disclaimer:**monotone** ....not mine...
warnings/AN: man.. the things i do for u Jana, i cannot believe im doing 2 chapters per day cuz o u.aiyah. ni hoa ma fan ah... its ok. ur impatient. well... umm me and tasuki pairing first. OMG JANA I AM SO SORRI I DIDNT ASK U WHO U WANTED TO BE PAIRED UP WITH!!!!u just seemed to like chichiri so much... =( forgive me?well.. on w/ da fic.( i was listening to "evolution" by ayumi hamasaki even though i dun get a word o it. ^_^ great chorus)
(good news for chichiri fans... he's in this chapter! yay!fellow readers, PLEASE review. melissa is checking every hour to see reviews and ...**sniff sniff** poor me.)
Chapter 5: Rescues and captures
by:black crystal
"Kill her"
Jana gasped as guards all around came up and got out knives, arrows, and spears. There had to be at least 500. No way she could take all of them on. //Well... i guess this is the end. what a GREAT way to die eh?//she thought gloomily.Jana looked at the woman that had commanded her death sentence.She had long silver hair down to her waist and bright green eyes. her lips lifted into a cruel and evl grin and her eyes narrowed.
"well then? do it. and try not to make a mess either."
Jana closed her eyes and waited for the millions of arrows to pierce her body and kill her...the moment never came. all she heard were curses, gasps, and a "boing"ing sound. She opened one eye.
"woah..."
the arrows were coming at her alright. but... they were bouncing off the orb. she was safe...Jana sighed contently.
"ARAGHH!!! YOU IMBICILES!!!!! I'LL DO IT MYSELF!!!!!!!!!"
Jana screamed as the woman formed a huge black chi blast and aimed it towards her. Her orb shook with the impact but it thankfully didnt break. The woman screamed in rage, but then she collapsed and had to hold onto her throne arm to support her. Apparently her strenth had given out. and no wonder. the orb shook still after the hit and static was buzzing around it. Jana used all her will to command the orb to move but it moved only and inch.
"araghh!!! move damnit!!!!!!"
She screamed in frustration. Suddenly the wall on her right was blown apart. Jana couldnt see anything through the fog and dust, but when it cleared, there stood a tall man with a kesa, kasa,and monk's robes. he had gravity-defying bangs and was chanting what seemed to be a spell. There was also a scar on his right eye. After the spell was done, all the people in the room froze.
"Woah...cool..."
Jana was in awe.But the monk looked at her and her orb and said"follow me no da!"
"how!??!" jana yelled after him but it was too late. he was gone. suddenly, her orb began to move by itself. They came to a forest clearing.The man stopped and turned around. suddenly, Jana's orb burst and she fell VERY unlady-like onto the hard ground.
"Itai..."
"Are you alright no da? my name is chichiri but there is no time to talk no da. i have to get you to safety quickly no da. hold my hand no da."
She took ahold of his hand. it was soft and friendly to the chant. She saw him murmmer a spell and then they disappeared.Suddenly, they reappeared on a mountain. there was something coming towards them...
"konnichiwa Taiitsukan."
Jana fainted.
**at the bandit hideout**
"OI! KOUJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"TASUKI!!!!!!"
Melissa sweatdropped as the two did a freaky, yet cute and funny dance.
"hey this is Melissa. she's gonna be here with us for awhile. ok with ya kouji?"
"what? is she a hostage? You know, Tasuki... you dont like girls so why dont i take her off your hands?"
'WHAT?!?!?no way Kouji. She aint a freaking hostage."
"Oh. Kinda cute though...OUCH!
Tasuki hit Kouji over the head as he led a giggling Melissa into the hideout. Melissa shot Kouji a sly wink and didnt notice the scowl on Tasuki's face. She looked on in wonder at the stuff in the rooms. Finally, Tasuki stopped at a small room by the end of the hallway. Tasuki left her there muttering about some bandits that had broken some rule or another. Melissa walked in and looked about. there was a bed, a window, a closet with some clothes that looked really pretty, and a dresser. on top of the dresser laid a pair of purple earings with a diamond stud. she marvled at the quality and with a furgutive look around her, she put them on. they were marvolous. Melissa looked into the mirror on top of the dresser again. //i wonder whose these are? oh well, ill just borrow them//she thought.
"AHH!!!!!"
Melissa screamed as her relflection changed into Tomo's right in front of her. The reflection grinned and two hands shot out and began to pull her in. melissa tried to scream but onli gagging came out because "Tomo" had one hand on her throat. //oh gods... what's happening?// she thought before her supply of air was gone and everything went dark...
**Texas**
Grace held fast to Tomo and started kicking and scratching him. He was trying to pull Melissa in. She could see. Melissa slumped down and now it was up to her. she finally elbowed him in the head.
"ugh...bitch..."
Tomo groaned and then fell in a heap.
grace grinned."aww did i mess up your make-up Tomo? oh im *SO* sorri! (sarcastic)"
She looked at Melissa."Wake up Mel... be careful."
**flashback**
"AHH!!!! LEMME GO!!!!!!!!"
Grace screamed as the hands pulled her in. As soon as she turned around, she saw Tomo smirking at her.
"where am i? how did you come back to life?"
"oh... you are in a world that i created . i was resored by my master. it is no busniess of yours about her name. have fun**smirk**im off to get your friends. buh-bye"
Tomo left her and Grace screamed in anguish. Suddenly, she felt a hand on her shoulder and looked up. She gasped.
"Suboshi...?"
