Ch.2 Yo! I am back It just dawned on me that these people don't have ages
*sighs * so here they are:
Hagrid-76
Hermonie-28
Ron-29
Harry-29
James-12
As Hagrid led Harry, James, Ron, and Hermonie through to the docks where two boats awaited. Suddenly Hagrid broke the silence and said, " James, how old are you?" James stared at the tall huge man in disbelief. " I am 12, Mr.Hagrid." Hagrid stared at James' green eyes and then stared at Harry's. "And where do you go to school?" James replied " I got to school at Wood Dale Middle School- but before he could finish what he was saying, Hagrid had stopped dead in tracks. There they were on the castle ground right on the shore. Hagrid put James and Harry in one boat Ron and Hermonie in the other. Hagrid ripped Harry's head off with a lecture about James at Hogwarts. After about 5 minutes later of lecturing, Harry finally popped " Alright Hagrid! He'll go to da*@ Hogwarts!" "Good!" Hagrid said. "First we must go to Diagon alley."
So, did I do alright? Should I make my chaps. longer? R/R please.
Hagrid-76
Hermonie-28
Ron-29
Harry-29
James-12
As Hagrid led Harry, James, Ron, and Hermonie through to the docks where two boats awaited. Suddenly Hagrid broke the silence and said, " James, how old are you?" James stared at the tall huge man in disbelief. " I am 12, Mr.Hagrid." Hagrid stared at James' green eyes and then stared at Harry's. "And where do you go to school?" James replied " I got to school at Wood Dale Middle School- but before he could finish what he was saying, Hagrid had stopped dead in tracks. There they were on the castle ground right on the shore. Hagrid put James and Harry in one boat Ron and Hermonie in the other. Hagrid ripped Harry's head off with a lecture about James at Hogwarts. After about 5 minutes later of lecturing, Harry finally popped " Alright Hagrid! He'll go to da*@ Hogwarts!" "Good!" Hagrid said. "First we must go to Diagon alley."
So, did I do alright? Should I make my chaps. longer? R/R please.