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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Dr Megalomania
Hiya!! DrM again! and no... i will cease my very bad lil poems! #^-^# gomen!! sorry that this reviews a lil late! I've been a lil too busy to read fics!! you're doin' a GREAT job, even when the chappie's done late at night! i sure hope you keep it up!!
MY REPLY
*SIGHS* No more poems...awwww....it's alright...you were the 1st to review so...thanx!
marie
I love it
MY REPLY
*BOWS* Thank-you! your so kind!
Lady Sutaa
KAWAII!!!!! hehhehehe that was great!!! is there going to be more characters?? like tomoyo n eriol. o yea it's the grasping part i got confused. sorry to made u confused. bye
MY REPLY
grasping part????????????? And of coarse there is going to be more chapters...I'm NOT ending there! Madison and Eroil...well...I'm sorry but...i should have put them in sooner, they just wouldn't make sense to come in now...*sighs* I'm sorry...
brittney
that was short but sweet. please hurry with chapter 7! :)
MY REPLY
Yup im hurrying...i just got sick n' all this crap just pounded me...I HATE being sick...but i decided i would NOT let a little virus stop me from writing! So here goes! =^.^=
luna
My chapter 1 is ready for you kit. I can not stop
reading this story
MY REPLY
YAY!!! I feal soooo loved! *hugz you* your to kind!
Kat
SIMONE MARTIN YOU GET WRITING MORE I COULD CARE LESS IF YOU ARE SICK OR NOT ( well I do but that's not the point!) YOU BETTER GET WRITING MORE ASAP!!!!!!!
MY REPLY
*cowers in the corner* Gee whiz...I'm sorry...YOUR HIGHNESS! lol...but i decided this bugger isn't gunna keep me down...SO IM WRITING!
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
What hapned last
They soon realized he was making the King,Queen,prince,and the kingdom's real prince leave on vacation and that he would take care of everything while they were gone. Saukra knew he was up to something and Li did to...But the question was...What?
HERE GOES!
Sakura nervously looked at Li. Li just nodded. 'What was he nodding for?' wondered Sakura. Li just turned his gaze back at the advisor who was bowing to the King and Queen. The advisor then walked back and smiled at Sakura and Li. "He gives me the creeps..."whispered Sakura to Li. Li just nodded.
The advisor happily walked down the hall with a smile on his lips. He had an idea...And it WAS going to work. The advisor walked into his room and layed on his bed. He had alot of planning to do. *what he's thinking* I'll have her killed...no hanged if she refuses to marry Derrick...therefore out of fear she'll marry him. *normal view*
Sakura bite her upper lip...she knew something was up. Li slowly walked away and Sakura returned to her room. She figured that she'd go to bed early so she could wake up early. As Sakura slowly got into bed her mind drifted. All these events had occurred so recently and she had no idea why...Why her? Why now? It just didn't make any sense. Sakura slowly drifted off into a deep sleep.
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Sakura's dream
Sakura walked steadily down the long corridors. She then heard voices behind a door. Sakura put her ear up to the door and listened.
"We are going to have to take action Monsieur."said a French man. "Yes I know. And I have a plan."replied the other man. The other man's voice sounded very familiar to Sakura but she had no idea why.
Sakura started down the hallway when she heard someone call her. Sakura turned around and it was...
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Sakura woke up in a cold sweat. What was that dream all about? Sakura got out of her bed and slowly walked to the door. Sakura opened the her bedroom door.
It was dark down the halls. But Sakura was hearing someone talking. Sakura wandered to a door and discovered it was coming from the same door that was in her dream. Sakura put her ear up to the door and heard the same conversation. Only it seemed as though it was continuing after what she heard in her dream.
"Ooo, but Monsieur, what kind?"asked the French man. "Well let's just say that brat won't be much of a problem soon."said the man. Sakura then knew who it was! It was the advisor. "Ooo, sounds risky."replied the French man. "It's very risky so were going to have to act quick! We have to break them up!"said the advisor. "Sir, I think I hear someone at the door."said the French man. "I'll check."whispered the advisor.
Sakura panicked. Where should she hide?!?! Sakura tip-toed into an open door that was 3 doors down. She just made it in. "Theres no one there, you must be hearing things."said the advisor. Sakura sighed. Then she heard someone call her name. She turned around and it was...
