Ok, a few notices to the first three people who reviewed.
1: I PURPOSELY put Teken's age in. I lied, and want to inform you her age is really 20. She just looks 17 (to a point^^)
And
2. I referred to Leena's Gunsniper as the Weasel Unit. Sorry. I screwed up. So shoot me.
And
My first reviewer pointed out that in order for the wing units on the Gryfalcon9 to work, the Zoid itself must be larger than LigerZero. Well, I never specified how big the wing units were, just that they were "Like a Ranos's". But, to keep a long story short, I have no earthly idea how the thing works. I don't even know how it's built.
Disclaimer and Warning: I don't own Zoids, but I do own the Gryfalcon9, Teken, and Gryfalcon9's armor changes. I just want to warn you that Teken likes Jack, and Jack kinda likes Teken, so…^^
As some of you may have found out, I tend to be kinda lengthy in description. Every time Teken uses a new weapon that is, -ah- original, I will, if need be, describe it. And if she is wearing a new outfit, new armor, blahblahblahblah. Anyway, she made onto the team, and…and…and…THEY ARE AT THE BEACH! Yeah! ^^ Anyhoo, Leena and Teken went out to buy new swimsuits. Part of the chapter is about that. While doing so, they meet up with Naomi, and a certain pilot of the Berserker Fury…and Leena's brother, Leon. By the way, Teken may use some dirty language later on in chapters, as may a mysterious new group who plans on stealing LigerZero, and the other UltimateX….
Chapter2: Beach party!
"BYE DAD! Me and Teken are going to get her a new swimsuit! We're taking the White Whale King and the GS and Gryfalcon! See ya at the beach!" Leena called to her father, Dr. Taros. "Alright, Be careful!"
~At the swimsuit shop~
"Teken, how about this? It'll match your bangs." Teken turned towards Leena and her eyes went HUGE. Leena was holding up a ocean blue bikini that had a pattern of blue/purple flames. The suit would most likely reveal little to the imagination, if you know what I mean. "Wow, Leena…I don't know though. Does it come with a, well ankle bracelet set, and maybe a headband? I like that kind of thing." Leena turned to the rack that held identical suits. "Wait…YES!" Leena turned back holding the suit, a long, purple/blue ribbon with a sea green jewel sewn in the middle. A pair of ankle and wrist ribbons (A ribbon-like ornament that is water resistant) hung from her hands. "Perfect! I'm going to go try it on, ok?" Teken ran into a dressing room with the suit and accessories. Leena sighed, and started to root through the wall that held sandals, when she heard someone speak to her. "Leena? What are you doing here?" Leena stiffened; that voice was familiar. She turned around. "Leon? Wh-what the heck are you doing here?" Leon laughed. "Naomi's looking for a new swimsuit. We're also looking for some swimsuits for our newest team members. Hey Jack! Vega! Come here for a moment, will you?" A young, black-haired kid and a tall, handsome young man walked over. "I believe you've battled both before." Leena's eyes were huge. Jack opened his mouth to say something, but was distracted by a feeble voice. "Leena? I'm ready. Please don't laugh…I think it makes me look fat…" Teken came out, her head down. The top part of the bikini covered a good portion of her busts (hey, it's a thong. What did you expect?) . Her ankles and wrists were wrapped in the ribbons, and her long, brown hair was tied into a tight ponytail-and-meatball style. "Teken! You don't look fat! You look great!" Leena smiled warmly. Teken looked up, and went a red so deep it was even redder than LigerZero's eyes. "L-Leena…Y-you didn't tell m-me w-we had company…" Leena looked at the boys, all of who except Vega were staring. Somewhere she (Leena) found a big, heavy beach umbrella and bashed both her brother and Jack. "It's not nice to stare! Can't you tell she's shy????" Leena yelled. Teken gave a nervous laugh. "Uh- Who are you people?" Teken asked. "Ow-Leena, did you have to hit so hard? -What? Oh. I'm Leon Taros." Leon grinned. The other