Hello everybody! I just read charmed girl's review,
and I have to agree with her.
I do realize that my dialogue is pretty confusing.
Sometimes I can't even figure out who's talking.
So I decided to change the dialogue format.
Here's the chart of symbols that I'll use in future chapters:


Mia : Me


Lily : Lil


Michael : MM


Grand-Mere : GM


Mia's dad (here's the hardest one to remember): Dad


William : Will


Shameeka : Shame (no insult intended)


Boris : Bore (ditto)


Tina : Tin


Lars : Lars (not worth changing)


Mr. Gianni : Gian


Mia's mom : Mom


Lana: Lane

Ethan : ET


Bellene: Bell

Beverly: Bev

As new characters appear, I'll update this list.
The new format is:
Name(code) : dialogue.
Actually, this is the one that I used in my first chapter.
I hope this will clear things up a bit.