Disclaimer: none of this is mine and I am in no sense making any money
outta this. Or am I?... no im not. ^^
AN: (mai titles get worse every time. Took me 20 minutes to think of this one.-.-;;)OK I KNOW I have neglected this fic. I have reasons!!
#1) I just felt that no one even bothered to review and I had no more inspiration
#2) Jana stopped going online and grace didn't give a damn.
#3) I had a major case of writer's block
#4) I was lazy.
1-3 are all major cases but still. I have been spending too much time on my other ones ne? oh well. But but but... they had SOOO many reviews!!! This is mai only OC one. Tasuki and the "thing" got 33 reviews in 4 chapters!! Go me! Yay! I always knew I had a weird sense of humor! Now it actually gets me reviews!! Lol.
(review mai other fics and I shall thank you for life... or just thank you.)
Chapter 14: Brink of danger...
By: black crystal
Grace yelled as she fell through emptiness. Time seemed to freeze and after awhile she felt perfectly fine at the world. She was chewing thoughtfully at a saltine cracker from the box she had brought handy in her back pocket. Well, she WAS happy until...
**pop**
Grace blinked as Suboshi popped in beside her.
**silence**
**blinks**
**blinks back**
**.**
"YA DAMN IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Suboshi was taken aback. It had been silent and then she had to go and blast a bomb in his ear. Grace was screaming at the top of her lungs but she almost fainted when Tomite popped in too.
The thing that made it the worst was that he was drinking the last can of sprite and still had the remote.
"AH!!!!!!!!"
they both screamed at the same time, and then pounced on him.
"YA DAMN BASTARD!!!! I'LL TEACH *YOU* TO MESS WITH *MY*SPRITE!!!!!!"
"HOW DARE YOU!?!? *THAT* IS THE PRECIOUS REMOTE!! YOU DON'T TOUCH IT!!! IT'S MINEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!... and the tennyo's!!MOSTLY THE TENNYO'S!!!!!"
he added as he saw Grace's glare.
What happened next, no one saw it coming.
**THUD**
**THUMP**
**PLOP**
Grace fell through the sky to land on a soft pile of leaves. Suboshi dropped down soon after. Tomite... well, he landed face-down in a puddle of mud. Which also seemed to be the only one around for as far as the eye could see.
"Damn..."
Tomite stuggled out of the murky mud, along with Suboshi's help. Grace was slouched beside a tree, munching on saltine crackers, yet again. She raised an eyebrow to the best she could, which just made Tomite crack up. Well, until she brought out her mallet. Then motioning Suboshi to follow, she went along the path into the woods, swinging the mallet around menicinly.
"Umm... tennyo."he sqeaked out.
"Yeeeeesss?"
"Where did you get that mallet from?"
"which mallet?"
suboshi sweatdropped.
"the one in your hand..."
grace blinked, then brightened up.
"OH! You mean THIS mallet?" she chirped, swinging it around again, barely missing Suboshi.
"Yes..."he sqeaked as the mallet bonked him on the nose.
"that old nightmare. T-something. Looks like it's been used though. Hmm... long black hair. Eww..."
Suboshi just nodded as they went along their way.
**behind them**
**gurgle**
"that **oxygen bubble pops** damned tennyo... why me? Oh great Genbu, WHY ME!?!?!"
Birds from trees flew off into the darkening sky.
**back to Grace**
"CHICHIRI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Grace and Suboshi heard the cry as they were walking along and began to run.
//omg omg omg... Jana. It HAS to be her!"//
They arrived in a clearing. There stood Jana, pushing against a blue shield- like thing. She herself was in a white bubble which was beginning to crack.
"JANA!!!"
Grace yelled, running towards her friend. Just when she arrived, Jana passed out.
The last thing she saw was Grace.
"Grace? Help Chichiri..."
Grace looked up at the shield. Behind it she could make out two shapes. A whizzing sound rushed past her right ear and she screamed.
"GRACE!!!GO RESCUE CHICHIRI, THE MONK!!"
Suboshi stood there behind her, hands stretched out, controlling the two objects whizzing around and though the shield. His face was in pain and she hesitated.
"GO! I can't hold the opening much longer..."
Grace nodded and ran through the hole in the shield. When she was going through, the blue energy started to cling to her skin and she yelped. It was like static, except way worse. A whizzing sound could be heard and then the blue streak shrank back.
"GO!!!!"
the last thing she heard was Suboshi's voice as she went to the other side and gasped. It was a whole different world here...
a figure stood in front of her, smiling wickedly with sky blue eyes, yet icy and cold.
"you cant save him Tennyo. He's mine now..."
then, a huge blue blast shot towards Grace...
**melissa!everyone claps and whistles... *in reality,there is only a cricket chirping. HEY! A CRICKET IS SOMETHING!!! ** silence** d'oh...**
Hotohori pulled his horse up to his miko's side.
"are you alright? you seem a little depressed."
Melissa looked up from the white chocolate bar she was sucking on. Slowly, she nodded.