young man smiled slightly. "Jack Cisco." The kid laughed and said, "Vega Obscura. Hi!" Teken, who was no longer blushing, bowed, her hair bobbing. "Teken Vestivan…Wait. I've battled you before, and you too." Teken pointed to both Jack and Leon. Both boys looked confused. "Remember? Gryfalcon9, White Whale King, you both couldn't send me any Screen messages, and the same went for me. I blew your gun off." She pointed to Jack. Leon snapped his fingers. "Now I remember, you used a charged Particle Cannon to wipe out my Red Blade Liger. Naomi wasn't able to participate in that battle 'cause she was sick." Jack's eyes went wide. "Yeah, your Zoid totally wiped out my old teams Lightning Sikes (Is that how you spell it?). You never even showed your face. Just sent voice messages instead." "ANYway, We need to get going. If you want that suit, pay for it. We're late. Dad will wonder where we are." Leena said. Teken nodded. She went back to the dressing room and got her clothes. "Hey, do you guys want to come? The more the merrier, you know." Leena asked the boys. Jack nodded. "Sure. Naomi can't come though. She left already. Something about getting her Gunsniper checked, and visiting her old friends." Teken paid for her swimsuit and accessories, and on the way to the Whale King, stopped by a bookstore and bought a hardback book on Zoid guns, types and Special features.
Ohmigawd, that was soo embarrassing. I can't believe it. I acted like a total flake! Oh well…Teken though as she went into her room on the Whale King. She took a pair of baggy green shorts and put them on. She sighed as she left the room with her new book, Types of Zoids, their Weapons, and Special features. She walked towards the control room, and sat down on the deep green chairs there. Jack, Leena, Leon and Vega were already there. Teken still had her new swimsuit on, but the head ribbon had been removed. Teken's, long brown hair swirled lightly above her bare ankles about 5''(Her hair is that long) while her bangs fell down neatly by her ears, which were ornamented by three silver earrings; one on the right and two on the left. "We should almost be there. Just five more minutes." Leena said. "Thanks for inviting us, sis. We were planning on going on a vacation anyway, so this kinda works well." Leon said, looking out the window while sipping on a soda. "Hey Teken, what kinda Zoid do you have?" Vega asked suddenly after a few moments. Teken, startled, looked up from her book. "W-what? Oh, Gryfalcon9 is supposedly classified as an UltimateX. At least, that's what everybody tells me. You aren't planning to battle me, are you?" Teken asked, suddenly suspicious. Vega looked startled, and then he smiled. "Maybe." Teken raised an eyebrow elegantly. "We're Here!" Leena said joyfully. "Oh…Ok. I'm going to show whoever wishes to see my –ah- Zoids. I have more than one; I actually have about three. Who's coming?" Teken said, getting up. Vega jumped up. "Me!" Jack smiled. "Guess I will." Teken looked at Leon and Leena. They shook their heads. "We're gonna go see Daddy. See you on the sands!" They walked out. "Well, on to the holding deck, I suppose."
~~~~ On the Holding Deck~~~~
"This was my first Zoid. A Special Order Lightning Sikes. I-ah- nicknamed it Desert Fang due to the terrain I lived on then. I had it specially ordered to the exact color of sand, rocks, and so on. Later I had it redone to the standard black." Teken pointed to a large, black, blue- eyed, cat-like Zoid. "You like Lightning Sikes, hmm?" Jack said. Teken nodded happily. "It's still one of my favorites next to Gryfalcon9. And this is one of my three sister's old Zoids. It's kind of a cross between a Command Wolf and a Saber Fang. It's funny though. It goes absolutely berserk every time someone besides Adie or I go in it. Adie, my older sister, says it has special terrain abilities. Says it can do underwater Zoid battle. Temperamental Zoid."
I guess you will just have to wait to read the rest. Please R&R. And yes, Teken has sisters. Adie, Lily, and Emy.
