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AN: I think the reason why ppl don't read fics like this is cuz no one bothers with OC character stories, its too confusing. Is that true? I know ppl have made a bad image for it but what do you think of my story? I try to be original.I need all the help and ideas I can get in a review. Someone has to have a sane mind while Grace and I go off to talk about the enigizer bunnies and their plan to rule over us all and make us their-**gag** S- Spread t-t-the messag-ge.**Faints, all you see is a pink enigizer bunny banging its bloody drum as it wobbled away from melissa's body.**
Chapters are getting harder to name.
"//" are thoughts. Mostly Jana's. Melissa and Grace don't think... to ourselves. ^^ had u fooled! Wait... well, that's right. We don't think. Wha????O_o;;
Chapter 13:
By:black crystal
Jana poked at her food-on-a-stick and sniffed at it. It SMELLED good alright, but what WAS it!?! Tatara was chewing on his thoughtfuly. Jana placed hers down for it to cool and looked to the south, at the forest. Chichiri had been in there for about 30 minutes already. It shouldn't take THAT long to get some water should it?
"Mi-Jana, should I go check to see where Chichiri has gone?"
Tatara was smiling at her kindly while she looked towards where Chichiri had last gone. Now she looked at him with a start.
"What? Oh... I say give him another 10 minutes. It just doesn't feel right for us to be separated. Strength in numbers right?"she grinned shakily.
Tatara gave her a crooked grin of his own and laughed.
"you're right. What kind of seishi am I, to leave my miko alone here!? Chichiri is strogn and can handle anything. You are wise beyond your years."
Jana shook her head and looked down at the desert ground. It was getting very cold now. She yawned and laid down. //Only 5 minutes//she thought before she fell into a soft sleep.
"Jana! Something is wrong! Chichiri is in trouble! I can sense it!!!"
Jana woke up goggily but went to full-alert when she heard Chichiri's name. Tatara was holding out one hand again, vines twisting towards the forest. She got up and ran to the forest, not minding Tatara calling out behind her. He sighed as she ran inside and ran after her. Why were the women of this century so attracted to danger?!
"CHICHIRI!!!WHERE ARE YOU!??!"
Jana ran through the forest, tree limbs and twigs snatching at her arms and legs, mud on her shoe-less feet. Not that she cared. Chichiri was in danger. She heard a gurgle of water and raced as fast as she could towards the source of the water.
//Chichiri... I hope you're alright. Just hold on.//
**Melissa! **everyone yells for joy!!** in mai dreams... =(**
**ding ding ding**
**Gumph... amp...gehh..."
Melissa slung one hand over the bed, feeling around for her shoes.Once she had passed over a Bubblelicious, white fudge oreos, and a pen, she found what seemed to be her shoes. Now came the hard part. How to get herself out of bed. She laid there grumbling nonsense for awhile, then was roughly pulled out of bed.
"damn miko, can't even fucking wake up. Had to have the emperor make me wake you up and shit."
Tasuki grabbed her by her arm and pushed her into the bathroom, closing the door and cussing. At first Melissa started yawning and scraping her sandals across the floor, but then, all was silent. Tasuki frowned and pressed an ear to the door. Nothing. Then came a sound that made him want to Rekka Shinen her. Snoring.
"WHAT THE FUCK!?!?! WAKE THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!!"
he started to pound on the door and after the first 3 minutes, he heard a shout of "EniGIZER BUNNIES!!!" and looked at the door in wonder. En-igiz-er bunnies? What were those?! Tasuki crossed his arms and after 15 minutes of grumbling and shouting to make sure she didn't fall asleep again, Melissa slammed the door open, smashing Tasuki, who was standing in front of the door, leaning against it while he waited. She smiled and didn't say a word. He heard the door close and then fell to the ground.She has strength...
**at breakfast...**
**chew, glare**
**chomp, glares back**
**swallow, sticks out tounge**
**chew,chew,swallow, looks on with mild intrest**
**retch, pulls down skin under eyes**
**barf, kicks under the table**
**scream, kicks back**
Hotohori finally stopped them when it got too far, even though it was quite amusing. They ate the rest of the breakfast in silence... for about 5 minutes. Then Melissa struck up a conversation with Hotohori, asking about her duty as miko and who her Seishi were going to be. Tasuki just glared and drank sake.
**at the stable, getting ready to go**
Hotohori had people bring out their horses and a black stallion for him. Melissa gave Lightning an apple and went to admire Hotohori's stallion. Tasuki grumbled and went over to Hotohori.
"man... whats with HER?"
"nothing. She is just mad that you endangered her for... sake. I'd be angry too."
