All right, second scene. These aren't really being written very quickly, but I'll try and get the next one up as soon as possible.
Scene Two
So far it had been a relatively normal day for the crew of the Enterprise NX-01, aside from a few glitches in the sensors everything was working perfectly. So Captain Jonathan Archer allowed himself to relax for a while and look around at his crew. A good ship, a crew complement of 84, including one Denobilan and a Vulcan. And of course Porthos, but he wasn't included in that count.
"Captain," Archers thoughts were interrupted for a moment when his helmsman spoke up, " Permission to alter course slightly."
"What for, Travis?"
"I was looking through our sensor scans, and there appears to be an interesting nebula ahead."
Archer turned around to his sub-commander, "T'Pol, what do you think?"
"The nebula contains some intriguing anomalies."
"So, in other words, it's worth a look?"
"Indeed."
"Very well, Travis, set a course."
"Aye, Captain."
Just as Mayweather was about to enter the commands there was a flash of light and a man suddenly appeared on his console. He had short, curly hair, sunglasses, a straw hat, shorts and a rather loud Hawaiian shirt, he was also holding a cigar in his left hand.
"Hello there Johnny! How are we today?"
"Who are you?" Archer asked as soon as he got over the shock.
"That is no concern of yours." At this point he was merely centimeters from Captain Archers face, "But she might be…" With that he snapped his fingers and disappeared in a flash of white light, just as a woman appeared a few feet away from where he was standing.
"Q! I demand you return me to my ship…" She stopped short as the glanced around and realized where she was.
Archer looked at her for a few moments, she wasn't what he'd consider tall, wearing a black uniform of sorts with a red stripe across the top. Her hair was cut at her shoulders and she had an air of command about her.
"Hello," Captain Archer began, " My name is Captain Jonathan Archer. This is the Star Fleet vessel Enterprise. We are on a peaceful mission of discovery. I don't believe we've encountered you species."
The woman just raised an eyebrow, looking at him as if he were quite insane, and she seemed almost…amused.
"Where exactly are we, how far are we from Earth?" Her voice was slightly rough, very unique for sure.
Archer looked surprised, "We are about forty light-years from Earth. How, may I ask have you heard of it…
"Sir," T'Pol interrupted him, the woman turned to look at her as well as Archer, "She is human." She stated in her flat, Vulcan tone of voice.
As soon as T'Pol had said this the crews mouths nearly dropped in surprise. Another human, out here in the middle of no where, it was just amazing, completely unbelievable.
The woman just stood there with her arms crossed, looking quite amused.
"All right," Archer finally choked out, "We know you're human. So, what's your name."
She studied him for a moment, as if trying go make up her mind, then she said, "I'm Captain Kathryn Janeway, of the Federation starship Voyager."
"Federation?" Archer had never heard of it before, and he was more than a little curious.
Captain Janeway hung her head for a moment, but almost immediately brought it back up and inhaled deeply. Then, letting it out slowly, "You'll find out about it in a few hundred years…Perhaps we should discuss this elsewhere." She indicated to the bridge crew.
Archer sighed, "Very well…I assume you know what a ready room is?" He motioned towards the door adjoining the bridge.
Janeway cocked her head in a sarcastic manner, "Yes, I know what a ready room is. I've got one on Voyager." She sounded a little irked at his inquiry Archer noted.
So what did 'ya think? Did it stink? Or was it tolerable? Are there any plot holes I need to fix, or anything you would like to see come up in this later on?