This is my first fanfic, so it might not be so good. ^^
It was a nice and sunny day. Makoto was eating her lunch with her bestfriend Ken.
Ken) Mako-chan, do you want to go to my house and have dinner.
Mako) Well, um I can't Ken sorry, me and Freedy are going out, to the East Park to night.
When Ken heard this his smile went to a sad worryed frown. Mako) Ken whats wrong..? Ken) Huh oh um no..nothing. *Said with a sallom smile. For he new what Freedy was to do that night.* Ken) its going to rain you know. Like around 7 or so. Mako) Oh, I know I like the rain its so nice. And besides, Freedy and I will be under some thing. *Just as that was said Freedy walked up.* freddy) Hey Mako, we still on for tonight? Mako) Yes, we are. Freedy) Thats good.* He walked off saying that, walking over to his "Fan Club".*Mako's eyes started to water a little.* Ken) Mako-chan wha-whats wrong? Are you ok? Mako) Hum,..yes im ok i guess. I just wish that well a guy would be with ME and not other girls as well. *Ken, begain to say something but stoped.* Mako) Oh sorry Ken Im just a little um how could I put this confused right now.. I dont know way.*She said with a half smile which made Ken smile back for he loved it when Mako smiled at him with a half sad but glade smile to tell the truth he loved it when she smiled at him any way.*
After school Mako walked right by Ken which she met after school every day. Ken) Mako-chan... where are you.. Mako) Oh, Ken sorry but I dont have time i have to go meat Freedy at the Park. Ken thought for a moment. Why does she have to go to him why dont he come to her. By the time he thought that throught she was gone. Ken) MAKOTO!! Mako-chan*said in a sad voice* you sould not go you will only be hurt.* Then he thought for a few mins. Oh Mako you will be heart broken you and Freedy have been together for 2 years and 3 days for i have counted teh time and days to see how long i would have to wait. * Then he took of running only till he got to his house to get an unbrela. Then he left for the part.
It was a nice and sunny day. Makoto was eating her lunch with her bestfriend Ken.
Ken) Mako-chan, do you want to go to my house and have dinner.
Mako) Well, um I can't Ken sorry, me and Freedy are going out, to the East Park to night.
When Ken heard this his smile went to a sad worryed frown. Mako) Ken whats wrong..? Ken) Huh oh um no..nothing. *Said with a sallom smile. For he new what Freedy was to do that night.* Ken) its going to rain you know. Like around 7 or so. Mako) Oh, I know I like the rain its so nice. And besides, Freedy and I will be under some thing. *Just as that was said Freedy walked up.* freddy) Hey Mako, we still on for tonight? Mako) Yes, we are. Freedy) Thats good.* He walked off saying that, walking over to his "Fan Club".*Mako's eyes started to water a little.* Ken) Mako-chan wha-whats wrong? Are you ok? Mako) Hum,..yes im ok i guess. I just wish that well a guy would be with ME and not other girls as well. *Ken, begain to say something but stoped.* Mako) Oh sorry Ken Im just a little um how could I put this confused right now.. I dont know way.*She said with a half smile which made Ken smile back for he loved it when Mako smiled at him with a half sad but glade smile to tell the truth he loved it when she smiled at him any way.*
After school Mako walked right by Ken which she met after school every day. Ken) Mako-chan... where are you.. Mako) Oh, Ken sorry but I dont have time i have to go meat Freedy at the Park. Ken thought for a moment. Why does she have to go to him why dont he come to her. By the time he thought that throught she was gone. Ken) MAKOTO!! Mako-chan*said in a sad voice* you sould not go you will only be hurt.* Then he thought for a few mins. Oh Mako you will be heart broken you and Freedy have been together for 2 years and 3 days for i have counted teh time and days to see how long i would have to wait. * Then he took of running only till he got to his house to get an unbrela. Then he left for the part.