You are too young. Ch. 4
Hello everyone thanks a lot for the wonderful reviews you have given me. I'll try to finish the story before Christmas but I'm not sure I'm able to. Well, plz review my work and tell me what you think about it. And I'm don't hate the chibis, I love them too much but I had this idea and I thought it was pretty good. Go ahead if you want to flame it but I'll just make fun of you anyways; it's actually up to you.
"Goten I just can't ok! Now leave me alone!" screamed Trunks from the other side of the phone. He didn't want to talk to Goten it hurt him even more when he heard his voice. Trunks didn't realize what he had just said to Goten. "I'm sorry Goten. I-I," Trunks wanted to cry. Goten didn't deserve to be talked to like that. Hot tears began to come out of his royal blue eyes.
"It's ok Trunks, I know you didn't mean it. So, were you able to pull the prank with Mrs. Garman?" asked Goten, wanting to change the subject. He didn't want to make Trunks mad, after all that's what he wanted to know since he woke up in the hospital the first day. Trunks didn't know what to say, he was just crying from the other line. Goten reminded him that all those good times were going to end. He was glad Goten didn't see him cry.
"Well, we had a sub that day. So I couldn't," Trunks said trying to keep his voice in check. 'Goten if you only knew,' thought Trunks while there was an awkward silence between the boys. "Goten I have to go now, I'll see," Trunks couldn't finish the sentence his words got stuck in his throat.
"Ok Trunks I'll see you at school on Monday, k," said Goten. 'That's weird, usually Trunks and me always talk on the phone for hours,' thought Goten as he heard Trunks hang up the phone from the other end. Every one was acting weird around him, and he wanted to know why. He was going to get to the bottom of this no matter what. Goten hanged up the phone, and quickly went to his room to change from his blue pajamas to his typical navy blue long sleeve shirt and bright orange fighting gi. That day was so sunny it made Goten want to go fishing with his dad, like he had been doing for the past year. He was so happy his father was home, since he wasn't with him when he was smaller, but that didn't mattered to him now as long as his father won't leave again. He finished very quickly, and get down stairs to look for his parents. But as he passed his parent's bedroom, he heard his mother crying. Goten opened the door a bit, enough to see his father and mother.
"Gokou, I just can't be strong anymore," said ChiChi in between sobs. She was taking a lot of pain from this and she just couldn't take it. To think that her baby boy would soon die, it was slowly making a hole in her heart. Gokou hugged his wife very tightly. 'What is mommy talking about?' thought Goten making sure his parents won't see him or even feel him near.
"ChiChi please you have to. Just for him ok, do you want to see him worried?" said Gokou as he stroked his wife's hair. He too was in pain but he didn't wanted his son to be worried. He wanted for him to have the best time of his life for the next few months.
"But Gokou I can't live like this. Knowing that soon my little boy is going to die," ChiChi sobbed harder, into Gokou's chest. 'So that's it huh? It's because I'm sick and I'm going to die soon,' thought Goten as the last words ChiChi said rang in his ears. He slowly backed away; making sure didn't make a sound. 'That's why all of them have been acting weird.' Tears ran down his black eyes. He didn't want to die, he just couldn't. 'Why does this happen to us? Are we cursed or something!? Why does tragedy always come to us when we are finally happy? Why?' thought Goten as he made his way to the kitchen. He didn't want his mother or father to see him like this. He didn't want for them to know that he knew of what was going on. He heard footsteps coming from the hall he just came from. He quickly wiped away his tears.
"Mommy I'm hungry when are going to eat?" Goten whined. He saw his mother make a fake smile. 'Poor mommy, she's worried about me,' he thought as he saw his mother walk over to the fridge.
"How about we go fishing together, Goten?" said his father as he ruffled up Goten's hair. Gokou tried his best not to make his smile to look like ChiChi's. Of course it was a bit better. 'Oh daddy I love you even though you just came to live with us last year,' thought Goten while looking up at his father and trying his best not to cry in front of his parents.
"Yeah, daddy let's go. Mommy where's Gohan when I woke up he wasn't in his bed," said Goten as he looked over at his mother. ChiChi looked down at her son. 'Dende I would give up everything just if you let my little boy live!' thought ChiChi, too at the edge of tears.
