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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
brittney
i looooovvveeeddd it! wonderful story. can't wait!!!!!
MY REPLY
If you liked that one...you'll love this one!
crystal errington (mushy1@rochester.rr.com)
very good kittybo
MY REPLY
Why Shank-you My dear Watson...hada sayes that!
Lady Sutaa
Thanks for the emails again. first i didn't get the queen n gasped parts but now reading it other i understand it now! that was a nice chapter! bye
MY REPLY
What parts did you gasp at? please tell me? Good that you understand it now! =^.^=
Star Princess ssc Date: 2002-01-30 Ch: 5 Signed
awwwwwwwww...shit....i just saw the review thingy that i wrote for the last chapter and trust me, that wasn't the whole review...i wrote like a very long review and the darn shoot thingy cut it short.....wonder why.....oh well, stupid computers going screwy that's why...well, i'll read this chapter and then review later ok? just wanted to tell ya that the last review wasn't everything...and i can't remember what i wrote last time either....darn....hehehehehe....*sweatdrop* sorry about all the cursin'....just a bad habit of mines...but hey, i'm 15...i'm allowed to! ^_^ heheheh...nice logic that i have huh? well, don't mind me! too much cappuchino's!!!
~Starrie (you can call me Starrie. Star Princess ssc is my pen name but....it's to darn long! so i just use Starrie for short ^^)
MY REPLY
Got it I call you Starrie...and guess who corrected your foreighn languge AGAIN!? Well thats life...capachino...are they good? are you adicted or somthing? *smiles* YES ME KNOW ME HAVE BIG MOUTH AND WHEN IT OPENS STUPID THINGS COME OUT...oh well =^.^= I hope I dont act to young for you to handle *sobs* I really am 12 even though I act 5...*sniff* *sniff*
Star Princess ssc Date: 2002-01-30 Ch: 3 Signed
Yeah, we're three years apart cuz I'm 15. And and….thanks for considering me a good friend! *hugz* I consider you a really good friend too! ^^ heheheh…I'm so glad I'm able to make you laugh, cuz you make ME laugh!!!! ^_^ well anywayz, great chapter! Hehehehe…why did I have a feeling that Sakura was a princess?? Great minds think alike that's why! ^_~ and uhhhhhhhh…as you can see, I'm trying REALLY hard not to say a curse….*shows Starrie trying to forget that curses even exsist* ummmmmmm…oh frick it!!! I can't help it!! *sheepish smile* hehehehe…sorry? Anywayz, HAHAHAAHAHA!!! Stupid dumb advisor got beheaded and—wait a minute….*goes to story and scrolls up* what the heck!!??? No…..this can't be happenin'…that son of a billy goat didn't get beheaded!? HOW COULD YOU!!!!! kay…..lemme calm down….*breath in…breath out….breath in….* *ahem* anywayz…great ficcy so far! And don't worry, you'll get more online buddies soon! Trust me! Especially through fanfiction.net! I mean, ever since I joined back in November, I've added like an extra 40 or more to my buddy list, and the list keeps growing! ….it's so confusing at times @_@ peoplez sometimes pop up and you're like "huh—what?" hehehehe…that alwayz happens to me, I can be so…..errrrrrrrrr…don't wanna use the word my brother calls me but….errrrrrrrrrrr…I…..ummmmmm…going to hafta…….ummmmmm…*shuts eyes tight* AIRHEAD! Hheheheheeheheh…yup, my brother calls me that and…..ummmm…fine, I'll admit it, I can be kinda airheady….sometimes…but hey! At least I'm not your typical airhead! If I have ONE thing that's not airheady, it has to be my smartness! ^_^ yup! This billy goat airheady, princess is actually Smart and is defiantly NOT a snob!!!!!! Heheheh…sorry, but many of my friends at school thought I wuz when they first met me. But to quote one of my best friends ever! (she also has fics in ff.net. her pen name is Sapphie in case you wanna read her fics. She and I joined ff.net together! ^_^) "this review is turning into a freakin' novel!!" hehehe…yup! That's her quote! Well, bye kit! Thanks for alwayz reviewin' my fics!!!