Tasuki thought about that and climbed onto his own horse. After everyone was ready, the 2 seishi and the Suzaku no miko waved good-bye to the palace people and rode out the gates.
//who is SHE to be mad at ME if I wanted some sake!?! Damn women. I cant understand them.//
//finally I can get away from the palace. She is so unlike Miaka, but is that a good thing?//
//Mmm... chocolate.//
The 3 rode on until they could only be seen as 3 dots, one munching on white chocolate.
**Grace-im gonna take her part out soon, but right now its just for comical effect.**
Grace propped her feet up on Tomite's back. The T.V. was blaring and she was listening to Ayumi Hamasaki's Endless sorrow on her CD player. Suboshi was getting her her 7th sprite and she was far OVER hyper.
"Ugh. Can I get up now? Tennyo?hello?"
Tomite groaned under the weight of her 20-pound boots, silver buckles up the side and up to her knees, with platforms 5 inches tall.
Grace just yawned and pushed down harder. Suboshi came back with her sprite and more saltine crackers and sat down by her. Tomite looked forward boredly and noticed a purple light from the coffee table in front of him. The book?could it be?would he actually be able to DO something now?Grace didn't seem to notice the glow at all.
**flash**
Tomite blinked and looked around. Grace and Suboshi were gone. He wooped for joy and jumped around the room. He was FREE!!!!
"OH SHIT!!!!!!!! NOO!!!!!!"
he screamed as he too was engulfed by a purple light and sucked into the book.
"Hahahahaha... I love my job."
Taiitsukan's laugh rang along the room, followed by the Nyan-Nyan's giggles.
TBC
Yes very short I know. Kinda pointless, but I felt like I had to put up another chapter. ^^ plz read mai Soi one:until we meet again" plllzzz? OO. I would be forveer grateful. **looks up word in dictionary**AH-HAH!! Well, I wouldn't be eternally grateful, but I would thank yoU!^^I may have the charcters out of... character, but I try. I STILL need info on the Byakko seishi. Ugh. Preferably the unknown seihsi cuz I have too much info on the popular ones. Im thnking the guy that talks to animals... oh right. Im sorry this chapter took so long. It was ready yesterday but the modem broke. For the 6th time. Its true. Grace shall vouch for me. It was the only day I DIDN'T check my reviews. She shall be soooo amazed.^^
AN: I think the reason why ppl don't read fics like this is cuz no one bothers with OC character stories, its too confusing. Is that true? I know ppl have made a bad image for it but what do you think of my story? I try to be original.I need all the help and ideas I can get in a review. Someone has to have a sane mind while Grace and I go off to talk about the enigizer bunnies and their plan to rule over us all and make us their-**gag** S- Spread t-t-the messag-ge.**Faints, all you see is a pink enigizer bunny banging its bloody drum as it wobbled away from melissa's body.**
Chapters are getting harder to name.
"//" are thoughts. Mostly Jana's. Melissa and Grace don't think... to ourselves. ^^ had u fooled! Wait... well, that's right. We don't think. Wha????O_o;;
Chapter 13:
By:black crystal
Jana poked at her food-on-a-stick and sniffed at it. It SMELLED good alright, but what WAS it!?! Tatara was chewing on his thoughtfuly. Jana placed hers down for it to cool and looked to the south, at the forest. Chichiri had been in there for about 30 minutes already. It shouldn't take THAT long to get some water should it?
"Mi-Jana, should I go check to see where Chichiri has gone?"
Tatara was smiling at her kindly while she looked towards where Chichiri had last gone. Now she looked at him with a start.
"What? Oh... I say give him another 10 minutes. It just doesn't feel right for us to be separated. Strength in numbers right?"she grinned shakily.
Tatara gave her a crooked grin of his own and laughed.
"you're right. What kind of seishi am I, to leave my miko alone here!? Chichiri is strogn and can handle anything. You are wise beyond your years."
Jana shook her head and looked down at the desert ground. It was getting very cold now. She yawned and laid down. //Only 5 minutes//she thought before she fell into a soft sleep.
"Jana! Something is wrong! Chichiri is in trouble! I can sense it!!!"
Jana woke up goggily but went to full-alert when she heard Chichiri's name. Tatara was holding out one hand again, vines twisting towards the forest. She got up and ran to the forest, not minding Tatara calling out behind her. He sighed as she ran inside and ran after her. Why were the women of this century so attracted to danger?!
"CHICHIRI!!!WHERE ARE YOU!??!"
Jana ran through the forest, tree limbs and twigs snatching at her arms and legs, mud on her shoe-less feet. Not that she cared. Chichiri was in danger. She heard a gurgle of water and raced as fast as she could towards the source of the water.
