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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Lady Sutaa
oh thanks for telling me that u updated!!! that was mean for the advisior to do that!! they could cut off his head for hurting a princess like that! O.o; now look at the ppl that review your stoy! it's geting very exciting! i don't need to say more cause u will upload quickly! this is the first time a wrote a lot!!!lol. bye
*Lady Sutaa*
MY REPLY
*Gasps* And at least SOMEONE thanks me for the e-mails I send which take 10 minutes to get to everyone! *smiles evily* Of course the idiot is...NO I WON'T SPOIL THE PLOT! *laughs evily* interesting? INTERESTING?? Well of coarse it is! hee hee me going to write to much so me better stop now!
Izuya Iris
*cheers for Li* Go get that stupid advisor!!! anyways, pls kill those stupid ppl(advisor and the guard) for me ^_^ ?
MY REPLY
Stupid people...well in this chapter one shouldn't be rooted for to be killed...am i right? or am i just plain right? *smiles evily* you'll have to wait for who dies and who lives!
brittney
this chapter was wonderful! it was kinda sad.. i hope li tells the king and queen. keep it comin'.
MY REPLY.
No...I think i'll end my story here *cackles evily* ok im not that mean...well mabe! and yes sad it is...*sobs* fake crying...i'm so good at it...am i right or am i right!
Star Princess ssc
Hey kit! Sorry for not reviewing earlier…. too darn busy with midterms!! _
MY REPLY
Notice how i corrected your foreighn languge to darn =^.^= hee hee! but it r ok...me no expect any...proper treatment from people...that ok me no cry! me happy little dork who couldn't speak right in public for nothing! But thank-you for FINALLY reviewing...did you see my last funny review? My friends got a kick out of it...oh yes and...uh sorry...I better shut-up now! Bye star princess ssc whatever your name is! =^.^=
PLEASE read every one of the replys even if it's not your own! IT TAKES ME A WHILE TO THINK OF SOME WITTY THING TO SAY! *sobs* and no one ever thanks me *cries harder* Should I stop replying? Should I not make my mn's? (my notes) BYE YOU MEAN PEOPLE (JOKEING JOKEING! I WOULD NEVER SAY THAT!) *Smiles evily* Bye!
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
What hapned last
Li ran up to the guards. "I need to see th King and Queen now!"said Li. "I'm sorry,only autherized personal allowed."said the guard. Li waved his hands franticley. "But it's important!"said Li. "I told you...you can not enter."said the guard. L i shook his head. How was he going to tell the King and Queen now?
Here goes!
Li sat on the ground. He wasn't going to leave untill he saw the King and Queen! The guards watched him sit in the same spot,hardly moving for hours! It was now 9:00 and Li was going to be extra late at lighting the fires...Mabe even fiered.
The guards were starting to soften. "It must be important."whispered one guard to the other. "Yeah...Why don't we let him in...What harm could he do with those guards near the King and Queen?"whispered the other. Tho two guards nodded then lifted the half asleep Li to his feet.
"You may go in sir."said the guard. Li jumped up then ran in the room. The King and Queen were sitting on there thrones when he entered. They both looked shocked. The Queen was a gorgous lady, she had light black wavy hair and green eyes. The King had Dark brown hair and Brown eyes.
Li ran up to the throne. "Sakura has been hurt badly by a..."Li said. The Queen inturupted. "Sa-Sakura...?"she asked curiously. "Yeah she's been hurt by..."said Li. The Queen inturrupted again. "What does the dear look like?"asked The Queen asked.
"She has light brown hair and emerald green eyes."said Li as he sighed. The Queen gasped. (****Can you guess why? please write in your review if you knew by now.****) Li stared at her with question in his eyes. The Queen looked at her husband and he nodded. The Queen got off her throne. "Can I see my daughter,Sakura?"aske the Queen. Li gasped.
The Queen was watching Li. Li was sorting this out...He then wrinkled his nose. "Queen...your son is about to marry your daughter."said Li. "Oh...my! Not Tory!?"said the Queen. "No...Derrick."said Li. "Oh him...he's a cousin to the kingdom...He rules here because his parents died...It's alright if they want to marry."said the Queen. Li sighed. He knew it was to good to be true.
Li lead the Queen to the intensive care room in the hospital wing. When the Queen saw her daughter she gasped. Tears formed in her eyes. "Who did this to my baby?"said the Queen in horror. "The advisor you put in charge of Derrick's wing."replied Li. Anger mixed with sadness as the Queen knelt by her daughter. "My daughter was taken away and given to a different family by a robber. The robber was latter killed. We had tried to get him to say where he left my baby but he refused to say. Even when we said we would murder him if he didn't."said the Queen. "Did you here that honey?"asked the Queen.
