Cool...I think the reviews actually doubled this time...4 more!!!!! Thanx Marie Im not joking, i really do appreciate the criticism. There wont be any changes made for now so unfortunately the punctuation will remain the same...soz. For some reason and no offence to any PiccoloXGohan fans reading but that pairing totally freaks me out...its just ick! Its like molesting or child abuse...ok lets say no more on that topic... You're not learning Hamlet by any chance coz Hamlet and Procrastination go hand in hand... What did Shakespeare have against us...(Ne1 seen that episode of BlackAdder wher he goes back into the past and punches Shakespeare an' says "this is for all the english students in the 21st century!!!" lolol) Okay well onto the story...and again sorry bout da punctuation...
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Seventeen raised his head looking at boy. Gohan was shaking. He leaned towards Gohan again hearing him gasp in terror and he gently kissed the tears from Gohans cheeks. He sat up and licked his lips, tasting the salt. He got off the bed glancing at Gohan. His eyes were closed and his chest was rising and falling slowly. Seventeen turned and left the room. Once he was outside he raised his fingers to his lips. He had enjoyed that...Gohans lips had been so soft. He is quite good looking too thought Seventeen grinning. He almost regretted scaring him...almost. That had made it all the more interesting.
Gohan rolled over onto his side still in shock after what had happened...Seventeen had kissed him. He hadnt expected such gentleness from the android either. It wasnt right though! He was a boy for Kami's sake. His mother would be hysterical. He shouldnt have said anything when Seventeen touched him, she probably thought he was being hurt or something 'I can be such an idiot sometimes' He wrapped his arms around himself for comfort but none came. Would he ever see his mother again? Tears blurred his vision. he covered his face in his hands turning over in an attempt to get some sleep and pulled the blanket up around his shoulders.
When he woke the next morning there was a tray with food on it left on the chair. Gohan was starving and wolfed it down. To pass some of the day he decided to meditate. He sat on the bed and crossed his legs. He shrugged his shoulders a few times to free them out before relaxing. He closed his eyes and concentrated. Before long he was in a deep trance. Oblivious to anything around him. He had used a similar method of training when he was on the spaceship going to Namek. There was not a lot of space for him and Krillin to train. It didnt use that much chi so he could use it no matter how depleted his chi was. In his trance he imagined he was sparring with Piccolo. He launched a flurry of kicks and punches as well as blocking and dodging Piccolos attacks
Seventeen walked into the room. He saw gohan sitting on the bed, his eyes tightly shut with sweat beaded on his forehead. every few seconds he would gasp or mutter at something unseen. 'Whats he up to?' Seventeen thought to himself as he neared the bed. He was standing just in front of Gohan and was bending down to shake him. In his trance Gohan was fighting off three Piccolos at once, Piccolo was using Multiform against him. They all fired at once and the blast was unavoidable. Gohan opened his eyes with a jolt. Seventeen was reaching for him.
"Aaaggghhh" Gohan yelled when he saw Seventeen so close. He rolled back and tumbled off the bed landing with a muffled 'oooff' pulling the blankets down on top of him. Seventeen was startled and gave a small jump back
He took one look at the thrashing heap of blankets on the floor and the edges of his mouth quirked up in a smile. Gohans head popped ot and he sneezed. His hair was all ruffled and his face was flushed. he took one look at the smile on Seventeens face and he blushed harder. he managed to detach himself from the blankets and stood there uncomfortably
"What were you doing?" Seventeen asked curiously
"I...umm...I was meditating...well sorta..." Gohan answered. Seventeen frowned
"Meditating is supposed to be calming, you were sweating" He pointed out to Gohan "Do you think im some kind of fool to believe an excuse like that" Gohans face paled and he opened his mouth
"You'd better watch yourself boy" Seventeen cut in "Your dad isnt here this time to save you this time " Seventeen didnt mean for it to sound quite so harsh but he felt so confused around Gohan that everything seemed to come out wrong
"I know..." whispered Gohan "...and its all my fault. Seventeen looked up sharply when he heard Gohan. his head was lowered and his messy bangs were casting dark shadows across his face. Seventeen was surprised but decided to allow Gohan his privacy and left the room.
