Chapter 4: Where there is evil there's good.
Sorry for taking so long my monitar broke down! ? waz up with that?
Disclaimer: I sadly don't own pokemon, all I own is the idea for this fic.
Comment: *sigh* I should've known better then to let my dad critique my work see my stories use to be
very detailed when I just type for fun but when I don't well something that rhymes with "it" lol thats how the turn out. My dad said bluntly, make no sense, whats the plot, all choppy, why do you always write about ash and Misty in love, see what bothered me was that he was right! I hate how its choppy *except he's wrong about the Ash and Misty thing that really cut my nerve Ash and Misty are in Love and I LOVE pokemon! So know I have to do my best to make this chapter sound good! Please critique me as hard as you can I need it! Please pray for me I love writing and I don't want to succ at it! Oh im so sorry for rambeling on here we go....
Misty, shook her head in shock, her mind just couldn't register what was occurring at the moment.
Misty, gazed into the eyes she believed she knew only to see them cold and heartless.
Ash seemed to be possessed by something , something evil and wicked, something which couldn't be
expressed in simple words. All she knew was the person which kneeled beside her was no longer the
young boy, she loved and admired, he was the total opposite of Ash's description.
Misty began to repeat the words which came out of "Ash's" mouth. Could it be her true fear her nightmare?
Then she realized something, the boy which kneeled before her, He wasn't Ash he couldn't be...
meaning...she gasped in fear. The fear creation had taken away Ash's heart and soul but not his body. So
the Ash she new and she cared for deeply was no longer in the body she gazed at, but replaced by someone
cold hearted. She shivered at another thought which came to her mind and she which it hadn't thought it. If
what she believed, was true how would she be able to get back the Ash she knew, with all her heart. These
words gripped at Misty's heart and soul, their had to be some way.
"Is their something wrong" Ash questioned in sarcasm. The evil grin still lay upon his face.
" Why would you care?" Misty replied, catching the sarcasm in his voice.
" I don't, but I couldn't help but notice, how wrecked, and pathetic you look" He laughed aloud, he
seem to be quite pleased with himself.
" Looks, Like your the only person which finds your jokes funny...huh" She responded with disgust.
" yes, because I'm the only person which is intelligent enough to find the humor in it." Again, he was
amused with his words.
Brock and Serenity began to run towards the scene, but as they reached it, their eyes weren't perpared
for what they were about to see.
"Ash?" Brock questioned with fear, as his eyes gazed deep into Ash's.
" What gives you the permission for you humans to call me that. You will address me as your master."
Ash snickered, evilly.
" Master! What right do you have for telling us to call you master!" Misty replied with anger.
" So it is spoken so it is written! Don't question me!" Ash demanded with rage as his blood began to
boil. Because of his uncontrollable anger his eyes began to glow a bright red as he shot a bolt of power at
the three trainers, sending them a far distance away from him. He shot a look of pure venom to each of the
trainers which lied on the ground, and began to rise up in the air. A red glow engulfed his body as he got
ready to unleash his powers on the trainers.
" Now, you will see what is the outcome of talking back to your master." Ash hissed loudly. His arms
began reach out, as a ball of physic power began to form in each of his hands.
The young man gazed at the scene with sensation, " There we go, that's better."
" Know you'll pay!" Ash released the physic balls of energy and they moved rapidly through the air,
heading towards the trainers , but suddenly a young women ran in front of the three trainers and removed a
poke ball
from her belt. " Espeon Go! Form a shield around all of us!" The trainer commanded her pokemon, the
pokemon did what it was told as it created a shield surrounding its master and the three trainers.
Once the balls of power came in contact with the barrier it was reflected back into the direction it was
sent.
" What!" Ash yelled, puzzeled and in fury.
" Muraura?" The young man whispered.
" You guys alright?" The young women asked, her hair fell freely down to her waist.
" what? How did you-" Misty uttered out with total confusion.
" For the time being your safe with me." The women spoke calmly, as she used the tips of her fingers
to place her hair behind her ear.
Both Ash and the young man watched as the young women spoke. And out of rage once again,
Ash tried another attack on the group.
