OK.. that last chapter was horrible. I admit, it was stupid. I mean, where did Harry come from? Why was everybody paired up? I don't know either.
I'm sorry it was so stupid. XD I like this chapter though, I really do. I mean, its real deep.. heh heh. Enjoy.
Disclaimer: I do not own Zoids, but I do own Kyoko, Kisa, Rika and Mimi
Everybody seemed to be happy with their current relationships. Especcialy Jamie and Kyoko. Those two were the two who caused the others to meet.
Causing a relationship with almost everybody. Jamie was so excited, he finally had the girl of his dreams back, and was in a nice relationship with her.
On his way back to his house thing, Jamie was glad he got to spend the day with Kyoko. They had gone to the movies, and then a nice place to eat.
After that, they went race car driving. Jamie beat Kyoko by a few seconds, and, by the time the date was over, it was already 11. Both of them had a zoid battle the
next day, so they said good bye, and went off in their own seperate ways. Jamie rode the subway. Kyoko went home with Mimi, who had just finished her date with Brad.
Brad decided to go home later, he was going off to find Naomi and talk to her a bit. Jamie walked up to the doorstep of the place where he lived, and quietly made an
entrance. He did not want to wake anybody. He walked in slowly, but was pushed back out.
"What? Whats wrong Bit? Why are you pushing me out? Why are you awake? Why are we going to Leena's car?" Jamie asked.
"Hurry, no time to explain, just get in, Leena is already waiting, come on!" Bit exclaimed. When both Bit and Jamie got into the car, Jamie asked another question,
"What is wrong?" Jamie heard Leena sigh. "Jamie, we're going to the hospital." she said. "Is something wrong with Dr. Tooros?" Jamie asked, worried.
"No." Leena said. "He's fine. Its Kyoko, and Mimi too. We just got a call from Kisa and Rika. Mimi was driving Kyoko and herself home. It was very dark, and
I guess Mimi didn't notice a drunk, driving 70 mph while she drove past. The light just turned green, and the drunk didn't notice that their light was red. The
drunk driver hit the passengers side, which had Kyoko in it. She is in critical condition. Mimi was awake long enough to tell the story, but now she is unconcious
again. She may have some broken bones, some scars."
Jamie took in all the information, analyzing it, thinking. But, he couldn't think. Everything was happeneing at once, way too fast. Was this a dream? He
had just seen Kyoko, they were racing. They were having so much fun. Could she really be in critical condition? Some people in critical condition die. She might
die. These thoughts took over Jamie's brain, the worry was all over his face.
"Jamie? Are you okay?" Bit asked.
"Yeah, I'm fine. I just have to see Kyoko." Jamie replied. Bit nodded.
Finally, they reached the hospital. Leena stopped in front of the entrance, and Bit and Jamie got out while Leena looked for a parking place. Bit and Jamie ran into
the hospital. "Okamoto?" Jamie asked the lady sitting at the front. The lady searched her computer, and said, "She is in CCU, you can wait for her outside of the
room, its upstairs, to the left, then just keep on going straight." Before the lady could finish, Jamie had already left, running up the stairs, not waiting for the
elevator. Bit followed. Upstairs, to the left was where Kisa, Brad and Naomi sat. Rika was pacing, back and forth in front of the doors.
Rika looked up and saw Jamie. "Jamie!" she called out. "How is she?" Jamie asked. "Not doing good. She's been in there for a while. According to Mimi, and by the
way she looked, she was hit pretty hard. I don't want to sound pesimistic, but I don't even know if she will survive!" Rika exclaimed, tears evident in her eyes.
"Shes my best friend, she can't die!" she wailed.
"Kyoko can't die, she is NOT going to die? Okay?" Kisa said. "She's not dead."
"Jamie, its okay. She'll be out, you'll see, she'll come out soon." Naomi told Jamie.
After an hour of pacing, and worrying, Kyoko remained in the CCU. Brad had been talking to Naomi when he got a call on his cell phone, so Naomi drove Brad to the
hospital. Mimi was hurt bad, but if Mimi was hurt bad, then Kyoko must be in a lot of trouble. Brad, Bit, Leena and Jamie got up and went to visit Mimi.
In room 108, Mimi laid down, resting. She heard some footsteps and wondered if Brad was coming for another visit. But she opened her eyes to see Bit's face looking
at her own. She almost screamed, but then calmed down when she realized who it was. She tried to smile, and it came out a sad smile.
