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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Lady Sutaa
Lady Sutaa
Yay!! A least it wasn't a cliffhanger ne? lol.. hey if u want to im, it's Lady Sutaa n my email is at BlossomMistress@netscape.net email me if u like. n if u want i'll be ur friend! keep continuing! jaa ne.
*~*Lady Sutaa*~*
MY REPLY
YUP ME NO LIKE CLIFFHANGERS! So I am nice and don't (usually) make them...but I like scaring people! =^.~= Did I scare you? And I will make sure I e-mail you...OF COURSE! Alright well thank-you for both your reviews! They mean so much to me! *Hugs you* thanks!
Brittney
i love this story so far... i wonder what happens? well i'm dyin to know. hope you get another chapter up soon
MY REPLY
Your dieing ay....I'd better hurry then! And thank-you so much for reviewing you know...this reminds me when I had to go to the bathroom at the park and...Ok i'm sorry I'll get back to the subject....but the bathrooms were locked =^.~= Ok sorry I do not know why that came up from me....OH WELL! Oh yes and...uhm...THANKS! *Hugs you till you faint* Hee hee...OOPS! lol =^.^=
aria
the first chapter reminded me of the begining of the book Just Ella, the fic is good write more soon please
MY REPLY
Know why it reminded you of it..........
Cuse I read up to the 2nd chapter in that book and thats were I got the idea.... =^.^= Sorry....But hey thanks for the review. *advances toward you to hug you* *Stops dead in tracks* You Know your STINKY! actuley not really...but I had to make fun of something. *looks down* Do you forgive me? *Gets on hands and knees* PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE. *starts dancing* B.I.NGO B.I.NGO B.I.NGO AND BINGO WAS HIS NAMEO! everybody now...uh every body? *here cricket noises* Anyone? Hello? uh...sorry...?
Alright heres what hapned last...
"I love you to...I fell in love with a peasant...And i'm suppose to marry a prince"said Sakura sadly. "I'ts alright...I bet that...well...we can still...date."said Li. "But then i'd be cheating on the prince. "Who cares?"said Li. "Well...alright!"said Sakura.
Alright here goes!
"Sakura!"yelled the prince. "Sakura ran out of the room. Li was watching her run. 'What a girl' he thought 'What a girl' "I'M COMING!"yelled Sakura. The maids watched her laughing. "I think she got caught!"said one. Sakura heard this and thought 'Oh my gosh! They heard me? Say what I said!?' Sakura started worrying.
Sakura stopped running straightned out her hair and her dress then slowly and elegantly walked in the main room. Prince Derrick sat in his chair. Sakura could tell somthing was troubeling him. 'This is it.' thought Sakura. 'There going to have me and Li killed.' Sakura walked over to the prince. "Wh-what is it?"asked Sakura.
"My dear sweet Sakura. The maids have told me that you..."said the prince as Sakura inturrupted "I'M SORRY! I'LL NEVER DO IT AGAIN!"said Sakura fastly. "My dear Sakura...allow me to finish my sentences...you musnt do that...Now...the maids have told me you aren't fit to be my wife...because you run in public,but your different around me. My dear you must promise me that no matter what you will not run! "said the prince as her grabbed her hand gentely.
"I'm sorry...I won't do it again."Sakura felt her heart slow down. She was ok. "Thank-you my dear. Now why don't we go in the garden so that I may bid fare well to you before I leave and...I'm sorry but the King and Queen are head of the place...and therefore while I am gone my parents advisor is second in command in ruleing over our wing...I'm sorry but my parents won't allow you to."said Derrick. "It's ok."said Sakura. "Thats why I love you...cuse your so understanding."said Derrick.
Derrick got up and leaded Sakura gentely by her hand to the garden. There he sat on a bench. "I belive I am the only one who knows about this garden. You will be safe to hide here if anyone is cruel to you. And if they are please tell me and I will have them instantley put to death,as long as there not me or my parents."said the prince.
"Thank-you Derrick."said Sakura. Derrick frowned. "You know you are not allowed,ever,to call me by my name...But it's ok since were not in public...But you'd better get used to calling me prince."said the prince. "I'm sorry prince.."said Sakura. "It's alright my love."said Derrick. Derrick kissed Sakura then left her alone in the garden. "Fare the well my love."he called behind himself. "Fare the well."said Sakura. Derrick dissapered into the castle.
"Hi my love."said Li. Sakura whipped around to see Li. "Where were you hidding?"asked Sakura. "I followed you two here then I hid in the bushes over there."said Li as he pointed to some bushes. The bushes had pink hearts on them.
Sakura smiled. "Well were all alone...(****theres no one here beside me...my troubles have all gone...theres no one here to deride meee...but you gotta have friends...uh sorry about that =^.^=****) here."said Sakura. "Wanna...uhm...play a game?"asked Li. "What kind of game...uhm..."Sakura said as she poked Li in the arm then ran a little. "Tag!"said Sakura. Li shruged then followed her.