The trainers gasped in fear, but The young women commanded her Espeon to shield them all form the
attack. Once again.
" Its no use!" Both Ash and the young man cried out.
" Keith?!" Murura cried out as she spotted the young man in the corner. She immediately recalled her
pokemon into the poke ball.
Keith fell silent as his eyes gazed into the person which he thought he knew, but he didn't remember
her, only her name and that they were in love. Once this word came into his mind the definition of it was
irrelevant. He didn't know and frankly didn't care for it's meaning. So he just stared at Muraura
coldly. Then, he quickly leaned over to whisper something in Ash's ears.
" Keith," Muraura whispered under her breathe, " Please return to your loving and caring self. I'll
help you."
Suddenly without warning Ash swept down swiftly towards the ground, and grabbed the poke ball
which was attached to Muraura's belt, which contained Espeon in it.
" You won't be needing this," He commented, with snicker.
" No, Espeon!" the women cried out in fear. Now she was unable to protect herself and the others
from evil powers.
As soon as Ash had took the Espeon into his possession. Keith sent a beam of physic power as evil over took him once again.
" Run!" Misty cried out, and with that the four trainers dodged the beam. As they proceeded to run
they were fortunate enough to find a secret door which was located on the floor of the marble. They quickly
unfastened the doors lock and jumped down into the secret room. Once they entered the room they the
fastened the lock on the door behind them.
" Is everyone okay?" Serenity questioned.
" Yes" Everyone replied. However, inside Misty, wasn't feeling fine whatsoever. She sighed and
leaned against the paved wall. She wanted to be running away with Ash not running away from Ash.
She wanted to ram the door open and fall into the arms of her beloved Ash, evil or not.
" We have to think of a plan," Misty announced, determined. "We've got to." Then she turned to
Muraura.
"Did you know that evil man?" She questioned.
" Yes, his name is Keith, but he was never evil to begin with. He was the total opposite."
" What? What happened to him?" Misty asked concerned.
" Some people owned a business and did many experiments, one of them was they believed if
a pokemon was more violent, and had less emotion that it would be more concerned with batteling and have
more potential attacks. So they began to use a formula on the pokemon. The formula lead to what they
believed, a success, since the pokemon would evolve much faster and possessed attacks no one had ever
seen, but their experiment got out of hand as the pokemon became heartless and would not obey any
human. So the experiment was band, and it was illegal to perform any further experiments. But the people
wouldn't , listen and they tried the formula on humans to see if some how they could posses powers, my
boyfriend was one of the victims, and this is how it effected him. The substance in the formula some how
turns your heart in its total opposite. My boyfriend was pure of heart and because of that he was effected
drastically. He is now the total opposite of that, meaning he is evil and has no since of compassion
whatsoever.
Misty stood their in fright and sorrow " That's horrible, but wait is Ash effected by that too?!"
Misty spoke in horror.
" I'm afraid so, Keith has the power to cause the same effects on people that the formula does."
" Is their anyway to reverse the effect?" Misty questioned hopefully.
" I'm not sure, Their may be a way. They may be overtaken by evil but they still have a heart."
Misty thought hard and then an idea came to her," Come on, we can't just hide here! We have to help
Ash and Keith!"
Muraura nodded in agreement and followed Misty as she ran too the door and unlocked the lash
which held the door shut. She struggeled to climb out, but finally she managed, and once she was on the
marble ground she helped her others friends up onto the marble as well. All of the friends were unaware
of Ash's and Keiths presence, except for Misty. Keith was in a position ready to unleash his evil power,
and once again he released his power of evil within.
" Oh no!" Everyone cried and began to flee the scene. Everyone, except for Misty, she stood their
facing the ball of power. She didn't flinch whatsoever, she just gazed at the power balls, not sure on exactly
what she was doing, but a feeling in her heart and soul made her stay there.
" Misty! Get out of the way! Run for it!!" Brock cried out to Misty.
_To be continued *sorry* don don don!
Please r &r !
Hey that was probably my longest chapter!!!wee! hope it wasn't to boring! I just wanted you guys to understand! I hope it wasn't to choopy or rushed! And of course I hope you liked it! Man this is a boring thursday evening School had got the best of me! Thanks! :)
Sorry for taking so long my monitar broke down! ? waz up with that?
