I decided to post chapter four anyway while I have a chance. Thanks,
reviewers! I said Five MORE reviews, but I now have five altogether, and
you guys are sooo nice. NEED MORE REVIEWS! Also, I NEED BETA READERS!
PLEASE!
Chapter Four
Gandalf?!
Gandalf surveyed the room, taking it in for a moment. He looked and nodded at Frodo, who smiled and ran to him at once.
"Gandalf!" Frodo exclaimed.
"But . . ." I was lost in thought.
"What's wrong?" Frodo inquired, his brow knitting together in confusion.
" . . . I thought . . . I thought he . . . fell into the chasm . . ."
"Oh, that. I thought you said you knew all about the Fellowship . . ."
"Well, part of it. I know about from Bilbo's eleventy-first birthday (your thirty-third) until you and Sam leave to go towards Mordor, leaving Gondor, but nothing after that."
"Oh, alright."
"Well, miss," Gandalf said, "I fell into the chasm, yes, but I survived the fall to the bottom, with the demon. It was then that I imprisoned him in the dungeons of the great dwarf-city. The battle seemed like days, but could have only been minutes. I then transported myself to find Frodo."
Ha Ha Ha Ha. This wasn't a cliffhanger, but I only did a little. The creative juices are flowing slower, people. This is the time where I need suggestions and Beta readers. PLEASE! I know, I said there was a plot. But there IS a possibility of the outcome of this being put in your hands.
**Ahem**
The fate of us all rests in the hands of the most unlikely person, {insert your name here}
The reason I didn't write so much is because YOU didn't review (unless you're one of the four.)
Chapter Four
Gandalf?!
Gandalf surveyed the room, taking it in for a moment. He looked and nodded at Frodo, who smiled and ran to him at once.
"Gandalf!" Frodo exclaimed.
"But . . ." I was lost in thought.
"What's wrong?" Frodo inquired, his brow knitting together in confusion.
" . . . I thought . . . I thought he . . . fell into the chasm . . ."
"Oh, that. I thought you said you knew all about the Fellowship . . ."
"Well, part of it. I know about from Bilbo's eleventy-first birthday (your thirty-third) until you and Sam leave to go towards Mordor, leaving Gondor, but nothing after that."
"Oh, alright."
"Well, miss," Gandalf said, "I fell into the chasm, yes, but I survived the fall to the bottom, with the demon. It was then that I imprisoned him in the dungeons of the great dwarf-city. The battle seemed like days, but could have only been minutes. I then transported myself to find Frodo."
Ha Ha Ha Ha. This wasn't a cliffhanger, but I only did a little. The creative juices are flowing slower, people. This is the time where I need suggestions and Beta readers. PLEASE! I know, I said there was a plot. But there IS a possibility of the outcome of this being put in your hands.
**Ahem**
The fate of us all rests in the hands of the most unlikely person, {insert your name here}
The reason I didn't write so much is because YOU didn't review (unless you're one of the four.)