Sakura made a small moan as she nodded yes. "I loved you some much, you were my only daughter and I loved you very much."said The Queen (****understanding yet? she's alive in my story...you know Nadishiko Sakura's mommy...don't know her engilish name so...yeah....sorry...****) Sakura slowly turned to her side. The Queen sighed. "I'll just have to behead that man...if he ever pulls off somthing like this again. The Queen walked away but not before thanking Li and telling the Doctors to use the best equptment on her.
Li shook his head. 'Nice lady...but really airheaded. She should have had him beheaded when she was told.' Li knew she was only giving the man a second chance. 'And to think my angel is a princess!'
Derrick had gotten back latter that day. Derrick freaked when he found out that she was a princess and who had beat her practically to death. He had also freaked when he found out the man was still alive...
(((((((((((((((((A MONTH LATTER)))))))))))))))
Sakura had recovered fully and was back to her lovely self.** in the garden** Sakura was talking with Li happily. "So...what was it like in intensive care?"asked Li. "Well your poked and probed, you have more tubes in you then you can count...your in pain all the time...Oh yes and if I am right more men have seen my butt in one 5 weeks then in my entire life!"said Sakura, that last part in a jokeing voice. Li started to laugh at the last part.
Sakura was still a little sore and she was still her funny,normal self. This is why Li had fallen in love with her. "Hey Li, Could you...would you take me through town...so I could see my parents...that raised me all those years?"asked Sakura. She had her best puppy dog eyes on and it was hard for Li to reply no. Finally he reluctantley said yes.
Sakura got dressed up and followed Li ouotside. The air was nice and sunny. The sun beat down on Sakura,since it was now getting close to the end of Summer it was blazeing hot. Sakura fanned herself a little as they walked,they soon aproached town.
(****TO BE CONTINUED****)
DO YOU LIKE MY MN'S (MY NOTES) I HOPE THEY DON'T BUG YOU. =^.~= Well I hope that wasn't much of a cliffhanger. And now my story should be longer then I thought it would be...but that is ok...right?
Well I'm planning on updateing everyday so BEWARE mwah haa haa haaww!!! =^.^=
Bye now!
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Lady Sutaa
oh thanks for telling me that u updated!!! that was mean for the advisior to do that!! they could cut off his head for hurting a princess like that! O.o; now look at the ppl that review your stoy! it's geting very exciting! i don't need to say more cause u will upload quickly! this is the first time a wrote a lot!!!lol. bye
*Lady Sutaa*
MY REPLY
*Gasps* And at least SOMEONE thanks me for the e-mails I send which take 10 minutes to get to everyone! *smiles evily* Of course the idiot is...NO I WON'T SPOIL THE PLOT! *laughs evily* interesting? INTERESTING?? Well of coarse it is! hee hee me going to write to much so me better stop now!
Izuya Iris
*cheers for Li* Go get that stupid advisor!!! anyways, pls kill those stupid ppl(advisor and the guard) for me ^_^ ?
MY REPLY
Stupid people...well in this chapter one shouldn't be rooted for to be killed...am i right? or am i just plain right? *smiles evily* you'll have to wait for who dies and who lives!
brittney
this chapter was wonderful! it was kinda sad.. i hope li tells the king and queen. keep it comin'.
MY REPLY.
No...I think i'll end my story here *cackles evily* ok im not that mean...well mabe! and yes sad it is...*sobs* fake crying...i'm so good at it...am i right or am i right!
Star Princess ssc
Hey kit! Sorry for not reviewing earlier…. too darn busy with midterms!! _
MY REPLY
Notice how i corrected your foreighn languge to darn =^.^= hee hee! but it r ok...me no expect any...proper treatment from people...that ok me no cry! me happy little dork who couldn't speak right in public for nothing! But thank-you for FINALLY reviewing...did you see my last funny review? My friends got a kick out of it...oh yes and...uh sorry...I better shut-up now! Bye star princess ssc whatever your name is! =^.^=
PLEASE read every one of the replys even if it's not your own! IT TAKES ME A WHILE TO THINK OF SOME WITTY THING TO SAY! *sobs* and no one ever thanks me *cries harder* Should I stop replying? Should I not make my mn's? (my notes) BYE YOU MEAN PEOPLE (JOKEING JOKEING! I WOULD NEVER SAY THAT!) *Smiles evily* Bye!
