Author's Note: Elena's point of view, before she died in chapter one....by the way, this is quite short…so yeah.
Oh yes, and I know I said "The End" in Chapter One, but I couldn't resist doing a chapter two to this...
-Fall Of An Angel-
-By Brian Marcelo-
-brianmarcelo@hotmail.com-
Rated R for angst and death.
-Elena's Point of View-
"I- I was just trying to cheer you up... Blazes! Fine, fine. I GET IT...As expected of the Wings of Valmar, it is difficult to visit injury upon Millenia. You, on the other hand..." he said coldly, as he took out his Geoblade and pointed it at me.
Wait...me...? Why me...? Why was he pointing his sword at me...? I know that I made him mad, especially since I was being so unreasonable and moody but...but...but...
"Ryu-Ryudo!?" I cried out in surprise, slowly backing away from Ryudo's blade. He wasn't thinking what I hope he wasn't thinking. I mean...Ryudo is a Geohound, but...a murderer...?
"Look, you're not giving me a choice here. You can keep crying about Valmar this and Valmar that, or we can settle this now..." he said, with a rather big hint of coldness in his voice, "You calmed down yet? Hey, what's gotten into you? What happened to the almost-stereotypical determination and pluck that I know so well? What's wrong, Elena?" he asked, as he put his sword down.
Mentally sighing a breath of relief, I realized that he wasn't going to kill me. He was just being tough.
But...still...I wanted Millenia out. She was the evil inside of me...everything I wasn't...everything impure and filthy. She was everything that was wrong in this world.
And she was inside of me.... which made me like.... her....
I decided that I wanted her out of me so badly that I knelt down in front of Ryudo, which surprised myself as well as he.
" ...All right, Ryudo. Kill me! If that will destroy Valmar..." I whispered softly, as I kneeled down in front of him.
Please, Granas.... Let him kill me so that I may rid the world of a part of Valmar.
"What!?" shouted Ryudo, who seemed very surprised at my...suicidal request.
"What's wrong, Ryudo? Do it quickly! I'm a little... scared...so please, make it as painless as you are able..." I said, tears flowing out of my eyes, starting to be hesitant on whether I wanted to live or die...
Ryudo merely stared at me for a while, as if he was thinking about truly doing it and ending my life...
"Please Ryu-Ryudo...make it as painless as you are able..." I said, not wanting to feel any pain...
Looking rather cold, he walked up to me and made me stand up, his eyes showing he wanted to tell me something; odd how his eyes looked darker then usual.
"Elena..." he whispered to me quietly...softly...with his cold blade still in his hand.
"Ryudo...?" I whispered quietly back, wondering what he was going to do. I was so confused...after hearing him say my name so softly...I just...I wanted him to tell me right now that...I was crazy and that I just needed some rest. Or...to have him hold me in his...strong arms and tell me everything would be okay, and that he'd protect me. Better yet, he could always say "I love you"...
"You...deserve this...." he said slowly to me, putting emphasis on "this".
What...? What do you mean...? What is it...?
Before I could open my mouth to talk, he drove his Geoblade right through my body.
"Ryudo...!!!" I said, shrieking in pain and surprise, as he left the blade in my body for a few more seconds, twisting it a harshly, before taking it out of my abdomen.
"Ryu-Ryudo..." I said quietly, the pain too much to bear as I slumped to the ground, blood trickling slowly down to the ground.
Why Ryudo...?
Why didn't you just say no...?
What did I do that made you so willing to do my request...?
Why couldn't you just give me one of your mean sarcastic remarks...?
Or call me crazy and tell me to go to bed or something...?
Ryudo...?
Why...?
I was falling in love with you...did you know that Ryudo...?
I started to cry in pain, as I was losing consciousness fast...
Granas....my vision is starting to weaken...I can barely see anything...
"Ryudo...? What...happened to my protector....?" I said, starting to feel weaker and weaker with every breath I took.
He looked at me with a sneer on his face as he said coldly, "He just become your executioner."
With that, he struck me with his blade again...and again...and again...
Everything's getting dark...
I can't feel anything...not even pain anymore...
I'm breathing my last breaths here...I'm...dying...
I can't believe...it's over...
Granas...will I see you soon...?
Lord Granas...am I coming to see you soon...? Give me a sign...
Why...?
Ryudo...?
I...I didn't wanna die...why were you so willing to give me death...?
Ry...udo....?
Shouldn't you have cared about my well-being...? Even if you didn't care about me...you had a job to do...Geohound...
R...y...u...do......
I...
-The End-
I think this wasn't too bad. Maybe I might even do a P.O.V. of Ryudo and what he was thinking as he was being possessed by Valmar...maybe....
