When an Angel Falls
Created by PikaBlu
A/N: I post this up on another site; which my pen use to be HB in pokemon tower…but I changed it cuz…my cousin is using that name! LOL! Anyways this was my very, very, very first fanfic so PLEASE…EASY ON THE FLAMES HERE! Hope you like it…and I know there might be a few misspelling and grammar errors…the reason why I decided to leave it alone is to show some people that even if you do mess up…at least you can look back and find out what was your problem and keep on moving and making sure that you don't do this again…or at least TRY not to! LOL
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Chapter 1
Time for a walk
Ash was getting his pokemon ready for the big Orange
League. Misty was talking to her pokemon. Pikachu was
playing tag with the other pokemon. Brock was cooking
dinner. Tracy left the group to be with Prof. Oak. (YES HE'S
GONE) Ash got tired of battling so he sat down and looked at
Misty.
Ash thought to himself Misty looks so beautiful but, why
can't I tell her that I care for her ? " Is the food ready"? Ash
asked.
Brock smiled and said " Not for a while, why don't you go
and take a walk"?
Ash nodded and got up, " Come on Pikachu"
"Pika pi"(right behind you Ash)
Ash and Pikachu was talking about a lot of stuff
but, Ash mentioned Misty's name about 1000000 times, or
Pikachu felt like it was 1000000 times.
Pi pika pi chu pi pika? (do you have a crush on Misty?)
"No way she's the most meanest girl I have ever met"
Ash said turning his head around.
Pi pikachu pika ka pi (well you keep saying her name)
"That's only cuz I hate her ,"said Ash.
pi ka chu (No you don't) .While they're talking someone
is listen in behind the bushes.
Meanwhile Misty is talking to Brock about Ash
"You like Ash right"? Brock asked with a small smile
"No he's a idiot" Misty said in a mean ,but worried tone.
Ash ,meanwhile ,heard a loud thunder. Then rain drops came
down.
"Pikachu lets head back" Ash said.
They both ran back, but Ash dropped his Pokedex and 2 of
his Pokemon. The person in the bushes looked at the pokedex and
pokeballs and took put it in it's bag and ran with them but it was
hidden from the two. Misty and Brock headed to The Pokemon
center.
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Chapter 2
Ash sneaks away
Ash ran to the Pokemon center also. Misty's cold and very
wet. Brock was too. Ash and Pikachu made it. Ash Noticed he
was missing his Pokedex and 2 pokeballs.
"OH NO!!!" Ash yelled out .
"What's wrong Ash"? Misty asked
"My pokemon and my Pokedex is missing" Ash said also he
checked his jacket and his belt. He ran to the door, and before he
opened it, Officer Jenny put her hand on the door and said " You
shouldn't go out there. It's bad out there." "But…..but…my
pokemon are out there" said Ash
"Well tomorrow we will look for them" officer Jenny said with a
smile.
Ash could not sleep that night ; he hoped his pokemon where
safe .
Ash saw the rain stopped and put on his shoes and jacket on.
Pikachu climbed on Ash's shoulder. " Let's go Pikachu ." Ash
whisper to Pikachu. Pi pi pika pi chu? (Should we wake Misty and
Brock up?) No we don't need them to help us
right now Ash said as he headed for the door. OH NO!!! Ash said.
Brock was coming Ash's way, with A pretty girl.
"Hello pretty girl, "how would you wanna go out with a
handsome man like me"? Brock said. Ash hide behind the wall
the girl slapped Brock in the face. ( SLAP!!!)
Brock was now in the floor with a funny look on his face.
"She likes me" Brock said. Ash thought he should make a run
for it.
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Chapter 3
The Angel
Ash and Pikachu walked to a long time trying to find
his pokemon and pokeballs. "they got to be here somewhere"? Pi
pika chu pi pi chu pika ( I don't think we've find them) "Don't
give up hope Pikachu" Ash said.
Ash heard a girl crying for help. HELP ME PLEASE!!!!
I can't hang on. Ash ran to the girl, she was hanging on a cliff
Hold on miss, I'M coming!!!! Ash yelled to her.
Go Bulbsaur, Use your vines to hold her and bring her up.
Bulb Bulb Saur (it's my turn to shine)
He bring her up. Ash ran to her. "Are you all right Miss"
"Yea I never felt better thanx kid" the girl said as she got up
" I was trying to give you your pokeballs and pokedex back
but you ran too fast from me" The girl said giving his
stuff back. Thanks Miss uhhh uhhh, I missed your name
Ash said. "That's cuz I never threw it." The girl said.
My name is Angel, She said with a smile.
My name is Ash Ketchem I'm going to be…
Angel Interrupted and said "A Pokemon Master right"? Ash said "
how did…….
