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Bright sunlight shone down on me and I slowly opened my eyes. I was sitting on a horse with someone behind me holding me up and we were racing along at great speed. The hobbits were In front playing about, darting through the trees. I watched them for a while and became dizzy so I closed my eyes again and enjoyed the warm breeze that swam across my face as we rode. I leant back deeper into someone's arms and they made me cosy and warm in their embrace. I looked up and saw his gorgeous (upside down) face. I immediately recognised this as Legolas. I had forgotten the pain of the morning and sat up.
"You should rest your arms Legolas. You've probably been holding me up for hours," I said calmly taking the horses reigns from him. I felt him relax slightly behind me and I rode faster muttering some elfish words gently into the steed's ear. I caught up with the hobbits and joined in their little game. I had to admit that it was fun. Suddenly sensing something evil behind us I rode as fast as I could.
"Come hobbits we are being followed. I could feel Leola's body tensing slightly as he clutched on to me. He could hear it too. The unmistakable thudding of the black nazgul horses obviously getting closer.
"We shall go to rivendell, we shall be safe there for they cannot cross water easily." I told a group of frightened hobbits who looked worried. But they sped up anyway trusting my senses.
A single nazgul appeared out of the trees to my left and then more on my right. Legolas whispered in my ear.
"Only you can save us now." But he said it calmly as though he wasn't scared (which he should be) My blood started going faster round my body but I calmed myself and breathing slowly and deeply I whispered back,
"Get the hobbits, they won't make it." I leaned out to my left and pulled Merry and Pippin from their horse. I felt Legolas reach over to the right and do the same to Frodo and Sam. I put them in front of me and looked back at where the other horses were now. If we hadn't done that then they would have been captured for sure. Their horses were not as fast as mine was. Keeping myself calm I gently whispered in my horses ear.
"Maroola desoarn heantula meroarn." We went faster and faster until we had left the black riders behind. My steed jumped over a fallen log and I almost dropped Pippin.
"Merry, help me lift him up!" (Pippin was now dangling and we were approaching another fallen tree) We struggled and almost lost our lead but Legolas put Pippin behind him and we carried on. A nazgul cut off the path in front of us and I swerved into the trees. A few hairs got caught on the branch of a tree and got ripped out painfully. Looking ahead I realised we had to jump 20 feet down a ledge to reach the river.
"Hold on tight!!!" I yelled to everyone behind us. I covered the horses eyes and she jumped. Air whistled past our ears and I heard four shrill voices screaming as loud as they could in my ear. Thud we landed in the shallow part of the river and I uncovered a pair of frightened eyes. The horse stumbled and I pulled on her reigns making her stop.
I looked round and saw the raging nazgul stop on the ledge ("don't you ever do that again!!!" shrieked Pippin in his Scottish accent looking absolutely petrified. heh heh you should have seen his face).
"If you want him, come and get him and I drew a sword from Merry's sheath. (lot of uncertain muttering on the ledge, they seemed to be considering my offer) They turned around and rode off in the other direction.
An impressed voice reached my ears form one side of the river.
"Nice, I like your style." I recognised the voice instantly as my uncles. "How's my favourite niece?"
I gasped and dismounted the stunned horse (Pippin fell off again, "Aah, I hate getting wet!"). I ran and hugged my uncle. "Elrond it is so good to see you again." I was still panting from riding so hard.
"How is your father. I have not seen him in ages either. I trust you are both well. Hello Legolas, have a nice journey." he said looking at a wide- eyed and breathless elf. Elrond laughed and said, "you would probably want to eat now won't you?" He put his arm round me and led me in (followed by three slightly wet one very wet hobbit and a dazed elf all rushing madly to get their hands on some food.
Inside Rivendell there was a large group of people gathering for a council. I ran straight up to a brown haired elf who looked at me oddly then smiled.
"Liadawn!! Oh my god. How are you? How is dad? Still on the home-made ice whiskey?" He was Miromath, my brother and he looked even better than the last time I saw him.
"Yea, but I hid his last bottle. I think he's still looking for it! I have missed you so much." I hugged him tightly and saw Legolas watching us with an expression that could have killed.
We stayed in Rivendell until my brother had to go back to Mirkwood. Legolas still didn't realise that Miromath was my brother until he heard me talking to him while we were on a trot. He followed us and hid when we reached the most beautiful part if the exotic forest. I sat on my usual bench and picked a flower to put in my hair.
"Liadawn, you know that Legolas chap," I looked up interested to see what he thought of Legolas, "has he always been kind of stiff meeting new people?"
"What do you mean?" I was mystified.
"It's just that whenever he talks to me, he says it with a horrible tone." he answered. I fixed a pink daffodil to my hair and replied.
"I have noticed that actually, no he's not usually like that. He is very nice and definitely worth knowing. Sometimes he acts strange when I am with people he doesn't know." I chose another flower and began to twiddle my hair round it.
"Does he usually do that when you are around men?" he asked me curiously. I thought hard.
"Yes, but I think he is just protecting me." I said looking into a smooth pool of water at my reflection.
"Maybe he thinks it's more than that. Maybe he thinks we are old lovers or something and is a bit jealous." he told me innocently. I laughed loudly.
"What, are you saying he loves me?" I giggled at the very thought of Legolas turning up at my door with a bouquet of flowers.
"It is possible and he doesn't know I am your brother so…it could happen." Legolas stared guiltily up at the trees where he was hiding and tried to get closer.
"That is the most ridiculous thing I ever heard Miromath. I think he just tries too hard to protect me and…(Legolas breaks a twig)…did you hear that?" I asked. I peered round the bush and saw Legolas's (very guilty) face staring up at me.
"Legolas. You followed me on purpose. I think I can look after myself. My own brother is not very likely to attack me!" I stormed off angrily.
