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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
brittney (bublzrle@aol.com)
oh my god! i loved chapter 3 too! i hope sakura and derrick don't get married...well i'm just gonna have to wait. defenataly can't wait till' the 4th chapter.
MY REPLY
Dosn't everyone not want Derrick and Sakura to get married,although he's nice and all...he just dosn't fit in Sakura's life. Looks like she's gunna get caught now dosn't it.
Lady Suta
ahhh...poor Sakura n Syaoran. Keep up the nice work! u sure upload fast! bye
MY REPLY
I know they can't get married and Sakura's afraid that she might have to die...And yes i do upload fast but usually only on weekends cuse school days i'm busy doing homework and hanging with my friends...etc...
Aimee (Aimee_777@msn.com)
WOW! I am really glad you e-mailed that to me!!! You have got to write more!!! That's great!! Keep up the good work!
MY REPLY
I thought I might tell you cuse you sorta flamed a different fic so i thought you would be truly honest with my fic! Thank-you for likeing it! *hugz you* hey...at least somone listens to my e-mails that ask to read my fic. =^.~= thanx for reading my fic!
Dr Megalomania
Ticki-ti-boo!
here's your review!
it's a great story and i hope you contine!
i'm running out of ryhming words so here i go, mou!
DrM
MY REPLY
Uh are you alright? the rhyming stuff is just plain weird!
Re-o-ko
very good! i would relly like to know what happens between S+S!! keep going
MY REPLY
Thank-you *bows* and what happens to them is locked in my head and wont be revealed till the 6th chapter...i think...? uh...bwah ha ha haw!
Izuya Iris
What a cute story !! ^_^ Work hard on the next chapter nee?
MY REPLY
Hi! Glad you liked my story...well now...OF COARSE I AM GOING TO CONTINUE don't worry! Me will continue!
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
Alright what hapned last...
'Sometimes life can make you do things you don't want to do.' she thought sadly. 'And sometimes life can be the pits.' A line she remembered from a book she read.
Here goes!
Sakura sighed sadly. She really didn't want to marry Derrick. And now, almost everyone in the castle is going to know, she was dead before she knew it. And poor Li would die with her she just knew it.
Sakura walked down the long narrow hallway. She then sat on a chair in the garden. She knew she was going to be caught one way or another so she thought she would enjoy the garden while she could.
The advisor walked in looking very angry. "Look you little brat,I'm on to you! Even if no one belives me...your cheating on the prince and you will lose your head for it!"yelled the advisor at Sakura. Sakura stared at him inocentley.
The advisor hit Sakura across the cheek. "If I ever catch you cheating on the prince again it will be a harder hit. Sakura held her cheek and struggled not to cry. Her cheek felt hot from the pain. "I will kill you! Even if I die for it!"yelled the advisor.
Sakura tried to get away from him but he just grabbed her arm. "You aren't going anywhere you witch!"screamed the advisor. He grabbed Sakura's wrists in one hand and pulled her hair back with the other. Sakura was wailing in pain.
"Who the heck do you thinl you are?"asked the advisor. Sakura just cried and kicked and squirmed. The advisor let go of her and kicked her in the back. Sakura fell to the ground on all fours. She tried to kick him. The man laughed evily. "Some day I will show my true form...only then will I over power you and that slave to the point where you both die!"yelled the advisor. Before he left the room he kicked Sakura in the stomach.
Sakura puked up blood. She then ran battered and bruised to her room. She was badly bleeding and her once beautiful light blue dress had grass staines on it and mud stains. Sakura got into her room. She felt so dizzy. She then puked up blood again then plopped over in a faint.
Li entered the room to lit her fire when he saw a blood stain on the carpet and a almost dead fainted Sakura. Li screamed in horror then he left to go tell the staff. The staff entered the room in horror.
Sakura got put in a bed where specialists where watching over Sakura's heath. Sakura had a black eye a broken arm and leg. Her ankle was fractured and she had some internal injuries.
Li came to visit Sakura,and she was up. "Li...I need you to...to promise that you won't stop loving me even in my death."Sakura said this in a quiet voice. "Don't worry...I'll love you forever."replied Li. "Good..."Sakura breathed her last then clossed her eyes. Sakura died right then and there.
The doctors all ran in the room trying to get her to breath. "Someone call her back or she'll die!"called a doctor. "Li walked to Sakura's side worry in his eyes. "Sakura I...you can't die you have to do stuff in your life...PLEASE come back!"cried out Li. No one noticed the fear in his eyes or the single tear that trickled down his cheek.
"She's coming back!"cried a doctor. Li whipped his tear before anyone could see it. Sakura slowly started breathing then the doctors sighed. The doctors then left the room. Li stayed in. "Sakura...I love you to much for you to die."cried Li as he hugged Sakura. Sakura just slowly inhaled then replied "Don't worry when I heard the fright in your voice I instantly wanted to come back...and I did."
