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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Lil DragonLex
it was good. write again soon.
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Yupers! I am actuley writeing soon! *cheers* ISN'T IT AMAZING! And it's a long chapter to!
luna
poor little girl *sobs*
MY REPLY
I know *sobs* It's so sad!
Lady Sutaa
so Janie is nice but her brother control her to be evil?? i am rite?? hope i am! keep up the great work Kit!!
MY REPLY
You are correct!!! *cheers* I'm so happy you got it...Well if your still confused it's explained more in this chapter!
What hapned last
Kara screamed then fell to the ground. "Janie...I know why your doing this and...We will always be friends...Right?"asked Kara. The girl snapped out of the trans. "Kara! It wasn't me...I didn't do it! Kara don't die!"cried the girl/Janie. "Janie, We will always be friends...Bye Janie..."said Kara as she breathed her last then died. "Brother! I hate you!"cried Janie as she stomped off. Evil laughs could be heard, then the woman woke up in a cold swet.
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Sakura and the gang were all in a peaceful slumber. There day had been great but Sakura had her doubts, and Li wanted to kill that Janie girl for trying to make him fall in love with her! 'How dare that girl!' thought Li angrily as he fell asleep.
Here goes.
Janie tried to get back to sleep. She then thought. 'Why did I trust him? Why did I trust his letter? I should have realized that he would never change.' She then thought back to what his desperate letter had said.
Janie! Long time no see! I have missed you soo much! Any how I have bad news! The King and Queen have made an unjust desition! They are allowing a peasant and a Princess to get married! I need you to stop this! I looked into the future and if they get married, the kingdom will be destroyed! But if the Princess marrys Prince Derrick, all will be fine. So I need you to seperate them! Believe me I have changed! I'm not the same old jerk, and sadly over the years I lost my power to control people. But that's ok. But will you please apply for the job advisor, if you don't succed or change your mind, you'll have a good job! Well I have to go cuse this has to fit on Olgamager's foot...Do you remember? My old bird, the black owl. Well I hope you get it, I'm sure Olgamager remembers were you live! Well bye little sister!
Sincerely: Geral
'Why did I trust him? That note was sooo corny that...I guess I just wanted to see him as a good person...Well I guess I was wrong,he will never be a good person!' Janie nestled her head in her pillow. 'That man has been controlling me for to long now! I'm gunna see if I was born with a power like he was!' 'I just wish my friend would have stayed his girlfriend untill he dumped her, that way...He wouldn't have wanted to kill her...' And with those thoughts Janie fell asleep.
In the morning Sakura woke up to a nock on her door. "Who is it?"asked Sakura. "It's me...Li...Can I come in?" said the voice behind the door. "Li! Sure! Come on in! The door is unlocked!" said Sakura happily. Li walked in nervously. His face was flushed. "Are you sick today?" asked Sakura worridly. Li shook his head as the color came back in his face only in a crimison red color across his face.
"Are you sure your not feverish?" asked Sakura again. Li shook his head. "I-I'm s-sur-re."said Li as he stutered. "What's wrong then?" asked Sakura. "N-nothing I feal f-fine..."said Li again. Sakura made a sigh of relief, he was really looking sick and she was relived to know he was ok.
"So...What do you want...I...I mean why did you come here?" asked Sakura. "I uh...Wanted to ask you something..."said Li. "Okay...Well...What is it?" asked Sakura. "I...uh..."said Li. "Oh Li just say it!"said Eli as he walked in. Sakura jumped back. "Just say what?" asked Sakura. "Li..."said Eli as he stared at the crimison red Li.
Li gave a death glare to Eli before turning to a curious Sakura. "Well, I uh...I wanted to ask you for your...uh..." said Li nervously. "You wanted to ask me for my what?" asked Sakura "I wanted to ask you for your...Hand in...uh...um...your hand in ma-marr-marria-marriage..."said Li as he got on his knee and opned a small navy blue box. Madison gasped in the doorway with her camcorder on watching Li's every move.