~Starrie
Ps: this is my review for chapter 5....grrrrrrr...fido person said i couldn't review twice....grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....
MY REPLY
Fido person?! LOL! Ok well long review but thank-you! =^.^= your so kind to me *hugz you* See Ya STARRIE! notice i changed the b word to billy goat sounds really funny in some parts =^.^=
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
What hapned last
Sakura got dressed up and followed Li outside. The air was nice and sunny. The sun beat down on Sakura,since it was now getting close to the end of Summer it was blazeing hot. Sakura fanned herself a little as they walked,they soon aproached town.
Here goes!
Sakura happily skipped behind Li. "So do you know what they called themselves?"asked Li. "Well of coarse! They only raised me PRACTICALY ALL MY LIFE!"said Sakura as if Li was asking the dumbest question. (****if you ask me...thats some stupid question...you know that reminds me when i was washing my hands with out watermelon smelling soap (kinda a light green color) well in order to get some on your hand you hada slam the thing down...and when it squirted on your hand...it looked like a buger cuse it was a light misty green n' stuff...he he...funny...? Sorry...don't hurt me!****) Li looked at Sakura with a puzzled expresion on his face. "Well me "mom's" name is Janie...And my "dad's" name is (****BOB! AM I RIGHT?****) David (****me daddy's name****) ...And...they live on Maple Road."said Sakura.
Li headed toward a house and looked up at a sighn. I read MAPL RD. "It's not spelled right though."replied Sakura. "Yes I know...the village idiot made it."replied Li. Sakura giggled a little. Sakura went up the road. There were poor looking houses then at the end was a fairly nice house. It was a light green color. (****my houses color! Also one of my fav colors****)
Sakura ran up the walk and knocked on the door. A middle aged man answered. He had jet black hair. The wife had blond hair and brown eyes. "Dareling...it's our baby!"cried the man to his wife. The wife ran out and lunged at her "daughter" to give her a hug. Sakura stepped away from the hug.
"What is it honey?"asked the wife. "You lied to me...you practically adopted me! You never were my REAL mom."replied Sakura. "Y-ou...how? How do you know?"asked the wife sadly. "I found out i'm a princess."replied Sakura. The husband gasped and the wife fainted.
"Oh my!"exclaimed Sakura. The husband grasped his wife and slowly took her in. "Come on in."said the husband. Sakura and Li followed him in. After they had explained everything...of coarse after the wife woke up...Sakura and Li were getting ready to leave. "So is this the man your going to marry? Is this Derrick?"asked Janie (the wife) Sakura dropped her head a little. "No he isn't Derrick."said Sakura as she sighed. The mom suddenly noticed what was going on. Sakura was to marry Derrick but she wanted to marry this man. Janie sighed.
"He is a nice man....you should marry him!"exclaimed Janie. Sakura felt a blush coming and Li did to...they both turned there heads so that no one would notice. Janie noticed though but David did not. Janie giggled.
"We got to go now "mom" Mabe we will visit some time latter."said Sakura as she got up. "Alright dear I'll see you latter."said David. Sakura and Li walked out. "What are we going to do now?"asked Li. Sakura shook her head. "Wait!"said Li. "Let's go to th heaven park."said Li. Sakura agreed and they raced to the park.
When ariving Sakura beat Li. Li was panting and was very angry. He then called out "No fair!". Sakura just laughed. Sakura and Li sat on the bench. They watched the ducks that were being feed by the people. "And to think,I'm a princess."said Sakura. "I help rule the land we are sitting on."Sakura added.
Li looked down. "You know,since your a princess and all,you could drop the wedding without being killed for rejecting him...then..."said Li sheepishly as Sakura inturupted saying "Then I can marry you...right? That's what you were going to say...I am right...right?"said Sakura. Li nodded his head yes.
Sakura giggled. A passerby stopped in frount of Sakura. "Your the princess...I mean your now a princess since you've been found in all...right?"asked the man. The man was wearing a poor mans cloths. Sakura nodded her head yes. "Then why are you sitting by this low life?"asked the poor old man. Li jumped off the bench,he held the poor man by the colar. "WHAT DID YOU CALL ME????!!!!?!?!?!?!?!"yelled Li. "I called you a low life...are you deaf as well as dumb?"asked the poor man. Sakura sweat dropped from watching this and Li was extremely angry. "You to aren't an item are you cuse...personaly...she's to good for you...besides she's engaged."said the poor old man. Li waved his fist in frount of the man.
