Yeah! I see alot of people like my fanfic.
Well, I do have a popular fanfic, full of humor, Called Goku and Vegeta super babies...? But this is a true peice of art.
I spent the last two months reading the most reviewed stories on the web. Stories ranging from one chapter to twenty-five. I figured something out along the way.
The people/you/someone you know like long chaptered stories with abit of humor, drama, action and sepence. Well, that's what I am trying to give. It's kinda hard to do all those things, so I will take it all one step at a time.
You got to help me out here! Review me and tell me if I didn't add enough humor, or drama or I didn't make it long enough!
THANK YOU! And can you beleive my story was on the web for just over 24 hours, and I got 10 reviews? I LOVE YOU PEOPLE!
Blue Tiger
By
Kristin
Part 2-Black Dragon
Bulma spun around to look at the person to grab her. She gasped when she saw him.
"Yamcha? How'd you find me?"asked Bulma. She was slightly upset at him for grabbing her like that.
"Hey babe. Long time no see. Well, I've been searching for you for the past month! I thought you might show up here. I'm lookin for a new partner in my business, and thinkin you could help."said Yamcha.
Bulma ripped her arm from him and put her hands on her hips, glareing at him.
"No way Yamcha. I remember what happened last time I became 'partners' with you. You tried to get me in your bed the whole time! No way!"Bulma huffed. Turning on her heal, and walking away from the stuned Yamcha.
"Wait babe! Come on! Please. Give me another chance. I need a smart mind like yours in this job!"begged Yamcha following her and begging her at the same time.
"I told you my answer already. Now go away. I don't care what job you got. I have my own thank you very much!"Bulma walked faster to get away from yamcha.
"Now, hold up. You didn't even listen to what I was going to say to you. My job is worth Ten thou! Each! Come on. You can't past up that offer. I mean, the most you get is about ten. So, why not join me. You know. For old time sake."Begged yamcha. Walking infrount of her. Waiting for the answer.
Bulma took a deep breath. She didn't want him to beg like this. Enough though she knew well, that he deserved it. He would give up his own mother, if he had one, for a good pay. "I'm sorry Yamcha. I can't. I got MY own job to worry about. I don't need another one. I'll see you later."
Bulma walked around yamcha and made a clear way for her ship. She could hear yamcha shout after her,"I'll be on earth next week! I'll wait for you there!"
Bulma made her way to the docking bay. Sighing about what happened with yamcha. Sure, at one point she felt something for him. But now, it was gone. She had lost the flame. She sadly leaned against the railing from the docking bay, looking at the huge ships. Trying to sort out her already complacated life.
~If only I could turn back time. I could go right back and make sure I didn't leave earth. EVER!~
Bulma knew nothing could have saved her from her fate. Fate was cruel sometimes.
~What bad thing did I do that made fate choose me to play it's cruel jokes on?~
Buma asked herself that question many times before. Everytime she was on the run from police, that's the first thing that would pop in her head. What was cruel to some, generos to others. That's just the way things worked, unless you fought with fate to make it better.
Glass half full.
That's the way to look at things right now. Her glass was half full. She had just about everything she wanted, besides a boyfriend. She should be happy. She is the most wanted woman in the known univerous! But she always dreamed it would be because of her brains, and looks not because she stole.
Bulma stood straight and started to walk back to her ship. It was going to be a long trip to her hideout. She made it herself. It was a huge space station that had a sheild that would make it almost invisable to the naked eye. It also had a special protective sheild to keep all blasts from a ship that didn't have a buster canon from even harming the ship.
Bulma walked until she got to the ship beside her. She had been wondering who the ship belonged too. She knew most of the people around this station, because she spent three years around here. She walked up to the ship. It was a sleak model. Wonderfully built to the cutting edge of technoligy. Of course, hers surpassed all known ships. But with the booters on this one, it could infact probably keep up with hers.
Bulma looked closely at the desigh of the dragon. It was beatiful to say the least. Then she sighed. She had been doing that alot since she got here. Maybe having second thoughts about her life. When she was here, that usually happened.
Bulma sighed deeply. Her thoughts would have to wait til later.
Bulms reached out a hand to touch the wonderful painting on the side of the ship. Then, right before she touched it, she found herself up against it.
She looked at her attacker. It was vegeta. He looked really pissed off.
"What are you doing woman?"roared vegeta.
~How did I get myself into this?~
"I was just looking at the painting! Aren't you being just alittle over pretective of your ship?"Bulma said. Regretting her words as vegeta pushed her against the ship harder.
"Woman! I didn't give you any permission to even look at my ship! Now you wanted to touch it?"Vegeta said angerly.
