Title: Struggle
Part: 8/?
Author: Issei
Genre: Pre-Yaoi
Paring: still unknown?
Rating: PG
Archive: Sdfic ML and Jem's homepage! (only until chapter 3 on Jem's page)
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2 Please ignore any typo errors/ gammer mistakes.
Hello all! Thx for all the C&C well I hope all of you like the story so far!.
Warning: No checking and editing had been done..too lazy .(runs in family)...hope there aren't too many! May be OOC.
Disclaimer: the characters do not belong to me..dun sue!!
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4 Words in * * is action
5 Words in ^ ^ is characters thinking
Words in [ ] refer to the setting
Words in ( ) are words by writer.^_______^
5.1 Chapter 8
Hanamichi stared at the people on court, but his gaze went beyond them. His eyes weren't bright and sparking like they use to but rather, they are clouded, as if blocked many unresolved problems.
Hanamichi: Er. guys, I think I will go home since there is nothing much I can do here.
Everyone froze in action as they watched Hanamichi walk out of the sports hall.
Ryota: I think he is just bored, now let's continue. * gave Ayako a "go see what is wrong look" *
Ayako: *nodded* Haruko, I think you better go and see what is wrong with Hanamichi.
Haruko: I don't think so. He said he wants to be alone. I better not go and disturb him.
Ayako: Fine then, if he really said so. *looks doubtfully at the door* ^What can be wrong with that self proclaimed tensai? ^
On the other hand, two people were also deep in thoughts, each think about the red head, Hanamichi.
Rukawa: ^Is there a problem? Maybe I should go after him. ^
A Devil Rukawa appeared on his right shoulder.
Devil: And say what, did you forget that both of you are not exactly good friends, or should I remind you that both of you are nearly enemies.
Rukawa: . ^ Yah right, how could I forget about that. ^
Rukawa: Can you tell me what is wrong with me this day? Why am I so crazy over that baka? (The longest sentence Rukawa had ever said in the fic so far.)
Ryota: Did you say something?
Rukawa: .
Devil: Ha ha! Remember I am a devil, I do not do people favours and will only answer questions that pleases me!
With a "poof", the devil disappeared.
Angel Rukawa who was unable to stand the arrogance of the Devil appeared on Rukawa's left shoulder.
Angel: I will tell you the answer! It is because you.
Before he could finish his sentence, the devil appeared from behind clasping on tight to his mouth.
Devil: No you are not supposed to tell him. He should discover it by himself. If you tell him, I will report you to the head!
Angel: Oh well. sorry Rukawa, I really want to help you but this time I really cannot say or else I will be punished heavily.
With a cloud of smoke, the two miniature Rukawa's disappeared.
Rukawa: ^ Are these two people me? Why do they talk so much? ^
All the while Rukawa is arguing within himself, action was being carried out. Mitsui walked toward the door and gave a signal to Ryota before leaving the court.
Mitsui: ^ I should be able to catch up with him. There is something seriously wrong with him, and I must know! ^
Mitsui reached the changing room and only to find it empty.
Mitsui: ^ Wow, he sure changes fast. ^
Mitsui quickly grabbed his bag and throw on his uniform, before long, he was sprinting towards the school gate.
Rukawa was unaware that Mitsui had gone after Hanamichi and ws busy debating with himself if he should go find that baka.
Rukawa: ^ To go or not to go? ^
Rukawa: ^ To go or not to go? ^
Rukawa: ^ I think I should go. He would need a friend to be with him now, someone to listen to his problems. ^ (Rukawa, a good listener? ^^;;;)
Rukawa walked out of the court with everyone staring at him
Ryota: Where do you think you are going?
Rukawa: After that baka.
Ryota: Rukawa you can come back, Mitsui went after him.
Rukawa: Mitsui? ^ How come I didn't know, why is it Mitsui? ^
Ayako: Were you sleeping, it was quite a commotion.
Rukawa: .
Ryota: *shrugs* Let's carry on. I will take over Mitsui's position.
Rukawa stood still, the words "Mitsui went after him" speed through his mind.
Rukawa: ^I am not his friend. Mitsui is. Why did I ever bother? ^
Feeling a tinge of jealousy in his tone, Rukawa quickly brushed it away.
Rukawa: ^ I should just concentrate on basketball. I want to be Japan no. 1 high school student. I must stay focus. He has Mitsui there for him. ^
With that in mind, Rukawa became completely focus. All his worries were thrown aside.
Hanamichi walked along the street, his footsteps heavy. Bouncing a basketball in his hand, he stared at the floor with each step that he takes.
Hanamichi: ^ where should I go? Youhei is out working and the other boys will probably just laugh at my problems. ^
Hanamichi kept walking straight ahead and before long, it brought him to the basketball court that he always go to.