Maybe. If people want it...
Oh yes, and I know I said "The End" in Chapter One, but I couldn't resist doing a chapter two to this...
-Fall Of An Angel-
-By Brian Marcelo-
-brianmarcelo@hotmail.com-
Rated R for angst and death.
-Elena's Point of View-
"I- I was just trying to cheer you up... Blazes! Fine, fine. I GET IT...As expected of the Wings of Valmar, it is difficult to visit injury upon Millenia. You, on the other hand..." he said coldly, as he took out his Geoblade and pointed it at me.
Wait...me...? Why me...? Why was he pointing his sword at me...? I know that I made him mad, especially since I was being so unreasonable and moody but...but...but...
"Ryu-Ryudo!?" I cried out in surprise, slowly backing away from Ryudo's blade. He wasn't thinking what I hope he wasn't thinking. I mean...Ryudo is a Geohound, but...a murderer...?
"Look, you're not giving me a choice here. You can keep crying about Valmar this and Valmar that, or we can settle this now..." he said, with a rather big hint of coldness in his voice, "You calmed down yet? Hey, what's gotten into you? What happened to the almost-stereotypical determination and pluck that I know so well? What's wrong, Elena?" he asked, as he put his sword down.
Mentally sighing a breath of relief, I realized that he wasn't going to kill me. He was just being tough.
But...still...I wanted Millenia out. She was the evil inside of me...everything I wasn't...everything impure and filthy. She was everything that was wrong in this world.
And she was inside of me.... which made me like.... her....
I decided that I wanted her out of me so badly that I knelt down in front of Ryudo, which surprised myself as well as he.
" ...All right, Ryudo. Kill me! If that will destroy Valmar..." I whispered softly, as I kneeled down in front of him.
Please, Granas.... Let him kill me so that I may rid the world of a part of Valmar.
"What!?" shouted Ryudo, who seemed very surprised at my...suicidal request.
"What's wrong, Ryudo? Do it quickly! I'm a little... scared...so please, make it as painless as you are able..." I said, tears flowing out of my eyes, starting to be hesitant on whether I wanted to live or die...
Ryudo merely stared at me for a while, as if he was thinking about truly doing it and ending my life...
"Please Ryu-Ryudo...make it as painless as you are able..." I said, not wanting to feel any pain...
Looking rather cold, he walked up to me and made me stand up, his eyes showing he wanted to tell me something; odd how his eyes looked darker then usual.
"Elena..." he whispered to me quietly...softly...with his cold blade still in his hand.
"Ryudo...?" I whispered quietly back, wondering what he was going to do. I was so confused...after hearing him say my name so softly...I just...I wanted him to tell me right now that...I was crazy and that I just needed some rest. Or...to have him hold me in his...strong arms and tell me everything would be okay, and that he'd protect me. Better yet, he could always say "I love you"...
"You...deserve this...." he said slowly to me, putting emphasis on "this".
What...? What do you mean...? What is it...?
Before I could open my mouth to talk, he drove his Geoblade right through my body.
"Ryudo...!!!" I said, shrieking in pain and surprise, as he left the blade in my body for a few more seconds, twisting it a harshly, before taking it out of my abdomen.
"Ryu-Ryudo..." I said quietly, the pain too much to bear as I slumped to the ground, blood trickling slowly down to the ground.
Why Ryudo...?
Why didn't you just say no...?
What did I do that made you so willing to do my request...?
Why couldn't you just give me one of your mean sarcastic remarks...?
Or call me crazy and tell me to go to bed or something...?
Ryudo...?
Why...?
I was falling in love with you...did you know that Ryudo...?
I started to cry in pain, as I was losing consciousness fast...
Granas....my vision is starting to weaken...I can barely see anything...
"Ryudo...? What...happened to my protector....?" I said, starting to feel weaker and weaker with every breath I took.
He looked at me with a sneer on his face as he said coldly, "He just become your executioner."
With that, he struck me with his blade again...and again...and again...
Everything's getting dark...
I can't feel anything...not even pain anymore...
I'm breathing my last breaths here...I'm...dying...
I can't believe...it's over...
Granas...will I see you soon...?
Lord Granas...am I coming to see you soon...? Give me a sign...
Why...?
Ryudo...?
I...I didn't wanna die...why were you so willing to give me death...?
Ry...udo....?
Shouldn't you have cared about my well-being...? Even if you didn't care about me...you had a job to do...Geohound...
R...y...u...do......
I...
-The End-
I think this wasn't too bad. Maybe I might even do a P.O.V. of Ryudo and what he was thinking as he was being possessed by Valmar...maybe....
Maybe. If people want it...