AN ~ this is my first fic!!!!...Be nice but constructive criticism is most welcome!
Disclamer~i don't own Harry potter and co. but the other characters are mine!!
~*~In The End~*~
She stood there staring up at the huge gates that loomed up in front of her. She griped her bag tighter and wrapped her pure white cloak tighter around her and
removed her light blonde hair from her face, as she took a deep breath and marched up to the huge doors and pushed them open. Upon entering, she was welcomed by Dumbledor
"Ahh I trust you had a safe journey." Dumbledor asked softly. She only nodded in reply and stared up at him with her ice blue eyes, which pierced through his soul. He gasped and muttered under his breath, "just like your mothers" as he said this he shook his head in disbelief. "The rest of the school is attending dinner shall we join them and get you sorted?" he said it as more of a command rather than an option. She followed him into the great hall suddenly became aware that her attire was completely different from those around her, realising this she pulled her white cloak tighter around her as though to conceal herself from those around her.
"Who is she?" exclaimed Ron in a low whisper. Harry shook his head still following her with his eyes. She reached the head table and as calmly as she could sat on the sorting
stool. The hat was placed upon her head and slipped over her eyes, at this she let out a small giggle and smiled to herself.
"Well, well, well what do we have here? Hummm...let's see, difficult very difficult indeed but wait what was that, slytherin yes I think so."
"Please no, anything but" these small words she uttered under her breath.
"What...not slytherin but u could do so well.... hummm then...."
Everyone stared, the sorting was taking longer than any sorting before had another 10 minutes passed.
"What on earth is going on?" inquired Harry. Nobody answered him.
"GRIFFINDOR" bellowed the sorting hat. A huge uproar exploded form the Griffindor table as the girl walked towards them with a smile on her face, eyes gleaming with happiness.
She sat down next to Hermione.
"Hi! I'm Hermione this is Ron and Harry."
"Hey nice to meet you guys, I'm Ice. God this place is huge, mum never said it was this big!" she exclaimed
"Ummm...er umm why are you joining Hogwarts now and I assume that your entering the 6th year right? And if u don't mind why did the sorting take so long?" asked Ron. SMACK "OOOFFF,
Hermione what was that for?" Ron said rubbing his arm where she had so skilfully hit him.
"You know perfectly well why, don't be so rude. Sorry about that Ice, but he kind of has a point you Know it is kind of strange really." Hermione said holding on to Ron's' hand.
"Well I'd rather not talk about it right now." she said, "Is there somewhere i can get some rest or something." Ice asked.
Harry shot up from his seat "Oh my god! You must think were complete idiots. Come on we'll show you your room and our common room, follow Me." with that he held out his hand to help her out of her seat, Ice took it and stood up. Ron and Hermione followed arms linked round each other.
"This place is *so* confusing, how do you know which way to turn or go or ummm why are we facing a painting of a random lady?" asked Ice. Harry, Ron and Hermione laughed. Ice stood confused as ever and annoyed at the fact that she had no idea what they were laughing about.
"Chocolate frogs" said Hermione stifling her laughter as she saw the look on Ice's face as the portrait swung open. Ice just stood there as it opened and stared dumbfounded
and was dragged through the hole in the wall into a room filled with comfy red and gold chairs a large fire place with a fire burning, sofas the list was endless.
"This is our common room." Proclaimed Harry. "And Hermione will show you to your room." as he said this he indicated to a staircase opposite him. With this Hermione grabbed
Ice's hand and dragged her across the common room and up the stairs. When they arrived all Ice could do was stare, there in front of her were 4, four-poster beds in red and
gold each with their own trunks and night stands.
"This is your bed, and mine is right next to yours, if you ever need anything just ask k?" Hermione looked at Ice and saw something rather familiar about her features,
she kept it to herself and just smiled and her.
"Thanks so much, you do not know how much this means to me." and Ice turned to Hermione and gave her a hug. Then quickly ran over to investigate the new bed she had. Hermione
watched and smiled as Ice looked at everything and started to take out a few bits and bobs to put on her nightstand.
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So what do you think??? eh??? interesting?? pls. R&R and sorry for any spelling mistakes!!