"I... I'm alright. don't worry about me!"
she chirped, managing a smile. Hotohori didn't look convinced though. Melissa sighed.
"Ok, something IS bothering me."
Hotohori just nodded.
"go on."
"Well," she started, looking at him with questioning eyes. " I think that Tasuki doesn't really like me. I mean he was nice before we came here, but now he's just getting careless. I mean, if you hadnt found me, then what would have happened?"
Hotohori raised his head to the sky, letting the rays of sumlight that passed through the tree cracks shine on his face.
"He's not careless, nor does he not like you. Actually, I'd say he were MORE careful to you than to our last miko. Just give him some time."
Melissa thought about it to herself, then gave him a genuine smile.
"thanks. Thanks for listening."
She rode off ahead of them, chasing a bird.
Hotohori looked after her.
" You're welcome... "
**behind them**
Tasuki glared at Hotohori and Melissa. Why did everything crappy have to happen to him? Why not Hotohori? Why not Chichiri?
His horse nieghed and started to trot. Tasuki growled at it, trying to maintain the hold on the reins again, btu it was no use. The horse's hoof hit a rock and tasuki fell, crashing down a hill of god-knows-what.
Finally he rolled to a stop, groaning and mumbling. His rib cage felt like it was on fire and there was no water. The last thign he saw before he passed out was Melissa's face, looking at him worridly.
A shadowed figure bent down and picked up Tasuki's motionless body.
"Everything is going according to plan Sir?"
"Perfectly..."
TBC?????????????
I was gonna stop it but at the last moment, when my modem was down, I decided to do another chapter.Tasuki's part is a bit short and Jana hardly appeared, but hey. oh righhhtttt. Its time for a reviewers poll!
Listen up everyone, I want you to decide who I should make more appealing to the general public... or to put it in simple terms for Grace, who is ya's favorite?
Poll #1:
Who is your favorite Person?
Jana
Melissa( don't worri, I don't care or feel bad if you vote for Grace or Jana. I'm just a character. Being the author has NOTHING to do w/ it. To tell da truth, if its all me, it gets borin.^^ but I WOULD like votes...)
Grace
We all suck. Which in that case, Grace and I will come over and wack you over the head with a mallet.
Poll #2) who should Grace be paired up with?
suboshi
Tomite
No one
Poll #3(the major one)
Who should JANA be paired w/?
Tatara
Chichiri
No one
Poll #4)
Who should Melissa be paired w/?
Tasuki
Hotohori
no one
poll #5)
how would you rate this fic on a scale of 1-10?
THANKS!!!!! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!
AN: (mai titles get worse every time. Took me 20 minutes to think of this one.-.-;;)OK I KNOW I have neglected this fic. I have reasons!!
#1) I just felt that no one even bothered to review and I had no more inspiration
#2) Jana stopped going online and grace didn't give a damn.
#3) I had a major case of writer's block
#4) I was lazy.
1-3 are all major cases but still. I have been spending too much time on my other ones ne? oh well. But but but... they had SOOO many reviews!!! This is mai only OC one. Tasuki and the "thing" got 33 reviews in 4 chapters!! Go me! Yay! I always knew I had a weird sense of humor! Now it actually gets me reviews!! Lol.
(review mai other fics and I shall thank you for life... or just thank you.)
Chapter 14: Brink of danger...
By: black crystal
Grace yelled as she fell through emptiness. Time seemed to freeze and after awhile she felt perfectly fine at the world. She was chewing thoughtfully at a saltine cracker from the box she had brought handy in her back pocket. Well, she WAS happy until...
**pop**
Grace blinked as Suboshi popped in beside her.
**silence**
**blinks**
**blinks back**
**.**
"YA DAMN IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Suboshi was taken aback. It had been silent and then she had to go and blast a bomb in his ear. Grace was screaming at the top of her lungs but she almost fainted when Tomite popped in too.
The thing that made it the worst was that he was drinking the last can of sprite and still had the remote.
"AH!!!!!!!!"
they both screamed at the same time, and then pounced on him.
"YA DAMN BASTARD!!!! I'LL TEACH *YOU* TO MESS WITH *MY*SPRITE!!!!!!"
"HOW DARE YOU!?!? *THAT* IS THE PRECIOUS REMOTE!! YOU DON'T TOUCH IT!!! IT'S MINEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!... and the tennyo's!!MOSTLY THE TENNYO'S!!!!!"
he added as he saw Grace's glare.
What happened next, no one saw it coming.
**THUD**
**THUMP**
**PLOP**
Grace fell through the sky to land on a soft pile of leaves. Suboshi dropped down soon after. Tomite... well, he landed face-down in a puddle of mud. Which also seemed to be the only one around for as far as the eye could see.
"Damn..."
Tomite stuggled out of the murky mud, along with Suboshi's help. Grace was slouched beside a tree, munching on saltine crackers, yet again. She raised an eyebrow to the best she could, which just made Tomite crack up. Well, until she brought out her mallet. Then motioning Suboshi to follow, she went along the path into the woods, swinging the mallet around menicinly.