"Mimi, are you alright?" Leena asked.
"Yeah, just a broken arm, couple of broken ribs, some scars on my head, but otherwise, I'm good. How is Kyoko? Out yet?"
"No, she's not out yet. Does anything hurt?" Jamie asked.
"She isn't out YET? This is bad. Its all my fault, all my fault. I should have been more careful!"
"Look, I understand your probably really sad, but this is NOT your fault, okay? Its the drunk driver's fault. Not yours. You weren't going seventy miles per hour,
your light was green." Brad told her.
"Its going to be okay." Bit said.
"I appreciate your visit, but I'm very tired right now, I am so sorry. Can I sleep?"
"Sure, we'll come back and tell you how Kyoko's doing later okay?" Brad said.
Mimi nodded before sleeping.
As the Blitz team walked back to where Kyoko was, they saw Naomi running towards them. "Kyoko's up for some visitors." she said.
"Really? She's awake?" Jamie asked.
"Well, no. But you can see her."
The group walked into the room. There Kyoko lay, bunches of needles, and wires were stuck onto her. Her pretty face was scarred, probably from broken glass pieces,
and her entire right side seemed to be broken. It was some of her skin was scratched, and at some parts you could see the bone. It must've been a really hard hit
by the looks of it. When Jamie took one look at her, his heart shattered. He knew she couldn't survive something like this! Of course she couldn't! Who could?
If she were to survive, she would be left in a comma forver. The doctors explained it. When she was hit, the car rammed into her right side, causing her head to move
to the left, and then the right, but then, because Mimi hit the brakes, her head went forward, and hit the back of her chair really hard, causing severe brain damage,
and other things. The doctors had done everything they could. They explained that she would probably die soon, sadly, maybe in two or three hours. One doctor asked
if her parents were contacted.
"No, her parents abandoned her. But I think I should give them a call." Jamie said, as he went into the waiting room, he called Kyoko's parents. The number was in
her purse.
"Moshi moshi? Okamoto des." Jamie heard.
"Hello? Is this Kyoko's mother? I'm sorry, but I have some bad news." Jamie started.
"What, is she at jail? Well, I don't care, she wanted to go to some boy, and be a 'warrior'? Well, I don't care. She is not a daughter to me, if she is like that."
"No, I'm sorry to inform you, but Kyoko-san has been in a terrible car accident. She was hit by a drunk driver, and doctors say she has only a couple of hours left."
A long silence, and then,
"Is this Jamie? Where are you? What hospital? Please, tell us."
Jamie told Mrs. Okamoto the address, and hung up. He was glad that Kyoko's parents were going to come, and say their last good byes.
But how did Jamie feel? He couldn't take it. It was too much for him. He fell into a chair and began to cry. He heard a noise next to him, and Leena sat there,
next to him. "Its okay. Why don't we go back in, and see Kyoko. I'm sure she doesn't want you sad like this, come on, lets go." she said.
Jamie went into the room once more, and saw Rika, sitting next to Kyoko. She seemed to be talking to her, laughing, but then sobering again.
"Rika is saying good-bye." Leena whispered. "You can say good-bye next."
Jamie knew that that was foolish. How could somebody, in a comma hear him speaking? But, still. He didn't care. He was going to say good-bye, even if she wasn't
really there. He could at least hope she could hear it.
Rika stood up, walked away and left the room. Jamie sat down, and began to talk.
"Hey Kyoko. I think your parents aren't mad anymore. Their coming. Isn't that good? Gosh Kyoko, right when we were having fun. I know its selfish of me, but I
wish you would wake up. Just once, maybe say a few last words. But thats wishful thinking. Thanks for being my girlfriend Kyoko, you were a good girlfriend. Too
bad it has to end like this huh? Well, I'll see you in heaven." He leaned over her, and gave her a kiss before leaving. At that moment, Kyoko's parents walked in.
Mrs. Okamoto was crying, and Mr. Okamoto was close to crying. They both walked near Kyoko, and said their good byes. They hoped that she would forgive them, give
them another chance, maybe in heaven. Soon, the beeping of the heart moniter began.
*beep* *beep* The normal up and down line was now straight as Kyoko's heart stopped beating. In only a few seconds, Kyoko lay there, lifless. Dead.
THE END
or is it?