1: I PURPOSELY put Teken's age in. I lied, and want to inform you her age is really 20. She just looks 17 (to a point^^)
And
2. I referred to Leena's Gunsniper as the Weasel Unit. Sorry. I screwed up. So shoot me.
And
My first reviewer pointed out that in order for the wing units on the Gryfalcon9 to work, the Zoid itself must be larger than LigerZero. Well, I never specified how big the wing units were, just that they were "Like a Ranos's". But, to keep a long story short, I have no earthly idea how the thing works. I don't even know how it's built.
Disclaimer and Warning: I don't own Zoids, but I do own the Gryfalcon9, Teken, and Gryfalcon9's armor changes. I just want to warn you that Teken likes Jack, and Jack kinda likes Teken, so…^^
As some of you may have found out, I tend to be kinda lengthy in description. Every time Teken uses a new weapon that is, -ah- original, I will, if need be, describe it. And if she is wearing a new outfit, new armor, blahblahblahblah. Anyway, she made onto the team, and…and…and…THEY ARE AT THE BEACH! Yeah! ^^ Anyhoo, Leena and Teken went out to buy new swimsuits. Part of the chapter is about that. While doing so, they meet up with Naomi, and a certain pilot of the Berserker Fury…and Leena's brother, Leon. By the way, Teken may use some dirty language later on in chapters, as may a mysterious new group who plans on stealing LigerZero, and the other UltimateX….
Chapter2: Beach party!
"BYE DAD! Me and Teken are going to get her a new swimsuit! We're taking the White Whale King and the GS and Gryfalcon! See ya at the beach!" Leena called to her father, Dr. Taros. "Alright, Be careful!"
~At the swimsuit shop~
"Teken, how about this? It'll match your bangs." Teken turned towards Leena and her eyes went HUGE. Leena was holding up a ocean blue bikini that had a pattern of blue/purple flames. The suit would most likely reveal little to the imagination, if you know what I mean. "Wow, Leena…I don't know though. Does it come with a, well ankle bracelet set, and maybe a headband? I like that kind of thing." Leena turned to the rack that held identical suits. "Wait…YES!" Leena turned back holding the suit, a long, purple/blue ribbon with a sea green jewel sewn in the middle. A pair of ankle and wrist ribbons (A ribbon-like ornament that is water resistant) hung from her hands. "Perfect! I'm going to go try it on, ok?" Teken ran into a dressing room with the suit and accessories. Leena sighed, and started to root through the wall that held sandals, when she heard someone speak to her. "Leena? What are you doing here?" Leena stiffened; that voice was familiar. She turned around. "Leon? Wh-what the heck are you doing here?" Leon laughed. "Naomi's looking for a new swimsuit. We're also looking for some swimsuits for our newest team members. Hey Jack! Vega! Come here for a moment, will you?" A young, black-haired kid and a tall, handsome young man walked over. "I believe you've battled both before." Leena's eyes were huge. Jack opened his mouth to say something, but was distracted by a feeble voice. "Leena? I'm ready. Please don't laugh…I think it makes me look fat…" Teken came out, her head down. The top part of the bikini covered a good portion of her busts (hey, it's a thong. What did you expect?) . Her ankles and wrists were wrapped in the ribbons, and her long, brown hair was tied into a tight ponytail-and-meatball style. "Teken! You don't look fat! You look great!" Leena smiled warmly. Teken looked up, and went a red so deep it was even redder than LigerZero's eyes. "L-Leena…Y-you didn't tell m-me w-we had company…" Leena looked at the boys, all of who except Vega were staring. Somewhere she (Leena) found a big, heavy beach umbrella and bashed both her brother and Jack. "It's not nice to stare! Can't you tell she's shy????" Leena yelled. Teken gave a nervous laugh. "Uh- Who are you people?" Teken asked. "Ow-Leena, did you have to hit so hard? -What? Oh. I'm Leon Taros." Leon grinned. The other young man smiled slightly. "Jack