It was Li. Sakura sighed. "You scared me."said Sakura. Li rubbed his eyes. "Yeah and you woke me up."said Li. Sakura walked over to him. "I'm sorry. Hey I didn't know you had a room in the castle."said Sakura. "Yeah well I'm sharing it with 5 other people and were packed in. It's a room about the same size as your room to."said Li. Sakura gasped. "Wow! That's hardly liveable." Sakura sighed again in saying that.
"Hey it's alright."said Li. "Well when I become Queen, You'll each have your own room."replied Sakura. Li sighed as he got up from his bed. "Let's talk in your room,theres more privacy there."whispered Li in Sakura's ear. Sakura nodded and they both tip-toed to her room.
Sakura and Li talked for a while. "I'm worried."explained Sakura to Li. "Why?"asked Li. "Well I overheard what the advisor was saying to another man."said Sakura. "What did they say that worried you?"asked Li. Sakura explained her dream to Li then what she heard in the hallway. "Seems like they got us figured out and there going to get us somehow."said Li. Sakura sighed. "Hey it's ok though, we will out smart them some how."said Li. Sakura nodded.
Li left Sakura's room and Sakura got back in her bed. 'Tomorrow will be alright...Calm down Sakura...Everything will be ok.' thought Sakura to herself. She was trying to calm herself from her fear.
Sakura woke up in the morning. She got up and began to walk out of her room. Someone was there to meet her at her door. "Are you Sakura?"asked a man. "Yes I am Sakura."said Sakura. "Well then come with me."said the man. And with that he grabbed her arm and dragged her to a dungeon.
"What is the meaning of this?!"screamed Sakura. "I'm sorry princess but my orders are clear."said the man and with that he left her confused and hungry in a cold cell. 'Why am I in here? I'm a princess.' thought Sakura. 'And this isn't the way a princess is suppose to be treated.'
Sakura sat in the cell shivering in her night cloths. Sakura was stuck in the cell like a prisoner for 5 hours. She was completely famished. Then somone walked in holding a board with a slob of white oatmeal on it. "Your dinner."he said before slopping the mess on her mud floor.
Sakura stared at the slop. She was suppose to eat this? Sakura sniffed the food. She turned her head up. It smelled nasty. Sakura backed up against the cell wall. Another man walked in holding a pile of brown cloth.
"Your cloths. And you have 2 minutes to change or I'll come back in here and make you."Said the man and with that he plopped the brown cloth on the floor. Sakura hastily put it on. It was like a skirt and came down to her knees and it snapped around her neck. It looked like a cave woman's clothing.
Sakura held her nigh cloths in a heap. 'Why was she being treated like this?' The man walked in again and took the cloths from Sakura. He then just walked away. Sakura sat on her wood bench, colder then before.
A man with a spear walked in and forced Sakura to go into a room. Sakura freaked when she saw two ropes with loops. Sakura panicked. The advisor walked in. He then stood in front of Sakura. "Do you have any idea what your fate is?"asked the advisor. Sakura nodded. She knew, she was going to be hung.
"If you refuse to marry Derrick then you and Li will be hung. And if you accept, Li will be hung."said the advisor. In hearing this Sakura became enraged. She then spit in his face. The advisor whipped it off. "You little brat."he said. Sakura smirked. This enraged the advisor. He then grabbed Sakura by the hair and yanked her to a bench. He then threw her on to it.
Sakura sat rubbing her head. The advisor then had Li dragged out of a cell. "Choose."said the advisor. Li had been told the choices. "Marry Derrick, Sakura please."said Li. Sakura turned her head. This was to hard a decition. To pick between life or death.
Sakura then heard Li call out for her to marry Derrick. Sakura then turned her head to the advisor. "You wretched man! Since I know what you think and want me to say..." The advisor's smile changed. "I shall say that I WON'T marry Derrick and that nothing in this world would make me change my mind."said Sakura. The advisor frowned. "We-ll then I have no choice but to hang you both."said the advisor.
Sakura and Li walked up to the loops. Li shook his head. Sakura whispered that she loved him too much to marry anyone else. Li just nodded his head. Sakura and Li alked up to the loops and rested there heads in it.
The boards below them dropped and they began to gag.
(************TO BE CONTINUED************)
Hee hee! I finally made a cliffhanger! *smiles evily* Well as always R+R! =^.^=
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Dr Megalomania
Hiya!! DrM again! and no... i will cease my very bad lil poems! #^-^# gomen!! sorry that this reviews a lil late! I've been a lil too busy to read fics!! you're doin' a GREAT job, even when the chappie's done late at night! i sure hope you keep it up!!
