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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Kat
Simone I know I am your friend and all but if you EVER leave a cliffhanger like that again and don't get this story updated soon I am going to have to kill you! Maybe I will hang you and let you see what it is like to be hung like you are doing to Sakura! I would say it would be in your best intrest to continue writeing NOW!!!!!!
MY REPLY
Alright ok i am =^.^=
Lady Sutaa
ok for one thing i know u r not goin to let them die rite???? well that is my guess.... please continue!!!! bye
MY REPLY
Of coarse not! =^.^=
Little Blossom
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE
MY REPLY
kk lol
lexis
a cliffhanger! write again soon please!
MY REPLY
heres the chapter =^.^= I don't plan on leaving anymore cliffhangers
brittney (bubzlrle@aol.com)
ooooohhhhh my god!!!!! i totally hope they survive! i'm kinda cryin....that was sad. well hope you get the chapter up rreeaallly soon. :)
MY REPLY
crying! Wow! heres the chapter though *hands you a tissue*
Dr Megalomania
.... you CAN'T just kill them! [hugs li] well, you can hang sakura but not LI!! i love him!
sakura: hey!!
DrM: well... okay, you can't kill sakura either...please continue!!
MY REPLY
I know i know...i can't kill um...oh well
luna
you little dork, you are not alowed to have such a big cliffhangersilly *giggle* My chapter 4
was done yesterday. If annyone want to try it out the title is THE STARS ARE BORN. it is lame but i was SLEEPY!!!
Ok...I'm reading it and likeing it....it's really good! =^.^=
*sigh* Why must people flame fics? If they don't like the fic....then why not ignore the fic? *sigh* I should tear up and burn the book Just Ella....never knew it was the same as my fic...I only read chapter one and half of chapter two...so i wounder how my fic turned out like it *scratches head* I know i'll flip through the dumb thing and see how my fic is the same....just before i burn the piece of junk...*smiles evily* BURN BOOK BURN!
What hapned last
Sakura and Li walked up to the loops. Li shook his head. Sakura whispered that she loved him too much to marry anyone else. Li just nodded his head. Sakura and Li walked up to the loops and rested there heads in it.
The boards below them dropped and they began to gag.
Here goes!
"No!!!!!!!! Stop now!!!!!"cried Nadishiko. The guards stared at her for a couple seconds then quickly put the lever in to reverse and the boards came back up. "Honey! Oh my poor baby!"cried Nadishiko. Nadishiko hugged her halfway standing daughter.
"Advisor! I'm gunna have your head for this!"cried an angry Tory. Tory then rushed over to the advisor and tackled him to the ground. Tory then began punching the advisor wildly in the face.
Sakura staggered a little in her mother's arms. She then rubbed her soar neck. She was just barely alive. "Mommy...I thought you left."whispered Sakura. "I got worried cuse I left my crown behind. So we turned around. And as soon as a servant asked me why I was having my daughter hanged...I ran here as soon as possible."said Nadishiko as she helped her daughter out of the rope.
"Li!"cried Sakura suddenly. Sakura got up and rushed over to Li. She then helped him out of the rope. Li was still breathing but very slowly. Sakura helped a gasping Li up to his feet. Nadishiko watched her daughter...Then it clicked...Her daughter loved this man...not Derrick.
"Sa-Sakura!"gasped Li happily. Sakura and Li hugged a while then they looked at Nadashiko. Aden just arrived and he ran over to Tory to prevent him from killing the advisor. Just then Li,Sakura,and Nadishiko began hugging. Aden was tearing off Tory who was yelling "One more punch! Let me kill him!".
Nadishiko turned to her daughter and smiled. "You don't want to marry Derrick...Do you?"she said. "No..."replied Sakura. Nadishiko nodded in approval. Aden walked over to his wife and smiled. "Everything is all right...How about we take that trip now...And leave Sakura in charge...And have the advisor thrown in jail...We will have him beheaded when we get back...What do you say?"asked Aden. Nadishiko nodded in approval.
Nadishiko explained to Sakura that she would be in control before Nadishiko left. Sakura nodded. Li overheard the conversation. Sakura and Li walked to the main room and sat in a chair.
"When do you want the wedding to be?"asked Sakura. "I don't know..."said Li. "HMMMM...How about in 2 months...How does that sound?"asked Sakura. Li shrugged. "That long?"he said in a playful tone. Sakura nodded. Li sighed then he to nodded.