Okay, so that was a really bad ending. Please review! Tell me how the last chapter was. Good? Bad? Stupid? Thanks so much for reading the fic, I understand
it was extremely boring. :)
I'm sorry it was so stupid. XD I like this chapter though, I really do. I mean, its real deep.. heh heh. Enjoy.
Disclaimer: I do not own Zoids, but I do own Kyoko, Kisa, Rika and Mimi
Everybody seemed to be happy with their current relationships. Especcialy Jamie and Kyoko. Those two were the two who caused the others to meet.
Causing a relationship with almost everybody. Jamie was so excited, he finally had the girl of his dreams back, and was in a nice relationship with her.
On his way back to his house thing, Jamie was glad he got to spend the day with Kyoko. They had gone to the movies, and then a nice place to eat.
After that, they went race car driving. Jamie beat Kyoko by a few seconds, and, by the time the date was over, it was already 11. Both of them had a zoid battle the
next day, so they said good bye, and went off in their own seperate ways. Jamie rode the subway. Kyoko went home with Mimi, who had just finished her date with Brad.
Brad decided to go home later, he was going off to find Naomi and talk to her a bit. Jamie walked up to the doorstep of the place where he lived, and quietly made an
entrance. He did not want to wake anybody. He walked in slowly, but was pushed back out.
"What? Whats wrong Bit? Why are you pushing me out? Why are you awake? Why are we going to Leena's car?" Jamie asked.
"Hurry, no time to explain, just get in, Leena is already waiting, come on!" Bit exclaimed. When both Bit and Jamie got into the car, Jamie asked another question,
"What is wrong?" Jamie heard Leena sigh. "Jamie, we're going to the hospital." she said. "Is something wrong with Dr. Tooros?" Jamie asked, worried.
"No." Leena said. "He's fine. Its Kyoko, and Mimi too. We just got a call from Kisa and Rika. Mimi was driving Kyoko and herself home. It was very dark, and
I guess Mimi didn't notice a drunk, driving 70 mph while she drove past. The light just turned green, and the drunk didn't notice that their light was red. The
drunk driver hit the passengers side, which had Kyoko in it. She is in critical condition. Mimi was awake long enough to tell the story, but now she is unconcious
again. She may have some broken bones, some scars."
Jamie took in all the information, analyzing it, thinking. But, he couldn't think. Everything was happeneing at once, way too fast. Was this a dream? He
had just seen Kyoko, they were racing. They were having so much fun. Could she really be in critical condition? Some people in critical condition die. She might
die. These thoughts took over Jamie's brain, the worry was all over his face.
"Jamie? Are you okay?" Bit asked.
"Yeah, I'm fine. I just have to see Kyoko." Jamie replied. Bit nodded.
Finally, they reached the hospital. Leena stopped in front of the entrance, and Bit and Jamie got out while Leena looked for a parking place. Bit and Jamie ran into
the hospital. "Okamoto?" Jamie asked the lady sitting at the front. The lady searched her computer, and said, "She is in CCU, you can wait for her outside of the
room, its upstairs, to the left, then just keep on going straight." Before the lady could finish, Jamie had already left, running up the stairs, not waiting for the
elevator. Bit followed. Upstairs, to the left was where Kisa, Brad and Naomi sat. Rika was pacing, back and forth in front of the doors.
Rika looked up and saw Jamie. "Jamie!" she called out. "How is she?" Jamie asked. "Not doing good. She's been in there for a while. According to Mimi, and by the
way she looked, she was hit pretty hard. I don't want to sound pesimistic, but I don't even know if she will survive!" Rika exclaimed, tears evident in her eyes.
"Shes my best friend, she can't die!" she wailed.
"Kyoko can't die, she is NOT going to die? Okay?" Kisa said. "She's not dead."
"Jamie, its okay. She'll be out, you'll see, she'll come out soon." Naomi told Jamie.
After an hour of pacing, and worrying, Kyoko remained in the CCU. Brad had been talking to Naomi when he got a call on his cell phone, so Naomi drove Brad to the
hospital. Mimi was hurt bad, but if Mimi was hurt bad, then Kyoko must be in a lot of trouble. Brad, Bit, Leena and Jamie got up and went to visit Mimi.
In room 108, Mimi laid down, resting. She heard some footsteps and wondered if Brad was coming for another visit. But she opened her eyes to see Bit's face looking
at her own. She almost screamed, but then calmed down when she realized who it was. She tried to smile, and it came out a sad smile.
"Mimi, are you alright?" Leena asked.
