoyo: *I hope leaving them alone this time will actually have something come out of it...Subarashi desu wa!*
"Excuse me miss?"
[Tomoyo spins around in the darkness towards the source of the voice.]
Tomoyo: Wha? Who's there? Just to tell you...I-I've got mace!
[Suddenly, a pair of hands come around her waist]
Eriol: (with an irresistible smirk) Mace, huh? I thought you'd be happy to see me, Daidouji-san.
[Tomoyo turns her head upward to see a handsome young man with dark hair and mysterious eyes]
Tomoyo: *Wow... He's...grown since I saw him last...*
Eriol: As much as I like standing all alone with you in the dark, don't you think you should be getting home? It's getting late. Besides, we certainly have some catching up to do. (smiles again)
Tomoyo: (blushing furiously) H-hai.
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Syaoran's apartment - evening
"RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!"
[Syaoran goes over and picks up the ringing pink cell phone. Pink? He wondered why he ever accepted it. Oh yeah...that's right. ^_~]
Syaoran: Moshi Moshi, Li desu.
Eriol: Why hello, my cute descendant. It seems you need help with something, am I right?
To be continued!
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~End of Chapter 2~
Some vocab:
Ohayo: Good morning (I'm sure you know this one ^_^)
Subarashii: Great, spectacular, awesome...you get the picture.
Moshi Moshi : how you answer the phone. like, "hello?"
Nanda: Informal, "What?"
Oh...for this next part:
Oniichan - older brother (-chan ending notes endearment)
Sorry I forgot this last time:
Jikai mo - Next time (also)....
Sakura to isshoni - Literally, "together with Sakura." What's she's really saying here is:
"Next time, come RELEASE with Sakura!"
(Yeah, it's third person, but if you've seen the subbed version of CCS you know what I mean)
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Preview for Chapter 3:
Sakura: Syaoran-kun and I go to the movies! HOE!? Oniichan! What are you doing here? And Syaoran-kun, what the heck are you trying to tell me? All this and more coming in Advice (and other funny things) Chapter THREE! Jikai mo, Sakura to isshoni...RELEASE!
Leave it to Noelle! (otherwise known as author's notes)
[Pops out of a big sign]
Noelle: Konyanyachiwa! How was this installment of my fanfic? Besides the blatant S+S pairing, I've found a liking for a little E+T too. I think it would be great to develop that relationship as well. Oh yeah, you know how Tomoyo always finds a way to get Sakura and Syaoran alone? I think she's a great friend to both of them (though Sakura might not notice) and a perfect matchmaker to boot! Hohoho!
Kero-chan: NANI?! I don't get any lines in this fanfic? I'm the most important character in the show!
Noelle: Ehehe...you just had a line right there?
Kero-chan: FINE! I'll use this time to say...*ahem* Dou da? Kids, always floss your teeth and listen to your parents! And always be nice...
(death glares at Noelle)
Noelle: err...(sweatdrops)
Kero-chan: ...to handsome guys like myself! Honana!