"If you say one more bad thing about me...I'll use my fist on your face!"said Li with rage in his voice. "Why are you guys alone?...together?"asked the man. "Because we are friends."replied Sakura sweetly. "An item...and Li,I wouldn't threaten me like that you little fool!"said the poor man slyly. "And why not?!"said Li angrily. "Because I've got you on tape and you are an item."replied the old man. He threw his blanket things down to reaveal the advisor (the one who beat Sakura up) standing in all black.
Li backed up. He knew that him and Sakura where now doomed. The advisor cackled evily. "I thought I killed you but you managed to survive. You are so weak! I'll kill you...just you wait! First your only love then you...Your love's will be slow but not as slow as a death that will be your fate!"said the advisor as he bounded off toward the castle.
Sakura and Li held eachother. They were going to enjoy there life and there hapiness for as long as they could. Li slowly lowered his head. Sakura closed her eyes and Li followed. They soon kissed. Li sat up and spoke "I'm sorry but chances are that, that will be our first and only kiss. Sakura nodded in agreeance.
Sakura and Li sat together on the bench till dark. Li loved her to much to not extend the moment. He could stay only because he had gotton that day off. And Sakura,being a princess,got to stay as long as she wanted.
Sakura and Li slowly walked back to the castle. Knowing that it what they would aproach to would kill them. But when they arrived the advisor was talking with the King and Queen who were smileing and saying how he was to kind. Sakura and Li were completely bafled.
They soon realized he was makeing the King,Queen,prince,and the kingdom's real prince leave on vacation and that he would take care of everything while they were gone. Saukra knew he was up to somthing and Li did to...But the question was...What?
(****TO BE CONTINUED****)
Got this chapter done late at night...sorry...well I hope you liked it! =^.~=
Kitty Bo =^.^=
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awsome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
brittney
i looooovvveeeddd it! wonderful story. can't wait!!!!!
MY REPLY
If you liked that one...you'll love this one!
crystal errington (mushy1@rochester.rr.com)
very good kittybo
MY REPLY
Why Shank-you My dear Watson...hada sayes that!
Lady Sutaa
Thanks for the emails again. first i didn't get the queen n gasped parts but now reading it other i understand it now! that was a nice chapter! bye
MY REPLY
What parts did you gasp at? please tell me? Good that you understand it now! =^.^=
Star Princess ssc Date: 2002-01-30 Ch: 5 Signed
awwwwwwwww...shit....i just saw the review thingy that i wrote for the last chapter and trust me, that wasn't the whole review...i wrote like a very long review and the darn shoot thingy cut it short.....wonder why.....oh well, stupid computers going screwy that's why...well, i'll read this chapter and then review later ok? just wanted to tell ya that the last review wasn't everything...and i can't remember what i wrote last time either....darn....hehehehehe....*sweatdrop* sorry about all the cursin'....just a bad habit of mines...but hey, i'm 15...i'm allowed to! ^_^ heheheh...nice logic that i have huh? well, don't mind me! too much cappuchino's!!!