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
What hapned last
Li ran up to the guards. "I need to see th King and Queen now!"said Li. "I'm sorry,only autherized personal allowed."said the guard. Li waved his hands franticley. "But it's important!"said Li. "I told you...you can not enter."said the guard. L i shook his head. How was he going to tell the King and Queen now?
Here goes!
Li sat on the ground. He wasn't going to leave untill he saw the King and Queen! The guards watched him sit in the same spot,hardly moving for hours! It was now 9:00 and Li was going to be extra late at lighting the fires...Mabe even fiered.
The guards were starting to soften. "It must be important."whispered one guard to the other. "Yeah...Why don't we let him in...What harm could he do with those guards near the King and Queen?"whispered the other. Tho two guards nodded then lifted the half asleep Li to his feet.
"You may go in sir."said the guard. Li jumped up then ran in the room. The King and Queen were sitting on there thrones when he entered. They both looked shocked. The Queen was a gorgous lady, she had light black wavy hair and green eyes. The King had Dark brown hair and Brown eyes.
Li ran up to the throne. "Sakura has been hurt badly by a..."Li said. The Queen inturupted. "Sa-Sakura...?"she asked curiously. "Yeah she's been hurt by..."said Li. The Queen inturrupted again. "What does the dear look like?"asked The Queen asked.
"She has light brown hair and emerald green eyes."said Li as he sighed. The Queen gasped. (****Can you guess why? please write in your review if you knew by now.****) Li stared at her with question in his eyes. The Queen looked at her husband and he nodded. The Queen got off her throne. "Can I see my daughter,Sakura?"aske the Queen. Li gasped.
The Queen was watching Li. Li was sorting this out...He then wrinkled his nose. "Queen...your son is about to marry your daughter."said Li. "Oh...my! Not Tory!?"said the Queen. "No...Derrick."said Li. "Oh him...he's a cousin to the kingdom...He rules here because his parents died...It's alright if they want to marry."said the Queen. Li sighed. He knew it was to good to be true.
Li lead the Queen to the intensive care room in the hospital wing. When the Queen saw her daughter she gasped. Tears formed in her eyes. "Who did this to my baby?"said the Queen in horror. "The advisor you put in charge of Derrick's wing."replied Li. Anger mixed with sadness as the Queen knelt by her daughter. "My daughter was taken away and given to a different family by a robber. The robber was latter killed. We had tried to get him to say where he left my baby but he refused to say. Even when we said we would murder him if he didn't."said the Queen. "Did you here that honey?"asked the Queen.
Sakura made a small moan as she nodded yes. "I loved you some much, you were my only daughter and I loved you very much."said The Queen (****understanding yet? she's alive in my story...you know Nadishiko Sakura's mommy...don't know her engilish name so...yeah....sorry...****) Sakura slowly turned to her side. The Queen sighed. "I'll just have to behead that man...if he ever pulls off somthing like this again. The Queen walked away but not before thanking Li and telling the Doctors to use the best equptment on her.
Li shook his head. 'Nice lady...but really airheaded. She should have had him beheaded when she was told.' Li knew she was only giving the man a second chance. 'And to think my angel is a princess!'
Derrick had gotten back latter that day. Derrick freaked when he found out that she was a princess and who had beat her practically to death. He had also freaked when he found out the man was still alive...
(((((((((((((((((A MONTH LATTER)))))))))))))))
Sakura had recovered fully and was back to her lovely self.** in the garden** Sakura was talking with Li happily. "So...what was it like in intensive care?"asked Li. "Well your poked and probed, you have more tubes in you then you can count...your in pain all the time...Oh yes and if I am right more men have seen my butt in one 5 weeks then in my entire life!"said Sakura, that last part in a jokeing voice. Li started to laugh at the last part.
Sakura was still a little sore and she was still her funny,normal self. This is why Li had fallen in love with her. "Hey Li, Could you...would you take me through town...so I could see my parents...that raised me all those years?"asked Sakura. She had her best puppy dog eyes on and it was hard for Li to reply no. Finally he reluctantley said yes.
Sakura got dressed up and followed Li ouotside. The air was nice and sunny. The sun beat down on Sakura,since it was now getting close to the end of Summer it was blazeing hot. Sakura fanned herself a little as they walked,they soon aproached town.
(****TO BE CONTINUED****)
DO YOU LIKE MY MN'S (MY NOTES) I HOPE THEY DON'T BUG YOU. =^.~= Well I hope that wasn't much of a cliffhanger. And now my story should be longer then I thought it would be...but that is ok...right?
Well I'm planning on updateing everyday so BEWARE mwah haa haa haaww!!! =^.^=
Bye now!