Sakura gasped then hugged Li. "Yes of coarse I'll marry you!" exclaimed Sakura happily. Li sighed in relief. Eli smiled at Li. Li turned then whispered in his ear "I'm gunna get you for this." Eli chuckled. "how?" he asked quietly. Li made a puzzled exprestion. Eli chuckled again.
Sakura had been being taped by Madison the hole time. "Madison!" said Sakura with annoyance in her voice. "What?" asked Madison innocentley. "You still have the habbit..." said Sakura as she sighed. "Habbit...What habbit?" asked Madison as she hid the camcorder begind her back. Sakura shook her head. Her friend had been tapeing her doing things since she was 7,when she met Madison.
"Hey Madison...Do you ever wonder why Janie changed all of the sudden?"asked Sakura curiously. The room fell silent. "What do you mean?" asked Madison. "Well she was being all nice then all of the sudden she flirted with Li."said Sakura. Madison shook her head. "I don't know...I guess she just decided to." answered Madison.
"I don't belive she was trying to...I mean..." said Sakura. Madison interrupted. "I'm gunna show the tape to your folks!" Sakura knew she was changeing the subject but, in a way she was glad that her friend did. "Don't you dare Madison! I'll have Sakura tell them!" yelled Li as he chased Madison down the hall. Sakura snaped out of her thoughts as she watched them run.
'I wounder why someone so nice can all of the sudden be so...so mean all of the sudden.' thought Sakura. Eli was still in Sakura's room. He was laughing at Li makeing his clumsy grasps at the camcorder. "Hey Eli."said Sakura in a soft voice. "Hmmm?" said Eli. "Uhmmm...What were you doing that day when me and Madison were in the dress shop?" asked Sakura. Eli looked at Sakura oddly.
"I figured you already knew...Wasn't it obvious?" asked Eli. Sakura shook her head. "No." she replyed calmly. Eli's mouth dropped open. "Well we were picking out an engagement ring...Also a wedding ring." said Eli calmly. "So that's what you guys were doing."sai Sakura. "Yep...Well I'll leave now so you can get dressed."said Eli as he headed out of her room. "Good idea...I almost forgot."said Sakura. Eli chuckled while he closed her bedroom door. Sakura then got up and got dressed.
After Sakura was dressed she saw her family watching Madison's video. Tory was gripping his seat with a mad look on his face and Aden was smileing. "Hi Sakura." said Sakura's dad as he smiled at her. "Hey dad." said Sakura cheerfuly. "SAKURA!!! What in the world were you thinking!!!???" yelled Tory in fury as he saw Sakura accept the proposal.
"Well I was thinking how much I loved him and..." said Sakura. "I'm gunna...You...Y-you love him?"asked Tory as disquist apeared in his voice. Sakura nodded. Tory gave a sigh. "Well...I hope you two get along well." said Tory through clenched teeth. Sakura nodded then gave her big brother a hug. "I love you monster."said Tory calmly. "I love you to."said Sakura as she stomped on his foot.
Tory let out a small yelp before looking down in silence. "What's wrong son?" asked Aden. "Nothing." said Tory through clenched teeth. Sakura let out a small giggle. "He's alright...He is just a little bored right now."said Sakura. Aden gave Sakura the yeah-right look before turning his head. Sakura let out a small sigh of relief.
"When is the wedding?" asked Madison suddenly. "I don't know..."said Sakura as she looked at Li. "Don't look at me!" said Li. "Mommy Mommy Mommy! Can me and Janie pway today?" asked Cassey as she came running down the hall. Madison gave Janie a glare.
Janie then stagered then she batted her eyes at Li. "Hii Li." sai8d Janie cutely. "What's the matter with you? Got something in your eye?" asked Li coldly. Janie backed up. She then stagered again. "I don't know sweetie. I don't trust this lady!" said Madison angrily. "Pwease!?" said Cassey cutely. "Oh all right. But Janie...NO MORE FUNNY STUFF!" said Madison.
