PLEASE READ!
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
kikie () Date: 2002-02-09 Ch: 8 Anonymous
oh! next chapter please!!! next chapter soon!!!!
MY REPLY
Yup here it is!
Samara-chan Date: 2002-02-09 Ch: 8 Signed
Hey, very nice story, Kitty Bo! Thanks for e-mailing me about it^_^. Please also R&R my fic 'The Brightest Star'! Also, Nadeshiko's english name is 'Natasha'.
Sayonara,
Samara-chan^_^
MY REPLY
Yup I saw that it was the same day i uploaded! but thanx anyways, And I think I R+Red your fic a couople days ago!
Little Blossom Date: 2002-02-08 Ch: 8 Signed
Great chap . Ha take that you stupid adviser , you go tori . Please continue it's very good
MY REPLY
See! I wasn't gunna let the advisor go free for the 2 mean things he did to Sakura! Huh...oy yeah...and the mean thing he did to Li...I guess...LOL
Lady Sutaa () Date: 2002-02-08 Ch: 8 Anonymous
lol!! i know u were not going to kill them. i was rite! hehehe...yay u finally put Tomoyo n Eriol in the story but with a daughter!!! that's kool anyways.
MY REPLY
See I didn't promise anything but Idid...SO BE HAPPY! LOL...Well the daughter is a little funny sweet heart! So...Yeah! And she LOVES her mom Madison the most out her mom and dad!
Dr Megalomania Date: 2002-02-08 Ch: 8 Signed
[blink, blink] me confused. are you a dubber or a subber? anyhoo, story's great, [twitch] except for the fact you call tomoyo... [twitch, twitch, wince] madison... altho...[puts hands on hips] i notice while i've been back to review your fics... i notice you haven't returned the favor! [waves hand] ah well, never mind...
MY REPLY
I told you! I will NOT use the stupid japanese names! That's why it's under English! *sigh* I hate the japanese names anyways...all except Eli's japanese name. I like Eroil more then Eli...but oh well.
*sigh* Why must people flame fics? If they don't like the fic....then why not ignore the fic? *sigh* I should tear up and burn the book Just Ella....never knew it was the same as my fic...I only read chapter one and half of chapter two...so i wounder how my fic turned out like it *scratches head* I know i'll flip through the dumb thing and see how my fic is the same....just before i burn the piece of junk...*smiles evily* BURN BOOK BURN!
What hapened Last
Sakura smiled. She couldn't imagine her friend having such a beautiful daughter. The daughter had black shoulder blade length hair and purple eyes, just like her mother. Madison explained that her daughter was going to grow out her hair just like she had.
Here goes!
"Hey Madison, Would you like to sleep in a large or a small guest room?"asked Sakura. Madison gave a warm smile. "Oh I suppose a large room would be fine, I mean as long as it isn't to much trouble." said Madison. Sakura gave a smile. "No, No trouble at all...You know I wouldn't ever think you were trouble."said Sakura. Madison gave another warm smile. "Mommy Mommy Mommy!"cried Cassey suddenly. Sakura and Madison had almost forgotten about Cassey and Eli.
Madison got down to Cassey's eye level. "What is it honey?"asked Madison. "Mommy, where I sleep?"Cassey asked. Madison got up and looked at Sakura. "Well, she can sleep in the same room or a small one that's next to the one you'll be staying in."said Sakura. Madison nodded then got eye-level with her daughter again. "Which one would you like sweety?"she asked. Cassey thought for a while then answered. "Weyl, I want be wit you."
Madison looked at Sakura and Sakura nodded. "So...What do you want to do Madison...I mean, have you got any ideas?"asked Sakura. "Well...Not in particular, I guess I'll do what-ever you want to do."said Madison. Sakura gave a one-eye open smile then she walked down a hall. Eli and Li, feeling a little left out followed.
"Alright, Here is your room."said Sakura as she opned a door. Madison walked in and looked around. "It's great Sakura!"said Madison happily. "Mommy, where do me sleep?"asked Cassey. Madison smiled. "Well, I guess you could sleep in the middle of me and daddy."Madison said. Cassey wrinkled her nose. "But daddy makes funny noiseys when he sleeps."said Cassey. Madison and Li started to laugh, Sakura joined in when she realized what Cassey was talking about and Eli just shook his head as a imbarissed look on his face. "There called toots, Swetie."whispered Madison into Cassey's ear.
Cassey nodded. "I guess I can tand the icky noiseys daddy makes." Cassey said. Sakura and Madison giggled while Li chuckled. Eli now really felt uncomfortable. (**** I HATE the name Eli *sigh* I like Eroil better but...Oh well!****) "Can we just go...do something...PLEASE?!"said an imbarissed Eli. Sakura nodded.