Sakura and Li were heaving when they finished playing. Sakura fell backwards on the ground. "I love you."whispered Sakura in Li's ear. Li whispered the same thing to Sakura. "You know i'm second in comand on the prince's wing of the castle right now..."said Sakura.
"Why not first.?"asked Li. "Cuse the King and Queen don't trust me..."said Sakura. Li stood up and started to leave. "I can't get fired right now so i'd better keep the fires lit...will you make sure no one is looking when I leave?"asked Li. "Sure."said Sakura.
Sakura walked up to the entrence and looked both ways up and down the hall way. "Alright it's clear."said Sakura. Li left the garden with Sakura following. Li walked to Derrick's room to light the fire and Sakura walked to her room.
Sakura plopped on her bed. She had a dreamy look in her eyes. 'He's such a sweet heart.' thought Sakura out loud. "Who is a sweet heart?"asked The advisor. "Derrick of course."said Sakura. She knew if she said Li she would be in trouble so she lied and said Derrick.
"I saw you and that peasant leave the garden."said the advisor. "And I saw him sneak in."finished the advisor. "And who are you to be goiong in my room and asking me questions? I'll tell Derrick if you don't stop being like this!"said Sakura angrily knowing she was in a courner with his questions.
"I wanted to make sure I was right...that you...I am sure your cheating on the prince!"said the advisor. "Alright I'll answer your question. The peasant snuck in cuse he was going to ask me if my fire was out cuse he didn't want to intrude into my room like you sir have done! And we left like that because I thought he might have gotten in trouble for going into the secret garden."said Sakura. She was a good lier and so he seemed to buy the lie.
"I'm on to you!"said the advisor as he left. Sakura closed her door behing him after she yelled "Your not welcome in my room again...or I'll tell the prince...You BEAST of a man!" Sakura did not apretiate his rudeness or how suspitious he was. She was going to tell the prince about this and the man would lose his head!
Sakura sighed in releif. 'What a beast.' she thought out loud. 'I might get caught.' thought Sakura in her head. Sakura was afraid of dieing cuse of love. 'What an awfull thing love can be!' She thought.
Sakura got up and walked to the kitchen. She was hungry so she thought she would et a snack. On her way she saw the advisor talking with another advisor. 'I think that he's telling the other..'thought Sakura.
Sakura knew she was in for it but as long as they didn't catch them kissing or huging or talking she was fine. But she didn't want to have to stay away from her only true love it just wasnt right! It didn't even seem right.
Sakura was now entering the kitchen. The cook had fallen asleep in the corner. Sakura walked over to the cook and lightly tapped him. The cook opned one eye and looked at Sakura. He then jumped to his feet.
"I's sorry pre-princess...it won't happen again...please don't hurt me! I have a family and three kids...I___"said the cook. Sakura interupted him. "It's alright...but could I have some rice balls?"asked Sakura. "Oh thank-you thank-you thank-you pre-princess...your so kind!"said the cook. He then started the rice balls.
Sakura sat in a chair,patiently watching him cook. After about 10 minutes he handed her a plate. "Here you are dear princess,I thank-you for your understanding." said the cook as he took a bow in frount of Sakura.
Sakura walked to her room holding a plate full of the rice balls. When Sakura entered her room she sat on her bed and began to eat. The rice balls were great! But she felt lonely. She longed to be a peasant again so that she might be able to hug and love Li. She didn't like haveing to cheat on the prince so that she could be with Li. The fact that she was to marry Derrick made her hate him.
'How dare the man! How dare he trick me into thinking I love him! How dare he keep me from loveing Li!' Sakura thought,The hate grew stronger the more she thought about haveing to marry the prince. The fact that she had to walk,eat,talk,act,and even lie so that she was polite and princess like.
If somone insulted her she had to tell the prince no matter what. The person's head would be cut off if they hit on her or do anything not nice to her. And if somone loved her and she returned the act...She would be killed as well as the man...as long as the prince wanted the girl too marry him. She was trapped...she had no choice but to marry Derrick...mainly because she was afraid to die.
Sakura finished her snack then returned the plate to the kitchen. On her way back Li waved at her. Sakura waved back reluctantley. She didn't want to be caught contacting a peasant. She didn't want to die.
Sakura sadly walked back to her room. She didn't want Li to know that no matter what they couldn't get married no matter how much she wanted to marry him. 'Sometimes life can make you do things you don't want to do.' she thought sadly. 'And sometimes life can be the pits.' A line she remembered from a book she read.
(****one of my favorite lines that I thought of! And isn't it sad...Li and her can't be together... Oh well let's see what happens!****)
To Be Continued!
Hope you liked the chapter! =^.^=
Please R+R!