"Umm... tennyo."he sqeaked out.
"Yeeeeesss?"
"Where did you get that mallet from?"
"which mallet?"
suboshi sweatdropped.
"the one in your hand..."
grace blinked, then brightened up.
"OH! You mean THIS mallet?" she chirped, swinging it around again, barely missing Suboshi.
"Yes..."he sqeaked as the mallet bonked him on the nose.
"that old nightmare. T-something. Looks like it's been used though. Hmm... long black hair. Eww..."
Suboshi just nodded as they went along their way.
**behind them**
**gurgle**
"that **oxygen bubble pops** damned tennyo... why me? Oh great Genbu, WHY ME!?!?!"
Birds from trees flew off into the darkening sky.
**back to Grace**
"CHICHIRI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Grace and Suboshi heard the cry as they were walking along and began to run.
//omg omg omg... Jana. It HAS to be her!"//
They arrived in a clearing. There stood Jana, pushing against a blue shield- like thing. She herself was in a white bubble which was beginning to crack.
"JANA!!!"
Grace yelled, running towards her friend. Just when she arrived, Jana passed out.
The last thing she saw was Grace.
"Grace? Help Chichiri..."
Grace looked up at the shield. Behind it she could make out two shapes. A whizzing sound rushed past her right ear and she screamed.
"GRACE!!!GO RESCUE CHICHIRI, THE MONK!!"
Suboshi stood there behind her, hands stretched out, controlling the two objects whizzing around and though the shield. His face was in pain and she hesitated.
"GO! I can't hold the opening much longer..."
Grace nodded and ran through the hole in the shield. When she was going through, the blue energy started to cling to her skin and she yelped. It was like static, except way worse. A whizzing sound could be heard and then the blue streak shrank back.
"GO!!!!"
the last thing she heard was Suboshi's voice as she went to the other side and gasped. It was a whole different world here...
a figure stood in front of her, smiling wickedly with sky blue eyes, yet icy and cold.
"you cant save him Tennyo. He's mine now..."
then, a huge blue blast shot towards Grace...
**melissa!everyone claps and whistles... *in reality,there is only a cricket chirping. HEY! A CRICKET IS SOMETHING!!! ** silence** d'oh...**
Hotohori pulled his horse up to his miko's side.
"are you alright? you seem a little depressed."
Melissa looked up from the white chocolate bar she was sucking on. Slowly, she nodded.
"I... I'm alright. don't worry about me!"
she chirped, managing a smile. Hotohori didn't look convinced though. Melissa sighed.
"Ok, something IS bothering me."
Hotohori just nodded.
"go on."
"Well," she started, looking at him with questioning eyes. " I think that Tasuki doesn't really like me. I mean he was nice before we came here, but now he's just getting careless. I mean, if you hadnt found me, then what would have happened?"
Hotohori raised his head to the sky, letting the rays of sumlight that passed through the tree cracks shine on his face.
"He's not careless, nor does he not like you. Actually, I'd say he were MORE careful to you than to our last miko. Just give him some time."
Melissa thought about it to herself, then gave him a genuine smile.
"thanks. Thanks for listening."
She rode off ahead of them, chasing a bird.
Hotohori looked after her.
" You're welcome... "
**behind them**
Tasuki glared at Hotohori and Melissa. Why did everything crappy have to happen to him? Why not Hotohori? Why not Chichiri?
His horse nieghed and started to trot. Tasuki growled at it, trying to maintain the hold on the reins again, btu it was no use. The horse's hoof hit a rock and tasuki fell, crashing down a hill of god-knows-what.
Finally he rolled to a stop, groaning and mumbling. His rib cage felt like it was on fire and there was no water. The last thign he saw before he passed out was Melissa's face, looking at him worridly.
A shadowed figure bent down and picked up Tasuki's motionless body.
"Everything is going according to plan Sir?"
"Perfectly..."
TBC?????????????
I was gonna stop it but at the last moment, when my modem was down, I decided to do another chapter.Tasuki's part is a bit short and Jana hardly appeared, but hey. oh righhhtttt. Its time for a reviewers poll!
Listen up everyone, I want you to decide who I should make more appealing to the general public... or to put it in simple terms for Grace, who is ya's favorite?
Poll #1:
Who is your favorite Person?
Jana
Melissa( don't worri, I don't care or feel bad if you vote for Grace or Jana. I'm just a character. Being the author has NOTHING to do w/ it. To tell da truth, if its all me, it gets borin.^^ but I WOULD like votes...)
Grace
We all suck. Which in that case, Grace and I will come over and wack you over the head with a mallet.
Poll #2) who should Grace be paired up with?
suboshi
Tomite
No one
Poll #3(the major one)
Who should JANA be paired w/?
Tatara
Chichiri
No one
Poll #4)
Who should Melissa be paired w/?
Tasuki
Hotohori
no one
poll #5)
how would you rate this fic on a scale of 1-10?
THANKS!!!!! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!