"Well let's go play some tennis...Unless you guys can think of anything better."said Sakura. Madison shook her head in agreeance. Sakura, Madison, Cassey, Li, and Eli walked to the tennis court. "Uhmm...Cassey, would you like to go swimming in the shallow pool? It's just deep enough for you to practice padeling and there will be a life guard there...So...What do you say?"asked Sakura. Cassey smiled. "I'll go swimming latter...I want to atch the first game onyey. I wanna see if mommy and or daddy wins."said Cassey. Sakura smiled.
Sakura and the gang arrived at the tennis court. They then seperated to the girl and boy's dressing rooms to change into one of the many out fits there are to wear. Sakura and the gang all came out in tennis outfits. Cassey was sitting on the stands watching them. "Well, how about girls verses boys."said Sakura. Li and Eli nodded. Madison walked over to a side of the net and got ready to serve.
"Are you a good player?"asked Madison. Sakura nodded. "I practiced at home with my friends. Are you good?"asked Sakura. Madison nodded. "Me and my mom would play when she wasn't busy takeing care of the kingdom."said Madison. "Are we going to play yet?"asked Eli. Sakura and Madison nodded.
"Serves up!"said Madison as she served the birdie over the net. It went prefectley streight and Li hit it. The birdie came back and so on and so forth with some misses on both sides untill the score was even. The team that scored the last point was the winners so it was a very nerve racking tie. Madison called out the serve's number then the birdie flew to Eli and Li's side. Li hit it. It then came back to the girl's side and Madison hit it. The birdie flew prefectley over the net. Then Eli hit it and it almost made it over the net but then it smacked the net. "Our serve!" said Madison as she went over to grab the birdie.
Madison served the birdie over the net prefectley. Li hit it. Then Sakura hit the birdie prefectley over the net. "Hai!" called out Sakura happily. Then the birdie flew over and hit Sakura on the head then bounced in her hands. "FOUL!" Cried Eli as he ran over to get the birdie. Sakura was laying on her back all swirly eyed. "Sakura...Are you alright?"asked Madison. Sakura got up after a while and rubbed her head. "Yeah...I think."she said.
The game then started again with Li serveing. The birdie flew over the net and Sakura hit it. Then Eli hit it then Sakura, then Li, then Madison. Then when Eli ran to get it, he missed the birdie and it fell to the ground with a plop. Eli stared at the birdie and Cassey cheered. "YAY MOMMY!"Cried Cassey happily. Madison looked her daughter's way and smiled.
"Alright Cassey. Are you ready to go swimming? There are alot of swimming suits to try on!"said Sakura. Cassey nodded then smiled. Sakura led Cassey to the pool and gave the life-guard strict orders to watch her like a hawk cuse if anything hapned to her he would be hanged. The life guard gave a wide-eyed nodd of the head.
Sakura walked back to the tennis court then they began another game of tennis. Li and Eli lost at almost every game. The score was 5 wins for the girls and 2 wins for the boys. Eli and Li walked sulkily behind a triumphant Sakura and Madison. They walked back to the pool and saw the life guard helping Cassey to do the doggy padel and it looked like she was getting the hang of it. Sakura smiled as she walked up to them.
"You did a good job and I'll make sure you get a raise in your pay, I'm sorry if I was a little hard on you but I didn't want anything happening to Cassey."said Sakura. The life guard helped Cassey get out then he walked up to Sakura. "No problem, she's a sweet kid. I wouldn't mind watching her, any time."said the life guard. Sakura and Madison smiled. "Thank-you."said Madison. The life guard nodded his head. "Well I have to go take care of some things so...Just get me if you need me...Alright?"said the life guard. Sakura and Madison nodded there head then had Cassey change into some dry cloths. After Cassey finished changing they went to the kitchen to get a snack.
After eating they went out-side to take a walk. "Is this the Avalon Kingdom?"asked a lady that was walking up the path to the castle. Sakura shook her head yes. "What are you here for?"asked Sakura. "I'm applying for the job to be the King and Queen's advisor!"said the girl happily. Sakura smiled. "Well you've come to the right place, just ask the guards where to go when you get inside...Alright?"said Sakura. The lady nodded her head. "Of coarse! Thank-you!"she said and with that they lady ran up the path to the castle.
(*************TO BE CONTINUED**************)
IMPORTANT!!
I am going to change the name of this story to Two Lost Souls instead of Two Lost Souls in Love .... OK? Alright so when or if u look up the story for chapter 10 it will be under Two Lost Souls not Two Lost Souls in Love! OK! OK!
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Got it done late at night as a favor of one of my reviewers! Well I hoped you liked the chapter and as always R+R oh yes and you may im me at Kitty Bo 100@aim.com and you may e-mail me at KittyBo100@yahoo.com well that's all for now so Bye!