Li sighed in relief. Whoever had done this to his Cherry Blossom was going to pay in there death! 'How dare that idiot!' though Li angrily in his head. Sakura slowly drifted off in a a peacful sleep.
Li exited the room slowly to go lit the fire places, he couldn't understand why anyone would want to hurt her...She never did anything before. And surely it couldn't be a maid. Then it hit him. 'It has to be somone high in command...but who?' he thought.
Sakura peacfuly slept in her bed. It was 9:00 p.m and Li had just entered the room. "Sakura..."whispered Li. Sakura slightly woke up. "How are you fealing?"asked Li. "I hurt every place immaginable."said Sakura softly. Li aproached her holding a cherry blossom. "I got you your favorite flower."said Li.
Sakura slowly grabbed it. She then smelled it. "I..."said Sakura softly. She begane to cry. "I'm ugly ...and... I... can't smell the flower."Sakura lightly said. She started to cry softly. "Oh Sakura that's not true...your always beautiful."said Li softly. Li whipped a tear from her eye. "Really...?"said Sakura. "Always."replied Li.
Sakura gave a have smile then moaned in pain. "Can't smile with out hurting myself."said Sakura. "That's alright...who did this to you though?"asked Li. "I...it was a man...the advisor..."replied Sakura slowly. Li sat up slowly. "I have some scores to settle...be back soon."said Li.
Li ran through the hallways. He was going to try to get a hold of the King and Queen and let them know what the advisor had done. Li ran the las tpart of the hallway on th prince's wing. He then turned the courner. Some guards were blocking the entrence to the royal room.
Li ran up to the guards. "I need to see th King and Queen now!"said Li. "I'm sorry,only autherized personal allowed."said the guard. (****dosent that remind you of the I'm sorry but you have been disconected on the phone or the AUTHORIZED PERSONAL ONLY sighns? sorry...****) Li waved his hands franticley. "But it's important!"said Li. "I told you...you can not enter."said the guard. L i shook his head. How was he going to tell the King and Queen now?
(****TO BE CONTINUED****)
Hope you liked the chapter =^.^= When I saw how many people reviewed I was like I'D BETTER UPDATE IT SOON! and therefore I did! I hope you have been reading my replys to your reviews! =^.~=
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
brittney (bublzrle@aol.com)
oh my god! i loved chapter 3 too! i hope sakura and derrick don't get married...well i'm just gonna have to wait. defenataly can't wait till' the 4th chapter.
MY REPLY
Dosn't everyone not want Derrick and Sakura to get married,although he's nice and all...he just dosn't fit in Sakura's life. Looks like she's gunna get caught now dosn't it.
Lady Suta
ahhh...poor Sakura n Syaoran. Keep up the nice work! u sure upload fast! bye
MY REPLY
I know they can't get married and Sakura's afraid that she might have to die...And yes i do upload fast but usually only on weekends cuse school days i'm busy doing homework and hanging with my friends...etc...
Aimee (Aimee_777@msn.com)
WOW! I am really glad you e-mailed that to me!!! You have got to write more!!! That's great!! Keep up the good work!
MY REPLY
I thought I might tell you cuse you sorta flamed a different fic so i thought you would be truly honest with my fic! Thank-you for likeing it! *hugz you* hey...at least somone listens to my e-mails that ask to read my fic. =^.~= thanx for reading my fic!
Dr Megalomania
Ticki-ti-boo!
here's your review!
it's a great story and i hope you contine!
i'm running out of ryhming words so here i go, mou!
DrM
MY REPLY
Uh are you alright? the rhyming stuff is just plain weird!
Re-o-ko
very good! i would relly like to know what happens between S+S!! keep going
MY REPLY
Thank-you *bows* and what happens to them is locked in my head and wont be revealed till the 6th chapter...i think...? uh...bwah ha ha haw!
Izuya Iris
What a cute story !! ^_^ Work hard on the next chapter nee?
MY REPLY
Hi! Glad you liked my story...well now...OF COARSE I AM GOING TO CONTINUE don't worry! Me will continue!
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
Alright what hapned last...
'Sometimes life can make you do things you don't want to do.' she thought sadly. 'And sometimes life can be the pits.' A line she remembered from a book she read.
Here goes!
Sakura sighed sadly. She really didn't want to marry Derrick. And now, almost everyone in the castle is going to know, she was dead before she knew it. And poor Li would die with her she just knew it.
Sakura walked down the long narrow hallway. She then sat on a chair in the garden. She knew she was going to be caught one way or another so she thought she would enjoy the garden while she could.