//Chichiri... I hope you're alright. Just hold on.//
**Melissa! **everyone yells for joy!!** in mai dreams... =(**
**ding ding ding**
**Gumph... amp...gehh..."
Melissa slung one hand over the bed, feeling around for her shoes.Once she had passed over a Bubblelicious, white fudge oreos, and a pen, she found what seemed to be her shoes. Now came the hard part. How to get herself out of bed. She laid there grumbling nonsense for awhile, then was roughly pulled out of bed.
"damn miko, can't even fucking wake up. Had to have the emperor make me wake you up and shit."
Tasuki grabbed her by her arm and pushed her into the bathroom, closing the door and cussing. At first Melissa started yawning and scraping her sandals across the floor, but then, all was silent. Tasuki frowned and pressed an ear to the door. Nothing. Then came a sound that made him want to Rekka Shinen her. Snoring.
"WHAT THE FUCK!?!?! WAKE THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!!"
he started to pound on the door and after the first 3 minutes, he heard a shout of "EniGIZER BUNNIES!!!" and looked at the door in wonder. En-igiz-er bunnies? What were those?! Tasuki crossed his arms and after 15 minutes of grumbling and shouting to make sure she didn't fall asleep again, Melissa slammed the door open, smashing Tasuki, who was standing in front of the door, leaning against it while he waited. She smiled and didn't say a word. He heard the door close and then fell to the ground.She has strength...
**at breakfast...**
**chew, glare**
**chomp, glares back**
**swallow, sticks out tounge**
**chew,chew,swallow, looks on with mild intrest**
**retch, pulls down skin under eyes**
**barf, kicks under the table**
**scream, kicks back**
Hotohori finally stopped them when it got too far, even though it was quite amusing. They ate the rest of the breakfast in silence... for about 5 minutes. Then Melissa struck up a conversation with Hotohori, asking about her duty as miko and who her Seishi were going to be. Tasuki just glared and drank sake.
**at the stable, getting ready to go**
Hotohori had people bring out their horses and a black stallion for him. Melissa gave Lightning an apple and went to admire Hotohori's stallion. Tasuki grumbled and went over to Hotohori.
"man... whats with HER?"
"nothing. She is just mad that you endangered her for... sake. I'd be angry too."
Tasuki thought about that and climbed onto his own horse. After everyone was ready, the 2 seishi and the Suzaku no miko waved good-bye to the palace people and rode out the gates.
//who is SHE to be mad at ME if I wanted some sake!?! Damn women. I cant understand them.//
//finally I can get away from the palace. She is so unlike Miaka, but is that a good thing?//
//Mmm... chocolate.//
The 3 rode on until they could only be seen as 3 dots, one munching on white chocolate.
**Grace-im gonna take her part out soon, but right now its just for comical effect.**
Grace propped her feet up on Tomite's back. The T.V. was blaring and she was listening to Ayumi Hamasaki's Endless sorrow on her CD player. Suboshi was getting her her 7th sprite and she was far OVER hyper.
"Ugh. Can I get up now? Tennyo?hello?"
Tomite groaned under the weight of her 20-pound boots, silver buckles up the side and up to her knees, with platforms 5 inches tall.
Grace just yawned and pushed down harder. Suboshi came back with her sprite and more saltine crackers and sat down by her. Tomite looked forward boredly and noticed a purple light from the coffee table in front of him. The book?could it be?would he actually be able to DO something now?Grace didn't seem to notice the glow at all.
**flash**
Tomite blinked and looked around. Grace and Suboshi were gone. He wooped for joy and jumped around the room. He was FREE!!!!
"OH SHIT!!!!!!!! NOO!!!!!!"
he screamed as he too was engulfed by a purple light and sucked into the book.
"Hahahahaha... I love my job."
Taiitsukan's laugh rang along the room, followed by the Nyan-Nyan's giggles.
TBC
Yes very short I know. Kinda pointless, but I felt like I had to put up another chapter. ^^ plz read mai Soi one:until we meet again" plllzzz? OO. I would be forveer grateful. **looks up word in dictionary**AH-HAH!! Well, I wouldn't be eternally grateful, but I would thank yoU!^^I may have the charcters out of... character, but I try. I STILL need info on the Byakko seishi. Ugh. Preferably the unknown seihsi cuz I have too much info on the popular ones. Im thnking the guy that talks to animals... oh right. Im sorry this chapter took so long. It was ready yesterday but the modem broke. For the 6th time. Its true. Grace shall vouch for me. It was the only day I DIDN'T check my reviews. She shall be soooo amazed.^^