"Well, he had to go with Videl to school. They have a festival today at school; he had to help out to build a tent," said ChiChi as she walked over to her son. She bent down to meet his face. ChiChi look see in Goten's eyes sadness but couldn't explain why. 'does Goten know?' thought ChiChi as she smiled at her son, and he too smiled back at her. That cheesy grin his father made. It was too painful to see him smile; it was like torture to her. She knew that soon she was never to see that smile again. ChiChi's eyes began to fill with tears, she couldn't contain them in anymore. Gokou saw this, and quickly picked Goten in his arms; making sure he didn't see his mother cry.
"Well, ready to go Goten, I don't know about you but I'm starving," said Gokou as he walked to the door with his son in his arms. 'Why are they trying to hide it?' thought Goten as he just went along with his father.
"Yeah daddy let's catch really big fish ok?" said Goten as he looked into his father's eyes. There too could be seen a sad look, but well hidden. Goten leaned on to his father's strong shoulder. 'You know 'Tousan, I always wanted to be like you, even if I didn't know you. Gohan would always tell me stories about you when I would go to sleep. He told me that you were always happy and very brave; never afraid of anything,' Goten began to cry but not enough for Gokou to notice. He hugged on to his father more tightly; remembering the time he had finally had met his father. He remembered that his father even though not see him born or was with him for a long time, he seemed to love him a lot just like he loved his brother. Both father and son walked to the same river the always came to fish. This is where the Son family had made many memorable memories; even when Gokou was just a little boy with ChiChi.
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"Gohan what's wrong?" asked Videl as she her love sitting alone under a tree. For what it seem he was crying.
"Nothing is wrong Videl what gave you that idea?" Gohan said as he wiped away his tears. He didn't want for his girlfriend to see him cry, what would she think of him? Videl walked up to him, and sat right next to him.
"Gohan like I told you before you're a really bad liar. Now tell me what's going on? You know you could trust me," said as she took her hand and made Gohan look at her. His eyes were red and puffy mentioning he had been crying for a long time; she had never had actually seen him like this. She quickly hugged him; her heart ached at the image of Gohan. She couldn't stand seeing her love cry, when he hurt she hurt as well. She stroked his beautiful raven hair, and rocked him back and forth.
"Videl Goten is sick," said Gohan taking in the comfort of his girlfriend.
"He's going to be ok, don't worry it would go,"
"He's going to die Videl. My little brother is going die!" Gohan screamed. He couldn't take the pain it was too much now. Videl was speechless; why would someone so sweet and innocent just die? She couldn't believe it, but it was true.
"Maybe the doctors made a mistake," Videl said after a long while. She was telling more to her self than to Gohan. She loved Goten like he was the little brother she never had. She was at the edge of tears.
"No, the doctors said they doubled checked. The results were the same," more tears came down from Gohan's black eyes. He hugged Videl tightly not wanting to let go. He needed her right now, he needed her more than anything. Videl's sight began to get blurry. She felt hot tears ran down her cheeks, and they ran all the way down unto Gohan's back. She felt her heart skip a bit after Gohan told her the news. Both of them hugged each other. 'No, why him?'
"Gohan please tell me you're lying to me?" said Videl as she picked Gohan's head to meet with his eyes. She saw the sadness in his eyes told her the truth, he sure wasn't lying. More tears began to run down from her blue eyes.
"No Gohan they can't take Goten now! He's just a little boy!" screamed Videl for now it was her turn to be comforted by her boyfriend. Gohan began to cry again.
"I know. It's just not fair," said Gohan between sobs. The couple stayed under the tree, where no was able to see them cry for the little angel that going to be leaving soon.
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"Wow, you caught a big one Goten!" said Gokou as he looked down at his son, who was carrying a huge fish. "Your mother is going to be very proud of you."
"Daddy, are you proud of me?" asked Goten. He had wanted to ask his father that a long time ago but couldn't bring him self to actually ask him. He always thought that he was going to say no, but now he just had to know.
"Of course I'm proud of you, Goten. No matter what ok? Being able to be Super Saiyajin at a very young age is a pretty good accomplishment," said Gokou as he smiled at his son. "And besides you're my son, I will always love you ok?" That made Goten's day, even though he was kind of mad at his father and mother for not telling him.
"Daddy I love you too," said Goten both of them walking home.
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Next time on "You're too young":
Goten goes to school and Trunks treats him extra careful. Would Goten get mad or would tell Trunks he knows that his sick?
Vegeta has a talk with Trunks
So what did you think? If it sucks then don't read it. Yes Gohan and Videl are going out, I know I should've mentioned it at the beginning but oh well what done is done. Plz review don't forget to tell me what you think of it k? Later.
