More Than An All-Girl's Dormitory
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina. This is a fan fiction written for other Love Hina fans to read.
Character's thoughts are in brackets ().
Written by: Mei-chan
Chapter 2
Next thing Sara knew, she was in bed. Sitting up, she noticed that all the residents of Hinata Sou were present in her room. "Hey, why are you all in here?" Keitaro came over. "We came in and found you lying on the floor out cold. Are you okay?" But as he came over, he slipped and landed face flat in Sara's lap. Naru saw this and immediately grabbed Keitaro by the shoulders and started shaking him. "What is wrong with you? Trying to seduce a young girl?" Keitaro waved his arms wildly as he tried to explain. "N-no! You got it wrong! I slipped!"
At that moment, one of his flailing arms caught on Naru's skirt and pulled it down. Naru screamed, dropped Keitaro and pulled her skirt back up. Motoko stepped in front with her sword pointing menacingly at Keitaro. "Urashima-kun! How dare you try to seduce two girls and in the presence of everyone! For this, I will punish you!" Motoko charged at Keitaro. Keitaro screamed like a girl in terror and fled the room through the window. Motoko chased after him with her sword.
Everyone watched the two ran out. Kaolla noticed the Sara's letter and picked it up. "Hmm? What's this? Something tasty?" Kaolla licked it. Shinobu grabbed it from Kaolla. "You can't eat it!" Kaolla frowned because the letter wasn't food and furthermore, it wasn't tasty. Kitsune snatched the letter from Shinobu's hand and examined it. "Hmm, it's from America." Setting her bottle of sake down, Kitsune proceeded to open the letter. Sara jumped out of bed and leapt toward Kitsune. "You can't!" Kitsune held it out of Sara's reach. "Why not?" Sara tackled Kitsune to the floor. "You just can't!" The letter fell out of Kitsune's hand and into Naru's lap. Naru examined it. "Sara, is this from home?" Sara stopped and turned away. "Yes." "Why don't you read it?" Everyone turned around. Haruka stood at the door with her cigarette in her mouth. Sara clenched her fists. "I don't want to. I want nothing to do with my father."
Keitaro ran in and crashed into Shinobu. "Wow, Keitaro is trying to seduce Shinobu!" Kaolla yelled out cheerfully. When Keitaro sat up, he realized that he was holding onto Shinobu's skirt. Shinobu's face was flushed with red. "I-I'm sorry Shinobu!" cried Keitaro. Keitaro could feel the intense heat Naru was giving off as she came closer. Motoko came in and launched an attack at Keitaro. Keitaro got up and tackled Naru, causing the letter to fly up in the air. Motoko's attack hit the letter and the envelope was cut into shreds, leaving the letter unharmed. "Keitaro, you pervert!" screamed Naru. With that, Naru sent Keitaro out the window with a mega punch.
Kitsune saw this opportunity and snatched the letter on the floor and began to read it. Sara tackled Kitsune and tried to pry the letter out of her fingers. "Give it back! It's not yours!" Snatching it from Kitsune, Sara prepared to rip the letter. Before she could, Haruka snatched it and began to read.
Sara,
Hello. How is travelling with Seta?
…(Letter goes on how Sara is becoming more important to her father's business and she is needed to serve his purposes)…
Now that you are older, I think maybe it's time for you come home. We will come to get you in a week prior to the date of the letter.
Dad
Haruka handed the letter back to Sara. "Hmm, according to this, your father is coming in three days to take you home." Sara dropped the letter as everyone stared at Haruka in astonishment. "Three days?" cried Sara. Haruka nodded. "I guess you should get started on packing." Sara shook her head violently. "NO! NEVER! I will not let him take me home! NEVER! I won't let them! I want Papa!" Sara broke down and started to bawl. Everyone looked at Sara in surprise. No one, probably not even Seta has ever seen her cry. Keitaro had returned by then and went up to Sara. He put his hand on her shoulder. "It'll be all right." Sara pushed Keitaro away. "No! It's not all right! I don't want to go! I will never let him take me! Even if I have to run away!" With that, Sara took off. Keitaro scrambled after her.
Author's note: I've corrected the two chapters so it shouldn't be as bad as before.