Disclaimer: I sadly don't own pokemon, all I own is the idea for this fic.
Comment: *sigh* I should've known better then to let my dad critique my work see my stories use to be
very detailed when I just type for fun but when I don't well something that rhymes with "it" lol thats how the turn out. My dad said bluntly, make no sense, whats the plot, all choppy, why do you always write about ash and Misty in love, see what bothered me was that he was right! I hate how its choppy *except he's wrong about the Ash and Misty thing that really cut my nerve Ash and Misty are in Love and I LOVE pokemon! So know I have to do my best to make this chapter sound good! Please critique me as hard as you can I need it! Please pray for me I love writing and I don't want to succ at it! Oh im so sorry for rambeling on here we go....
Misty, shook her head in shock, her mind just couldn't register what was occurring at the moment.
Misty, gazed into the eyes she believed she knew only to see them cold and heartless.
Ash seemed to be possessed by something , something evil and wicked, something which couldn't be
expressed in simple words. All she knew was the person which kneeled beside her was no longer the
young boy, she loved and admired, he was the total opposite of Ash's description.
Misty began to repeat the words which came out of "Ash's" mouth. Could it be her true fear her nightmare?
Then she realized something, the boy which kneeled before her, He wasn't Ash he couldn't be...
meaning...she gasped in fear. The fear creation had taken away Ash's heart and soul but not his body. So
the Ash she new and she cared for deeply was no longer in the body she gazed at, but replaced by someone
cold hearted. She shivered at another thought which came to her mind and she which it hadn't thought it. If
what she believed, was true how would she be able to get back the Ash she knew, with all her heart. These
words gripped at Misty's heart and soul, their had to be some way.
"Is their something wrong" Ash questioned in sarcasm. The evil grin still lay upon his face.
" Why would you care?" Misty replied, catching the sarcasm in his voice.
" I don't, but I couldn't help but notice, how wrecked, and pathetic you look" He laughed aloud, he
seem to be quite pleased with himself.
" Looks, Like your the only person which finds your jokes funny...huh" She responded with disgust.
" yes, because I'm the only person which is intelligent enough to find the humor in it." Again, he was
amused with his words.
Brock and Serenity began to run towards the scene, but as they reached it, their eyes weren't perpared
for what they were about to see.
"Ash?" Brock questioned with fear, as his eyes gazed deep into Ash's.
" What gives you the permission for you humans to call me that. You will address me as your master."
Ash snickered, evilly.
" Master! What right do you have for telling us to call you master!" Misty replied with anger.
" So it is spoken so it is written! Don't question me!" Ash demanded with rage as his blood began to
boil. Because of his uncontrollable anger his eyes began to glow a bright red as he shot a bolt of power at
the three trainers, sending them a far distance away from him. He shot a look of pure venom to each of the
trainers which lied on the ground, and began to rise up in the air. A red glow engulfed his body as he got
ready to unleash his powers on the trainers.
" Now, you will see what is the outcome of talking back to your master." Ash hissed loudly. His arms
began reach out, as a ball of physic power began to form in each of his hands.
The young man gazed at the scene with sensation, " There we go, that's better."
" Know you'll pay!" Ash released the physic balls of energy and they moved rapidly through the air,
heading towards the trainers , but suddenly a young women ran in front of the three trainers and removed a
poke ball
from her belt. " Espeon Go! Form a shield around all of us!" The trainer commanded her pokemon, the
pokemon did what it was told as it created a shield surrounding its master and the three trainers.
Once the balls of power came in contact with the barrier it was reflected back into the direction it was
sent.
" What!" Ash yelled, puzzeled and in fury.
" Muraura?" The young man whispered.
" You guys alright?" The young women asked, her hair fell freely down to her waist.
" what? How did you-" Misty uttered out with total confusion.
" For the time being your safe with me." The women spoke calmly, as she used the tips of her fingers
to place her hair behind her ear.
Both Ash and the young man watched as the young women spoke. And out of rage once again,
Ash tried another attack on the group.
The trainers gasped in fear, but The young women commanded her Espeon to shield them all form the
attack. Once again.