Hello everyone thanks a lot for the wonderful reviews you have given me. I'll try to finish the story before Christmas but I'm not sure I'm able to. Well, plz review my work and tell me what you think about it. And I'm don't hate the chibis, I love them too much but I had this idea and I thought it was pretty good. Go ahead if you want to flame it but I'll just make fun of you anyways; it's actually up to you.
"Goten I just can't ok! Now leave me alone!" screamed Trunks from the other side of the phone. He didn't want to talk to Goten it hurt him even more when he heard his voice. Trunks didn't realize what he had just said to Goten. "I'm sorry Goten. I-I," Trunks wanted to cry. Goten didn't deserve to be talked to like that. Hot tears began to come out of his royal blue eyes.
"It's ok Trunks, I know you didn't mean it. So, were you able to pull the prank with Mrs. Garman?" asked Goten, wanting to change the subject. He didn't want to make Trunks mad, after all that's what he wanted to know since he woke up in the hospital the first day. Trunks didn't know what to say, he was just crying from the other line. Goten reminded him that all those good times were going to end. He was glad Goten didn't see him cry.
"Well, we had a sub that day. So I couldn't," Trunks said trying to keep his voice in check. 'Goten if you only knew,' thought Trunks while there was an awkward silence between the boys. "Goten I have to go now, I'll see," Trunks couldn't finish the sentence his words got stuck in his throat.
"Ok Trunks I'll see you at school on Monday, k," said Goten. 'That's weird, usually Trunks and me always talk on the phone for hours,' thought Goten as he heard Trunks hang up the phone from the other end. Every one was acting weird around him, and he wanted to know why. He was going to get to the bottom of this no matter what. Goten hanged up the phone, and quickly went to his room to change from his blue pajamas to his typical navy blue long sleeve shirt and bright orange fighting gi. That day was so sunny it made Goten want to go fishing with his dad, like he had been doing for the past year. He was so happy his father was home, since he wasn't with him when he was smaller, but that didn't mattered to him now as long as his father won't leave again. He finished very quickly, and get down stairs to look for his parents. But as he passed his parent's bedroom, he heard his mother crying. Goten opened the door a bit, enough to see his father and mother.
"Gokou, I just can't be strong anymore," said ChiChi in between sobs. She was taking a lot of pain from this and she just couldn't take it. To think that her baby boy would soon die, it was slowly making a hole in her heart. Gokou hugged his wife very tightly. 'What is mommy talking about?' thought Goten making sure his parents won't see him or even feel him near.
"ChiChi please you have to. Just for him ok, do you want to see him worried?" said Gokou as he stroked his wife's hair. He too was in pain but he didn't wanted his son to be worried. He wanted for him to have the best time of his life for the next few months.
"But Gokou I can't live like this. Knowing that soon my little boy is going to die," ChiChi sobbed harder, into Gokou's chest. 'So that's it huh? It's because I'm sick and I'm going to die soon,' thought Goten as the last words ChiChi said rang in his ears. He slowly backed away; making sure didn't make a sound. 'That's why all of them have been acting weird.' Tears ran down his black eyes. He didn't want to die, he just couldn't. 'Why does this happen to us? Are we cursed or something!? Why does tragedy always come to us when we are finally happy? Why?' thought Goten as he made his way to the kitchen. He didn't want his mother or father to see him like this. He didn't want for them to know that he knew of what was going on. He heard footsteps coming from the hall he just came from. He quickly wiped away his tears.
"Mommy I'm hungry when are going to eat?" Goten whined. He saw his mother make a fake smile. 'Poor mommy, she's worried about me,' he thought as he saw his mother walk over to the fridge.
"How about we go fishing together, Goten?" said his father as he ruffled up Goten's hair. Gokou tried his best not to make his smile to look like ChiChi's. Of course it was a bit better. 'Oh daddy I love you even though you just came to live with us last year,' thought Goten while looking up at his father and trying his best not to cry in front of his parents.
"Yeah, daddy let's go. Mommy where's Gohan when I woke up he wasn't in his bed," said Goten as he looked over at his mother. ChiChi looked down at her son. 'Dende I would give up everything just if you let my little boy live!' thought ChiChi, too at the edge of tears.