MY REPLY
*SIGHS* No more poems...awwww....it's alright...you were the 1st to review so...thanx!
marie
I love it
MY REPLY
*BOWS* Thank-you! your so kind!
Lady Sutaa
KAWAII!!!!! hehhehehe that was great!!! is there going to be more characters?? like tomoyo n eriol. o yea it's the grasping part i got confused. sorry to made u confused. bye
MY REPLY
grasping part????????????? And of coarse there is going to be more chapters...I'm NOT ending there! Madison and Eroil...well...I'm sorry but...i should have put them in sooner, they just wouldn't make sense to come in now...*sighs* I'm sorry...
brittney
that was short but sweet. please hurry with chapter 7! :)
MY REPLY
Yup im hurrying...i just got sick n' all this crap just pounded me...I HATE being sick...but i decided i would NOT let a little virus stop me from writing! So here goes! =^.^=
luna
My chapter 1 is ready for you kit. I can not stop
reading this story
MY REPLY
YAY!!! I feal soooo loved! *hugz you* your to kind!
Kat
SIMONE MARTIN YOU GET WRITING MORE I COULD CARE LESS IF YOU ARE SICK OR NOT ( well I do but that's not the point!) YOU BETTER GET WRITING MORE ASAP!!!!!!!
MY REPLY
*cowers in the corner* Gee whiz...I'm sorry...YOUR HIGHNESS! lol...but i decided this bugger isn't gunna keep me down...SO IM WRITING!
I THANK-YOU ALL FOR R+R ING MY FIC! AND THANK-YOU FOR NO FLAMES! YOU ALL ARE SO KIND! *HUGZ YOU ALL* PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS ABOUT MY FIC AND IF YOU R+R A FIC PLEASE REFER MY FIC THERE TO! I feel so special!
What hapned last
They soon realized he was making the King,Queen,prince,and the kingdom's real prince leave on vacation and that he would take care of everything while they were gone. Saukra knew he was up to something and Li did to...But the question was...What?
HERE GOES!
Sakura nervously looked at Li. Li just nodded. 'What was he nodding for?' wondered Sakura. Li just turned his gaze back at the advisor who was bowing to the King and Queen. The advisor then walked back and smiled at Sakura and Li. "He gives me the creeps..."whispered Sakura to Li. Li just nodded.
The advisor happily walked down the hall with a smile on his lips. He had an idea...And it WAS going to work. The advisor walked into his room and layed on his bed. He had alot of planning to do. *what he's thinking* I'll have her killed...no hanged if she refuses to marry Derrick...therefore out of fear she'll marry him. *normal view*
Sakura bite her upper lip...she knew something was up. Li slowly walked away and Sakura returned to her room. She figured that she'd go to bed early so she could wake up early. As Sakura slowly got into bed her mind drifted. All these events had occurred so recently and she had no idea why...Why her? Why now? It just didn't make any sense. Sakura slowly drifted off into a deep sleep.
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Sakura's dream
Sakura walked steadily down the long corridors. She then heard voices behind a door. Sakura put her ear up to the door and listened.
"We are going to have to take action Monsieur."said a French man. "Yes I know. And I have a plan."replied the other man. The other man's voice sounded very familiar to Sakura but she had no idea why.
Sakura started down the hallway when she heard someone call her. Sakura turned around and it was...
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Sakura woke up in a cold sweat. What was that dream all about? Sakura got out of her bed and slowly walked to the door. Sakura opened the her bedroom door.
It was dark down the halls. But Sakura was hearing someone talking. Sakura wandered to a door and discovered it was coming from the same door that was in her dream. Sakura put her ear up to the door and heard the same conversation. Only it seemed as though it was continuing after what she heard in her dream.
"Ooo, but Monsieur, what kind?"asked the French man. "Well let's just say that brat won't be much of a problem soon."said the man. Sakura then knew who it was! It was the advisor. "Ooo, sounds risky."replied the French man. "It's very risky so were going to have to act quick! We have to break them up!"said the advisor. "Sir, I think I hear someone at the door."said the French man. "I'll check."whispered the advisor.
Sakura panicked. Where should she hide?!?! Sakura tip-toed into an open door that was 3 doors down. She just made it in. "Theres no one there, you must be hearing things."said the advisor. Sakura sighed. Then she heard someone call her name. She turned around and it was...