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
next chapter:some things are explained and jealosy stirs.i dunno when the byakko seishi will appear. should i continue htis fic? im not sure. review and tell me. if you flame me, its alright, i dont expect everyone to LIKE my crappy work.
warnings/AN: man.. the things i do for u Jana, i cannot believe im doing 2 chapters per day cuz o u.aiyah. ni hoa ma fan ah... its ok. ur impatient. well... umm me and tasuki pairing first. OMG JANA I AM SO SORRI I DIDNT ASK U WHO U WANTED TO BE PAIRED UP WITH!!!!u just seemed to like chichiri so much... =( forgive me?well.. on w/ da fic.( i was listening to "evolution" by ayumi hamasaki even though i dun get a word o it. ^_^ great chorus)
(good news for chichiri fans... he's in this chapter! yay!fellow readers, PLEASE review. melissa is checking every hour to see reviews and ...**sniff sniff** poor me.)
Chapter 5: Rescues and captures
by:black crystal
"Kill her"
Jana gasped as guards all around came up and got out knives, arrows, and spears. There had to be at least 500. No way she could take all of them on. //Well... i guess this is the end. what a GREAT way to die eh?//she thought gloomily.Jana looked at the woman that had commanded her death sentence.She had long silver hair down to her waist and bright green eyes. her lips lifted into a cruel and evl grin and her eyes narrowed.
"well then? do it. and try not to make a mess either."
Jana closed her eyes and waited for the millions of arrows to pierce her body and kill her...the moment never came. all she heard were curses, gasps, and a "boing"ing sound. She opened one eye.
"woah..."
the arrows were coming at her alright. but... they were bouncing off the orb. she was safe...Jana sighed contently.
"ARAGHH!!! YOU IMBICILES!!!!! I'LL DO IT MYSELF!!!!!!!!!"
Jana screamed as the woman formed a huge black chi blast and aimed it towards her. Her orb shook with the impact but it thankfully didnt break. The woman screamed in rage, but then she collapsed and had to hold onto her throne arm to support her. Apparently her strenth had given out. and no wonder. the orb shook still after the hit and static was buzzing around it. Jana used all her will to command the orb to move but it moved only and inch.
"araghh!!! move damnit!!!!!!"
She screamed in frustration. Suddenly the wall on her right was blown apart. Jana couldnt see anything through the fog and dust, but when it cleared, there stood a tall man with a kesa, kasa,and monk's robes. he had gravity-defying bangs and was chanting what seemed to be a spell. There was also a scar on his right eye. After the spell was done, all the people in the room froze.
"Woah...cool..."
Jana was in awe.But the monk looked at her and her orb and said"follow me no da!"
"how!??!" jana yelled after him but it was too late. he was gone. suddenly, her orb began to move by itself. They came to a forest clearing.The man stopped and turned around. suddenly, Jana's orb burst and she fell VERY unlady-like onto the hard ground.
"Itai..."
"Are you alright no da? my name is chichiri but there is no time to talk no da. i have to get you to safety quickly no da. hold my hand no da."
She took ahold of his hand. it was soft and friendly to the chant. She saw him murmmer a spell and then they disappeared.Suddenly, they reappeared on a mountain. there was something coming towards them...
"konnichiwa Taiitsukan."
Jana fainted.
**at the bandit hideout**
"OI! KOUJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"TASUKI!!!!!!"
Melissa sweatdropped as the two did a freaky, yet cute and funny dance.
"hey this is Melissa. she's gonna be here with us for awhile. ok with ya kouji?"
"what? is she a hostage? You know, Tasuki... you dont like girls so why dont i take her off your hands?"
'WHAT?!?!?no way Kouji. She aint a freaking hostage."
"Oh. Kinda cute though...OUCH!
Tasuki hit Kouji over the head as he led a giggling Melissa into the hideout. Melissa shot Kouji a sly wink and didnt notice the scowl on Tasuki's face. She looked on in wonder at the stuff in the rooms. Finally, Tasuki stopped at a small room by the end of the hallway. Tasuki left her there muttering about some bandits that had broken some rule or another. Melissa walked in and looked about. there was a bed, a window, a closet with some clothes that looked really pretty, and a dresser. on top of the dresser laid a pair of purple earings with a diamond stud. she marvled at the quality and with a furgutive look around her, she put them on. they were marvolous. Melissa looked into the mirror on top of the dresser again. //i wonder whose these are? oh well, ill just borrow them//she thought.
"AHH!!!!!"
Melissa screamed as her relflection changed into Tomo's right in front of her. The reflection grinned and two hands shot out and began to pull her in. melissa tried to scream but onli gagging came out because "Tomo" had one hand on her throat. //oh gods... what's happening?// she thought before her supply of air was gone and everything went dark...
**Texas**
Grace held fast to Tomo and started kicking and scratching him. He was trying to pull Melissa in. She could see. Melissa slumped down and now it was up to her. she finally elbowed him in the head.
"ugh...bitch..."
Tomo groaned and then fell in a heap.
grace grinned."aww did i mess up your make-up Tomo? oh im *SO* sorri! (sarcastic)"
She looked at Melissa."Wake up Mel... be careful."
**flashback**
"AHH!!!! LEMME GO!!!!!!!!"
Grace screamed as the hands pulled her in. As soon as she turned around, she saw Tomo smirking at her.
"where am i? how did you come back to life?"
"oh... you are in a world that i created . i was resored by my master. it is no busniess of yours about her name. have fun**smirk**im off to get your friends. buh-bye"
Tomo left her and Grace screamed in anguish. Suddenly, she felt a hand on her shoulder and looked up. She gasped.
"Suboshi...?"
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
next chapter:some things are explained and jealosy stirs.i dunno when the byakko seishi will appear. should i continue htis fic? im not sure. review and tell me. if you flame me, its alright, i dont expect everyone to LIKE my crappy work.