~Now, I am going to ask myself this again. How did I get into this?~Bulma thought.
She was face to face with Vegeta. vegeta was extremly angery at her.
~Well, I'm going to die!~
Vegeta suddenly powered up a ki ball in his left hand.
"I will only spare your life IF you tell me any information that you know about Blue Tiger!"Vegeta said. Holding the ki ball close to her check.
Bulma could feel the heat coming from the ball. She had to close the eyes closes to it because of the heat. Her skin was starting to burn from it.
"I DON'T KNOW! I don't know anything about her!"said Bulma. Nearly screaming from the pain.
Suddenly Vegeta dropped her. His ki ball went back inside of his hand. He glared down at her.
"Woman. I know you are hiding something from me. I just don't know what...yet. I will come find you once I kill Blue Tiger."said Vegeta. Walking to his ship's enterance and going inside.
Bulma let out a beath. Her body shaking. This is the closes to death she had ever been. Her body trembled. She unsteadly got to her feet and walked back to her ship. She quickly got inside and locked the door behind her. She ran inside of her bedroom and ploped down on her bed.
She sqeazed her pillow tighly. Continueing to shake and shiver. She waited there for the shivering to stop. Then, got up and desided she wanted to leave, and fast!
She hoped in the pilot seat and blasted off into outter space. Hoping to get as far as possiable from Vegeta.
~Why do all the good looking guys have to be evil?~ Bulma asked herself.
The camera was placed on Bulma. Watching her every move. He watched as she shivered on her bed.
~Good thing I put this in her ship before she left~
He thought to himself. Smirking at the idea.
~Now, my little one. You shall never be out of my site!~
Next Time on Blue Tiger: ~Earth. I wonder if my good friends are still there or if they left to find adventure somewhere else?~
She sighed. She was going to the planet with a Darkstar Dragonball was.
~Soon. I'll have my wish for none of this horriable stuff to happen!~
meanwhile
~So. Your going to planet Wilana. Don't worry. I'll keep you company!~
Who is this mysterous guy keeping an eye on Bulma? What's with Vegeta saying he is going to Find Bulma AFTER he killed Blue Tiger? Is Yamcha behinde the camera? Is Vegeta? Is someone from Bulma's past/future? Anyone? Oh, your going to have to wait for the next chapter! Sorry! Please review!
Well, I do have a popular fanfic, full of humor, Called Goku and Vegeta super babies...? But this is a true peice of art.
I spent the last two months reading the most reviewed stories on the web. Stories ranging from one chapter to twenty-five. I figured something out along the way.
The people/you/someone you know like long chaptered stories with abit of humor, drama, action and sepence. Well, that's what I am trying to give. It's kinda hard to do all those things, so I will take it all one step at a time.
You got to help me out here! Review me and tell me if I didn't add enough humor, or drama or I didn't make it long enough!
THANK YOU! And can you beleive my story was on the web for just over 24 hours, and I got 10 reviews? I LOVE YOU PEOPLE!
Blue Tiger
By
Kristin
Part 2-Black Dragon
Bulma spun around to look at the person to grab her. She gasped when she saw him.
"Yamcha? How'd you find me?"asked Bulma. She was slightly upset at him for grabbing her like that.
"Hey babe. Long time no see. Well, I've been searching for you for the past month! I thought you might show up here. I'm lookin for a new partner in my business, and thinkin you could help."said Yamcha.
Bulma ripped her arm from him and put her hands on her hips, glareing at him.
"No way Yamcha. I remember what happened last time I became 'partners' with you. You tried to get me in your bed the whole time! No way!"Bulma huffed. Turning on her heal, and walking away from the stuned Yamcha.
"Wait babe! Come on! Please. Give me another chance. I need a smart mind like yours in this job!"begged Yamcha following her and begging her at the same time.
"I told you my answer already. Now go away. I don't care what job you got. I have my own thank you very much!"Bulma walked faster to get away from yamcha.
"Now, hold up. You didn't even listen to what I was going to say to you. My job is worth Ten thou! Each! Come on. You can't past up that offer. I mean, the most you get is about ten. So, why not join me. You know. For old time sake."Begged yamcha. Walking infrount of her. Waiting for the answer.
Bulma took a deep breath. She didn't want him to beg like this. Enough though she knew well, that he deserved it. He would give up his own mother, if he had one, for a good pay. "I'm sorry Yamcha. I can't. I got MY own job to worry about. I don't need another one. I'll see you later."
Bulma walked around yamcha and made a clear way for her ship. She could hear yamcha shout after her,"I'll be on earth next week! I'll wait for you there!"
