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Authors note: Okay the girl that is going to bring Ash back won't come until the fourth or fifth chapter, and I really would like some help. And I was thinking of something original. But anyway, onto the third chapter of We All Shine On.
"Wow! It's bigger than I thought!" Fel exclaimed as they came upon the Indigo Plateau. "Yeah, that's what I thought at first to." Richie said. Looking back, Richie saw the love of his life sleeping peacefully on the backseat. Richie sighed at how beautiful that Misty looked when she was asleep, such that he regretted waking her up when he did. "Well, here is the hotel. I'll go check in and come back to get the luggage. And for now, let Misty sleep. We'll wake her when we're done." Fel told Richie as they pulled up to a hotel. Ten minutes later Richie woke Misty up. "Okay, here's how the arrangements work. This room right here is for you and Misty. Mine is right across the hall, so if you need anything, don't hesitate asking." Fel told Richie, as Misty had already lied down on a bed and fell back to sleep.
The next day, after a good nights sleep, Misty and Richie decided to show Fel around the Plateau, until Misty spotted a familiar face. "Tracy! What are you doing here?" Misty called out. The person she called to turned around and it was Tracy, but his face was different, there was a bruise on the left eye. "Misty, long time, no see." Tracy said smiling, as he approached the group. After Tracy was fully introduced to Misty's traveling companions, Misty started to ask questions. "Are you here with Ash? And how has he been doing?" Misty asked. Tracy let out a shudder before he spoke. "No, I am not here with Ash, and there is not enough money in the world to make me. I'm here on an assignment for Prof. Oak. And Ash is doing fine, he may be a complete and utter prick, but fine." Tracy said. Misty was a little struck at what Tracy said. "What makes you say that?" Richie said, a little surprised at how Ash was described. "When someone punches you in the eye hard enough to have it become swollen shut, prick is being nice, because there are a whole lot more accurate words I could use, but I was trying to be polite." Tracy said. Tracy then went on to explain what happened to Ash and how he was acting. "That doesn't sound like Ash at all. Putting up a Pikachu against a Golem. And having gladiatorial like competition between his Pokemon, that's just sick." Richie said, a little disgusted.
After chatting and sight seeing, Tracy had to talk with Misty, alone. "Before you start, your not going to tell me that you love me, are you?" Misty asked Tracy, who gave her a surprised look. "No, your not my type. What I was going to tell you is that I have something to tell you. Me and Gary figured out that he got this way after you left and if I were you don't let Ash see you or Richie, he might get 'ideas' about how to solve his problems, so I'd watch out." Tracy told Misty before he left. And Misty still couldn't get over her shock of what happened to Ash, as she went to join the one that she loved at the hotel.
Another day, another chapter. For the said girl, please give a name, personality , what Pokemon she uses(preferably with nicknames), what clothes she wears, and how she should meet Ash. And I will apologize for Ash when he is in the chapters. That being said, review and read.
Authors note: Okay the girl that is going to bring Ash back won't come until the fourth or fifth chapter, and I really would like some help. And I was thinking of something original. But anyway, onto the third chapter of We All Shine On.
"Wow! It's bigger than I thought!" Fel exclaimed as they came upon the Indigo Plateau. "Yeah, that's what I thought at first to." Richie said. Looking back, Richie saw the love of his life sleeping peacefully on the backseat. Richie sighed at how beautiful that Misty looked when she was asleep, such that he regretted waking her up when he did. "Well, here is the hotel. I'll go check in and come back to get the luggage. And for now, let Misty sleep. We'll wake her when we're done." Fel told Richie as they pulled up to a hotel. Ten minutes later Richie woke Misty up. "Okay, here's how the arrangements work. This room right here is for you and Misty. Mine is right across the hall, so if you need anything, don't hesitate asking." Fel told Richie, as Misty had already lied down on a bed and fell back to sleep.
The next day, after a good nights sleep, Misty and Richie decided to show Fel around the Plateau, until Misty spotted a familiar face. "Tracy! What are you doing here?" Misty called out. The person she called to turned around and it was Tracy, but his face was different, there was a bruise on the left eye. "Misty, long time, no see." Tracy said smiling, as he approached the group. After Tracy was fully introduced to Misty's traveling companions, Misty started to ask questions. "Are you here with Ash? And how has he been doing?" Misty asked. Tracy let out a shudder before he spoke. "No, I am not here with Ash, and there is not enough money in the world to make me. I'm here on an assignment for Prof. Oak. And Ash is doing fine, he may be a complete and utter prick, but fine." Tracy said. Misty was a little struck at what Tracy said. "What makes you say that?" Richie said, a little surprised at how Ash was described. "When someone punches you in the eye hard enough to have it become swollen shut, prick is being nice, because there are a whole lot more accurate words I could use, but I was trying to be polite." Tracy said. Tracy then went on to explain what happened to Ash and how he was acting. "That doesn't sound like Ash at all. Putting up a Pikachu against a Golem. And having gladiatorial like competition between his Pokemon, that's just sick." Richie said, a little disgusted.
After chatting and sight seeing, Tracy had to talk with Misty, alone. "Before you start, your not going to tell me that you love me, are you?" Misty asked Tracy, who gave her a surprised look. "No, your not my type. What I was going to tell you is that I have something to tell you. Me and Gary figured out that he got this way after you left and if I were you don't let Ash see you or Richie, he might get 'ideas' about how to solve his problems, so I'd watch out." Tracy told Misty before he left. And Misty still couldn't get over her shock of what happened to Ash, as she went to join the one that she loved at the hotel.
Another day, another chapter. For the said girl, please give a name, personality , what Pokemon she uses(preferably with nicknames), what clothes she wears, and how she should meet Ash. And I will apologize for Ash when he is in the chapters. That being said, review and read.