Chapter 2
Miranda left the park and walked the three blocks to Lizzie house. Once there, she knocked on the door.
"Just a minute!" came a voice. The door opened revealing Lizzie's little brother Matt who was wearing his swimming suit. His skin was white with sunscreen that hadn't been rubbed in.
"Hey Matt! Um, is Lizzie here?"
"Yeah, hold on while I go get her. LIZZIE!" Matt screamed, still standing right in front of her.
"What do you want?" Lizzie grumbled walking in to the front entry. She noticed Miranda standing at the door. "Oh hey Miranda, come in," she said.
Just then Mrs. McGuire walked in. "Matt get in the car your going to be late for your friends pool party!" Mrs. McGuire said. She and Matt walked out the front door. "Bye Lizzie, you and Miranda be good."
"We will. See you later mom." Lizzie said waving.
"Yeah, bye Mrs. McGuire." Miranda said. Lizzie closed the front door and lead Miranda to the family room couch. "I need to talk to you Lizzie," Miranda said as she sat down.
"Ok, what about?" Lizzie said.
"You know exactly what I need to talk to you about!" Miranda said exasperated.
"Yeah I guess so, you mean about Gordo right?"
"Exactly."
"Look, how would you feel if the person you like who also happens to be one of your best friends is going to be gone all summer? I was even planning on telling him."
"You were!
"Yeah."
"Wow, after how many years you finally decide to do it and he is leaving. You do still have three days though," Miranda reminded her.
"So, I have three days to figure out how to tell him, and get enough courage to do it!"
"Um, yeah I guess so."
"Fine just promise to help me!" Lizzie said. "Please?"
"Ok, fine."
"You're the greatest friend ever!"
"Yeah, yeah, I know."
There's chapter 2 peeps. R/R and tell me what I can improve on and what u think of it.
-perfectangel
Miranda left the park and walked the three blocks to Lizzie house. Once there, she knocked on the door.
"Just a minute!" came a voice. The door opened revealing Lizzie's little brother Matt who was wearing his swimming suit. His skin was white with sunscreen that hadn't been rubbed in.
"Hey Matt! Um, is Lizzie here?"
"Yeah, hold on while I go get her. LIZZIE!" Matt screamed, still standing right in front of her.
"What do you want?" Lizzie grumbled walking in to the front entry. She noticed Miranda standing at the door. "Oh hey Miranda, come in," she said.
Just then Mrs. McGuire walked in. "Matt get in the car your going to be late for your friends pool party!" Mrs. McGuire said. She and Matt walked out the front door. "Bye Lizzie, you and Miranda be good."
"We will. See you later mom." Lizzie said waving.
"Yeah, bye Mrs. McGuire." Miranda said. Lizzie closed the front door and lead Miranda to the family room couch. "I need to talk to you Lizzie," Miranda said as she sat down.
"Ok, what about?" Lizzie said.
"You know exactly what I need to talk to you about!" Miranda said exasperated.
"Yeah I guess so, you mean about Gordo right?"
"Exactly."
"Look, how would you feel if the person you like who also happens to be one of your best friends is going to be gone all summer? I was even planning on telling him."
"You were!
"Yeah."
"Wow, after how many years you finally decide to do it and he is leaving. You do still have three days though," Miranda reminded her.
"So, I have three days to figure out how to tell him, and get enough courage to do it!"
"Um, yeah I guess so."
"Fine just promise to help me!" Lizzie said. "Please?"
"Ok, fine."
"You're the greatest friend ever!"
"Yeah, yeah, I know."
There's chapter 2 peeps. R/R and tell me what I can improve on and what u think of it.
-perfectangel