Janie nodded while Cassey dragged Janie away skipping. "Who does she think she is?" asked Madison angrily after a while. "I don't know Madison." said Sakura blankly. Aden and Tory looked at Madison with confused faces. Madison waved her hands furiously. "It's nothing...Really!" she said.
Aden and Tory nodded then turned back. Tory then got up and took out the tape. He then asked Madison if he could borrow it so he could show it to his mom latter. Madison nodded. Then Aden and Tory left, Tory was still holding the tape. Madison smiled as they walked off. "I hope my daughter knows who her best friend is." said Madison worridely. "She'll be ok Madison, Janie won't hurt her." said Sakura.
"What do you mean!? She just flirted with your fiancee!" screamed Madison. "Yes, but did you notice how she stagered before and after?" asked Sakura. Madison gasped. "Do you suppose...?" asked Madison. Sakura nodded. "I think she's being controlled!" said Sakura. Li gasped. "So that's why she's been flirting with me." he said. Sakura nodded.
"It has to be, I don't think she is that kind of girl." said Sakura. Madison,Li, and Eli nodded. "Well, we will just have to save her...Won't we."said Madison. Sakura nodded. "Now we just have to find out who is controlling her...I'm sure if we ask her she will tell us." said Eli. They all nodded. "But when?" asked Li. "When she get's back with Cassey." said Eli. They all nodded. "Sounds good." said Sakura. They then all went to the main room to watch a couple of movies while they waited for Janie to get back with Cassey.
(*****************TO BE CONTINUED!!****************)
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I would like to thank my friends...Star Princess ssc and my best friend Katrina! I am now writing a story with chapters not sequels that are in paragraphs using the dubbed names! right now I am going to only have two people to thank but I have a feeling I might hit it off with this story and become popular! I hope if you are reading this that you will review this story! I do not know if this is popular if you don't review this. I will post two chapters and if I have enough reviews I will finish this story so if you like it review please! Oh yes and I do not own CCS I wish I did but sadly I don't...*sobs* Oh yes and if you like my notes (M.N) then please tell me in your reviews!
I have a new thank-you to awesome people who reviewed! I feel so loved! alright and they called themselves...
Lil DragonLex
it was good. write again soon.
MY REPLY
Yupers! I am actuley writeing soon! *cheers* ISN'T IT AMAZING! And it's a long chapter to!
luna
poor little girl *sobs*
MY REPLY
I know *sobs* It's so sad!
Lady Sutaa
so Janie is nice but her brother control her to be evil?? i am rite?? hope i am! keep up the great work Kit!!
MY REPLY
You are correct!!! *cheers* I'm so happy you got it...Well if your still confused it's explained more in this chapter!
What hapned last
Kara screamed then fell to the ground. "Janie...I know why your doing this and...We will always be friends...Right?"asked Kara. The girl snapped out of the trans. "Kara! It wasn't me...I didn't do it! Kara don't die!"cried the girl/Janie. "Janie, We will always be friends...Bye Janie..."said Kara as she breathed her last then died. "Brother! I hate you!"cried Janie as she stomped off. Evil laughs could be heard, then the woman woke up in a cold swet.
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Sakura and the gang were all in a peaceful slumber. There day had been great but Sakura had her doubts, and Li wanted to kill that Janie girl for trying to make him fall in love with her! 'How dare that girl!' thought Li angrily as he fell asleep.
Here goes.
Janie tried to get back to sleep. She then thought. 'Why did I trust him? Why did I trust his letter? I should have realized that he would never change.' She then thought back to what his desperate letter had said.
Janie! Long time no see! I have missed you soo much! Any how I have bad news! The King and Queen have made an unjust desition! They are allowing a peasant and a Princess to get married! I need you to stop this! I looked into the future and if they get married, the kingdom will be destroyed! But if the Princess marrys Prince Derrick, all will be fine. So I need you to seperate them! Believe me I have changed! I'm not the same old jerk, and sadly over the years I lost my power to control people. But that's ok. But will you please apply for the job advisor, if you don't succed or change your mind, you'll have a good job! Well I have to go cuse this has to fit on Olgamager's foot...Do you remember? My old bird, the black owl. Well I hope you get it, I'm sure Olgamager remembers were you live! Well bye little sister!
