More Than An All-Girl's Dormitory
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina. This is a fan fiction written for other Love Hina fans to read.
Character's thoughts are in brackets ().
Written by: Mei-chan
Chapter 1
Sara McDougal sat up on the roof on Hinata Sou. She strained her eyes in hopes to spot her Papa returning from his current excavation. Seta had left for two weeks now, and was not due back for another two weeks or so. Sara frowned. She didn't want to be here. She wasn't even consulted. "They even didn't ask if I wanted to. Papa just left me here." Sara sniffled. Tears had begun to fall, but she quickly wiped them away as soon as voices were heard.
Crawling quietly, Sara made her way to the source of the noise. Shinobu was at the steps waving. "I'm going to go visit my mom! I'll see you later!" Soon, the joyous good-byes from the others ended and they returned to what they were doing.
Later that night, Sara was up on the rooftop once more, looking up at the stars. Shinobu had returned and was telling the others of her day. Sara envied Shinobu. She likes Shinobu because she was so nice, but yet she despised her for having parents that love her. She sighed at the thought of her real parents.
** Flashback **
Sara returned from exploring with an archeologist, Seta. Seta dropped her off at the end of the driveway and apologized for not dropping her off closer, for he had an errand to run. As she ran up the steps, she noticed her father at the door waiting. Something was wrong. He was not smiling.
"Sara! Where were you?" yelled her father. Sara winced as he grabbed her arm and twisted it. "Ow, you're hurting me!" she cried. "That's not the point." He replied. "The point is, you left without telling us, making us worry. How do you expect me to care for you if you never tell us where you go?" Sara retaliated. "Worry? You never worry about me or care for me! The only time you've ever worried about me was only when it means you can't get your way!" She tried not to look at her father, who was now enraged with anger.
"Don't you dare talk back to me young lady! It's because I had to wait for you to come home I'm late for my business meeting!" He tightened his grip on Sara as she tried to pry it free. Before she knew it, her father flung her and sent her flying. Crashing into the staircase, Sara heard her father comment to himself. "She's useless. I would never have had kids if I knew they were this troublesome. I should just send her away to a boarding school." Then Sara blacked out.
When Sara came too, she was in pain. She wondered why it felt like she was moving. Sitting up, she realized that she was no longer in the hallway of her home, but she was in Seta's van in the back seat with boxes surrounding her. Seta noticed Sara through rear mirror. "Ah, Sara, you're awake. How are you feeling?" Sara scratched her neck. "OUCH!" Seta laughed. "I wouldn't scratch there if I were you. You have a pretty nasty cut from the staircase at your house." Sara pulled her hand away and saw traces of blood. "What happened? Why am I here?" she asked.
Seta pulled over to the side of the road and turned around. "Well, when I came back, you were out like a light against the staircase. I asked your father what happened, and he said you had an accident." Sara's face darkened as she turned away. "I didn't have an accident. He threw me." All was silent for a moment. Sara could see that Seta had a bit of a troubled look on his face. "So why am I here now?" asked Sara. She knew she shouldn't persist, but she couldn't help it. Seta didn't answer. "Seta?" Sara began. "Why am I here?" Seta was silent for a moment before he began. "Your father told me how it was hard for him to take care of you because you are so energetic, and with all the work he has. So he asked me to take you with me." Sara couldn't bear to look. She couldn't believe her what she was hearing. "So basically, my own father got rid of me by having you take me." Seta couldn't say anything to that. "Well, if you wish, I will take you home if you don't want to come with me." Sara shook her head. "No, I can't go home. I don't have a home anymore."
** End Flashback **
Sara woke up with a start. She had fallen asleep. It was dark now, and she can smell the delicious aroma of food that Shinobu was preparing. Down below, Keitaro suddenly bursts out the door screaming. "Please don't hurt me!" Sara laughed. Keitaro was a source of amusement to her. She couldn't be happier torturing him and getting him in trouble. Naru was not far behind Keitaro, waving a fist at him. Sara watched earnestly from the safety of the roof. Naru's fierce temper and punches had always gave her an uneasy feeling. But as long as it's not venting out on her, she's fine.
Climbing back into her room, Sara noticed two letters on her desk. One was from the school Shinobu and Kaolla were enrolled in, needing her to fill out some questions and to do an aptitude test to see where she should be placed at school. Tossing that aside, Sara focused on the second letter. It was a pretty envelope with Sara's name scrawled messily onto it. Turning the letter over, she noticed the return address:
1 145 Ocean Drive
Penmount, Oregon, USA
Sara gasped as she read this. She read it over to make sure. She knew this place. For Sara McDougal, it was a place of agony. A place she had left over two years ago. It was a letter from her father. Sara was breathing hard as she stared at the letter. (Why is father contacting me after all this time? What does he want from me?)
Author's note: So what do you think of it so far? I've never seen any fan fictions that featured Sara as the "star" of the story, so here it is! It's my first fan fiction! Please leave a review and tell me what you think! Shout out thanks to IA Si, Kanako-Otaku, Akal-Saris and Majin Shinji for helping with the minor glitches in my fan fiction!
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina. This is a fan fiction written for other Love Hina fans to read.
Character's thoughts are in brackets ().
Written by: Mei-chan
Chapter 1
Sara McDougal sat up on the roof on Hinata Sou. She strained her eyes in hopes to spot her Papa returning from his current excavation. Seta had left for two weeks now, and was not due back for another two weeks or so. Sara frowned. She didn't want to be here. She wasn't even consulted. "They even didn't ask if I wanted to. Papa just left me here." Sara sniffled. Tears had begun to fall, but she quickly wiped them away as soon as voices were heard.
Crawling quietly, Sara made her way to the source of the noise. Shinobu was at the steps waving. "I'm going to go visit my mom! I'll see you later!" Soon, the joyous good-byes from the others ended and they returned to what they were doing.
Later that night, Sara was up on the rooftop once more, looking up at the stars. Shinobu had returned and was telling the others of her day. Sara envied Shinobu. She likes Shinobu because she was so nice, but yet she despised her for having parents that love her. She sighed at the thought of her real parents.
** Flashback **
Sara returned from exploring with an archeologist, Seta. Seta dropped her off at the end of the driveway and apologized for not dropping her off closer, for he had an errand to run. As she ran up the steps, she noticed her father at the door waiting. Something was wrong. He was not smiling.
"Sara! Where were you?" yelled her father. Sara winced as he grabbed her arm and twisted it. "Ow, you're hurting me!" she cried. "That's not the point." He replied. "The point is, you left without telling us, making us worry. How do you expect me to care for you if you never tell us where you go?" Sara retaliated. "Worry? You never worry about me or care for me! The only time you've ever worried about me was only when it means you can't get your way!" She tried not to look at her father, who was now enraged with anger.
"Don't you dare talk back to me young lady! It's because I had to wait for you to come home I'm late for my business meeting!" He tightened his grip on Sara as she tried to pry it free. Before she knew it, her father flung her and sent her flying. Crashing into the staircase, Sara heard her father comment to himself. "She's useless. I would never have had kids if I knew they were this troublesome. I should just send her away to a boarding school." Then Sara blacked out.
When Sara came too, she was in pain. She wondered why it felt like she was moving. Sitting up, she realized that she was no longer in the hallway of her home, but she was in Seta's van in the back seat with boxes surrounding her. Seta noticed Sara through rear mirror. "Ah, Sara, you're awake. How are you feeling?" Sara scratched her neck. "OUCH!" Seta laughed. "I wouldn't scratch there if I were you. You have a pretty nasty cut from the staircase at your house." Sara pulled her hand away and saw traces of blood. "What happened? Why am I here?" she asked.
Seta pulled over to the side of the road and turned around. "Well, when I came back, you were out like a light against the staircase. I asked your father what happened, and he said you had an accident." Sara's face darkened as she turned away. "I didn't have an accident. He threw me." All was silent for a moment. Sara could see that Seta had a bit of a troubled look on his face. "So why am I here now?" asked Sara. She knew she shouldn't persist, but she couldn't help it. Seta didn't answer. "Seta?" Sara began. "Why am I here?" Seta was silent for a moment before he began. "Your father told me how it was hard for him to take care of you because you are so energetic, and with all the work he has. So he asked me to take you with me." Sara couldn't bear to look. She couldn't believe her what she was hearing. "So basically, my own father got rid of me by having you take me." Seta couldn't say anything to that. "Well, if you wish, I will take you home if you don't want to come with me." Sara shook her head. "No, I can't go home. I don't have a home anymore."
** End Flashback **
Sara woke up with a start. She had fallen asleep. It was dark now, and she can smell the delicious aroma of food that Shinobu was preparing. Down below, Keitaro suddenly bursts out the door screaming. "Please don't hurt me!" Sara laughed. Keitaro was a source of amusement to her. She couldn't be happier torturing him and getting him in trouble. Naru was not far behind Keitaro, waving a fist at him. Sara watched earnestly from the safety of the roof. Naru's fierce temper and punches had always gave her an uneasy feeling. But as long as it's not venting out on her, she's fine.
Climbing back into her room, Sara noticed two letters on her desk. One was from the school Shinobu and Kaolla were enrolled in, needing her to fill out some questions and to do an aptitude test to see where she should be placed at school. Tossing that aside, Sara focused on the second letter. It was a pretty envelope with Sara's name scrawled messily onto it. Turning the letter over, she noticed the return address:
1 145 Ocean Drive
Penmount, Oregon, USA
Sara gasped as she read this. She read it over to make sure. She knew this place. For Sara McDougal, it was a place of agony. A place she had left over two years ago. It was a letter from her father. Sara was breathing hard as she stared at the letter. (Why is father contacting me after all this time? What does he want from me?)
Author's note: So what do you think of it so far? I've never seen any fan fictions that featured Sara as the "star" of the story, so here it is! It's my first fan fiction! Please leave a review and tell me what you think! Shout out thanks to IA Si, Kanako-Otaku, Akal-Saris and Majin Shinji for helping with the minor glitches in my fan fiction!