The advisor walked in looking very angry. "Look you little brat,I'm on to you! Even if no one belives me...your cheating on the prince and you will lose your head for it!"yelled the advisor at Sakura. Sakura stared at him inocentley.
The advisor hit Sakura across the cheek. "If I ever catch you cheating on the prince again it will be a harder hit. Sakura held her cheek and struggled not to cry. Her cheek felt hot from the pain. "I will kill you! Even if I die for it!"yelled the advisor.
Sakura tried to get away from him but he just grabbed her arm. "You aren't going anywhere you witch!"screamed the advisor. He grabbed Sakura's wrists in one hand and pulled her hair back with the other. Sakura was wailing in pain.
"Who the heck do you thinl you are?"asked the advisor. Sakura just cried and kicked and squirmed. The advisor let go of her and kicked her in the back. Sakura fell to the ground on all fours. She tried to kick him. The man laughed evily. "Some day I will show my true form...only then will I over power you and that slave to the point where you both die!"yelled the advisor. Before he left the room he kicked Sakura in the stomach.
Sakura puked up blood. She then ran battered and bruised to her room. She was badly bleeding and her once beautiful light blue dress had grass staines on it and mud stains. Sakura got into her room. She felt so dizzy. She then puked up blood again then plopped over in a faint.
Li entered the room to lit her fire when he saw a blood stain on the carpet and a almost dead fainted Sakura. Li screamed in horror then he left to go tell the staff. The staff entered the room in horror.
Sakura got put in a bed where specialists where watching over Sakura's heath. Sakura had a black eye a broken arm and leg. Her ankle was fractured and she had some internal injuries.
Li came to visit Sakura,and she was up. "Li...I need you to...to promise that you won't stop loving me even in my death."Sakura said this in a quiet voice. "Don't worry...I'll love you forever."replied Li. "Good..."Sakura breathed her last then clossed her eyes. Sakura died right then and there.
The doctors all ran in the room trying to get her to breath. "Someone call her back or she'll die!"called a doctor. "Li walked to Sakura's side worry in his eyes. "Sakura I...you can't die you have to do stuff in your life...PLEASE come back!"cried out Li. No one noticed the fear in his eyes or the single tear that trickled down his cheek.
"She's coming back!"cried a doctor. Li whipped his tear before anyone could see it. Sakura slowly started breathing then the doctors sighed. The doctors then left the room. Li stayed in. "Sakura...I love you to much for you to die."cried Li as he hugged Sakura. Sakura just slowly inhaled then replied "Don't worry when I heard the fright in your voice I instantly wanted to come back...and I did."
Li sighed in relief. Whoever had done this to his Cherry Blossom was going to pay in there death! 'How dare that idiot!' though Li angrily in his head. Sakura slowly drifted off in a a peacful sleep.
Li exited the room slowly to go lit the fire places, he couldn't understand why anyone would want to hurt her...She never did anything before. And surely it couldn't be a maid. Then it hit him. 'It has to be somone high in command...but who?' he thought.
Sakura peacfuly slept in her bed. It was 9:00 p.m and Li had just entered the room. "Sakura..."whispered Li. Sakura slightly woke up. "How are you fealing?"asked Li. "I hurt every place immaginable."said Sakura softly. Li aproached her holding a cherry blossom. "I got you your favorite flower."said Li.
Sakura slowly grabbed it. She then smelled it. "I..."said Sakura softly. She begane to cry. "I'm ugly ...and... I... can't smell the flower."Sakura lightly said. She started to cry softly. "Oh Sakura that's not true...your always beautiful."said Li softly. Li whipped a tear from her eye. "Really...?"said Sakura. "Always."replied Li.
Sakura gave a have smile then moaned in pain. "Can't smile with out hurting myself."said Sakura. "That's alright...who did this to you though?"asked Li. "I...it was a man...the advisor..."replied Sakura slowly. Li sat up slowly. "I have some scores to settle...be back soon."said Li.
Li ran through the hallways. He was going to try to get a hold of the King and Queen and let them know what the advisor had done. Li ran the las tpart of the hallway on th prince's wing. He then turned the courner. Some guards were blocking the entrence to the royal room.
Li ran up to the guards. "I need to see th King and Queen now!"said Li. "I'm sorry,only autherized personal allowed."said the guard. (****dosent that remind you of the I'm sorry but you have been disconected on the phone or the AUTHORIZED PERSONAL ONLY sighns? sorry...****) Li waved his hands franticley. "But it's important!"said Li. "I told you...you can not enter."said the guard. L i shook his head. How was he going to tell the King and Queen now?
(****TO BE CONTINUED****)
Hope you liked the chapter =^.^= When I saw how many people reviewed I was like I'D BETTER UPDATE IT SOON! and therefore I did! I hope you have been reading my replys to your reviews! =^.~=