I just though I needed to clear a few things up about my story…
First off, I am not going to do an epilogue. I am, however, going to do a re-write, with the help of Jaded Hope. Anyone who wishes to read the revised version can view it under our pen name, Insane Fangirls.
In chapter 1, I have Legolas standing on a balcony outside. Yet in chapter 2 I have Elrond saying Legolas hasn't come out of his room since. Minor typo, that'll be fixed.
I apologize for threatening not to continue if I didn't get however many reviews. I just wanted to make sure people liked my story enough to review.
I realize that the Elrond scene made no sense. That will be edited in the rewrite. Elrond won't be so harsh; he'll just state his disapproval.
I wasn't aware that Legolas couldn't give up his immortality. I thought that was something all Elves could do, though I guess I'm wrong. [ch. 2, 2nd to last paragraph]
Chapter 3: "Legolas was sprawled on the bed, still as death. But he couldn't be dead, he just couldn't be! Aragorn cried out in anguish before he saw that the Elf was breathing: the rise and fall of his chest was hard to see, but it was there." Some said, "Aragorn is a great healer! He'd be able to tell in a second whether Legolas was alive or dead!"
Think about this for a second. You go to try to convince your best friend to stop being stupid, and when you open the door, he/she is lying on the bed, almost completely still. Would you panic for a second, thinking that they're dead, or would you stay calm and check for pulse?
In chapter 4, Meg's smugness didn't ring true to some. Sorry, like it says at the beginning of that chapter, I was at a loss for ideas.
In chapter 5, I state that Meg's healing powers were the best. Oops, I guess I got a little carried away… hehehe… Elrond wasn't there doing the healing spell because… uh… He got abducted by aliens! Yeah!
Chapter 6: "I regret not that I did it…" oops! Minor typo, it's supposed to read "I regret that I did it." Don't think many caught that, but for those who did…
Chapters 5 and 6: at the beginning I say "Sorry for the delay, I bet those 5 minutes killed ya…" I didn't write those chapters in 5 minutes, I had them all written, but I couldn't help putting those notes on… hehe…
~Arwen