Sincerely: Geral
'Why did I trust him? That note was sooo corny that...I guess I just wanted to see him as a good person...Well I guess I was wrong,he will never be a good person!' Janie nestled her head in her pillow. 'That man has been controlling me for to long now! I'm gunna see if I was born with a power like he was!' 'I just wish my friend would have stayed his girlfriend untill he dumped her, that way...He wouldn't have wanted to kill her...' And with those thoughts Janie fell asleep.
In the morning Sakura woke up to a nock on her door. "Who is it?"asked Sakura. "It's me...Li...Can I come in?" said the voice behind the door. "Li! Sure! Come on in! The door is unlocked!" said Sakura happily. Li walked in nervously. His face was flushed. "Are you sick today?" asked Sakura worridly. Li shook his head as the color came back in his face only in a crimison red color across his face.
"Are you sure your not feverish?" asked Sakura again. Li shook his head. "I-I'm s-sur-re."said Li as he stutered. "What's wrong then?" asked Sakura. "N-nothing I feal f-fine..."said Li again. Sakura made a sigh of relief, he was really looking sick and she was relived to know he was ok.
"So...What do you want...I...I mean why did you come here?" asked Sakura. "I uh...Wanted to ask you something..."said Li. "Okay...Well...What is it?" asked Sakura. "I...uh..."said Li. "Oh Li just say it!"said Eli as he walked in. Sakura jumped back. "Just say what?" asked Sakura. "Li..."said Eli as he stared at the crimison red Li.
Li gave a death glare to Eli before turning to a curious Sakura. "Well, I uh...I wanted to ask you for your...uh..." said Li nervously. "You wanted to ask me for my what?" asked Sakura "I wanted to ask you for your...Hand in...uh...um...your hand in ma-marr-marria-marriage..."said Li as he got on his knee and opned a small navy blue box. Madison gasped in the doorway with her camcorder on watching Li's every move.
Sakura gasped then hugged Li. "Yes of coarse I'll marry you!" exclaimed Sakura happily. Li sighed in relief. Eli smiled at Li. Li turned then whispered in his ear "I'm gunna get you for this." Eli chuckled. "how?" he asked quietly. Li made a puzzled exprestion. Eli chuckled again.
Sakura had been being taped by Madison the hole time. "Madison!" said Sakura with annoyance in her voice. "What?" asked Madison innocentley. "You still have the habbit..." said Sakura as she sighed. "Habbit...What habbit?" asked Madison as she hid the camcorder begind her back. Sakura shook her head. Her friend had been tapeing her doing things since she was 7,when she met Madison.
"Hey Madison...Do you ever wonder why Janie changed all of the sudden?"asked Sakura curiously. The room fell silent. "What do you mean?" asked Madison. "Well she was being all nice then all of the sudden she flirted with Li."said Sakura. Madison shook her head. "I don't know...I guess she just decided to." answered Madison.
"I don't belive she was trying to...I mean..." said Sakura. Madison interrupted. "I'm gunna show the tape to your folks!" Sakura knew she was changeing the subject but, in a way she was glad that her friend did. "Don't you dare Madison! I'll have Sakura tell them!" yelled Li as he chased Madison down the hall. Sakura snaped out of her thoughts as she watched them run.
'I wounder why someone so nice can all of the sudden be so...so mean all of the sudden.' thought Sakura. Eli was still in Sakura's room. He was laughing at Li makeing his clumsy grasps at the camcorder. "Hey Eli."said Sakura in a soft voice. "Hmmm?" said Eli. "Uhmmm...What were you doing that day when me and Madison were in the dress shop?" asked Sakura. Eli looked at Sakura oddly.