It was Li. Sakura sighed. "You scared me."said Sakura. Li rubbed his eyes. "Yeah and you woke me up."said Li. Sakura walked over to him. "I'm sorry. Hey I didn't know you had a room in the castle."said Sakura. "Yeah well I'm sharing it with 5 other people and were packed in. It's a room about the same size as your room to."said Li. Sakura gasped. "Wow! That's hardly liveable." Sakura sighed again in saying that.
"Hey it's alright."said Li. "Well when I become Queen, You'll each have your own room."replied Sakura. Li sighed as he got up from his bed. "Let's talk in your room,theres more privacy there."whispered Li in Sakura's ear. Sakura nodded and they both tip-toed to her room.
Sakura and Li talked for a while. "I'm worried."explained Sakura to Li. "Why?"asked Li. "Well I overheard what the advisor was saying to another man."said Sakura. "What did they say that worried you?"asked Li. Sakura explained her dream to Li then what she heard in the hallway. "Seems like they got us figured out and there going to get us somehow."said Li. Sakura sighed. "Hey it's ok though, we will out smart them some how."said Li. Sakura nodded.
Li left Sakura's room and Sakura got back in her bed. 'Tomorrow will be alright...Calm down Sakura...Everything will be ok.' thought Sakura to herself. She was trying to calm herself from her fear.
Sakura woke up in the morning. She got up and began to walk out of her room. Someone was there to meet her at her door. "Are you Sakura?"asked a man. "Yes I am Sakura."said Sakura. "Well then come with me."said the man. And with that he grabbed her arm and dragged her to a dungeon.
"What is the meaning of this?!"screamed Sakura. "I'm sorry princess but my orders are clear."said the man and with that he left her confused and hungry in a cold cell. 'Why am I in here? I'm a princess.' thought Sakura. 'And this isn't the way a princess is suppose to be treated.'
Sakura sat in the cell shivering in her night cloths. Sakura was stuck in the cell like a prisoner for 5 hours. She was completely famished. Then somone walked in holding a board with a slob of white oatmeal on it. "Your dinner."he said before slopping the mess on her mud floor.
Sakura stared at the slop. She was suppose to eat this? Sakura sniffed the food. She turned her head up. It smelled nasty. Sakura backed up against the cell wall. Another man walked in holding a pile of brown cloth.
"Your cloths. And you have 2 minutes to change or I'll come back in here and make you."Said the man and with that he plopped the brown cloth on the floor. Sakura hastily put it on. It was like a skirt and came down to her knees and it snapped around her neck. It looked like a cave woman's clothing.
Sakura held her nigh cloths in a heap. 'Why was she being treated like this?' The man walked in again and took the cloths from Sakura. He then just walked away. Sakura sat on her wood bench, colder then before.
A man with a spear walked in and forced Sakura to go into a room. Sakura freaked when she saw two ropes with loops. Sakura panicked. The advisor walked in. He then stood in front of Sakura. "Do you have any idea what your fate is?"asked the advisor. Sakura nodded. She knew, she was going to be hung.
"If you refuse to marry Derrick then you and Li will be hung. And if you accept, Li will be hung."said the advisor. In hearing this Sakura became enraged. She then spit in his face. The advisor whipped it off. "You little brat."he said. Sakura smirked. This enraged the advisor. He then grabbed Sakura by the hair and yanked her to a bench. He then threw her on to it.
Sakura sat rubbing her head. The advisor then had Li dragged out of a cell. "Choose."said the advisor. Li had been told the choices. "Marry Derrick, Sakura please."said Li. Sakura turned her head. This was to hard a decition. To pick between life or death.
Sakura then heard Li call out for her to marry Derrick. Sakura then turned her head to the advisor. "You wretched man! Since I know what you think and want me to say..." The advisor's smile changed. "I shall say that I WON'T marry Derrick and that nothing in this world would make me change my mind."said Sakura. The advisor frowned. "We-ll then I have no choice but to hang you both."said the advisor.
Sakura and Li walked up to the loops. Li shook his head. Sakura whispered that she loved him too much to marry anyone else. Li just nodded his head. Sakura and Li alked up to the loops and rested there heads in it.
The boards below them dropped and they began to gag.
(************TO BE CONTINUED************)
Hee hee! I finally made a cliffhanger! *smiles evily* Well as always R+R! =^.^=