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the cteature was very small compared to me,I was full grown
it was a poler bear
he was bruised and beat,I saw my master fly over to this creature and god
"DARE YOU CROSS THE LANDS OF CHRON?"
"NO,WE ARE COMMING FOR HELP ANDOTHER GOD HAS TAKEN OVER OUR VILLAGES"
"AND YOU WANT HELP FROM ME"
"YES"
I saw my master look at the creature
"WHO WAS THIS GOD?"
"VIGER"
"IF YOU WERE SO PUNY THAT YOU COULD NOT WIN A BATTLE AGAINST ANDOTHER GOD"
"THEN YOU SHOULD NOT COME HERE"
my master was angry and he wanted this new god to leave
"PLEASE HELP US"
"ALRIGHT,I WILL MAKE A DEAL,IF YOUR CREATURE CAN BEAT MINE IN COMBAT,I WILL LET YOU STAY"
"VERY WELL"
The battle was starting,I gave the bear my feircest look
I could see his fear,he did not turn it to anger and hate.
this I did not understand
if he had,there would have been a tiny chance that he could have beat me
the arena apeared we both steped in knowing that I would win,I took the first strike
it knocked the bear of balance
I went in again,he was dazzed at the quickness of my strikes
then I rememberd a trick my master taught me
I turned my back to the white creature and he tried to hin me I had done a back flip over his head
all he hit was air,looking at the emty space trhat I was standing in earlyer,he lost focus
I took one last strike
the battle was won,he fell to the ground like a sack of flour
my master looked at me aprovingly
before the othe god could speak he and his uncocius creature were sweped away in
the portal.
my master told me that he would teach me somthing that no other living creature knew
he said,
"THIS IS A PLACE OF GREAT POWER"
"what power master?"
"THE POWER OF THE SOURCE"
"what is it?"
"THE SOURCE RUNS THROUGH ALL THINGS"
"IT IS A GREAT POWER USED ONLY BY THE MOST ELITE OF CREATURES"
"but am I?..."
before I could finish my master said,
"YES"
"IT IS TIME TO BEGIN YOUR TRIANING IN THE WAYS OF THE SOURCE"
"yes,my master"
that was when it started two huge gates closed,blocking off the village from sight
I would prevail in this training,I would be the best,most elite creature ever
it was time for me to show my true power,this would defeat all my enemys!
my master and I began the training...........
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reviews,they keep me alive!
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the cteature was very small compared to me,I was full grown
it was a poler bear
he was bruised and beat,I saw my master fly over to this creature and god
"DARE YOU CROSS THE LANDS OF CHRON?"
"NO,WE ARE COMMING FOR HELP ANDOTHER GOD HAS TAKEN OVER OUR VILLAGES"
"AND YOU WANT HELP FROM ME"
"YES"
I saw my master look at the creature
"WHO WAS THIS GOD?"
"VIGER"
"IF YOU WERE SO PUNY THAT YOU COULD NOT WIN A BATTLE AGAINST ANDOTHER GOD"
"THEN YOU SHOULD NOT COME HERE"
my master was angry and he wanted this new god to leave
"PLEASE HELP US"
"ALRIGHT,I WILL MAKE A DEAL,IF YOUR CREATURE CAN BEAT MINE IN COMBAT,I WILL LET YOU STAY"
"VERY WELL"
The battle was starting,I gave the bear my feircest look
I could see his fear,he did not turn it to anger and hate.
this I did not understand
if he had,there would have been a tiny chance that he could have beat me
the arena apeared we both steped in knowing that I would win,I took the first strike
it knocked the bear of balance
I went in again,he was dazzed at the quickness of my strikes
then I rememberd a trick my master taught me
I turned my back to the white creature and he tried to hin me I had done a back flip over his head
all he hit was air,looking at the emty space trhat I was standing in earlyer,he lost focus
I took one last strike
the battle was won,he fell to the ground like a sack of flour
my master looked at me aprovingly
before the othe god could speak he and his uncocius creature were sweped away in
the portal.
my master told me that he would teach me somthing that no other living creature knew
he said,
"THIS IS A PLACE OF GREAT POWER"
"what power master?"
"THE POWER OF THE SOURCE"
"what is it?"
"THE SOURCE RUNS THROUGH ALL THINGS"
"IT IS A GREAT POWER USED ONLY BY THE MOST ELITE OF CREATURES"
"but am I?..."
before I could finish my master said,
"YES"
"IT IS TIME TO BEGIN YOUR TRIANING IN THE WAYS OF THE SOURCE"
"yes,my master"
that was when it started two huge gates closed,blocking off the village from sight
I would prevail in this training,I would be the best,most elite creature ever
it was time for me to show my true power,this would defeat all my enemys!
my master and I began the training...........
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tell me!