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I sat bolt upright sweating madly and breathing short quick painful breaths. What was going on? The last thing I remembered was Sauron whipping me hard across the back, belly (which was now incredibly thin) and face. He used horrible sharp tools to scrape the burnt skin painfully off my back and slice my belly with large deep cuts. I whimpered and found Legolas sitting bolt upright next to me. He put his arm around me and I whimpered even more. He tore his arm away from me quickly ("Damn it" said Legolas, "I forgot.") What was that sore aching in my back? Why was my face cut? My blood raced around my body, flying through my veins. Where was I? Legolas made soothing noises and I slowly calmed down. He stroked my hair and I tried to slow my loud breathing. The Hobbits stirred on the other side of the dark chamber and I started to panic even more.
"What the hell is happening, where am I?" I whispered.
"Ssshh," Legolas whispered back, "Everything is alright. We came and got you from where you were being held prisoner with Sauron. Its ok now." My heart started to pound again.
"Then he is looking for me. He will find me, You can't stop him. You might as well kill me now, I'll just get you killed!" My voice was getting unnaturally high.
"Ssshh, He won't find us. We are nearly home now. Everything will be fine tomorrow and we can get you something for your cuts." He told me quietly. He laid me back down carefully. He didn't want to hurt my back. He laid down as well and he put a protective arm around me. I suddenly felt safe and warm and I knew that nothing would hurt me when I'm with him.
The sun was barely visible above the trees when I woke up next. I had been having the same dream, except in slow motion and it didn't look quite as painful as before. Legolas was already up. I was the only one asleep still (apart from Pippin but he is always asleep). I tried to get up but found I was too weak to remove the heavy blanket that I had been wrapped up in. I was stuck and as I pushed at it, I groaned. ("Nahoo delaam keen moo) said Pippin comfortably but loudly in his sleep. I would have found this funny if I hadn't been trapped in a rolled up blanket). Legolas bounced in happily carrying a plate of fried mushrooms and tomatoes for Pippin (who started sniffing still asleep and licked his lips. He removed his blanket and opened his eyes).
"Mmm, thanks a lot Legolas. I'm starving. You can start on second breakfast and elevensies if you want." Already grabbing the plate and tucking in. I moaned loudly and Legolas looked my way.
"I do not appreciate being wrapped up when you know full well I won't be able to get out again" and to my surprise he laughed.
"Glad you find it funny. It was Frodo and Merry who thought of the idea. They thought you would find it hilarious too." I looked up at him grumpily and said, "When I get my hands on them, I'll…I'll…"he cut me off.
"Oh I need to see this. I could do with something to cheer me up." He undid the blanket that felt like a straight jacket and watched me run off and tickle the snickering hobbits until they were laughing their heads off and snorting food all down their front. He could see how happy I was when I was with the hobbits and wanted it to stay that way. He watched as they chased me round the clearing round and round in circles and, finally catching me, tickle me to death.
I lay, rolling around on the floor laughing madly as the hobbits tickled me with their tiny tickly fingers. Suddenly I saw Legolas standing over me (upside down) frowning slightly at our childish behaviour. I laughed even more, this seemed to click something in his brain, and he bent down and tickled me to. They didn't stop tickling me until I almost fell asleep with exhaustion of laughing. They plonked me down at the fire and made me eat breakfast (Pippin had already complained loudly about there not being a forth breakfast as he had eaten three and was still hungry).
Still grinning broadly the hobbits sat and stared at me as I ate.
"You seem to be a bit better now Miss Liadawn if you don't mind me saying so," said Sam who had been watching our tickling match with great interest.
"Yes I don't understand. Last night my back was aching like anything and now it is fine." I said pausing to think.
"Eat up, You need all the strength you can get if we're going to travel 20 miles back to the Valley." said Legolas shoving another plate of food onto my lap. I looked into his eyes and saw emotions flicker around. I squinted and his brain seemed to be fighting a desiring emotion away. He noticed me trying to read his thoughts and looked away.