Hanamichi: ^ Maybe I should do some practice. ^ *looks around*
Hanamichi: yes, no one is around, I can practise the way I like.
Voice: No, you will not because I am here.
Hanamichi: Micchy?
Voice: Yes and don't call me that!
Hanamichi: ^ You are definitely Micchy, only Micchy will get this piss when I call him Micchy. ^ * turns around *
Hanamichi: Hi Micchy!
Although Mitsui had thoroughly spoilt his plan, Hanamichi was not angry, in fact he was glad to know that it was Mitsui and not someone else.
Mitsui: Guess I spoilt your plan huh?
Hanamichi: Well.what do you want from me?
Hanamichi was trying hard to finish all the chitchat with Mitsui and get on his way. He still didn't want to talk to anyone, still troubled by his own thoughts.
Mitsui: Well, just want to check that you are all right. You don't usually leave half way through training.
Hanamichi: I am all right. ^ how many times much I say this? ^ (how many times must I type this?)
Mitsui: Well, then all right? Where are you going? Home?
Hanamichi: Er.no, I want to walk around.
Mitsui: Since there is no point going back now, (training will be ending soon), I guess I will just hang around with you.
Hanamichi was reluctant to say yes, but he had no choice, if he didn't Mitsui will suspect.
Hanamichi: *Gives a shrug* Yah well okay then.
They 2 guys walked silently down the street, enjoying the late autumn wind.
Mitsui: This is cold. But it feels good.
Hanamichi: Yah.
Mitsui: so are you ready to talk? Well, looking at you, anyone would have known that you have a problem.
Hanamichi: .
Mitsui getting to the ends of his patients with this stubborn red head that was acting increasingly like Rukawa by the second with his one syllabus answer, Mitsui could hardly control the irritation in his voice.
Mitsui: Quit acting like Rukawa!
At the mention of Rukawa's name, Hanamichi was furious.
Hanamichi: Me acting like Rukawa? Are you crazy, why in the world would I want to be like him? I don't want to be a big block of ice!
Mitsui: Then spit out all your problems!
To be continued.
Amazing!! I did this chapter in one day.first that I have ever done.well hope all of you have enjoyed!!...C&C are very welcomed!.(I must stress on very).as usual.leave on babble or e-mail me.. Issei_kun_@hotmail.com
Part: 8/?
Author: Issei
Genre: Pre-Yaoi
Paring: still unknown?
Rating: PG
Archive: Sdfic ML and Jem's homepage! (only until chapter 3 on Jem's page)
1
2 Please ignore any typo errors/ gammer mistakes.
Hello all! Thx for all the C&C well I hope all of you like the story so far!.
Warning: No checking and editing had been done..too lazy .(runs in family)...hope there aren't too many! May be OOC.
Disclaimer: the characters do not belong to me..dun sue!!
3
4 Words in * * is action
5 Words in ^ ^ is characters thinking
Words in [ ] refer to the setting
Words in ( ) are words by writer.^_______^
5.1 Chapter 8
Hanamichi stared at the people on court, but his gaze went beyond them. His eyes weren't bright and sparking like they use to but rather, they are clouded, as if blocked many unresolved problems.
Hanamichi: Er. guys, I think I will go home since there is nothing much I can do here.
Everyone froze in action as they watched Hanamichi walk out of the sports hall.
Ryota: I think he is just bored, now let's continue. * gave Ayako a "go see what is wrong look" *
Ayako: *nodded* Haruko, I think you better go and see what is wrong with Hanamichi.
Haruko: I don't think so. He said he wants to be alone. I better not go and disturb him.
Ayako: Fine then, if he really said so. *looks doubtfully at the door* ^What can be wrong with that self proclaimed tensai? ^
On the other hand, two people were also deep in thoughts, each think about the red head, Hanamichi.
Rukawa: ^Is there a problem? Maybe I should go after him. ^
A Devil Rukawa appeared on his right shoulder.
Devil: And say what, did you forget that both of you are not exactly good friends, or should I remind you that both of you are nearly enemies.
Rukawa: . ^ Yah right, how could I forget about that. ^
Rukawa: Can you tell me what is wrong with me this day? Why am I so crazy over that baka? (The longest sentence Rukawa had ever said in the fic so far.)
Ryota: Did you say something?
Rukawa: .
Devil: Ha ha! Remember I am a devil, I do not do people favours and will only answer questions that pleases me!
With a "poof", the devil disappeared.
Angel Rukawa who was unable to stand the arrogance of the Devil appeared on Rukawa's left shoulder.
Angel: I will tell you the answer! It is because you.
Before he could finish his sentence, the devil appeared from behind clasping on tight to his mouth.
