HEY! I kind of rewrote, but the concept is still the same, I just added more details and I have two scenes in each chapter. Easier for me to keep up with. It's pretty easy to read! Enjoy, feedback very appreciated! Thanks deanine for the advice I'll try to pay attention to it. I was kind of not really into the writing before, but now I got feedback. I'll do better :-)

I don't own the game or characters, but I still hold they own me :)

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Fog, thick blankets of it, covered every inch of space. Not so much of a speck can be seen, for the fog had engulfed everything in sight.

'I couldn't remember much about my last few days alive.'

A light wind swirls the fog around and Tidus can be seen, sitting cross legged and with his head in his hands.

'I think being on the Farplane had fogged my memory quite a bit. I couldn't really say, because I hadn't heard from anyone else it doesn't that. Then again, I hadn't seen much of anyone to tell the truth.'

Tidus lifts his heads from his hands and looks around. Swiping his hand in front of him to clear the fog, he sighed when the fog just swirled and showed nothing.

'I also couldn't stop thinking about my life, and all I had left behind. I missed Zanarkand, and I wished I could play blitzball one more time. Most of all...I missed Yuna.'

' I thought about Yuna the most. I hated how I hadn't tried to tell her exactly how I feel, about how when she smiled at me I felt like I could conquer the world. I couldn't believe that I had never told anyone my feelings for her. I figured if I told people while I was alive how deeply I felt for her, they'd brush me off. "He's just a silly kid, doesn't know what love is." they would say. You know, I don't think your age really matters when it comes to feeling like I do about Yuna."

Tidus puts his head back in his hands and sighs again as the fog swirls nearer.

'Not that much mattered now that I was dead anyway.'

The fog moves in and engulfs Tidus inside

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Yuna whimpered in her sleep as she tossed and turned in her bed. "Tidus," she mumbled and a tear slid down her cheek. Wiping her hand on her face, she sighed and calmed down as she started to dream....

Yuna looked around her, and couldn't see a thing. Fog had covered everything, and she didn't even know what she was walking on. Hearing a splash to her left, she looked over and saw a still, shimmering pond. Walking over cautiously she leaned over and looked into it. Yuna gasped.

There was Tidus, looking back up at her from the pond. Falling to her knees, she touched the water, making it ripple. He smiled, and waved to her. With tears streaming down her cheeks, laughing a desperate laugh, she said "Tidus?" When Tidus nodded and grinned she covered her face in her hands. After taking several breaths, she moved her hands away and looked in the pond again. "Why did you have to leave me?"

Tidus' eyes got sad and he hung his head down. When he spoke, his voice was inside her head, 'I didn't want to. I think it was time for my story to end, as Auron would say.'

Yuna closed her eyes and a single tear slowly moved down her face and dripped into the pond. She laid her hand on the water, just skimming the top but not going under. Opening her eyes again, she saw Tidus' face, his eyes full of misery, tears welling up in them. He placed his hand up to Yuna's and then....

Yuna jerked, then sat her body up fast. Looking around in doubt, she saw she was in her room, and everything was the same. Laying back down, she started to cry again. "Why can't I have him here? Why does he have to be dead, yet I am alive and healthy. It's not fair." she said to herself, swiping her face with the back of her arm. Turning on her side, she heaved a huge sigh and put the hand she placed on the pond up her cheek. Feeling wetness she sat up again. Hurriedly getting out of bed, she ran to a window and held her hand up to the moonlight. Water dripped off her hand, and she caught a drop in her mouth to make sure it wasn't her tears. The water was bitter, and she laughed in disbelief. Holding her hand higher, she let the water drip off until it stopped.

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Whatcha think? I hope it's ok, I used to be really into writing and all. I hope I did better! R&R!