Okay, I thought I should end the story there. It became longer than I had planned it to be.
So I draw here the final line. For now…
But to another thought in my mind: After I read the reviews I decided to not try and write the stories on my own again.
So, because there is no one here that can help me, I wanted to ask if someone out there have the time and out of all the energy and the kindness, to read my chapters before I post them and tell me where and how to fix the whole grammar… problems in them.
I hope that anyone of you could help me. Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeee. Because I think I won't write another story in english if nobody can understand what I wanna say.
With this words, hopefully till the next story
Thunderstorm