Again Angel Interrupted "how did I know, well I'm your Guardian
Angel" Ash just started laughing "yeah right and I'm A member of
Team rocket, sure ,well than I need to be going now (still laughing
hard, trying to cover his mouth)
I'll see you later. Ash turned around and the Angel was right in
front of him. "I am an Angel I'm here to make
sure you tell Misty you love her before it's too late". Angel
said. " Too late for what? I DON'T LIKE HER, I WISH
EVERYONE WOULD STOP SAYING THAT. Ash said with a
mad face. Yes you do, You always look at her and you even talk
about a lot. "If I don't tell her, what will happen?", asked Ash
"She will leave the group and she will fall in love with Gary Oak if
you don't." Angel said in a soft voice "yea right
like Gary's really going to win her heart!!! Ash said and laughing
yet again. "All right wise guy I warned you, since you won't listen
to me then you'll lose her" Angel said.
Ash notices all of his pokemon were coming out of their pokeballs
and bowing down to Angel, Pikachu bowed down also. Ash asked
"pikachu , guys what are you doing?"
Pika pi pi pikachu chu (bowing to the angel)
bulb bulb bul (yea she's beautiful)
char charizard zard charazard (It's A real Angel
from heaven)
Ash fell on his knees and bowed down also.
"Well since you helped me I'll tell you what to
do to win her heart, 1. Talk to her nice even if she yells at you
2. think before saying anything also……….
Angel looked at the sun rising "I have to go but I'll see
you again at midnight right here."
"Wait please wait" Ash yelled but it was too late she was gone.
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Chapter 4
Misty how can I tell Thee
Ash put all his pokemon back in their pokeballs, well, not
pikachu. He ran to the pokemon center.
"Ash where did you go?" "we were worried about you" said
Misty. "I took a walk OK?" Misty said " Well you have
told us." Before Ash was gonna say something hurtful he
thought a min, and Said to Misty " you look cute when you mad"
Misty yelled "Ash Ketchem you……… wait what did you say?"
Ash started to blush "you look cute when your mad." Misty
Blushed back and said well thanks Ash.
"Oh, see you guys just needed little time to work things out"
Brock said as he walked in the room. "GO AWAY BROCK"
Misty and Ash said in the same time. "You know there a closet
to your right, why don't you two go and make out with each
other?" Misty pushed Brock out the door and closed the door.
"Where was we?" Misty asked, Ash and Misty spend half of the
day talking
about their life and dreams. Before long Ash had to tell Misty
his feeling about her. They walked outside and Ash said Missssttty
I..I..I . Before Ash could say more he got
Intentioned
"Prepare for trouble"
"And make it Double"
"To protect the world from Devastation"
"To unite all people within out nation"
"To Denounce the evil of truth and love"
"To extend our reach to the stars above"
"Jessie"
"James"
"Team Rocket! Blast off at the speed of light"
"Surrender now or prepare to fight"
" Meowth That's Right"
"Oh no not them" Misty said
"your not getting Pikachu" Ash yelled
"Go Arbok,"
Pika pi pika CHU (leave me alone jerks) Pikachu USED
Thundershock
No no pikachu, we made a suit, It's 100% pika proof
said Meowth laughing at Pikachu
it was almost Midnight when team rocket attacked
"HAHAHA now pikachu come in this cage and We won't
hurt you" said James they put Pikachu in the cage
"GO Charazard" Ash said as he throw his pokeball
"Oh no Ash not Charazard!!!!!" Misty yelled
"Charazard flame-thrower now!!!" Ash cried out
Arbok Go bite.
Charazard just fall a sleep and Arbok bit him but he didn't feel it.
"Charazard still won't listen to me." Ash said as he called him
back.
Well looks like Team Rocket wins!!! Said Jessie
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Chapter 5
A friend in need
Wait!!! A voice cried out. Who's there? James said
"I'll Fight you" someone said Then out of the bushes was
Angel. "O.K. we'll fight you" Team rocket said
Angel throw a pokeball and said GO Secret out
come A Mewtwo.
What is that Ash asked and He used his pokedex
POKEDEX READS: No Data, unknown
"No data?" Ash said
"Mewtwo Psychic" Angel said
"Arbok Bite" said Jessie
Arbok was ready to bite when Mewtwo picked him
up in the air and threw him and Team rocket far always
the only words you could hear was "Team rocket blasting off
again" "Secret return" Angel said
The cage was unlocked and pikachu jumped out into Ash's
arms. Pika Pikachu (hey Ash)
Ash looked at Angel and said "Thank you Angel"
"No thank you Ash for saving me" Angel said
Misty Didn't know what was going on and Misty got a little mad
so she left.
Ash turned to misty but he saw her leaving.
"Misty" Ash yelled out……………………………..
The END?