Gohan sniffed. he really didnt like Seventeen, he always felt nervous around him and his stomach was all tingly and jumpy. he was like a time bomb; one second he was almost nice and the next second he could explode. Gohan was terrified of him. he had to figure a way out. he yawned and realised that he had spent alot of the day meditating and decided that he may as well go to bed and get some rest
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OoOoOoh I hope ye liked that! R&R plz coz i wanna know what u think...Bout half way there now...
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Seventeen raised his head looking at boy. Gohan was shaking. He leaned towards Gohan again hearing him gasp in terror and he gently kissed the tears from Gohans cheeks. He sat up and licked his lips, tasting the salt. He got off the bed glancing at Gohan. His eyes were closed and his chest was rising and falling slowly. Seventeen turned and left the room. Once he was outside he raised his fingers to his lips. He had enjoyed that...Gohans lips had been so soft. He is quite good looking too thought Seventeen grinning. He almost regretted scaring him...almost. That had made it all the more interesting.
Gohan rolled over onto his side still in shock after what had happened...Seventeen had kissed him. He hadnt expected such gentleness from the android either. It wasnt right though! He was a boy for Kami's sake. His mother would be hysterical. He shouldnt have said anything when Seventeen touched him, she probably thought he was being hurt or something 'I can be such an idiot sometimes' He wrapped his arms around himself for comfort but none came. Would he ever see his mother again? Tears blurred his vision. he covered his face in his hands turning over in an attempt to get some sleep and pulled the blanket up around his shoulders.
When he woke the next morning there was a tray with food on it left on the chair. Gohan was starving and wolfed it down. To pass some of the day he decided to meditate. He sat on the bed and crossed his legs. He shrugged his shoulders a few times to free them out before relaxing. He closed his eyes and concentrated. Before long he was in a deep trance. Oblivious to anything around him. He had used a similar method of training when he was on the spaceship going to Namek. There was not a lot of space for him and Krillin to train. It didnt use that much chi so he could use it no matter how depleted his chi was. In his trance he imagined he was sparring with Piccolo. He launched a flurry of kicks and punches as well as blocking and dodging Piccolos attacks
Seventeen walked into the room. He saw gohan sitting on the bed, his eyes tightly shut with sweat beaded on his forehead. every few seconds he would gasp or mutter at something unseen. 'Whats he up to?' Seventeen thought to himself as he neared the bed. He was standing just in front of Gohan and was bending down to shake him. In his trance Gohan was fighting off three Piccolos at once, Piccolo was using Multiform against him. They all fired at once and the blast was unavoidable. Gohan opened his eyes with a jolt. Seventeen was reaching for him.
"Aaaggghhh" Gohan yelled when he saw Seventeen so close. He rolled back and tumbled off the bed landing with a muffled 'oooff' pulling the blankets down on top of him. Seventeen was startled and gave a small jump back
He took one look at the thrashing heap of blankets on the floor and the edges of his mouth quirked up in a smile. Gohans head popped ot and he sneezed. His hair was all ruffled and his face was flushed. he took one look at the smile on Seventeens face and he blushed harder. he managed to detach himself from the blankets and stood there uncomfortably
"What were you doing?" Seventeen asked curiously
"I...umm...I was meditating...well sorta..." Gohan answered. Seventeen frowned
"Meditating is supposed to be calming, you were sweating" He pointed out to Gohan "Do you think im some kind of fool to believe an excuse like that" Gohans face paled and he opened his mouth
"You'd better watch yourself boy" Seventeen cut in "Your dad isnt here this time to save you this time " Seventeen didnt mean for it to sound quite so harsh but he felt so confused around Gohan that everything seemed to come out wrong
"I know..." whispered Gohan "...and its all my fault. Seventeen looked up sharply when he heard Gohan. his head was lowered and his messy bangs were casting dark shadows across his face. Seventeen was surprised but decided to allow Gohan his privacy and left the room.
Gohan sniffed. he really didnt like Seventeen, he always felt nervous around him and his stomach was all tingly and jumpy. he was like a time bomb; one second he was almost nice and the next second he could explode. Gohan was terrified of him. he had to figure a way out. he yawned and realised that he had spent alot of the day meditating and decided that he may as well go to bed and get some rest
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OoOoOoh I hope ye liked that! R&R plz coz i wanna know what u think...Bout half way there now...