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Lady Sutaa
Lady Sutaa
Yay!! A least it wasn't a cliffhanger ne? lol.. hey if u want to im, it's Lady Sutaa n my email is at BlossomMistress@netscape.net email me if u like. n if u want i'll be ur friend! keep continuing! jaa ne.
*~*Lady Sutaa*~*
MY REPLY
YUP ME NO LIKE CLIFFHANGERS! So I am nice and don't (usually) make them...but I like scaring people! =^.~= Did I scare you? And I will make sure I e-mail you...OF COURSE! Alright well thank-you for both your reviews! They mean so much to me! *Hugs you* thanks!
Brittney
i love this story so far... i wonder what happens? well i'm dyin to know. hope you get another chapter up soon
MY REPLY
Your dieing ay....I'd better hurry then! And thank-you so much for reviewing you know...this reminds me when I had to go to the bathroom at the park and...Ok i'm sorry I'll get back to the subject....but the bathrooms were locked =^.~= Ok sorry I do not know why that came up from me....OH WELL! Oh yes and...uhm...THANKS! *Hugs you till you faint* Hee hee...OOPS! lol =^.^=
aria
the first chapter reminded me of the begining of the book Just Ella, the fic is good write more soon please
MY REPLY
Know why it reminded you of it..........
Cuse I read up to the 2nd chapter in that book and thats were I got the idea.... =^.^= Sorry....But hey thanks for the review. *advances toward you to hug you* *Stops dead in tracks* You Know your STINKY! actuley not really...but I had to make fun of something. *looks down* Do you forgive me? *Gets on hands and knees* PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE. *starts dancing* B.I.NGO B.I.NGO B.I.NGO AND BINGO WAS HIS NAMEO! everybody now...uh every body? *here cricket noises* Anyone? Hello? uh...sorry...?
Alright heres what hapned last...
"I love you to...I fell in love with a peasant...And i'm suppose to marry a prince"said Sakura sadly. "I'ts alright...I bet that...well...we can still...date."said Li. "But then i'd be cheating on the prince. "Who cares?"said Li. "Well...alright!"said Sakura.
Alright here goes!
"Sakura!"yelled the prince. "Sakura ran out of the room. Li was watching her run. 'What a girl' he thought 'What a girl' "I'M COMING!"yelled Sakura. The maids watched her laughing. "I think she got caught!"said one. Sakura heard this and thought 'Oh my gosh! They heard me? Say what I said!?' Sakura started worrying.
Sakura stopped running straightned out her hair and her dress then slowly and elegantly walked in the main room. Prince Derrick sat in his chair. Sakura could tell somthing was troubeling him. 'This is it.' thought Sakura. 'There going to have me and Li killed.' Sakura walked over to the prince. "Wh-what is it?"asked Sakura.
"My dear sweet Sakura. The maids have told me that you..."said the prince as Sakura inturrupted "I'M SORRY! I'LL NEVER DO IT AGAIN!"said Sakura fastly. "My dear Sakura...allow me to finish my sentences...you musnt do that...Now...the maids have told me you aren't fit to be my wife...because you run in public,but your different around me. My dear you must promise me that no matter what you will not run! "said the prince as her grabbed her hand gentely.
"I'm sorry...I won't do it again."Sakura felt her heart slow down. She was ok. "Thank-you my dear. Now why don't we go in the garden so that I may bid fare well to you before I leave and...I'm sorry but the King and Queen are head of the place...and therefore while I am gone my parents advisor is second in command in ruleing over our wing...I'm sorry but my parents won't allow you to."said Derrick. "It's ok."said Sakura. "Thats why I love you...cuse your so understanding."said Derrick.
Derrick got up and leaded Sakura gentely by her hand to the garden. There he sat on a bench. "I belive I am the only one who knows about this garden. You will be safe to hide here if anyone is cruel to you. And if they are please tell me and I will have them instantley put to death,as long as there not me or my parents."said the prince.
"Thank-you Derrick."said Sakura. Derrick frowned. "You know you are not allowed,ever,to call me by my name...But it's ok since were not in public...But you'd better get used to calling me prince."said the prince. "I'm sorry prince.."said Sakura. "It's alright my love."said Derrick. Derrick kissed Sakura then left her alone in the garden. "Fare the well my love."he called behind himself. "Fare the well."said Sakura. Derrick dissapered into the castle.
"Hi my love."said Li. Sakura whipped around to see Li. "Where were you hidding?"asked Sakura. "I followed you two here then I hid in the bushes over there."said Li as he pointed to some bushes. The bushes had pink hearts on them.
Sakura smiled. "Well were all alone...(****theres no one here beside me...my troubles have all gone...theres no one here to deride meee...but you gotta have friends...uh sorry about that =^.^=****) here."said Sakura. "Wanna...uhm...play a game?"asked Li. "What kind of game...uhm..."Sakura said as she poked Li in the arm then ran a little. "Tag!"said Sakura. Li shruged then followed her.