Disclamer~i don't own Harry potter and co. but the other characters are mine!!
~*~In The End~*~
She stood there staring up at the huge gates that loomed up in front of her. She griped her bag tighter and wrapped her pure white cloak tighter around her and
removed her light blonde hair from her face, as she took a deep breath and marched up to the huge doors and pushed them open. Upon entering, she was welcomed by Dumbledor
"Ahh I trust you had a safe journey." Dumbledor asked softly. She only nodded in reply and stared up at him with her ice blue eyes, which pierced through his soul. He gasped and muttered under his breath, "just like your mothers" as he said this he shook his head in disbelief. "The rest of the school is attending dinner shall we join them and get you sorted?" he said it as more of a command rather than an option. She followed him into the great hall suddenly became aware that her attire was completely different from those around her, realising this she pulled her white cloak tighter around her as though to conceal herself from those around her.
"Who is she?" exclaimed Ron in a low whisper. Harry shook his head still following her with his eyes. She reached the head table and as calmly as she could sat on the sorting
stool. The hat was placed upon her head and slipped over her eyes, at this she let out a small giggle and smiled to herself.
"Well, well, well what do we have here? Hummm...let's see, difficult very difficult indeed but wait what was that, slytherin yes I think so."
"Please no, anything but" these small words she uttered under her breath.
"What...not slytherin but u could do so well.... hummm then...."
Everyone stared, the sorting was taking longer than any sorting before had another 10 minutes passed.
"What on earth is going on?" inquired Harry. Nobody answered him.
"GRIFFINDOR" bellowed the sorting hat. A huge uproar exploded form the Griffindor table as the girl walked towards them with a smile on her face, eyes gleaming with happiness.
She sat down next to Hermione.
"Hi! I'm Hermione this is Ron and Harry."
"Hey nice to meet you guys, I'm Ice. God this place is huge, mum never said it was this big!" she exclaimed
"Ummm...er umm why are you joining Hogwarts now and I assume that your entering the 6th year right? And if u don't mind why did the sorting take so long?" asked Ron. SMACK "OOOFFF,
Hermione what was that for?" Ron said rubbing his arm where she had so skilfully hit him.
"You know perfectly well why, don't be so rude. Sorry about that Ice, but he kind of has a point you Know it is kind of strange really." Hermione said holding on to Ron's' hand.
"Well I'd rather not talk about it right now." she said, "Is there somewhere i can get some rest or something." Ice asked.
Harry shot up from his seat "Oh my god! You must think were complete idiots. Come on we'll show you your room and our common room, follow Me." with that he held out his hand to help her out of her seat, Ice took it and stood up. Ron and Hermione followed arms linked round each other.
"This place is *so* confusing, how do you know which way to turn or go or ummm why are we facing a painting of a random lady?" asked Ice. Harry, Ron and Hermione laughed. Ice stood confused as ever and annoyed at the fact that she had no idea what they were laughing about.
"Chocolate frogs" said Hermione stifling her laughter as she saw the look on Ice's face as the portrait swung open. Ice just stood there as it opened and stared dumbfounded
and was dragged through the hole in the wall into a room filled with comfy red and gold chairs a large fire place with a fire burning, sofas the list was endless.
"This is our common room." Proclaimed Harry. "And Hermione will show you to your room." as he said this he indicated to a staircase opposite him. With this Hermione grabbed
Ice's hand and dragged her across the common room and up the stairs. When they arrived all Ice could do was stare, there in front of her were 4, four-poster beds in red and
gold each with their own trunks and night stands.
"This is your bed, and mine is right next to yours, if you ever need anything just ask k?" Hermione looked at Ice and saw something rather familiar about her features,
she kept it to herself and just smiled and her.
"Thanks so much, you do not know how much this means to me." and Ice turned to Hermione and gave her a hug. Then quickly ran over to investigate the new bed she had. Hermione
watched and smiled as Ice looked at everything and started to take out a few bits and bobs to put on her nightstand.
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So what do you think??? eh??? interesting?? pls. R&R and sorry for any spelling mistakes!!