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina. This is a fan fiction written for other Love Hina fans to read.
Character's thoughts are in brackets ().
Written by: Mei-chan
Chapter 2
Next thing Sara knew, she was in bed. Sitting up, she noticed that all the residents of Hinata Sou were present in her room. "Hey, why are you all in here?" Keitaro came over. "We came in and found you lying on the floor out cold. Are you okay?" But as he came over, he slipped and landed face flat in Sara's lap. Naru saw this and immediately grabbed Keitaro by the shoulders and started shaking him. "What is wrong with you? Trying to seduce a young girl?" Keitaro waved his arms wildly as he tried to explain. "N-no! You got it wrong! I slipped!"
At that moment, one of his flailing arms caught on Naru's skirt and pulled it down. Naru screamed, dropped Keitaro and pulled her skirt back up. Motoko stepped in front with her sword pointing menacingly at Keitaro. "Urashima-kun! How dare you try to seduce two girls and in the presence of everyone! For this, I will punish you!" Motoko charged at Keitaro. Keitaro screamed like a girl in terror and fled the room through the window. Motoko chased after him with her sword.
Everyone watched the two ran out. Kaolla noticed the Sara's letter and picked it up. "Hmm? What's this? Something tasty?" Kaolla licked it. Shinobu grabbed it from Kaolla. "You can't eat it!" Kaolla frowned because the letter wasn't food and furthermore, it wasn't tasty. Kitsune snatched the letter from Shinobu's hand and examined it. "Hmm, it's from America." Setting her bottle of sake down, Kitsune proceeded to open the letter. Sara jumped out of bed and leapt toward Kitsune. "You can't!" Kitsune held it out of Sara's reach. "Why not?" Sara tackled Kitsune to the floor. "You just can't!" The letter fell out of Kitsune's hand and into Naru's lap. Naru examined it. "Sara, is this from home?" Sara stopped and turned away. "Yes." "Why don't you read it?" Everyone turned around. Haruka stood at the door with her cigarette in her mouth. Sara clenched her fists. "I don't want to. I want nothing to do with my father."
Keitaro ran in and crashed into Shinobu. "Wow, Keitaro is trying to seduce Shinobu!" Kaolla yelled out cheerfully. When Keitaro sat up, he realized that he was holding onto Shinobu's skirt. Shinobu's face was flushed with red. "I-I'm sorry Shinobu!" cried Keitaro. Keitaro could feel the intense heat Naru was giving off as she came closer. Motoko came in and launched an attack at Keitaro. Keitaro got up and tackled Naru, causing the letter to fly up in the air. Motoko's attack hit the letter and the envelope was cut into shreds, leaving the letter unharmed. "Keitaro, you pervert!" screamed Naru. With that, Naru sent Keitaro out the window with a mega punch.
Kitsune saw this opportunity and snatched the letter on the floor and began to read it. Sara tackled Kitsune and tried to pry the letter out of her fingers. "Give it back! It's not yours!" Snatching it from Kitsune, Sara prepared to rip the letter. Before she could, Haruka snatched it and began to read.
Sara,
Hello. How is travelling with Seta?
…(Letter goes on how Sara is becoming more important to her father's business and she is needed to serve his purposes)…
Now that you are older, I think maybe it's time for you come home. We will come to get you in a week prior to the date of the letter.
Dad
Haruka handed the letter back to Sara. "Hmm, according to this, your father is coming in three days to take you home." Sara dropped the letter as everyone stared at Haruka in astonishment. "Three days?" cried Sara. Haruka nodded. "I guess you should get started on packing." Sara shook her head violently. "NO! NEVER! I will not let him take me home! NEVER! I won't let them! I want Papa!" Sara broke down and started to bawl. Everyone looked at Sara in surprise. No one, probably not even Seta has ever seen her cry. Keitaro had returned by then and went up to Sara. He put his hand on her shoulder. "It'll be all right." Sara pushed Keitaro away. "No! It's not all right! I don't want to go! I will never let him take me! Even if I have to run away!" With that, Sara took off. Keitaro scrambled after her.
Author's note: I've corrected the two chapters so it shouldn't be as bad as before.