I'll make a Part 2 In a little while
Created by PikaBlu
A/N: I post this up on another site; which my pen use to be HB in pokemon tower…but I changed it cuz…my cousin is using that name! LOL! Anyways this was my very, very, very first fanfic so PLEASE…EASY ON THE FLAMES HERE! Hope you like it…and I know there might be a few misspelling and grammar errors…the reason why I decided to leave it alone is to show some people that even if you do mess up…at least you can look back and find out what was your problem and keep on moving and making sure that you don't do this again…or at least TRY not to! LOL
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Chapter 1
Time for a walk
Ash was getting his pokemon ready for the big Orange
League. Misty was talking to her pokemon. Pikachu was
playing tag with the other pokemon. Brock was cooking
dinner. Tracy left the group to be with Prof. Oak. (YES HE'S
GONE) Ash got tired of battling so he sat down and looked at
Misty.
Ash thought to himself Misty looks so beautiful but, why
can't I tell her that I care for her ? " Is the food ready"? Ash
asked.
Brock smiled and said " Not for a while, why don't you go
and take a walk"?
Ash nodded and got up, " Come on Pikachu"
"Pika pi"(right behind you Ash)
Ash and Pikachu was talking about a lot of stuff
but, Ash mentioned Misty's name about 1000000 times, or
Pikachu felt like it was 1000000 times.
Pi pika pi chu pi pika? (do you have a crush on Misty?)
"No way she's the most meanest girl I have ever met"
Ash said turning his head around.
Pi pikachu pika ka pi (well you keep saying her name)
"That's only cuz I hate her ,"said Ash.
pi ka chu (No you don't) .While they're talking someone
is listen in behind the bushes.
Meanwhile Misty is talking to Brock about Ash
"You like Ash right"? Brock asked with a small smile
"No he's a idiot" Misty said in a mean ,but worried tone.
Ash ,meanwhile ,heard a loud thunder. Then rain drops came
down.
"Pikachu lets head back" Ash said.
They both ran back, but Ash dropped his Pokedex and 2 of
his Pokemon. The person in the bushes looked at the pokedex and
pokeballs and took put it in it's bag and ran with them but it was
hidden from the two. Misty and Brock headed to The Pokemon
center.
****************************************************
Chapter 2
Ash sneaks away
Ash ran to the Pokemon center also. Misty's cold and very
wet. Brock was too. Ash and Pikachu made it. Ash Noticed he
was missing his Pokedex and 2 pokeballs.
"OH NO!!!" Ash yelled out .
"What's wrong Ash"? Misty asked
"My pokemon and my Pokedex is missing" Ash said also he
checked his jacket and his belt. He ran to the door, and before he
opened it, Officer Jenny put her hand on the door and said " You
shouldn't go out there. It's bad out there." "But…..but…my
pokemon are out there" said Ash
"Well tomorrow we will look for them" officer Jenny said with a
smile.
Ash could not sleep that night ; he hoped his pokemon where
safe .
Ash saw the rain stopped and put on his shoes and jacket on.
Pikachu climbed on Ash's shoulder. " Let's go Pikachu ." Ash
whisper to Pikachu. Pi pi pika pi chu? (Should we wake Misty and
Brock up?) No we don't need them to help us
right now Ash said as he headed for the door. OH NO!!! Ash said.
Brock was coming Ash's way, with A pretty girl.
"Hello pretty girl, "how would you wanna go out with a
handsome man like me"? Brock said. Ash hide behind the wall
the girl slapped Brock in the face. ( SLAP!!!)
Brock was now in the floor with a funny look on his face.
"She likes me" Brock said. Ash thought he should make a run
for it.
***************************************************
Chapter 3
The Angel
Ash and Pikachu walked to a long time trying to find
his pokemon and pokeballs. "they got to be here somewhere"? Pi
pika chu pi pi chu pika ( I don't think we've find them) "Don't
give up hope Pikachu" Ash said.
Ash heard a girl crying for help. HELP ME PLEASE!!!!
I can't hang on. Ash ran to the girl, she was hanging on a cliff
Hold on miss, I'M coming!!!! Ash yelled to her.
Go Bulbsaur, Use your vines to hold her and bring her up.
Bulb Bulb Saur (it's my turn to shine)
He bring her up. Ash ran to her. "Are you all right Miss"
"Yea I never felt better thanx kid" the girl said as she got up
" I was trying to give you your pokeballs and pokedex back
but you ran too fast from me" The girl said giving his
stuff back. Thanks Miss uhhh uhhh, I missed your name
Ash said. "That's cuz I never threw it." The girl said.
My name is Angel, She said with a smile.
My name is Ash Ketchem I'm going to be…
Angel Interrupted and said "A Pokemon Master right"? Ash said "
how did…….