Devil: No you are not supposed to tell him. He should discover it by himself. If you tell him, I will report you to the head!
Angel: Oh well. sorry Rukawa, I really want to help you but this time I really cannot say or else I will be punished heavily.
With a cloud of smoke, the two miniature Rukawa's disappeared.
Rukawa: ^ Are these two people me? Why do they talk so much? ^
All the while Rukawa is arguing within himself, action was being carried out. Mitsui walked toward the door and gave a signal to Ryota before leaving the court.
Mitsui: ^ I should be able to catch up with him. There is something seriously wrong with him, and I must know! ^
Mitsui reached the changing room and only to find it empty.
Mitsui: ^ Wow, he sure changes fast. ^
Mitsui quickly grabbed his bag and throw on his uniform, before long, he was sprinting towards the school gate.
Rukawa was unaware that Mitsui had gone after Hanamichi and ws busy debating with himself if he should go find that baka.
Rukawa: ^ To go or not to go? ^
Rukawa: ^ To go or not to go? ^
Rukawa: ^ I think I should go. He would need a friend to be with him now, someone to listen to his problems. ^ (Rukawa, a good listener? ^^;;;)
Rukawa walked out of the court with everyone staring at him
Ryota: Where do you think you are going?
Rukawa: After that baka.
Ryota: Rukawa you can come back, Mitsui went after him.
Rukawa: Mitsui? ^ How come I didn't know, why is it Mitsui? ^
Ayako: Were you sleeping, it was quite a commotion.
Rukawa: .
Ryota: *shrugs* Let's carry on. I will take over Mitsui's position.
Rukawa stood still, the words "Mitsui went after him" speed through his mind.
Rukawa: ^I am not his friend. Mitsui is. Why did I ever bother? ^
Feeling a tinge of jealousy in his tone, Rukawa quickly brushed it away.
Rukawa: ^ I should just concentrate on basketball. I want to be Japan no. 1 high school student. I must stay focus. He has Mitsui there for him. ^
With that in mind, Rukawa became completely focus. All his worries were thrown aside.
Hanamichi walked along the street, his footsteps heavy. Bouncing a basketball in his hand, he stared at the floor with each step that he takes.
Hanamichi: ^ where should I go? Youhei is out working and the other boys will probably just laugh at my problems. ^
Hanamichi kept walking straight ahead and before long, it brought him to the basketball court that he always go to.
Hanamichi: ^ Maybe I should do some practice. ^ *looks around*
Hanamichi: yes, no one is around, I can practise the way I like.
Voice: No, you will not because I am here.
Hanamichi: Micchy?
Voice: Yes and don't call me that!
Hanamichi: ^ You are definitely Micchy, only Micchy will get this piss when I call him Micchy. ^ * turns around *
Hanamichi: Hi Micchy!
Although Mitsui had thoroughly spoilt his plan, Hanamichi was not angry, in fact he was glad to know that it was Mitsui and not someone else.
Mitsui: Guess I spoilt your plan huh?
Hanamichi: Well.what do you want from me?
Hanamichi was trying hard to finish all the chitchat with Mitsui and get on his way. He still didn't want to talk to anyone, still troubled by his own thoughts.
Mitsui: Well, just want to check that you are all right. You don't usually leave half way through training.
Hanamichi: I am all right. ^ how many times much I say this? ^ (how many times must I type this?)
Mitsui: Well, then all right? Where are you going? Home?
Hanamichi: Er.no, I want to walk around.
Mitsui: Since there is no point going back now, (training will be ending soon), I guess I will just hang around with you.
Hanamichi was reluctant to say yes, but he had no choice, if he didn't Mitsui will suspect.
Hanamichi: *Gives a shrug* Yah well okay then.
They 2 guys walked silently down the street, enjoying the late autumn wind.
Mitsui: This is cold. But it feels good.
Hanamichi: Yah.
Mitsui: so are you ready to talk? Well, looking at you, anyone would have known that you have a problem.
Hanamichi: .
Mitsui getting to the ends of his patients with this stubborn red head that was acting increasingly like Rukawa by the second with his one syllabus answer, Mitsui could hardly control the irritation in his voice.
Mitsui: Quit acting like Rukawa!
At the mention of Rukawa's name, Hanamichi was furious.
Hanamichi: Me acting like Rukawa? Are you crazy, why in the world would I want to be like him? I don't want to be a big block of ice!
Mitsui: Then spit out all your problems!
To be continued.
Amazing!! I did this chapter in one day.first that I have ever done.well hope all of you have enjoyed!!...C&C are very welcomed!.(I must stress on very).as usual.leave on babble or e-mail me.. Issei_kun_@hotmail.com