"What Is the matter Legolas. Why are you fighting your emotions?" I said thickly through a mouthful of fried tomatoes.
"Nothing, I'll tell you later." The hobbits looked from me to Legolas and back curiously trying to work out what we were going on about.
Suddenly without warning Legolas jumped up and got an arrow ready to shoot at the bush. I listened intently and heard it too. Something was rustling in there…an orc! I started to weep silently as I heard the unmistakable footfall of one of Saurons orcs. I pulled the hobbits away protectively and carried them back to shelter. I took hold of Sams sword and jumped out again to back Legolas in case there were too many for him to handle.
A vicious creature wearing all black jumped out at us with a snarl and was followed by many more. They saw me and charged. Legolas was brave and fired his arrows swiftly killing a lot. I almost broke down but forced my knees to buckle. I slashed and many heads went flying. Again, again, I was so weak and tired but I put on a confident and awake face to show them I wasn't scared of them but really I was.
A couple retreated but Legolas shot them down and together we beat them. My arm was injured and I was shot in the side. Luckily I was different from normal elves and could take hard beatings so it didn't hurt all that much. Legolas fussed and I pulled rather harshly at the arrow in my side and it tore out. Legolas picked me up as I collapsed and bathed me in a stream to get rid of the blood.
I opened my eyes so that I could just see what was going on. I seemed to be sitting in the middle of a stream with an excruciatingly painful hip. My eyes opened a little bit more and I saw o small croud of strange people leaning forward in front of me peering at me curiously. I realised that I was with the hobbits (but not before jumping out of my skin as these strange people leaned in to look, they jumped back looking startled) I opened my eyes and saw Legolas rinsing my painful side. I flinched as he touched it and he withdrew his hand quickly. I tried to stand but was too weak and the pain in my arm joined by the agony of the deep wound in my stomach overwhelmed me. I fainted again.
Hey I need ur review ok or I finish it in the next chapter. I'm almost done anyway. Next chapters crap too but if you like this (then you are mad and) you will like the next chapter. It is not as funny and a bit confusing.
I sat bolt upright sweating madly and breathing short quick painful breaths. What was going on? The last thing I remembered was Sauron whipping me hard across the back, belly (which was now incredibly thin) and face. He used horrible sharp tools to scrape the burnt skin painfully off my back and slice my belly with large deep cuts. I whimpered and found Legolas sitting bolt upright next to me. He put his arm around me and I whimpered even more. He tore his arm away from me quickly ("Damn it" said Legolas, "I forgot.") What was that sore aching in my back? Why was my face cut? My blood raced around my body, flying through my veins. Where was I? Legolas made soothing noises and I slowly calmed down. He stroked my hair and I tried to slow my loud breathing. The Hobbits stirred on the other side of the dark chamber and I started to panic even more.
"What the hell is happening, where am I?" I whispered.
"Ssshh," Legolas whispered back, "Everything is alright. We came and got you from where you were being held prisoner with Sauron. Its ok now." My heart started to pound again.
"Then he is looking for me. He will find me, You can't stop him. You might as well kill me now, I'll just get you killed!" My voice was getting unnaturally high.
"Ssshh, He won't find us. We are nearly home now. Everything will be fine tomorrow and we can get you something for your cuts." He told me quietly. He laid me back down carefully. He didn't want to hurt my back. He laid down as well and he put a protective arm around me. I suddenly felt safe and warm and I knew that nothing would hurt me when I'm with him.
The sun was barely visible above the trees when I woke up next. I had been having the same dream, except in slow motion and it didn't look quite as painful as before. Legolas was already up. I was the only one asleep still (apart from Pippin but he is always asleep). I tried to get up but found I was too weak to remove the heavy blanket that I had been wrapped up in. I was stuck and as I pushed at it, I groaned. ("Nahoo delaam keen moo) said Pippin comfortably but loudly in his sleep. I would have found this funny if I hadn't been trapped in a rolled up blanket). Legolas bounced in happily carrying a plate of fried mushrooms and tomatoes for Pippin (who started sniffing still asleep and licked his lips. He removed his blanket and opened his eyes).
"Mmm, thanks a lot Legolas. I'm starving. You can start on second breakfast and elevensies if you want." Already grabbing the plate and tucking in. I moaned loudly and Legolas looked my way.
"I do not appreciate being wrapped up when you know full well I won't be able to get out again" and to my surprise he laughed.
"Glad you find it funny. It was Frodo and Merry who thought of the idea. They thought you would find it hilarious too." I looked up at him grumpily and said, "When I get my hands on them, I'll…I'll…"he cut me off.
"Oh I need to see this. I could do with something to cheer me up." He undid the blanket that felt like a straight jacket and watched me run off and tickle the snickering hobbits until they were laughing their heads off and snorting food all down their front. He could see how happy I was when I was with the hobbits and wanted it to stay that way. He watched as they chased me round the clearing round and round in circles and, finally catching me, tickle me to death.
I lay, rolling around on the floor laughing madly as the hobbits tickled me with their tiny tickly fingers. Suddenly I saw Legolas standing over me (upside down) frowning slightly at our childish behaviour. I laughed even more, this seemed to click something in his brain, and he bent down and tickled me to. They didn't stop tickling me until I almost fell asleep with exhaustion of laughing. They plonked me down at the fire and made me eat breakfast (Pippin had already complained loudly about there not being a forth breakfast as he had eaten three and was still hungry).
Still grinning broadly the hobbits sat and stared at me as I ate.
"You seem to be a bit better now Miss Liadawn if you don't mind me saying so," said Sam who had been watching our tickling match with great interest.
"Yes I don't understand. Last night my back was aching like anything and now it is fine." I said pausing to think.
"Eat up, You need all the strength you can get if we're going to travel 20 miles back to the Valley." said Legolas shoving another plate of food onto my lap. I looked into his eyes and saw emotions flicker around. I squinted and his brain seemed to be fighting a desiring emotion away. He noticed me trying to read his thoughts and looked away.
"What Is the matter Legolas. Why are you fighting your emotions?" I said thickly through a mouthful of fried tomatoes.
"Nothing, I'll tell you later." The hobbits looked from me to Legolas and back curiously trying to work out what we were going on about.
Suddenly without warning Legolas jumped up and got an arrow ready to shoot at the bush. I listened intently and heard it too. Something was rustling in there…an orc! I started to weep silently as I heard the unmistakable footfall of one of Saurons orcs. I pulled the hobbits away protectively and carried them back to shelter. I took hold of Sams sword and jumped out again to back Legolas in case there were too many for him to handle.
A vicious creature wearing all black jumped out at us with a snarl and was followed by many more. They saw me and charged. Legolas was brave and fired his arrows swiftly killing a lot. I almost broke down but forced my knees to buckle. I slashed and many heads went flying. Again, again, I was so weak and tired but I put on a confident and awake face to show them I wasn't scared of them but really I was.
A couple retreated but Legolas shot them down and together we beat them. My arm was injured and I was shot in the side. Luckily I was different from normal elves and could take hard beatings so it didn't hurt all that much. Legolas fussed and I pulled rather harshly at the arrow in my side and it tore out. Legolas picked me up as I collapsed and bathed me in a stream to get rid of the blood.
I opened my eyes so that I could just see what was going on. I seemed to be sitting in the middle of a stream with an excruciatingly painful hip. My eyes opened a little bit more and I saw o small croud of strange people leaning forward in front of me peering at me curiously. I realised that I was with the hobbits (but not before jumping out of my skin as these strange people leaned in to look, they jumped back looking startled) I opened my eyes and saw Legolas rinsing my painful side. I flinched as he touched it and he withdrew his hand quickly. I tried to stand but was too weak and the pain in my arm joined by the agony of the deep wound in my stomach overwhelmed me. I fainted again.
Hey I need ur review ok or I finish it in the next chapter. I'm almost done anyway. Next chapters crap too but if you like this (then you are mad and) you will like the next chapter. It is not as funny and a bit confusing.