I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
kikie () Date: 2002-02-09 Ch: 8 Anonymous
oh! next chapter please!!! next chapter soon!!!!
MY REPLY
Yup here it is!
Samara-chan Date: 2002-02-09 Ch: 8 Signed
Hey, very nice story, Kitty Bo! Thanks for e-mailing me about it^_^. Please also R&R my fic 'The Brightest Star'! Also, Nadeshiko's english name is 'Natasha'.
Sayonara,
Samara-chan^_^
MY REPLY
Yup I saw that it was the same day i uploaded! but thanx anyways, And I think I R+Red your fic a couople days ago!
Little Blossom Date: 2002-02-08 Ch: 8 Signed
Great chap . Ha take that you stupid adviser , you go tori . Please continue it's very good
MY REPLY
See! I wasn't gunna let the advisor go free for the 2 mean things he did to Sakura! Huh...oy yeah...and the mean thing he did to Li...I guess...LOL
Lady Sutaa () Date: 2002-02-08 Ch: 8 Anonymous
lol!! i know u were not going to kill them. i was rite! hehehe...yay u finally put Tomoyo n Eriol in the story but with a daughter!!! that's kool anyways.
MY REPLY
See I didn't promise anything but Idid...SO BE HAPPY! LOL...Well the daughter is a little funny sweet heart! So...Yeah! And she LOVES her mom Madison the most out her mom and dad!
Dr Megalomania Date: 2002-02-08 Ch: 8 Signed
[blink, blink] me confused. are you a dubber or a subber? anyhoo, story's great, [twitch] except for the fact you call tomoyo... [twitch, twitch, wince] madison... altho...[puts hands on hips] i notice while i've been back to review your fics... i notice you haven't returned the favor! [waves hand] ah well, never mind...
MY REPLY
I told you! I will NOT use the stupid japanese names! That's why it's under English! *sigh* I hate the japanese names anyways...all except Eli's japanese name. I like Eroil more then Eli...but oh well.
*sigh* Why must people flame fics? If they don't like the fic....then why not ignore the fic? *sigh* I should tear up and burn the book Just Ella....never knew it was the same as my fic...I only read chapter one and half of chapter two...so i wounder how my fic turned out like it *scratches head* I know i'll flip through the dumb thing and see how my fic is the same....just before i burn the piece of junk...*smiles evily* BURN BOOK BURN!
What hapened Last
Sakura smiled. She couldn't imagine her friend having such a beautiful daughter. The daughter had black shoulder blade length hair and purple eyes, just like her mother. Madison explained that her daughter was going to grow out her hair just like she had.
Here goes!
"Hey Madison, Would you like to sleep in a large or a small guest room?"asked Sakura. Madison gave a warm smile. "Oh I suppose a large room would be fine, I mean as long as it isn't to much trouble." said Madison. Sakura gave a smile. "No, No trouble at all...You know I wouldn't ever think you were trouble."said Sakura. Madison gave another warm smile. "Mommy Mommy Mommy!"cried Cassey suddenly. Sakura and Madison had almost forgotten about Cassey and Eli.
Madison got down to Cassey's eye level. "What is it honey?"asked Madison. "Mommy, where I sleep?"Cassey asked. Madison got up and looked at Sakura. "Well, she can sleep in the same room or a small one that's next to the one you'll be staying in."said Sakura. Madison nodded then got eye-level with her daughter again. "Which one would you like sweety?"she asked. Cassey thought for a while then answered. "Weyl, I want be wit you."
Madison looked at Sakura and Sakura nodded. "So...What do you want to do Madison...I mean, have you got any ideas?"asked Sakura. "Well...Not in particular, I guess I'll do what-ever you want to do."said Madison. Sakura gave a one-eye open smile then she walked down a hall. Eli and Li, feeling a little left out followed.
"Alright, Here is your room."said Sakura as she opned a door. Madison walked in and looked around. "It's great Sakura!"said Madison happily. "Mommy, where do me sleep?"asked Cassey. Madison smiled. "Well, I guess you could sleep in the middle of me and daddy."Madison said. Cassey wrinkled her nose. "But daddy makes funny noiseys when he sleeps."said Cassey. Madison and Li started to laugh, Sakura joined in when she realized what Cassey was talking about and Eli just shook his head as a imbarissed look on his face. "There called toots, Swetie."whispered Madison into Cassey's ear.
Cassey nodded. "I guess I can tand the icky noiseys daddy makes." Cassey said. Sakura and Madison giggled while Li chuckled. Eli now really felt uncomfortable. (**** I HATE the name Eli *sigh* I like Eroil better but...Oh well!****) "Can we just go...do something...PLEASE?!"said an imbarissed Eli. Sakura nodded.