"Yeah, just a broken arm, couple of broken ribs, some scars on my head, but otherwise, I'm good. How is Kyoko? Out yet?"
"No, she's not out yet. Does anything hurt?" Jamie asked.
"She isn't out YET? This is bad. Its all my fault, all my fault. I should have been more careful!"
"Look, I understand your probably really sad, but this is NOT your fault, okay? Its the drunk driver's fault. Not yours. You weren't going seventy miles per hour,
your light was green." Brad told her.
"Its going to be okay." Bit said.
"I appreciate your visit, but I'm very tired right now, I am so sorry. Can I sleep?"
"Sure, we'll come back and tell you how Kyoko's doing later okay?" Brad said.
Mimi nodded before sleeping.
As the Blitz team walked back to where Kyoko was, they saw Naomi running towards them. "Kyoko's up for some visitors." she said.
"Really? She's awake?" Jamie asked.
"Well, no. But you can see her."
The group walked into the room. There Kyoko lay, bunches of needles, and wires were stuck onto her. Her pretty face was scarred, probably from broken glass pieces,
and her entire right side seemed to be broken. It was some of her skin was scratched, and at some parts you could see the bone. It must've been a really hard hit
by the looks of it. When Jamie took one look at her, his heart shattered. He knew she couldn't survive something like this! Of course she couldn't! Who could?
If she were to survive, she would be left in a comma forver. The doctors explained it. When she was hit, the car rammed into her right side, causing her head to move
to the left, and then the right, but then, because Mimi hit the brakes, her head went forward, and hit the back of her chair really hard, causing severe brain damage,
and other things. The doctors had done everything they could. They explained that she would probably die soon, sadly, maybe in two or three hours. One doctor asked
if her parents were contacted.
"No, her parents abandoned her. But I think I should give them a call." Jamie said, as he went into the waiting room, he called Kyoko's parents. The number was in
her purse.
"Moshi moshi? Okamoto des." Jamie heard.
"Hello? Is this Kyoko's mother? I'm sorry, but I have some bad news." Jamie started.
"What, is she at jail? Well, I don't care, she wanted to go to some boy, and be a 'warrior'? Well, I don't care. She is not a daughter to me, if she is like that."
"No, I'm sorry to inform you, but Kyoko-san has been in a terrible car accident. She was hit by a drunk driver, and doctors say she has only a couple of hours left."
A long silence, and then,
"Is this Jamie? Where are you? What hospital? Please, tell us."
Jamie told Mrs. Okamoto the address, and hung up. He was glad that Kyoko's parents were going to come, and say their last good byes.
But how did Jamie feel? He couldn't take it. It was too much for him. He fell into a chair and began to cry. He heard a noise next to him, and Leena sat there,
next to him. "Its okay. Why don't we go back in, and see Kyoko. I'm sure she doesn't want you sad like this, come on, lets go." she said.
Jamie went into the room once more, and saw Rika, sitting next to Kyoko. She seemed to be talking to her, laughing, but then sobering again.
"Rika is saying good-bye." Leena whispered. "You can say good-bye next."
Jamie knew that that was foolish. How could somebody, in a comma hear him speaking? But, still. He didn't care. He was going to say good-bye, even if she wasn't
really there. He could at least hope she could hear it.
Rika stood up, walked away and left the room. Jamie sat down, and began to talk.
"Hey Kyoko. I think your parents aren't mad anymore. Their coming. Isn't that good? Gosh Kyoko, right when we were having fun. I know its selfish of me, but I
wish you would wake up. Just once, maybe say a few last words. But thats wishful thinking. Thanks for being my girlfriend Kyoko, you were a good girlfriend. Too
bad it has to end like this huh? Well, I'll see you in heaven." He leaned over her, and gave her a kiss before leaving. At that moment, Kyoko's parents walked in.
Mrs. Okamoto was crying, and Mr. Okamoto was close to crying. They both walked near Kyoko, and said their good byes. They hoped that she would forgive them, give
them another chance, maybe in heaven. Soon, the beeping of the heart moniter began.
*beep* *beep* The normal up and down line was now straight as Kyoko's heart stopped beating. In only a few seconds, Kyoko lay there, lifless. Dead.
THE END
or is it?
Okay, so that was a really bad ending. Please review! Tell me how the last chapter was. Good? Bad? Stupid? Thanks so much for reading the fic, I understand
it was extremely boring. :)