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AN: alrite... first of all, for the ppl that liked this fic, thanks!!! I wasn't gonna continue this, thanks to that inconsiderate flame, but since other ppl actually WANTED me to... this is for you guys. Oh, a few little notes:
To :jackal sign blue- did you even BOTHER to READ the REST of the fic at all? So I made a little mistake. For that little mistake you say I can't write and call me an asshole. To quote you: "For crying out loud, this is shit!! Its so f-uckin' boring, plotless, pointless, and just plain idiotic!! Please, do us a favor and never write again. We fans would appreciate GOOD authors out there, not just some ASS HOLES who can not write. "
To: Night~mare- thanks!! Your review was the breaking point that made a new chapter! ^.^ ok I wont put any more AN's IN the fic... I think I meant to put it in the end but forgot. Oh well, thanks for pointing it out!
On w/ chapter 2!( no spell check, you have been warned)
(this is make-believe,pretend there was a war when Chiriko was still alive.)
Chapter 2: In the mist of a raging battle...
By: fire demoness
"REKKA SHINEN!!!!!!!!"
*whoosh*
a stream of fire made the attacking line of soldiers retreat back to their hiding places. Tasuki grinned and waved the tessen in the air.
"Who else wants to be burned?"
he laughed triumphantly.
"TASUKI NO DA!! GET DOWN NO DA!!"
he felt a hand on his shoulder and then he was pushed down. No wonder. A swarm of arrows flew over their heads, missing them by inches. Tasuki could just mumble his thanks to Chichiri, who had saved him from near death. He turned around to ask Hotohori if he had an extra sword, but instead he saw a little figure running towards the battle.
"Chiriko? What the he-ACK!"
Tasuki screamed as an arrow missed his face by inches. Then he turned to squint at the little figure again. It HAD to be Chiriko. The ponytail was recognizable from even here.
"HEY!! CHIRIKO!!! GET BACK TO THE PALACE!!"
he yelled, "rekka shinen" ing another wave of arrows.
**to Chriko, running up the hill**
I kept running towards them, even as the hillside became steeper and harder to climb. By the time I saw Tasuki's red-orange hair, I was already clutching at a stitch in my chest and panting hard.
"chiriko... you shouldn't be here."
Hotohori-sama came over, frowning and pushing me to the ground to avoid a stream of arrows Tasuki had missed. I shook my head.
"Hotohori-sama, I'm always back at the palace and I never get to help! Just let me be of some use to-LOOK OUT!!!"
I pushed a confused Hotohori-sama to the side... just before a sword was thrust into my side.
TBC
Ok reallllly short chapter. Next one will have more explanations and more exciting... if I decide to do another one. REVIEW!!!No flames please, to the person that has it out for me.
AN: alrite... first of all, for the ppl that liked this fic, thanks!!! I wasn't gonna continue this, thanks to that inconsiderate flame, but since other ppl actually WANTED me to... this is for you guys. Oh, a few little notes:
To :jackal sign blue- did you even BOTHER to READ the REST of the fic at all? So I made a little mistake. For that little mistake you say I can't write and call me an asshole. To quote you: "For crying out loud, this is shit!! Its so f-uckin' boring, plotless, pointless, and just plain idiotic!! Please, do us a favor and never write again. We fans would appreciate GOOD authors out there, not just some ASS HOLES who can not write. "
To: Night~mare- thanks!! Your review was the breaking point that made a new chapter! ^.^ ok I wont put any more AN's IN the fic... I think I meant to put it in the end but forgot. Oh well, thanks for pointing it out!
On w/ chapter 2!( no spell check, you have been warned)
(this is make-believe,pretend there was a war when Chiriko was still alive.)
Chapter 2: In the mist of a raging battle...
By: fire demoness
"REKKA SHINEN!!!!!!!!"
*whoosh*
a stream of fire made the attacking line of soldiers retreat back to their hiding places. Tasuki grinned and waved the tessen in the air.
"Who else wants to be burned?"
he laughed triumphantly.
"TASUKI NO DA!! GET DOWN NO DA!!"
he felt a hand on his shoulder and then he was pushed down. No wonder. A swarm of arrows flew over their heads, missing them by inches. Tasuki could just mumble his thanks to Chichiri, who had saved him from near death. He turned around to ask Hotohori if he had an extra sword, but instead he saw a little figure running towards the battle.
"Chiriko? What the he-ACK!"
Tasuki screamed as an arrow missed his face by inches. Then he turned to squint at the little figure again. It HAD to be Chiriko. The ponytail was recognizable from even here.
"HEY!! CHIRIKO!!! GET BACK TO THE PALACE!!"
he yelled, "rekka shinen" ing another wave of arrows.
**to Chriko, running up the hill**
I kept running towards them, even as the hillside became steeper and harder to climb. By the time I saw Tasuki's red-orange hair, I was already clutching at a stitch in my chest and panting hard.
"chiriko... you shouldn't be here."
Hotohori-sama came over, frowning and pushing me to the ground to avoid a stream of arrows Tasuki had missed. I shook my head.
"Hotohori-sama, I'm always back at the palace and I never get to help! Just let me be of some use to-LOOK OUT!!!"
I pushed a confused Hotohori-sama to the side... just before a sword was thrust into my side.
TBC
Ok reallllly short chapter. Next one will have more explanations and more exciting... if I decide to do another one. REVIEW!!!No flames please, to the person that has it out for me.