"Well let's go play some tennis...Unless you guys can think of anything better."said Sakura. Madison shook her head in agreeance. Sakura, Madison, Cassey, Li, and Eli walked to the tennis court. "Uhmm...Cassey, would you like to go swimming in the shallow pool? It's just deep enough for you to practice padeling and there will be a life guard there...So...What do you say?"asked Sakura. Cassey smiled. "I'll go swimming latter...I want to atch the first game onyey. I wanna see if mommy and or daddy wins."said Cassey. Sakura smiled.
Sakura and the gang arrived at the tennis court. They then seperated to the girl and boy's dressing rooms to change into one of the many out fits there are to wear. Sakura and the gang all came out in tennis outfits. Cassey was sitting on the stands watching them. "Well, how about girls verses boys."said Sakura. Li and Eli nodded. Madison walked over to a side of the net and got ready to serve.
"Are you a good player?"asked Madison. Sakura nodded. "I practiced at home with my friends. Are you good?"asked Sakura. Madison nodded. "Me and my mom would play when she wasn't busy takeing care of the kingdom."said Madison. "Are we going to play yet?"asked Eli. Sakura and Madison nodded.
"Serves up!"said Madison as she served the birdie over the net. It went prefectley streight and Li hit it. The birdie came back and so on and so forth with some misses on both sides untill the score was even. The team that scored the last point was the winners so it was a very nerve racking tie. Madison called out the serve's number then the birdie flew to Eli and Li's side. Li hit it. It then came back to the girl's side and Madison hit it. The birdie flew prefectley over the net. Then Eli hit it and it almost made it over the net but then it smacked the net. "Our serve!" said Madison as she went over to grab the birdie.
Madison served the birdie over the net prefectley. Li hit it. Then Sakura hit the birdie prefectley over the net. "Hai!" called out Sakura happily. Then the birdie flew over and hit Sakura on the head then bounced in her hands. "FOUL!" Cried Eli as he ran over to get the birdie. Sakura was laying on her back all swirly eyed. "Sakura...Are you alright?"asked Madison. Sakura got up after a while and rubbed her head. "Yeah...I think."she said.
The game then started again with Li serveing. The birdie flew over the net and Sakura hit it. Then Eli hit it then Sakura, then Li, then Madison. Then when Eli ran to get it, he missed the birdie and it fell to the ground with a plop. Eli stared at the birdie and Cassey cheered. "YAY MOMMY!"Cried Cassey happily. Madison looked her daughter's way and smiled.
"Alright Cassey. Are you ready to go swimming? There are alot of swimming suits to try on!"said Sakura. Cassey nodded then smiled. Sakura led Cassey to the pool and gave the life-guard strict orders to watch her like a hawk cuse if anything hapned to her he would be hanged. The life guard gave a wide-eyed nodd of the head.
Sakura walked back to the tennis court then they began another game of tennis. Li and Eli lost at almost every game. The score was 5 wins for the girls and 2 wins for the boys. Eli and Li walked sulkily behind a triumphant Sakura and Madison. They walked back to the pool and saw the life guard helping Cassey to do the doggy padel and it looked like she was getting the hang of it. Sakura smiled as she walked up to them.
"You did a good job and I'll make sure you get a raise in your pay, I'm sorry if I was a little hard on you but I didn't want anything happening to Cassey."said Sakura. The life guard helped Cassey get out then he walked up to Sakura. "No problem, she's a sweet kid. I wouldn't mind watching her, any time."said the life guard. Sakura and Madison smiled. "Thank-you."said Madison. The life guard nodded his head. "Well I have to go take care of some things so...Just get me if you need me...Alright?"said the life guard. Sakura and Madison nodded there head then had Cassey change into some dry cloths. After Cassey finished changing they went to the kitchen to get a snack.
After eating they went out-side to take a walk. "Is this the Avalon Kingdom?"asked a lady that was walking up the path to the castle. Sakura shook her head yes. "What are you here for?"asked Sakura. "I'm applying for the job to be the King and Queen's advisor!"said the girl happily. Sakura smiled. "Well you've come to the right place, just ask the guards where to go when you get inside...Alright?"said Sakura. The lady nodded her head. "Of coarse! Thank-you!"she said and with that they lady ran up the path to the castle.
(*************TO BE CONTINUED**************)
IMPORTANT!!
I am going to change the name of this story to Two Lost Souls instead of Two Lost Souls in Love .... OK? Alright so when or if u look up the story for chapter 10 it will be under Two Lost Souls not Two Lost Souls in Love! OK! OK!
Normal message
Got it done late at night as a favor of one of my reviewers! Well I hoped you liked the chapter and as always R+R oh yes and you may im me at Kitty Bo 100@aim.com and you may e-mail me at KittyBo100@yahoo.com well that's all for now so Bye!