Sakura and Li were heaving when they finished playing. Sakura fell backwards on the ground. "I love you."whispered Sakura in Li's ear. Li whispered the same thing to Sakura. "You know i'm second in comand on the prince's wing of the castle right now..."said Sakura.
"Why not first.?"asked Li. "Cuse the King and Queen don't trust me..."said Sakura. Li stood up and started to leave. "I can't get fired right now so i'd better keep the fires lit...will you make sure no one is looking when I leave?"asked Li. "Sure."said Sakura.
Sakura walked up to the entrence and looked both ways up and down the hall way. "Alright it's clear."said Sakura. Li left the garden with Sakura following. Li walked to Derrick's room to light the fire and Sakura walked to her room.
Sakura plopped on her bed. She had a dreamy look in her eyes. 'He's such a sweet heart.' thought Sakura out loud. "Who is a sweet heart?"asked The advisor. "Derrick of course."said Sakura. She knew if she said Li she would be in trouble so she lied and said Derrick.
"I saw you and that peasant leave the garden."said the advisor. "And I saw him sneak in."finished the advisor. "And who are you to be goiong in my room and asking me questions? I'll tell Derrick if you don't stop being like this!"said Sakura angrily knowing she was in a courner with his questions.
"I wanted to make sure I was right...that you...I am sure your cheating on the prince!"said the advisor. "Alright I'll answer your question. The peasant snuck in cuse he was going to ask me if my fire was out cuse he didn't want to intrude into my room like you sir have done! And we left like that because I thought he might have gotten in trouble for going into the secret garden."said Sakura. She was a good lier and so he seemed to buy the lie.
"I'm on to you!"said the advisor as he left. Sakura closed her door behing him after she yelled "Your not welcome in my room again...or I'll tell the prince...You BEAST of a man!" Sakura did not apretiate his rudeness or how suspitious he was. She was going to tell the prince about this and the man would lose his head!
Sakura sighed in releif. 'What a beast.' she thought out loud. 'I might get caught.' thought Sakura in her head. Sakura was afraid of dieing cuse of love. 'What an awfull thing love can be!' She thought.
Sakura got up and walked to the kitchen. She was hungry so she thought she would et a snack. On her way she saw the advisor talking with another advisor. 'I think that he's telling the other..'thought Sakura.
Sakura knew she was in for it but as long as they didn't catch them kissing or huging or talking she was fine. But she didn't want to have to stay away from her only true love it just wasnt right! It didn't even seem right.
Sakura was now entering the kitchen. The cook had fallen asleep in the corner. Sakura walked over to the cook and lightly tapped him. The cook opned one eye and looked at Sakura. He then jumped to his feet.
"I's sorry pre-princess...it won't happen again...please don't hurt me! I have a family and three kids...I___"said the cook. Sakura interupted him. "It's alright...but could I have some rice balls?"asked Sakura. "Oh thank-you thank-you thank-you pre-princess...your so kind!"said the cook. He then started the rice balls.
Sakura sat in a chair,patiently watching him cook. After about 10 minutes he handed her a plate. "Here you are dear princess,I thank-you for your understanding." said the cook as he took a bow in frount of Sakura.
Sakura walked to her room holding a plate full of the rice balls. When Sakura entered her room she sat on her bed and began to eat. The rice balls were great! But she felt lonely. She longed to be a peasant again so that she might be able to hug and love Li. She didn't like haveing to cheat on the prince so that she could be with Li. The fact that she was to marry Derrick made her hate him.
'How dare the man! How dare he trick me into thinking I love him! How dare he keep me from loveing Li!' Sakura thought,The hate grew stronger the more she thought about haveing to marry the prince. The fact that she had to walk,eat,talk,act,and even lie so that she was polite and princess like.
If somone insulted her she had to tell the prince no matter what. The person's head would be cut off if they hit on her or do anything not nice to her. And if somone loved her and she returned the act...She would be killed as well as the man...as long as the prince wanted the girl too marry him. She was trapped...she had no choice but to marry Derrick...mainly because she was afraid to die.
Sakura finished her snack then returned the plate to the kitchen. On her way back Li waved at her. Sakura waved back reluctantley. She didn't want to be caught contacting a peasant. She didn't want to die.
Sakura sadly walked back to her room. She didn't want Li to know that no matter what they couldn't get married no matter how much she wanted to marry him. 'Sometimes life can make you do things you don't want to do.' she thought sadly. 'And sometimes life can be the pits.' A line she remembered from a book she read.
(****one of my favorite lines that I thought of! And isn't it sad...Li and her can't be together... Oh well let's see what happens!****)
To Be Continued!
Hope you liked the chapter! =^.^=
Please R+R!