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Bright sunlight shone down on me and I slowly opened my eyes. I was sitting on a horse with someone behind me holding me up and we were racing along at great speed. The hobbits were In front playing about, darting through the trees. I watched them for a while and became dizzy so I closed my eyes again and enjoyed the warm breeze that swam across my face as we rode. I leant back deeper into someone's arms and they made me cosy and warm in their embrace. I looked up and saw his gorgeous (upside down) face. I immediately recognised this as Legolas. I had forgotten the pain of the morning and sat up.
"You should rest your arms Legolas. You've probably been holding me up for hours," I said calmly taking the horses reigns from him. I felt him relax slightly behind me and I rode faster muttering some elfish words gently into the steed's ear. I caught up with the hobbits and joined in their little game. I had to admit that it was fun. Suddenly sensing something evil behind us I rode as fast as I could.
"Come hobbits we are being followed. I could feel Leola's body tensing slightly as he clutched on to me. He could hear it too. The unmistakable thudding of the black nazgul horses obviously getting closer.
"We shall go to rivendell, we shall be safe there for they cannot cross water easily." I told a group of frightened hobbits who looked worried. But they sped up anyway trusting my senses.
A single nazgul appeared out of the trees to my left and then more on my right. Legolas whispered in my ear.
"Only you can save us now." But he said it calmly as though he wasn't scared (which he should be) My blood started going faster round my body but I calmed myself and breathing slowly and deeply I whispered back,
"Get the hobbits, they won't make it." I leaned out to my left and pulled Merry and Pippin from their horse. I felt Legolas reach over to the right and do the same to Frodo and Sam. I put them in front of me and looked back at where the other horses were now. If we hadn't done that then they would have been captured for sure. Their horses were not as fast as mine was. Keeping myself calm I gently whispered in my horses ear.
"Maroola desoarn heantula meroarn." We went faster and faster until we had left the black riders behind. My steed jumped over a fallen log and I almost dropped Pippin.
"Merry, help me lift him up!" (Pippin was now dangling and we were approaching another fallen tree) We struggled and almost lost our lead but Legolas put Pippin behind him and we carried on. A nazgul cut off the path in front of us and I swerved into the trees. A few hairs got caught on the branch of a tree and got ripped out painfully. Looking ahead I realised we had to jump 20 feet down a ledge to reach the river.
"Hold on tight!!!" I yelled to everyone behind us. I covered the horses eyes and she jumped. Air whistled past our ears and I heard four shrill voices screaming as loud as they could in my ear. Thud we landed in the shallow part of the river and I uncovered a pair of frightened eyes. The horse stumbled and I pulled on her reigns making her stop.
I looked round and saw the raging nazgul stop on the ledge ("don't you ever do that again!!!" shrieked Pippin in his Scottish accent looking absolutely petrified. heh heh you should have seen his face).
"If you want him, come and get him and I drew a sword from Merry's sheath. (lot of uncertain muttering on the ledge, they seemed to be considering my offer) They turned around and rode off in the other direction.
An impressed voice reached my ears form one side of the river.
"Nice, I like your style." I recognised the voice instantly as my uncles. "How's my favourite niece?"
I gasped and dismounted the stunned horse (Pippin fell off again, "Aah, I hate getting wet!"). I ran and hugged my uncle. "Elrond it is so good to see you again." I was still panting from riding so hard.
"How is your father. I have not seen him in ages either. I trust you are both well. Hello Legolas, have a nice journey." he said looking at a wide- eyed and breathless elf. Elrond laughed and said, "you would probably want to eat now won't you?" He put his arm round me and led me in (followed by three slightly wet one very wet hobbit and a dazed elf all rushing madly to get their hands on some food.
Inside Rivendell there was a large group of people gathering for a council. I ran straight up to a brown haired elf who looked at me oddly then smiled.
"Liadawn!! Oh my god. How are you? How is dad? Still on the home-made ice whiskey?" He was Miromath, my brother and he looked even better than the last time I saw him.
"Yea, but I hid his last bottle. I think he's still looking for it! I have missed you so much." I hugged him tightly and saw Legolas watching us with an expression that could have killed.
We stayed in Rivendell until my brother had to go back to Mirkwood. Legolas still didn't realise that Miromath was my brother until he heard me talking to him while we were on a trot. He followed us and hid when we reached the most beautiful part if the exotic forest. I sat on my usual bench and picked a flower to put in my hair.
"Liadawn, you know that Legolas chap," I looked up interested to see what he thought of Legolas, "has he always been kind of stiff meeting new people?"
"What do you mean?" I was mystified.
"It's just that whenever he talks to me, he says it with a horrible tone." he answered. I fixed a pink daffodil to my hair and replied.
"I have noticed that actually, no he's not usually like that. He is very nice and definitely worth knowing. Sometimes he acts strange when I am with people he doesn't know." I chose another flower and began to twiddle my hair round it.
"Does he usually do that when you are around men?" he asked me curiously. I thought hard.
"Yes, but I think he is just protecting me." I said looking into a smooth pool of water at my reflection.
"Maybe he thinks it's more than that. Maybe he thinks we are old lovers or something and is a bit jealous." he told me innocently. I laughed loudly.
"What, are you saying he loves me?" I giggled at the very thought of Legolas turning up at my door with a bouquet of flowers.
"It is possible and he doesn't know I am your brother so…it could happen." Legolas stared guiltily up at the trees where he was hiding and tried to get closer.
"That is the most ridiculous thing I ever heard Miromath. I think he just tries too hard to protect me and…(Legolas breaks a twig)…did you hear that?" I asked. I peered round the bush and saw Legolas's (very guilty) face staring up at me.
"Legolas. You followed me on purpose. I think I can look after myself. My own brother is not very likely to attack me!" I stormed off angrily.
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