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Chapter 14 - The Next Lesson
Freeza has been training in the room of spirit and time for two weeks and Mr.Popo
wonders how much stronger Freeza has gotten because of his training in the
room.
Mr.Popo fears that if Freeza spends any more time in the room he may become
to powerful for the Piccolo and the others to defeat, so he tells Zarbon
that there is a limit on how long someone can remain in the room.
Zarbon asks what the consequences would be if someone stayed in over the
limit, and Mr.Popo tells him that the door will lock permanently, and that
person would become trapped in that dimension forever.
Zarbon decides to go into the room, when Freeza and Koola exit the room.
Zarbon asks if Freeza is alright, and Freeza says that he has become the
#1 power in the universe once again, and is now unstoppable.
Zarbon questions Freeza on this, and Koola says that Freeza has far surpassed
him.
Koola explains that he's never seen a power as strong as Freeza is now.
Freeza asks Koola if he ever did complete his mission, and he tells Freeza
that King Cold is supervising the construction of his new starship.
Freeza is pleased, and thanks Yadjirobe and Mr.Popo for being such gracious
hosts, and says that he will now leave because this place no longer serves
him any use.
Mr.Popo thanks Freeza for behaving properly, and Freeza flys into the air
with Koola and Zarbon, and Dodoria following behind, as Freeza forms a DeathBall
and tosses it down at the tower.
Their is a massive explosion that can be seen from any corner of the planet,
and Koola asks Freeza why he destroyed the palace, and Freeza says what he
doesn't need he destroys.
And tells Koola to stop questioning him, Freeza goes on to explain that since
he's become so powerful he doesn't really need servants any more either,
and Koola apologizes.
Piccolo
has been training Bra for the past two weeks, and has taught her all the
punches and kicks, and has increased her speed on the ground and in the air
significantly.
She can now do a million in one hour, and can run the entire valley in 5
minutes and can fly it in a little over 1 minute.
Piccolo is pleased with her speed, and has also increased her strength
significantly, since she can now punch down trees.
Piccolo is pleased, and says that it's time for her to learn to use energy.
Bra is looking forward to shooting blasts, and Piccolo tells her the first
one is a normal energy blast, he says that it's good for the times when you
might not have time to charge a strong blast, and need a quick way to fire.
Piccolo raises his arm and fires a blast that destroys a good amount of area.
He then tells Bra to try, and tells her to try to fly, but instead focus
her aura in her hand, and then release it.
Bra trys and fires a blast that blows a hole in the ground, half the size
of Piccolo's, Piccolo is pleased, and tells her that it's time to move on
to stronger attacks.
He teaches her Renzoku energydan, Makankassapo, Gekiretsukodan, how to fire
energyballs, and finally, Kamehameha.
It
takes Bra two more weeks to learn how to fire all these attacks, but manages
to fire off an impressive Kamehameha.
In fact Piccolo fears that Freeza may have seen the energy beam fired into
the sky, and wonders if they should risk moving somewhere else.
Piccolo finally decides against it however, and fears leaving the valley
may have them run into Freeza.
Piccolo tells Bra that it's time for them to go back to where Pan and the
others where, and says that she has improved her strength greatly in just
one month, but he adds that shes only just started, and explains that the
real training will begin now.
Bra asks how much training theres going to be, and Piccolo answers as much
as is needed to defeat Freeza.
And the two fly off to go to the other side of the island where Pan and the
other Z fighters are, and Piccolo hopes that they've been training hard,
and have gotten allot stronger.
He just hopes that they've got enough time left, and knows that the blast
that they saw a couple of weeks ago was the destruction of Korin tower, and
he fears that Freeza was there, and may have found something to make himself
stronger.
Well what can I say review and you tell me oh and stay tuned cus I am going to post a few new fics I have been working on lately and I only say this there worth your time if I say so my self. Oh and you guys don't forget to REVIEW Ill be willing to update sooner if you guys make me feel like it.