Again Angel Interrupted "how did I know, well I'm your Guardian
Angel" Ash just started laughing "yeah right and I'm A member of
Team rocket, sure ,well than I need to be going now (still laughing
hard, trying to cover his mouth)
I'll see you later. Ash turned around and the Angel was right in
front of him. "I am an Angel I'm here to make
sure you tell Misty you love her before it's too late". Angel
said. " Too late for what? I DON'T LIKE HER, I WISH
EVERYONE WOULD STOP SAYING THAT. Ash said with a
mad face. Yes you do, You always look at her and you even talk
about a lot. "If I don't tell her, what will happen?", asked Ash
"She will leave the group and she will fall in love with Gary Oak if
you don't." Angel said in a soft voice "yea right
like Gary's really going to win her heart!!! Ash said and laughing
yet again. "All right wise guy I warned you, since you won't listen
to me then you'll lose her" Angel said.
Ash notices all of his pokemon were coming out of their pokeballs
and bowing down to Angel, Pikachu bowed down also. Ash asked
"pikachu , guys what are you doing?"
Pika pi pi pikachu chu (bowing to the angel)
bulb bulb bul (yea she's beautiful)
char charizard zard charazard (It's A real Angel
from heaven)
Ash fell on his knees and bowed down also.
"Well since you helped me I'll tell you what to
do to win her heart, 1. Talk to her nice even if she yells at you
2. think before saying anything also……….
Angel looked at the sun rising "I have to go but I'll see
you again at midnight right here."
"Wait please wait" Ash yelled but it was too late she was gone.
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Chapter 4
Misty how can I tell Thee
Ash put all his pokemon back in their pokeballs, well, not
pikachu. He ran to the pokemon center.
"Ash where did you go?" "we were worried about you" said
Misty. "I took a walk OK?" Misty said " Well you have
told us." Before Ash was gonna say something hurtful he
thought a min, and Said to Misty " you look cute when you mad"
Misty yelled "Ash Ketchem you……… wait what did you say?"
Ash started to blush "you look cute when your mad." Misty
Blushed back and said well thanks Ash.
"Oh, see you guys just needed little time to work things out"
Brock said as he walked in the room. "GO AWAY BROCK"
Misty and Ash said in the same time. "You know there a closet
to your right, why don't you two go and make out with each
other?" Misty pushed Brock out the door and closed the door.
"Where was we?" Misty asked, Ash and Misty spend half of the
day talking
about their life and dreams. Before long Ash had to tell Misty
his feeling about her. They walked outside and Ash said Missssttty
I..I..I . Before Ash could say more he got
Intentioned
"Prepare for trouble"
"And make it Double"
"To protect the world from Devastation"
"To unite all people within out nation"
"To Denounce the evil of truth and love"
"To extend our reach to the stars above"
"Jessie"
"James"
"Team Rocket! Blast off at the speed of light"
"Surrender now or prepare to fight"
" Meowth That's Right"
"Oh no not them" Misty said
"your not getting Pikachu" Ash yelled
"Go Arbok,"
Pika pi pika CHU (leave me alone jerks) Pikachu USED
Thundershock
No no pikachu, we made a suit, It's 100% pika proof
said Meowth laughing at Pikachu
it was almost Midnight when team rocket attacked
"HAHAHA now pikachu come in this cage and We won't
hurt you" said James they put Pikachu in the cage
"GO Charazard" Ash said as he throw his pokeball
"Oh no Ash not Charazard!!!!!" Misty yelled
"Charazard flame-thrower now!!!" Ash cried out
Arbok Go bite.
Charazard just fall a sleep and Arbok bit him but he didn't feel it.
"Charazard still won't listen to me." Ash said as he called him
back.
Well looks like Team Rocket wins!!! Said Jessie
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Chapter 5
A friend in need
Wait!!! A voice cried out. Who's there? James said
"I'll Fight you" someone said Then out of the bushes was
Angel. "O.K. we'll fight you" Team rocket said
Angel throw a pokeball and said GO Secret out
come A Mewtwo.
What is that Ash asked and He used his pokedex
POKEDEX READS: No Data, unknown
"No data?" Ash said
"Mewtwo Psychic" Angel said
"Arbok Bite" said Jessie
Arbok was ready to bite when Mewtwo picked him
up in the air and threw him and Team rocket far always
the only words you could hear was "Team rocket blasting off
again" "Secret return" Angel said
The cage was unlocked and pikachu jumped out into Ash's
arms. Pika Pikachu (hey Ash)
Ash looked at Angel and said "Thank you Angel"
"No thank you Ash for saving me" Angel said
Misty Didn't know what was going on and Misty got a little mad
so she left.
Ash turned to misty but he saw her leaving.
"Misty" Ash yelled out……………………………..
The END?
I'll make a Part 2 In a little while