The advisor sat cold in his cell. 'Oh well...I didn't succeed but...I gave the Queen,Princess,King,and Prince a scare.' thought the advisor. The advisor then moaned in pain. Maybe I shouldn't have done it...I should have known Prince Tory would beat the crap out of me.' thought the advisor sadly. 'But wait!' the advisor gave an evil grin. 'My sister can help!' he then got a good idea that would break them up for good!
Sakura left the room to go to her bedroom to change into something better. She wondered what her dress would look like and...Then she remembered her best friend...The one who was a princess in her village and only got to visit on weekends. 'I know!' she thought. 'I'll have my old friend Madison come visit!' Sakura smiled happily as many memories of her childhood playing with Madison came into her mind.
Sakura ran out of her room. She ran to the study room and began to write a note. It read...
Dear Madison,
Do you remember me? It's Sakura! I just found out not to long ago that I was a princess as well! Cool huh! Well I have a fiancee and I want you to meet him! His name is Li! ... Do you have a boy friend? Well if so I want to meet him! And I want you to visit soon! Please come!
Sincerely: Now Princess Sakura Avalon
P.S remember how we used to think how cool it was that I had the same last name as the King and Queen...Well now we know why! See ya soon! Bye
Sakura read her letter over before enclosing it in an envelope. Sakura happily skipped the letter to a runner and had him run the letter over to the Taylor Kingdom. Sakura smiled at the idea of her friend coming to visit. She couldn't wait for her to meet Li.
Sakura walked back into the castle and went to Li's room. She then nocked on his door. "Who is it?"he asked. "Me."said Sakura. "Me who?"he replied. "Let me in silly...you know who it is."she said. "Mommy?"said Li as he chuckled. Sakura put her hands on her hips. Li opened the door.
"Li...your so....dumb at times."said Sakura as she walked in. Li shrugged his shoulders. "Oh well."he sighed. "Guess what!"said Sakura happily. "Huh?"he replied. "My best friend is going to visit here...And she's going to come for to wedding!"said Sakura happily. "Cool."said Li.
Sakura continued talking about how she and Madison would have so much fun when they were kids. Li fell asleep in the middle of her story. "Li Showron! Are you listening!?"screamed Sakura as she shook him violently. "Hmmm...? Oh...Yeah...I think...At least...I was..."said Li sleepily. Sakura gave a long sigh.
After Sakura finished her story, she and Li went to the kitchen and had the cook make them a snack. Sakura happily talked with Li while they nibbled there snacks. Sakura couldn't wait for the reply.
Sakura walked to the castle door. She could have sworn she heard a nock. Sakura opened the door and saw the runner standing there holding a note. Sakura ripped it open and read. She then danced around. It said that Madison would be arriving tomorrow. Sakura thanked the runner and gave him a tip. She then went inside to show Li.
"A friend huh..."he said after a while of Sakura explaining her friend to him. "Yeah and she's going to come and visit!"said Sakura happily. Li just nodded. 'Another girl like Sakura?' thought Li.
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next morning
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Sakura woke up and got dressed. She couldn't wait for her friend to come. Sakura ran down the halls to the door room. She sat on a chair and waited. Li woke up from all the commotion and he sat next to Sakura. "So....waiting for your friend?"he asked. Sakura nodded. The truth was she couldn't wait.
A nock came at the door and Sakura rushed to it. She opened the door and gasped! Li got up and he caught a fainting Sakura. A giggle came from the door. "Hi I'm Madison....Sakura's friend."said the lady. "I'm Eli,Madison's husband."said the man as he shook Li's free hand. A little girl came through the door way. "Me Cass."said the little girl. Li could tell that Cass was about 2 or 3...Because of her bad English.
Sakura finally came to. Sakura sat on a chair and began to learn about her friend and her friend's husband and child. She found out what the kids real name was as well, it was Cassey. (****Ca-c****)
Sakura smiled. She couldn't imagine her friend having such a beautiful daughter. The daughter had black shoulder blade length hair and purple eyes, just like her mother. Madison explained that her daughter was going to grow out her hair just like she had.
(*********************TO BE CONTINUED***************************)
=^.^= Got this one done early morning....Alright Alright 1:08 .... So sue me! Anyhow...I decided to give Madison a little daughter. See ha ha! I told her I would try to get them in...I didn't promise it but...I did! And if you didn't know then...READ MY REPLYS TO YOUR REVIEWS! *sigh* No one does. Oh well...I hope you enjoyed this chapter! By the way did I spell Nadishiko right? Is that how you spell it? Oh well.