Bulma made her way to the docking bay. Sighing about what happened with yamcha. Sure, at one point she felt something for him. But now, it was gone. She had lost the flame. She sadly leaned against the railing from the docking bay, looking at the huge ships. Trying to sort out her already complacated life.
~If only I could turn back time. I could go right back and make sure I didn't leave earth. EVER!~
Bulma knew nothing could have saved her from her fate. Fate was cruel sometimes.
~What bad thing did I do that made fate choose me to play it's cruel jokes on?~
Buma asked herself that question many times before. Everytime she was on the run from police, that's the first thing that would pop in her head. What was cruel to some, generos to others. That's just the way things worked, unless you fought with fate to make it better.
Glass half full.
That's the way to look at things right now. Her glass was half full. She had just about everything she wanted, besides a boyfriend. She should be happy. She is the most wanted woman in the known univerous! But she always dreamed it would be because of her brains, and looks not because she stole.
Bulma stood straight and started to walk back to her ship. It was going to be a long trip to her hideout. She made it herself. It was a huge space station that had a sheild that would make it almost invisable to the naked eye. It also had a special protective sheild to keep all blasts from a ship that didn't have a buster canon from even harming the ship.
Bulma walked until she got to the ship beside her. She had been wondering who the ship belonged too. She knew most of the people around this station, because she spent three years around here. She walked up to the ship. It was a sleak model. Wonderfully built to the cutting edge of technoligy. Of course, hers surpassed all known ships. But with the booters on this one, it could infact probably keep up with hers.
Bulma looked closely at the desigh of the dragon. It was beatiful to say the least. Then she sighed. She had been doing that alot since she got here. Maybe having second thoughts about her life. When she was here, that usually happened.
Bulma sighed deeply. Her thoughts would have to wait til later.
Bulms reached out a hand to touch the wonderful painting on the side of the ship. Then, right before she touched it, she found herself up against it.
She looked at her attacker. It was vegeta. He looked really pissed off.
"What are you doing woman?"roared vegeta.
~How did I get myself into this?~
"I was just looking at the painting! Aren't you being just alittle over pretective of your ship?"Bulma said. Regretting her words as vegeta pushed her against the ship harder.
"Woman! I didn't give you any permission to even look at my ship! Now you wanted to touch it?"Vegeta said angerly.
~Now, I am going to ask myself this again. How did I get into this?~Bulma thought.
She was face to face with Vegeta. vegeta was extremly angery at her.
~Well, I'm going to die!~
Vegeta suddenly powered up a ki ball in his left hand.
"I will only spare your life IF you tell me any information that you know about Blue Tiger!"Vegeta said. Holding the ki ball close to her check.
Bulma could feel the heat coming from the ball. She had to close the eyes closes to it because of the heat. Her skin was starting to burn from it.
"I DON'T KNOW! I don't know anything about her!"said Bulma. Nearly screaming from the pain.
Suddenly Vegeta dropped her. His ki ball went back inside of his hand. He glared down at her.
"Woman. I know you are hiding something from me. I just don't know what...yet. I will come find you once I kill Blue Tiger."said Vegeta. Walking to his ship's enterance and going inside.
Bulma let out a beath. Her body shaking. This is the closes to death she had ever been. Her body trembled. She unsteadly got to her feet and walked back to her ship. She quickly got inside and locked the door behind her. She ran inside of her bedroom and ploped down on her bed.
She sqeazed her pillow tighly. Continueing to shake and shiver. She waited there for the shivering to stop. Then, got up and desided she wanted to leave, and fast!
She hoped in the pilot seat and blasted off into outter space. Hoping to get as far as possiable from Vegeta.
~Why do all the good looking guys have to be evil?~ Bulma asked herself.
The camera was placed on Bulma. Watching her every move. He watched as she shivered on her bed.
~Good thing I put this in her ship before she left~
He thought to himself. Smirking at the idea.
~Now, my little one. You shall never be out of my site!~
Next Time on Blue Tiger: ~Earth. I wonder if my good friends are still there or if they left to find adventure somewhere else?~
She sighed. She was going to the planet with a Darkstar Dragonball was.
~Soon. I'll have my wish for none of this horriable stuff to happen!~
meanwhile
~So. Your going to planet Wilana. Don't worry. I'll keep you company!~
Who is this mysterous guy keeping an eye on Bulma? What's with Vegeta saying he is going to Find Bulma AFTER he killed Blue Tiger? Is Yamcha behinde the camera? Is Vegeta? Is someone from Bulma's past/future? Anyone? Oh, your going to have to wait for the next chapter! Sorry! Please review!