Cisco." The kid laughed and said, "Vega Obscura. Hi!" Teken, who was no longer blushing, bowed, her hair bobbing. "Teken Vestivan…Wait. I've battled you before, and you too." Teken pointed to both Jack and Leon. Both boys looked confused. "Remember? Gryfalcon9, White Whale King, you both couldn't send me any Screen messages, and the same went for me. I blew your gun off." She pointed to Jack. Leon snapped his fingers. "Now I remember, you used a charged Particle Cannon to wipe out my Red Blade Liger. Naomi wasn't able to participate in that battle 'cause she was sick." Jack's eyes went wide. "Yeah, your Zoid totally wiped out my old teams Lightning Sikes (Is that how you spell it?). You never even showed your face. Just sent voice messages instead." "ANYway, We need to get going. If you want that suit, pay for it. We're late. Dad will wonder where we are." Leena said. Teken nodded. She went back to the dressing room and got her clothes. "Hey, do you guys want to come? The more the merrier, you know." Leena asked the boys. Jack nodded. "Sure. Naomi can't come though. She left already. Something about getting her Gunsniper checked, and visiting her old friends." Teken paid for her swimsuit and accessories, and on the way to the Whale King, stopped by a bookstore and bought a hardback book on Zoid guns, types and Special features.
Ohmigawd, that was soo embarrassing. I can't believe it. I acted like a total flake! Oh well…Teken though as she went into her room on the Whale King. She took a pair of baggy green shorts and put them on. She sighed as she left the room with her new book, Types of Zoids, their Weapons, and Special features. She walked towards the control room, and sat down on the deep green chairs there. Jack, Leena, Leon and Vega were already there. Teken still had her new swimsuit on, but the head ribbon had been removed. Teken's, long brown hair swirled lightly above her bare ankles about 5''(Her hair is that long) while her bangs fell down neatly by her ears, which were ornamented by three silver earrings; one on the right and two on the left. "We should almost be there. Just five more minutes." Leena said. "Thanks for inviting us, sis. We were planning on going on a vacation anyway, so this kinda works well." Leon said, looking out the window while sipping on a soda. "Hey Teken, what kinda Zoid do you have?" Vega asked suddenly after a few moments. Teken, startled, looked up from her book. "W-what? Oh, Gryfalcon9 is supposedly classified as an UltimateX. At least, that's what everybody tells me. You aren't planning to battle me, are you?" Teken asked, suddenly suspicious. Vega looked startled, and then he smiled. "Maybe." Teken raised an eyebrow elegantly. "We're Here!" Leena said joyfully. "Oh…Ok. I'm going to show whoever wishes to see my –ah- Zoids. I have more than one; I actually have about three. Who's coming?" Teken said, getting up. Vega jumped up. "Me!" Jack smiled. "Guess I will." Teken looked at Leon and Leena. They shook their heads. "We're gonna go see Daddy. See you on the sands!" They walked out. "Well, on to the holding deck, I suppose."
~~~~ On the Holding Deck~~~~
"This was my first Zoid. A Special Order Lightning Sikes. I-ah- nicknamed it Desert Fang due to the terrain I lived on then. I had it specially ordered to the exact color of sand, rocks, and so on. Later I had it redone to the standard black." Teken pointed to a large, black, blue- eyed, cat-like Zoid. "You like Lightning Sikes, hmm?" Jack said. Teken nodded happily. "It's still one of my favorites next to Gryfalcon9. And this is one of my three sister's old Zoids. It's kind of a cross between a Command Wolf and a Saber Fang. It's funny though. It goes absolutely berserk every time someone besides Adie or I go in it. Adie, my older sister, says it has special terrain abilities. Says it can do underwater Zoid battle. Temperamental Zoid."
I guess you will just have to wait to read the rest. Please R&R. And yes, Teken has sisters. Adie, Lily, and Emy.