"Well, he had to go with Videl to school. They have a festival today at school; he had to help out to build a tent," said ChiChi as she walked over to her son. She bent down to meet his face. ChiChi look see in Goten's eyes sadness but couldn't explain why. 'does Goten know?' thought ChiChi as she smiled at her son, and he too smiled back at her. That cheesy grin his father made. It was too painful to see him smile; it was like torture to her. She knew that soon she was never to see that smile again. ChiChi's eyes began to fill with tears, she couldn't contain them in anymore. Gokou saw this, and quickly picked Goten in his arms; making sure he didn't see his mother cry.
"Well, ready to go Goten, I don't know about you but I'm starving," said Gokou as he walked to the door with his son in his arms. 'Why are they trying to hide it?' thought Goten as he just went along with his father.
"Yeah daddy let's catch really big fish ok?" said Goten as he looked into his father's eyes. There too could be seen a sad look, but well hidden. Goten leaned on to his father's strong shoulder. 'You know 'Tousan, I always wanted to be like you, even if I didn't know you. Gohan would always tell me stories about you when I would go to sleep. He told me that you were always happy and very brave; never afraid of anything,' Goten began to cry but not enough for Gokou to notice. He hugged on to his father more tightly; remembering the time he had finally had met his father. He remembered that his father even though not see him born or was with him for a long time, he seemed to love him a lot just like he loved his brother. Both father and son walked to the same river the always came to fish. This is where the Son family had made many memorable memories; even when Gokou was just a little boy with ChiChi.
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"Gohan what's wrong?" asked Videl as she her love sitting alone under a tree. For what it seem he was crying.
"Nothing is wrong Videl what gave you that idea?" Gohan said as he wiped away his tears. He didn't want for his girlfriend to see him cry, what would she think of him? Videl walked up to him, and sat right next to him.
"Gohan like I told you before you're a really bad liar. Now tell me what's going on? You know you could trust me," said as she took her hand and made Gohan look at her. His eyes were red and puffy mentioning he had been crying for a long time; she had never had actually seen him like this. She quickly hugged him; her heart ached at the image of Gohan. She couldn't stand seeing her love cry, when he hurt she hurt as well. She stroked his beautiful raven hair, and rocked him back and forth.
"Videl Goten is sick," said Gohan taking in the comfort of his girlfriend.
"He's going to be ok, don't worry it would go,"
"He's going to die Videl. My little brother is going die!" Gohan screamed. He couldn't take the pain it was too much now. Videl was speechless; why would someone so sweet and innocent just die? She couldn't believe it, but it was true.
"Maybe the doctors made a mistake," Videl said after a long while. She was telling more to her self than to Gohan. She loved Goten like he was the little brother she never had. She was at the edge of tears.
"No, the doctors said they doubled checked. The results were the same," more tears came down from Gohan's black eyes. He hugged Videl tightly not wanting to let go. He needed her right now, he needed her more than anything. Videl's sight began to get blurry. She felt hot tears ran down her cheeks, and they ran all the way down unto Gohan's back. She felt her heart skip a bit after Gohan told her the news. Both of them hugged each other. 'No, why him?'
"Gohan please tell me you're lying to me?" said Videl as she picked Gohan's head to meet with his eyes. She saw the sadness in his eyes told her the truth, he sure wasn't lying. More tears began to run down from her blue eyes.
"No Gohan they can't take Goten now! He's just a little boy!" screamed Videl for now it was her turn to be comforted by her boyfriend. Gohan began to cry again.
"I know. It's just not fair," said Gohan between sobs. The couple stayed under the tree, where no was able to see them cry for the little angel that going to be leaving soon.
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"Wow, you caught a big one Goten!" said Gokou as he looked down at his son, who was carrying a huge fish. "Your mother is going to be very proud of you."
"Daddy, are you proud of me?" asked Goten. He had wanted to ask his father that a long time ago but couldn't bring him self to actually ask him. He always thought that he was going to say no, but now he just had to know.
"Of course I'm proud of you, Goten. No matter what ok? Being able to be Super Saiyajin at a very young age is a pretty good accomplishment," said Gokou as he smiled at his son. "And besides you're my son, I will always love you ok?" That made Goten's day, even though he was kind of mad at his father and mother for not telling him.
"Daddy I love you too," said Goten both of them walking home.
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Next time on "You're too young":
Goten goes to school and Trunks treats him extra careful. Would Goten get mad or would tell Trunks he knows that his sick?
Vegeta has a talk with Trunks
So what did you think? If it sucks then don't read it. Yes Gohan and Videl are going out, I know I should've mentioned it at the beginning but oh well what done is done. Plz review don't forget to tell me what you think of it k? Later.