Bye: Kitty Bo =^.^=
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Kat
Simone I know I am your friend and all but if you EVER leave a cliffhanger like that again and don't get this story updated soon I am going to have to kill you! Maybe I will hang you and let you see what it is like to be hung like you are doing to Sakura! I would say it would be in your best intrest to continue writeing NOW!!!!!!
MY REPLY
Alright ok i am =^.^=
Lady Sutaa
ok for one thing i know u r not goin to let them die rite???? well that is my guess.... please continue!!!! bye
MY REPLY
Of coarse not! =^.^=
Little Blossom
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CONTINUE
MY REPLY
kk lol
lexis
a cliffhanger! write again soon please!
MY REPLY
heres the chapter =^.^= I don't plan on leaving anymore cliffhangers
brittney (bubzlrle@aol.com)
ooooohhhhh my god!!!!! i totally hope they survive! i'm kinda cryin....that was sad. well hope you get the chapter up rreeaallly soon. :)
MY REPLY
crying! Wow! heres the chapter though *hands you a tissue*
Dr Megalomania
.... you CAN'T just kill them! [hugs li] well, you can hang sakura but not LI!! i love him!
sakura: hey!!
DrM: well... okay, you can't kill sakura either...please continue!!
MY REPLY
I know i know...i can't kill um...oh well
luna
you little dork, you are not alowed to have such a big cliffhangersilly *giggle* My chapter 4
was done yesterday. If annyone want to try it out the title is THE STARS ARE BORN. it is lame but i was SLEEPY!!!
Ok...I'm reading it and likeing it....it's really good! =^.^=
*sigh* Why must people flame fics? If they don't like the fic....then why not ignore the fic? *sigh* I should tear up and burn the book Just Ella....never knew it was the same as my fic...I only read chapter one and half of chapter two...so i wounder how my fic turned out like it *scratches head* I know i'll flip through the dumb thing and see how my fic is the same....just before i burn the piece of junk...*smiles evily* BURN BOOK BURN!
What hapned last
Sakura and Li walked up to the loops. Li shook his head. Sakura whispered that she loved him too much to marry anyone else. Li just nodded his head. Sakura and Li walked up to the loops and rested there heads in it.
The boards below them dropped and they began to gag.
Here goes!
"No!!!!!!!! Stop now!!!!!"cried Nadishiko. The guards stared at her for a couple seconds then quickly put the lever in to reverse and the boards came back up. "Honey! Oh my poor baby!"cried Nadishiko. Nadishiko hugged her halfway standing daughter.
"Advisor! I'm gunna have your head for this!"cried an angry Tory. Tory then rushed over to the advisor and tackled him to the ground. Tory then began punching the advisor wildly in the face.
Sakura staggered a little in her mother's arms. She then rubbed her soar neck. She was just barely alive. "Mommy...I thought you left."whispered Sakura. "I got worried cuse I left my crown behind. So we turned around. And as soon as a servant asked me why I was having my daughter hanged...I ran here as soon as possible."said Nadishiko as she helped her daughter out of the rope.
"Li!"cried Sakura suddenly. Sakura got up and rushed over to Li. She then helped him out of the rope. Li was still breathing but very slowly. Sakura helped a gasping Li up to his feet. Nadishiko watched her daughter...Then it clicked...Her daughter loved this man...not Derrick.
"Sa-Sakura!"gasped Li happily. Sakura and Li hugged a while then they looked at Nadashiko. Aden just arrived and he ran over to Tory to prevent him from killing the advisor. Just then Li,Sakura,and Nadishiko began hugging. Aden was tearing off Tory who was yelling "One more punch! Let me kill him!".
Nadishiko turned to her daughter and smiled. "You don't want to marry Derrick...Do you?"she said. "No..."replied Sakura. Nadishiko nodded in approval. Aden walked over to his wife and smiled. "Everything is all right...How about we take that trip now...And leave Sakura in charge...And have the advisor thrown in jail...We will have him beheaded when we get back...What do you say?"asked Aden. Nadishiko nodded in approval.
Nadishiko explained to Sakura that she would be in control before Nadishiko left. Sakura nodded. Li overheard the conversation. Sakura and Li walked to the main room and sat in a chair.
"When do you want the wedding to be?"asked Sakura. "I don't know..."said Li. "HMMMM...How about in 2 months...How does that sound?"asked Sakura. Li shrugged. "That long?"he said in a playful tone. Sakura nodded. Li sighed then he to nodded.