~Starrie (you can call me Starrie. Star Princess ssc is my pen name but....it's to darn long! so i just use Starrie for short ^^)
MY REPLY
Got it I call you Starrie...and guess who corrected your foreighn languge AGAIN!? Well thats life...capachino...are they good? are you adicted or somthing? *smiles* YES ME KNOW ME HAVE BIG MOUTH AND WHEN IT OPENS STUPID THINGS COME OUT...oh well =^.^= I hope I dont act to young for you to handle *sobs* I really am 12 even though I act 5...*sniff* *sniff*
Star Princess ssc Date: 2002-01-30 Ch: 3 Signed
Yeah, we're three years apart cuz I'm 15. And and….thanks for considering me a good friend! *hugz* I consider you a really good friend too! ^^ heheheh…I'm so glad I'm able to make you laugh, cuz you make ME laugh!!!! ^_^ well anywayz, great chapter! Hehehehe…why did I have a feeling that Sakura was a princess?? Great minds think alike that's why! ^_~ and uhhhhhhhh…as you can see, I'm trying REALLY hard not to say a curse….*shows Starrie trying to forget that curses even exsist* ummmmmmm…oh frick it!!! I can't help it!! *sheepish smile* hehehehe…sorry? Anywayz, HAHAHAAHAHA!!! Stupid dumb advisor got beheaded and—wait a minute….*goes to story and scrolls up* what the heck!!??? No…..this can't be happenin'…that son of a billy goat didn't get beheaded!? HOW COULD YOU!!!!! kay…..lemme calm down….*breath in…breath out….breath in….* *ahem* anywayz…great ficcy so far! And don't worry, you'll get more online buddies soon! Trust me! Especially through fanfiction.net! I mean, ever since I joined back in November, I've added like an extra 40 or more to my buddy list, and the list keeps growing! ….it's so confusing at times @_@ peoplez sometimes pop up and you're like "huh—what?" hehehehe…that alwayz happens to me, I can be so…..errrrrrrrrr…don't wanna use the word my brother calls me but….errrrrrrrrrrr…I…..ummmmmm…going to hafta…….ummmmmm…*shuts eyes tight* AIRHEAD! Hheheheheeheheh…yup, my brother calls me that and…..ummmm…fine, I'll admit it, I can be kinda airheady….sometimes…but hey! At least I'm not your typical airhead! If I have ONE thing that's not airheady, it has to be my smartness! ^_^ yup! This billy goat airheady, princess is actually Smart and is defiantly NOT a snob!!!!!! Heheheh…sorry, but many of my friends at school thought I wuz when they first met me. But to quote one of my best friends ever! (she also has fics in ff.net. her pen name is Sapphie in case you wanna read her fics. She and I joined ff.net together! ^_^) "this review is turning into a freakin' novel!!" hehehe…yup! That's her quote! Well, bye kit! Thanks for alwayz reviewin' my fics!!!
~Starrie
Ps: this is my review for chapter 5....grrrrrrr...fido person said i couldn't review twice....grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....
MY REPLY
Fido person?! LOL! Ok well long review but thank-you! =^.^= your so kind to me *hugz you* See Ya STARRIE! notice i changed the b word to billy goat sounds really funny in some parts =^.^=
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
What hapned last
Sakura got dressed up and followed Li outside. The air was nice and sunny. The sun beat down on Sakura,since it was now getting close to the end of Summer it was blazeing hot. Sakura fanned herself a little as they walked,they soon aproached town.
Here goes!
Sakura happily skipped behind Li. "So do you know what they called themselves?"asked Li. "Well of coarse! They only raised me PRACTICALY ALL MY LIFE!"said Sakura as if Li was asking the dumbest question. (****if you ask me...thats some stupid question...you know that reminds me when i was washing my hands with out watermelon smelling soap (kinda a light green color) well in order to get some on your hand you hada slam the thing down...and when it squirted on your hand...it looked like a buger cuse it was a light misty green n' stuff...he he...funny...? Sorry...don't hurt me!****) Li looked at Sakura with a puzzled expresion on his face. "Well me "mom's" name is Janie...And my "dad's" name is (****BOB! AM I RIGHT?****) David (****me daddy's name****) ...And...they live on Maple Road."said Sakura.
Li headed toward a house and looked up at a sighn. I read MAPL RD. "It's not spelled right though."replied Sakura. "Yes I know...the village idiot made it."replied Li. Sakura giggled a little. Sakura went up the road. There were poor looking houses then at the end was a fairly nice house. It was a light green color. (****my houses color! Also one of my fav colors****)
Sakura ran up the walk and knocked on the door. A middle aged man answered. He had jet black hair. The wife had blond hair and brown eyes. "Dareling...it's our baby!"cried the man to his wife. The wife ran out and lunged at her "daughter" to give her a hug. Sakura stepped away from the hug.
"What is it honey?"asked the wife. "You lied to me...you practically adopted me! You never were my REAL mom."replied Sakura. "Y-ou...how? How do you know?"asked the wife sadly. "I found out i'm a princess."replied Sakura. The husband gasped and the wife fainted.