"I figured you already knew...Wasn't it obvious?" asked Eli. Sakura shook her head. "No." she replyed calmly. Eli's mouth dropped open. "Well we were picking out an engagement ring...Also a wedding ring." said Eli calmly. "So that's what you guys were doing."sai Sakura. "Yep...Well I'll leave now so you can get dressed."said Eli as he headed out of her room. "Good idea...I almost forgot."said Sakura. Eli chuckled while he closed her bedroom door. Sakura then got up and got dressed.
After Sakura was dressed she saw her family watching Madison's video. Tory was gripping his seat with a mad look on his face and Aden was smileing. "Hi Sakura." said Sakura's dad as he smiled at her. "Hey dad." said Sakura cheerfuly. "SAKURA!!! What in the world were you thinking!!!???" yelled Tory in fury as he saw Sakura accept the proposal.
"Well I was thinking how much I loved him and..." said Sakura. "I'm gunna...You...Y-you love him?"asked Tory as disquist apeared in his voice. Sakura nodded. Tory gave a sigh. "Well...I hope you two get along well." said Tory through clenched teeth. Sakura nodded then gave her big brother a hug. "I love you monster."said Tory calmly. "I love you to."said Sakura as she stomped on his foot.
Tory let out a small yelp before looking down in silence. "What's wrong son?" asked Aden. "Nothing." said Tory through clenched teeth. Sakura let out a small giggle. "He's alright...He is just a little bored right now."said Sakura. Aden gave Sakura the yeah-right look before turning his head. Sakura let out a small sigh of relief.
"When is the wedding?" asked Madison suddenly. "I don't know..."said Sakura as she looked at Li. "Don't look at me!" said Li. "Mommy Mommy Mommy! Can me and Janie pway today?" asked Cassey as she came running down the hall. Madison gave Janie a glare.
Janie then stagered then she batted her eyes at Li. "Hii Li." sai8d Janie cutely. "What's the matter with you? Got something in your eye?" asked Li coldly. Janie backed up. She then stagered again. "I don't know sweetie. I don't trust this lady!" said Madison angrily. "Pwease!?" said Cassey cutely. "Oh all right. But Janie...NO MORE FUNNY STUFF!" said Madison.
Janie nodded while Cassey dragged Janie away skipping. "Who does she think she is?" asked Madison angrily after a while. "I don't know Madison." said Sakura blankly. Aden and Tory looked at Madison with confused faces. Madison waved her hands furiously. "It's nothing...Really!" she said.
Aden and Tory nodded then turned back. Tory then got up and took out the tape. He then asked Madison if he could borrow it so he could show it to his mom latter. Madison nodded. Then Aden and Tory left, Tory was still holding the tape. Madison smiled as they walked off. "I hope my daughter knows who her best friend is." said Madison worridely. "She'll be ok Madison, Janie won't hurt her." said Sakura.
"What do you mean!? She just flirted with your fiancee!" screamed Madison. "Yes, but did you notice how she stagered before and after?" asked Sakura. Madison gasped. "Do you suppose...?" asked Madison. Sakura nodded. "I think she's being controlled!" said Sakura. Li gasped. "So that's why she's been flirting with me." he said. Sakura nodded.
"It has to be, I don't think she is that kind of girl." said Sakura. Madison,Li, and Eli nodded. "Well, we will just have to save her...Won't we."said Madison. Sakura nodded. "Now we just have to find out who is controlling her...I'm sure if we ask her she will tell us." said Eli. They all nodded. "But when?" asked Li. "When she get's back with Cassey." said Eli. They all nodded. "Sounds good." said Sakura. They then all went to the main room to watch a couple of movies while they waited for Janie to get back with Cassey.
(*****************TO BE CONTINUED!!****************)
I HOPED YOU LIKED IT! =^.^=
IMPORTANT!!!
You MUST give me your right e-mail address or I will have to stop telling you when I update! I AM GETTING SICK OF CORRECTING THE E-MAIL ADDRESSES!! So if you want me to tell you when I update ASK ME!! You are going to have to check every 2 days to see if I updated other wise because I am going to stop e-mailing unless you give me your correct e-mail address!!!
IMPORTANT!!
Please tell me if you read my replys to your reviews...If not please tell me.