Hey ppl - this is foxyladie2015 - i wrote this with a buddy of mine (Aragorn4ever)- this is my first lotr fic and I asked for some help - we would enjoy reviews, but flames will be used to cook dinner!!!!!!!!!!!!! Criticism can be used to help my wirting skills so it is welcome along with any advice/ideas for the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you have any advice for us I can be e-mailed @ Peachesancream4ever@hotmail.com or you can e-mail my friend @ tiggerware@earthlink.net and she will forward it to me.
Disclaimer: you have heard it a million times so we will not bore you to death telling you what we do and do not own!
Pre- Lotr:
It was a dark and stormy night and Legolas was lonely. After leaving his father's party, he found a girl who was just as lonely as him. He lead her to a secluded part and they started to kiss and it gradually got more passionate. One thing lead to another and well..... you know what happens. (A/N - we are not going to go into major detail! You know what happens) When morning came, Legolas had realized what he did, he rolled over to find a gold hair pin with a gold rose lying in a vacant spot. He picked it up and put it in his pocket determined to find it's owner.
3 years later -
Legolas has returned from the War of the ring with some of his friends that survived the war of the ring. That night at the big banquet that King Thranduil held for his son and his friends. The king called upon a elven woman who knew all of the parts and realms of Mirkwood because the King wanted a certain scroll. When Legolas saw her, he remembered the gold rose and the golden hair pin, but the thing that he remembered her face. She had the most unique hair - it was a red with blonde and black highlights all blended together very well. The most catching thing about her though, was her eyes. They were a emerald green with hints of gold and silver. He remembered her face very well, almost too well. As she left he quietly followed her in the shadows. When she finnaly reached a quiet part of the forest, he approached her.
" Do you remember me?" he asked her without any hesitation.
" Of course i do, why did you follow me? I have no connection to you whatsoever!" she said as calmly as she could, " now, why did you follow me?"
" I just wanted to return these items to you." he then handed her the golden rose and the golden hair pin.
She gasped and gently pushed away his hand that was holding them out to her," I left those for a reason - i don't need them back, you may keep them." and with that she started to walk away, but he gently grabbed her arm and pulled her into a kiss.
This is the end of the first chapter!!!!! Did you like it? Review and tell us please - we don't care if you just say you liked it or didn't like it - will only continue if someone reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANX!
Disclaimer: you have heard it a million times so we will not bore you to death telling you what we do and do not own!
Pre- Lotr:
It was a dark and stormy night and Legolas was lonely. After leaving his father's party, he found a girl who was just as lonely as him. He lead her to a secluded part and they started to kiss and it gradually got more passionate. One thing lead to another and well..... you know what happens. (A/N - we are not going to go into major detail! You know what happens) When morning came, Legolas had realized what he did, he rolled over to find a gold hair pin with a gold rose lying in a vacant spot. He picked it up and put it in his pocket determined to find it's owner.
3 years later -
Legolas has returned from the War of the ring with some of his friends that survived the war of the ring. That night at the big banquet that King Thranduil held for his son and his friends. The king called upon a elven woman who knew all of the parts and realms of Mirkwood because the King wanted a certain scroll. When Legolas saw her, he remembered the gold rose and the golden hair pin, but the thing that he remembered her face. She had the most unique hair - it was a red with blonde and black highlights all blended together very well. The most catching thing about her though, was her eyes. They were a emerald green with hints of gold and silver. He remembered her face very well, almost too well. As she left he quietly followed her in the shadows. When she finnaly reached a quiet part of the forest, he approached her.
" Do you remember me?" he asked her without any hesitation.
" Of course i do, why did you follow me? I have no connection to you whatsoever!" she said as calmly as she could, " now, why did you follow me?"
" I just wanted to return these items to you." he then handed her the golden rose and the golden hair pin.
She gasped and gently pushed away his hand that was holding them out to her," I left those for a reason - i don't need them back, you may keep them." and with that she started to walk away, but he gently grabbed her arm and pulled her into a kiss.
This is the end of the first chapter!!!!! Did you like it? Review and tell us please - we don't care if you just say you liked it or didn't like it - will only continue if someone reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANX!