1 CHAPTER 2- Loctorn's Arrival
Here you go guys, chapter two of my story hope ya enjoy it. I've also put paragraphs when a different person speaks so it's easier for you guys to read (thanks for the advise) it is my first fanfic but I hope to write lots more if I have people reading it (
Where the temple was
"Hmmmmm Earth again but this time I will reign supreme" yelled Freeza
"Who are you…well whoever you are I am stronger and the earth is mine," cried out Cell. Then from outside of a huge ball Super Buu appeared
"How am I back here and who are you two," said the fully powered Buu in misbelief. They all flew up into the air looking very disturbed
"I am Freezer ruler of the universe destroyer of planets," Freeza said proudly
"And I am Cell a practically unstoppable force…I have cells of all different creatures"
"Me…I am Super Buu all fear me" then out of no where a blinding light filled the area and a thing that resembled a Saiyen warrior stood looking at all three
"Hmm I am Loctorn right hand man of Jenemba and you must be the three legendary creatures who all NEARLY destroyed the warriors on earth…I have brought you all back to give you a second chance…a chance to destroy those warriors and the earth" Loctorn said as he stood up tall and gazed at them
"How about I kill you know?" Freeza said as he flew right at Loctorn, but Loctorn disappeared and reappeared behind Freeza
"Looking to kill me don't make me laugh" laughed Loctorn, just before he punched Freeza in the gut "another point I wish to make…all of you will be weak and would die too easily against the Z warriors here so I have prepared a time chamber for you to train in, and mine is much better then there's because one day equals 100 years of training but you can only enter once…now I'll lead you three to it so you can train together, also on the walls in there I have scribed the fusion dance for two and three people.. learn it, now follow me" said Loctorn as he took off with the three of them following.
Back to the Z fighters
"I'm losing their signal it seems there going the opposite way," said Goku very surprised
"They are Kakarot and I feel no pain anymore…but they will be back" said Vegeta looking worried for a change
"Lets find them Goten" said Trunks whispering in Gotens ear
"Ok but how are we going to sneak away Trunks?" Replied Goten.
"I heard that and you two aren't going anywhere," replied Gohan in a stern voice
"Yer Gohans right we don't know what we'll be up against, all as we can do know is find the dragonballs just in case we need them" said Goku insistently
"Ok me and Goten will find them," said Trunks extremely happily but before Goku could reply Trunks and Goten took off
"Umm how will they find the balls without the raider?" Said Gohan
"Don't you remember…Trunks has the power to sense them, remember all the practice he did?" said Goku a little surprised
"Tell your son to listen better Kakarot," replied Vegeta. Goku just laughed at Vegeta's comment. "Well were not doing any good here we shall go after them Kakarot… Gohan you should come to" said Vegeta very demanding. Everyone agreed and the three of them took of in the direction of the enemy's.
Meanwhile outside Loctorns time chamber
"I will stay guard out here…now train!!" Screamed Loctorn
"Ok Loctorn you're the boss" they all said at the same time. Freezer, Cell and Super Buu entered the chamber and Loctorn shut the door behind them
"Now I wait a day and earth will be mine and when it is I will kill those three losers…" laughed Loctorn. Loctorn was just walking around when he sensed something getting closer and closer and within a couple of seconds Goku, Gohan and Vegeta were standing in front of Loctorn
"You you're a saiyen" said Vegeta
"Hahaha of course not I may look like your species and I can go your equilivent of Super Saiyen but I am better…allow me to introduce myself I am Loctorn! Jenembas right hand man"
"Jenemba" said Goku and Vegeta in shock "we fused and killed him" Vegeta said proudly
"So you did it arghhhhhhhhhh" and with that a blinding light filled the room and Loctorns hair went red "allow me to show you my Critern level one stage…. Mayaka ga son" as he said those words gas came pouring out of his hands, the gas surrounded them all and Goku, Gohan and Vegeta fell asleep!!!
Here you go guys, chapter two of my story hope ya enjoy it. I've also put paragraphs when a different person speaks so it's easier for you guys to read (thanks for the advise) it is my first fanfic but I hope to write lots more if I have people reading it (
Where the temple was
"Hmmmmm Earth again but this time I will reign supreme" yelled Freeza
"Who are you…well whoever you are I am stronger and the earth is mine," cried out Cell. Then from outside of a huge ball Super Buu appeared
"How am I back here and who are you two," said the fully powered Buu in misbelief. They all flew up into the air looking very disturbed
"I am Freezer ruler of the universe destroyer of planets," Freeza said proudly
"And I am Cell a practically unstoppable force…I have cells of all different creatures"
"Me…I am Super Buu all fear me" then out of no where a blinding light filled the area and a thing that resembled a Saiyen warrior stood looking at all three
"Hmm I am Loctorn right hand man of Jenemba and you must be the three legendary creatures who all NEARLY destroyed the warriors on earth…I have brought you all back to give you a second chance…a chance to destroy those warriors and the earth" Loctorn said as he stood up tall and gazed at them
"How about I kill you know?" Freeza said as he flew right at Loctorn, but Loctorn disappeared and reappeared behind Freeza
"Looking to kill me don't make me laugh" laughed Loctorn, just before he punched Freeza in the gut "another point I wish to make…all of you will be weak and would die too easily against the Z warriors here so I have prepared a time chamber for you to train in, and mine is much better then there's because one day equals 100 years of training but you can only enter once…now I'll lead you three to it so you can train together, also on the walls in there I have scribed the fusion dance for two and three people.. learn it, now follow me" said Loctorn as he took off with the three of them following.
Back to the Z fighters
"I'm losing their signal it seems there going the opposite way," said Goku very surprised
"They are Kakarot and I feel no pain anymore…but they will be back" said Vegeta looking worried for a change
"Lets find them Goten" said Trunks whispering in Gotens ear
"Ok but how are we going to sneak away Trunks?" Replied Goten.
"I heard that and you two aren't going anywhere," replied Gohan in a stern voice
"Yer Gohans right we don't know what we'll be up against, all as we can do know is find the dragonballs just in case we need them" said Goku insistently
"Ok me and Goten will find them," said Trunks extremely happily but before Goku could reply Trunks and Goten took off
"Umm how will they find the balls without the raider?" Said Gohan
"Don't you remember…Trunks has the power to sense them, remember all the practice he did?" said Goku a little surprised
"Tell your son to listen better Kakarot," replied Vegeta. Goku just laughed at Vegeta's comment. "Well were not doing any good here we shall go after them Kakarot… Gohan you should come to" said Vegeta very demanding. Everyone agreed and the three of them took of in the direction of the enemy's.
Meanwhile outside Loctorns time chamber
"I will stay guard out here…now train!!" Screamed Loctorn
"Ok Loctorn you're the boss" they all said at the same time. Freezer, Cell and Super Buu entered the chamber and Loctorn shut the door behind them
"Now I wait a day and earth will be mine and when it is I will kill those three losers…" laughed Loctorn. Loctorn was just walking around when he sensed something getting closer and closer and within a couple of seconds Goku, Gohan and Vegeta were standing in front of Loctorn
"You you're a saiyen" said Vegeta
"Hahaha of course not I may look like your species and I can go your equilivent of Super Saiyen but I am better…allow me to introduce myself I am Loctorn! Jenembas right hand man"
"Jenemba" said Goku and Vegeta in shock "we fused and killed him" Vegeta said proudly
"So you did it arghhhhhhhhhh" and with that a blinding light filled the room and Loctorns hair went red "allow me to show you my Critern level one stage…. Mayaka ga son" as he said those words gas came pouring out of his hands, the gas surrounded them all and Goku, Gohan and Vegeta fell asleep!!!