Peace to any one ho is willing to
But hey this cant be I mean 18 reviews in 13 chapters I cant believe this you guys
There are worse fics than mine out there and they get more reviews then me I mean I seriously am considering to finish this fic and stop all this
Tell me what ya all thinks BY REVIEWING
Chapter 14 - The Next Lesson
Freeza has been training in the room of spirit and time for two weeks and Mr.Popo
wonders how much stronger Freeza has gotten because of his training in the
room.
Mr.Popo fears that if Freeza spends any more time in the room he may become
to powerful for the Piccolo and the others to defeat, so he tells Zarbon
that there is a limit on how long someone can remain in the room.
Zarbon asks what the consequences would be if someone stayed in over the
limit, and Mr.Popo tells him that the door will lock permanently, and that
person would become trapped in that dimension forever.
Zarbon decides to go into the room, when Freeza and Koola exit the room.
Zarbon asks if Freeza is alright, and Freeza says that he has become the
#1 power in the universe once again, and is now unstoppable.
Zarbon questions Freeza on this, and Koola says that Freeza has far surpassed
him.
Koola explains that he's never seen a power as strong as Freeza is now.
Freeza asks Koola if he ever did complete his mission, and he tells Freeza
that King Cold is supervising the construction of his new starship.
Freeza is pleased, and thanks Yadjirobe and Mr.Popo for being such gracious
hosts, and says that he will now leave because this place no longer serves
him any use.
Mr.Popo thanks Freeza for behaving properly, and Freeza flys into the air
with Koola and Zarbon, and Dodoria following behind, as Freeza forms a DeathBall
and tosses it down at the tower.
Their is a massive explosion that can be seen from any corner of the planet,
and Koola asks Freeza why he destroyed the palace, and Freeza says what he
doesn't need he destroys.
And tells Koola to stop questioning him, Freeza goes on to explain that since
he's become so powerful he doesn't really need servants any more either,
and Koola apologizes.
Piccolo
has been training Bra for the past two weeks, and has taught her all the
punches and kicks, and has increased her speed on the ground and in the air
significantly.
She can now do a million in one hour, and can run the entire valley in 5
minutes and can fly it in a little over 1 minute.
Piccolo is pleased with her speed, and has also increased her strength
significantly, since she can now punch down trees.
Piccolo is pleased, and says that it's time for her to learn to use energy.
Bra is looking forward to shooting blasts, and Piccolo tells her the first
one is a normal energy blast, he says that it's good for the times when you
might not have time to charge a strong blast, and need a quick way to fire.
Piccolo raises his arm and fires a blast that destroys a good amount of area.
He then tells Bra to try, and tells her to try to fly, but instead focus
her aura in her hand, and then release it.
Bra trys and fires a blast that blows a hole in the ground, half the size
of Piccolo's, Piccolo is pleased, and tells her that it's time to move on
to stronger attacks.
He teaches her Renzoku energydan, Makankassapo, Gekiretsukodan, how to fire
energyballs, and finally, Kamehameha.
It
takes Bra two more weeks to learn how to fire all these attacks, but manages
to fire off an impressive Kamehameha.
In fact Piccolo fears that Freeza may have seen the energy beam fired into
the sky, and wonders if they should risk moving somewhere else.
Piccolo finally decides against it however, and fears leaving the valley
may have them run into Freeza.
Piccolo tells Bra that it's time for them to go back to where Pan and the
others where, and says that she has improved her strength greatly in just
one month, but he adds that shes only just started, and explains that the
real training will begin now.
Bra asks how much training theres going to be, and Piccolo answers as much
as is needed to defeat Freeza.
And the two fly off to go to the other side of the island where Pan and the
other Z fighters are, and Piccolo hopes that they've been training hard,
and have gotten allot stronger.
He just hopes that they've got enough time left, and knows that the blast
that they saw a couple of weeks ago was the destruction of Korin tower, and
he fears that Freeza was there, and may have found something to make himself
stronger.
Well what can I say review and you tell me oh and stay tuned cus I am going to post a few new fics I have been working on lately and I only say this there worth your time if I say so my self. Oh and you guys don't forget to REVIEW Ill be willing to update sooner if you guys make me feel like it.
Peace to any one ho is willing to