The advisor sat cold in his cell. 'Oh well...I didn't succeed but...I gave the Queen,Princess,King,and Prince a scare.' thought the advisor. The advisor then moaned in pain. Maybe I shouldn't have done it...I should have known Prince Tory would beat the crap out of me.' thought the advisor sadly. 'But wait!' the advisor gave an evil grin. 'My sister can help!' he then got a good idea that would break them up for good!
Sakura left the room to go to her bedroom to change into something better. She wondered what her dress would look like and...Then she remembered her best friend...The one who was a princess in her village and only got to visit on weekends. 'I know!' she thought. 'I'll have my old friend Madison come visit!' Sakura smiled happily as many memories of her childhood playing with Madison came into her mind.
Sakura ran out of her room. She ran to the study room and began to write a note. It read...
Dear Madison,
Do you remember me? It's Sakura! I just found out not to long ago that I was a princess as well! Cool huh! Well I have a fiancee and I want you to meet him! His name is Li! ... Do you have a boy friend? Well if so I want to meet him! And I want you to visit soon! Please come!
Sincerely: Now Princess Sakura Avalon
P.S remember how we used to think how cool it was that I had the same last name as the King and Queen...Well now we know why! See ya soon! Bye
Sakura read her letter over before enclosing it in an envelope. Sakura happily skipped the letter to a runner and had him run the letter over to the Taylor Kingdom. Sakura smiled at the idea of her friend coming to visit. She couldn't wait for her to meet Li.
Sakura walked back into the castle and went to Li's room. She then nocked on his door. "Who is it?"he asked. "Me."said Sakura. "Me who?"he replied. "Let me in silly...you know who it is."she said. "Mommy?"said Li as he chuckled. Sakura put her hands on her hips. Li opened the door.
"Li...your so....dumb at times."said Sakura as she walked in. Li shrugged his shoulders. "Oh well."he sighed. "Guess what!"said Sakura happily. "Huh?"he replied. "My best friend is going to visit here...And she's going to come for to wedding!"said Sakura happily. "Cool."said Li.
Sakura continued talking about how she and Madison would have so much fun when they were kids. Li fell asleep in the middle of her story. "Li Showron! Are you listening!?"screamed Sakura as she shook him violently. "Hmmm...? Oh...Yeah...I think...At least...I was..."said Li sleepily. Sakura gave a long sigh.
After Sakura finished her story, she and Li went to the kitchen and had the cook make them a snack. Sakura happily talked with Li while they nibbled there snacks. Sakura couldn't wait for the reply.
Sakura walked to the castle door. She could have sworn she heard a nock. Sakura opened the door and saw the runner standing there holding a note. Sakura ripped it open and read. She then danced around. It said that Madison would be arriving tomorrow. Sakura thanked the runner and gave him a tip. She then went inside to show Li.
"A friend huh..."he said after a while of Sakura explaining her friend to him. "Yeah and she's going to come and visit!"said Sakura happily. Li just nodded. 'Another girl like Sakura?' thought Li.
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next morning
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Sakura woke up and got dressed. She couldn't wait for her friend to come. Sakura ran down the halls to the door room. She sat on a chair and waited. Li woke up from all the commotion and he sat next to Sakura. "So....waiting for your friend?"he asked. Sakura nodded. The truth was she couldn't wait.
A nock came at the door and Sakura rushed to it. She opened the door and gasped! Li got up and he caught a fainting Sakura. A giggle came from the door. "Hi I'm Madison....Sakura's friend."said the lady. "I'm Eli,Madison's husband."said the man as he shook Li's free hand. A little girl came through the door way. "Me Cass."said the little girl. Li could tell that Cass was about 2 or 3...Because of her bad English.
Sakura finally came to. Sakura sat on a chair and began to learn about her friend and her friend's husband and child. She found out what the kids real name was as well, it was Cassey. (****Ca-c****)
Sakura smiled. She couldn't imagine her friend having such a beautiful daughter. The daughter had black shoulder blade length hair and purple eyes, just like her mother. Madison explained that her daughter was going to grow out her hair just like she had.
(*********************TO BE CONTINUED***************************)
=^.^= Got this one done early morning....Alright Alright 1:08 .... So sue me! Anyhow...I decided to give Madison a little daughter. See ha ha! I told her I would try to get them in...I didn't promise it but...I did! And if you didn't know then...READ MY REPLYS TO YOUR REVIEWS! *sigh* No one does. Oh well...I hope you enjoyed this chapter! By the way did I spell Nadishiko right? Is that how you spell it? Oh well.
Bye: Kitty Bo =^.^=