"Oh my!"exclaimed Sakura. The husband grasped his wife and slowly took her in. "Come on in."said the husband. Sakura and Li followed him in. After they had explained everything...of coarse after the wife woke up...Sakura and Li were getting ready to leave. "So is this the man your going to marry? Is this Derrick?"asked Janie (the wife) Sakura dropped her head a little. "No he isn't Derrick."said Sakura as she sighed. The mom suddenly noticed what was going on. Sakura was to marry Derrick but she wanted to marry this man. Janie sighed.
"He is a nice man....you should marry him!"exclaimed Janie. Sakura felt a blush coming and Li did to...they both turned there heads so that no one would notice. Janie noticed though but David did not. Janie giggled.
"We got to go now "mom" Mabe we will visit some time latter."said Sakura as she got up. "Alright dear I'll see you latter."said David. Sakura and Li walked out. "What are we going to do now?"asked Li. Sakura shook her head. "Wait!"said Li. "Let's go to th heaven park."said Li. Sakura agreed and they raced to the park.
When ariving Sakura beat Li. Li was panting and was very angry. He then called out "No fair!". Sakura just laughed. Sakura and Li sat on the bench. They watched the ducks that were being feed by the people. "And to think,I'm a princess."said Sakura. "I help rule the land we are sitting on."Sakura added.
Li looked down. "You know,since your a princess and all,you could drop the wedding without being killed for rejecting him...then..."said Li sheepishly as Sakura inturupted saying "Then I can marry you...right? That's what you were going to say...I am right...right?"said Sakura. Li nodded his head yes.
Sakura giggled. A passerby stopped in frount of Sakura. "Your the princess...I mean your now a princess since you've been found in all...right?"asked the man. The man was wearing a poor mans cloths. Sakura nodded her head yes. "Then why are you sitting by this low life?"asked the poor old man. Li jumped off the bench,he held the poor man by the colar. "WHAT DID YOU CALL ME????!!!!?!?!?!?!?!"yelled Li. "I called you a low life...are you deaf as well as dumb?"asked the poor man. Sakura sweat dropped from watching this and Li was extremely angry. "You to aren't an item are you cuse...personaly...she's to good for you...besides she's engaged."said the poor old man. Li waved his fist in frount of the man.
"If you say one more bad thing about me...I'll use my fist on your face!"said Li with rage in his voice. "Why are you guys alone?...together?"asked the man. "Because we are friends."replied Sakura sweetly. "An item...and Li,I wouldn't threaten me like that you little fool!"said the poor man slyly. "And why not?!"said Li angrily. "Because I've got you on tape and you are an item."replied the old man. He threw his blanket things down to reaveal the advisor (the one who beat Sakura up) standing in all black.
Li backed up. He knew that him and Sakura where now doomed. The advisor cackled evily. "I thought I killed you but you managed to survive. You are so weak! I'll kill you...just you wait! First your only love then you...Your love's will be slow but not as slow as a death that will be your fate!"said the advisor as he bounded off toward the castle.
Sakura and Li held eachother. They were going to enjoy there life and there hapiness for as long as they could. Li slowly lowered his head. Sakura closed her eyes and Li followed. They soon kissed. Li sat up and spoke "I'm sorry but chances are that, that will be our first and only kiss. Sakura nodded in agreeance.
Sakura and Li sat together on the bench till dark. Li loved her to much to not extend the moment. He could stay only because he had gotton that day off. And Sakura,being a princess,got to stay as long as she wanted.
Sakura and Li slowly walked back to the castle. Knowing that it what they would aproach to would kill them. But when they arrived the advisor was talking with the King and Queen who were smileing and saying how he was to kind. Sakura and Li were completely bafled.
They soon realized he was makeing the King,Queen,prince,and the kingdom's real prince leave on vacation and that he would take care of everything while they were gone. Saukra knew he was up to somthing and Li did to...But the question was...What?
(****TO BE CONTINUED****)
Got this chapter done late at night...sorry...well I hope you liked it! =^.~=
Kitty Bo =^.^=