By:ShadowTrickster
Disclaimer:I did not wright the book 'Ella Enchanted'.
What would of happened if Ella just stepped away before Hattie snatched off Ella's mask?How will the story turn?Read and find out!I will start at the place just were Char was adout to ask the question
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I went silent as Char tighened his hold on my wrist,"Marrage is suppose to be forever,but friendship can be forever too.Will you take off that mask so I could,see your face?"
I looked at him with horror written across my face,it was then that I spied Hattie coming forward from a dance from the Earl of Demdy.I was for once glad to see her.
Char followed my gaze toward Hattie,and Hattie,seeing him looking at her cursied and looked at me with a death glare.She then stood up and turned to Char.
"Oh Charmont,"she began and I backed away,taking this to my advantage.But too late,Char turned his head toward me and opened his mouth to say something and I added in quickly,"I must leave Ch-your highness."I studdered.
I saw he looked slightly dissapointed,"will we meet agian?"
Hattie responded before I could answer,but all i heard was,'Dear Charmont' 'wench' because I was already out the garden and dashing toward my carriage.I had made a mental image of him smiling,him and me dancing.I supposed that would be the last time i'd get too see him that close.I sighed,taking off my mask after the coachmen placed me safely inside.It was then i realized that i was crying.I placed a hand up to my wet cheek and closed my eyes.
I felt a slight pull signaling that the carriage was moving forward,and I opened my eyes.I had a splended ideal!I knew that i was too never be near Char agian,and way risk him seeing me?and they surely wouldn't miss me.It was the my heart sank.But i'd miss Mandy.I'll see her agian.I told myself,and promised it too.
My thoughts came to a hault,as did my carrage.I pulled back the curtain that lined my window and peeked out side.I gasped when I seen Char standing just outside my door talking to the driver.
In despration and scrambled to the other side,forgetting my mask and opened the door,hoping for a soundless escape,but to my horror,the door had to creek.So without a second thought I took off into the forest.I heard a yelling behind me,but it died out and as it did i slowed.
I came to a stop and looked around.I was lost and my legs ached so.But it wouldn't over come the pain of my heart.What had become of me?My dress was torn in places from triping and dirty as well,I had no one to turn too,besides Mandy who I was afraid to even dare to go see.
After standing there a few moments I decided to move on,thinking that I might find at lest a little luck today and find a some place with a roof and a pillow to sleep on.But alas,this could not be true.
Finnially,I gave up.At least for tonight.I found i nice place,if you could call it that,near a tree making a bed of dried leaves.and there I fell into a fitfull sleep.
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I awoke to the merry smell of something cooking.At first I thought I was at home,serving Hattie and was late getting up while Mandy had already started the morring meal.Then I remembered what happened that night.Was I dreaming?I slowly opened my eyes looking up at the blue sky.At first I thought the smell was something of a dream,but I could still smell it and I was laying on something confortably soft,huddled into a ball.I also noticed that my face was wetter than before.I tilted my head to the side to meet the gaze of gray eyes.
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sooo?what did you think?This is my first fic on ella enchanted.I hope it wasn't too short,Please Reveiw!You could also give me ideals on the next chapter if you think my story it good so far,I might use them!
Disclaimer:I did not wright the book 'Ella Enchanted'.
What would of happened if Ella just stepped away before Hattie snatched off Ella's mask?How will the story turn?Read and find out!I will start at the place just were Char was adout to ask the question
______________________________________________-
I went silent as Char tighened his hold on my wrist,"Marrage is suppose to be forever,but friendship can be forever too.Will you take off that mask so I could,see your face?"
I looked at him with horror written across my face,it was then that I spied Hattie coming forward from a dance from the Earl of Demdy.I was for once glad to see her.
Char followed my gaze toward Hattie,and Hattie,seeing him looking at her cursied and looked at me with a death glare.She then stood up and turned to Char.
"Oh Charmont,"she began and I backed away,taking this to my advantage.But too late,Char turned his head toward me and opened his mouth to say something and I added in quickly,"I must leave Ch-your highness."I studdered.
I saw he looked slightly dissapointed,"will we meet agian?"
Hattie responded before I could answer,but all i heard was,'Dear Charmont' 'wench' because I was already out the garden and dashing toward my carriage.I had made a mental image of him smiling,him and me dancing.I supposed that would be the last time i'd get too see him that close.I sighed,taking off my mask after the coachmen placed me safely inside.It was then i realized that i was crying.I placed a hand up to my wet cheek and closed my eyes.
I felt a slight pull signaling that the carriage was moving forward,and I opened my eyes.I had a splended ideal!I knew that i was too never be near Char agian,and way risk him seeing me?and they surely wouldn't miss me.It was the my heart sank.But i'd miss Mandy.I'll see her agian.I told myself,and promised it too.
My thoughts came to a hault,as did my carrage.I pulled back the curtain that lined my window and peeked out side.I gasped when I seen Char standing just outside my door talking to the driver.
In despration and scrambled to the other side,forgetting my mask and opened the door,hoping for a soundless escape,but to my horror,the door had to creek.So without a second thought I took off into the forest.I heard a yelling behind me,but it died out and as it did i slowed.
I came to a stop and looked around.I was lost and my legs ached so.But it wouldn't over come the pain of my heart.What had become of me?My dress was torn in places from triping and dirty as well,I had no one to turn too,besides Mandy who I was afraid to even dare to go see.
After standing there a few moments I decided to move on,thinking that I might find at lest a little luck today and find a some place with a roof and a pillow to sleep on.But alas,this could not be true.
Finnially,I gave up.At least for tonight.I found i nice place,if you could call it that,near a tree making a bed of dried leaves.and there I fell into a fitfull sleep.
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I awoke to the merry smell of something cooking.At first I thought I was at home,serving Hattie and was late getting up while Mandy had already started the morring meal.Then I remembered what happened that night.Was I dreaming?I slowly opened my eyes looking up at the blue sky.At first I thought the smell was something of a dream,but I could still smell it and I was laying on something confortably soft,huddled into a ball.I also noticed that my face was wetter than before.I tilted my head to the side to meet the gaze of gray eyes.
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sooo?what did you think?This is my first fic on ella enchanted.I hope it wasn't too short,Please Reveiw!You could also give me ideals on the next chapter if you think my story it good so far,I might use them!