" Its no use!" Both Ash and the young man cried out.
" Keith?!" Murura cried out as she spotted the young man in the corner. She immediately recalled her
pokemon into the poke ball.
Keith fell silent as his eyes gazed into the person which he thought he knew, but he didn't remember
her, only her name and that they were in love. Once this word came into his mind the definition of it was
irrelevant. He didn't know and frankly didn't care for it's meaning. So he just stared at Muraura
coldly. Then, he quickly leaned over to whisper something in Ash's ears.
" Keith," Muraura whispered under her breathe, " Please return to your loving and caring self. I'll
help you."
Suddenly without warning Ash swept down swiftly towards the ground, and grabbed the poke ball
which was attached to Muraura's belt, which contained Espeon in it.
" You won't be needing this," He commented, with snicker.
" No, Espeon!" the women cried out in fear. Now she was unable to protect herself and the others
from evil powers.
As soon as Ash had took the Espeon into his possession. Keith sent a beam of physic power as evil over took him once again.
" Run!" Misty cried out, and with that the four trainers dodged the beam. As they proceeded to run
they were fortunate enough to find a secret door which was located on the floor of the marble. They quickly
unfastened the doors lock and jumped down into the secret room. Once they entered the room they the
fastened the lock on the door behind them.
" Is everyone okay?" Serenity questioned.
" Yes" Everyone replied. However, inside Misty, wasn't feeling fine whatsoever. She sighed and
leaned against the paved wall. She wanted to be running away with Ash not running away from Ash.
She wanted to ram the door open and fall into the arms of her beloved Ash, evil or not.
" We have to think of a plan," Misty announced, determined. "We've got to." Then she turned to
Muraura.
"Did you know that evil man?" She questioned.
" Yes, his name is Keith, but he was never evil to begin with. He was the total opposite."
" What? What happened to him?" Misty asked concerned.
" Some people owned a business and did many experiments, one of them was they believed if
a pokemon was more violent, and had less emotion that it would be more concerned with batteling and have
more potential attacks. So they began to use a formula on the pokemon. The formula lead to what they
believed, a success, since the pokemon would evolve much faster and possessed attacks no one had ever
seen, but their experiment got out of hand as the pokemon became heartless and would not obey any
human. So the experiment was band, and it was illegal to perform any further experiments. But the people
wouldn't , listen and they tried the formula on humans to see if some how they could posses powers, my
boyfriend was one of the victims, and this is how it effected him. The substance in the formula some how
turns your heart in its total opposite. My boyfriend was pure of heart and because of that he was effected
drastically. He is now the total opposite of that, meaning he is evil and has no since of compassion
whatsoever.
Misty stood their in fright and sorrow " That's horrible, but wait is Ash effected by that too?!"
Misty spoke in horror.
" I'm afraid so, Keith has the power to cause the same effects on people that the formula does."
" Is their anyway to reverse the effect?" Misty questioned hopefully.
" I'm not sure, Their may be a way. They may be overtaken by evil but they still have a heart."
Misty thought hard and then an idea came to her," Come on, we can't just hide here! We have to help
Ash and Keith!"
Muraura nodded in agreement and followed Misty as she ran too the door and unlocked the lash
which held the door shut. She struggeled to climb out, but finally she managed, and once she was on the
marble ground she helped her others friends up onto the marble as well. All of the friends were unaware
of Ash's and Keiths presence, except for Misty. Keith was in a position ready to unleash his evil power,
and once again he released his power of evil within.
" Oh no!" Everyone cried and began to flee the scene. Everyone, except for Misty, she stood their
facing the ball of power. She didn't flinch whatsoever, she just gazed at the power balls, not sure on exactly
what she was doing, but a feeling in her heart and soul made her stay there.
" Misty! Get out of the way! Run for it!!" Brock cried out to Misty.
_To be continued *sorry* don don don!
Please r &r !
Hey that was probably my longest chapter!!!wee! hope it wasn't to boring! I just wanted you guys to understand! I hope it wasn't to choopy or rushed! And of course I hope you liked it! Man this is a boring thursday evening School had got the best of me! Thanks! :)