New Title!
1 I Could Cry all night
Isn't that so much better? So much more depth to it, don't ya think? Okay I'm going to shutup and write the story now….
2 Chapter 3
2.1 Beep Beep Beep
Tai slowly opened his eyes to the sound of the non-stop beeping. Must have over slept, he thought, as he reached over to turn off his alarm clock.
But no alarm clock was there, he turned his head and saw a monitor next to his bedside. Only then did he remember what had happened. Truck in the road….raining, dark…..Accident. With a sinking feeling in his stomach he feel back to sleep.
The next morning Tai awoke with sunshine streaming in through the one small window in the hospital room onto his face. He tried to roll over, but a sharp pain shot through his back, and he was forced to lie still. He saw his parents dozing next in the hard hospital chairs next to his bedside. His mother's face was red and streaked from were tears had fallen, and his father's face was full of too many worry lines, making him look many years older.
"Mom? Dad?" Tai whispered in a hoarse voice.
They instantly were awake. "Oh honey!" his mom burst into tears. "I'm so happy you're okay."
"Where's everybody else? Where's Kari? Why aren't you with her?"
They lines in his father's forehead deepened as he began to speak., but a nurse bounded into the room at that moment, so he shut his mouth for the time being.
"Hello Tai, I'm Riley. How are you feeling this morning?" She was a young nurse, probably just got her nursing license. She put two fingers on his wrist and took his pulse.
"My back hurts pretty bad, I can't move or I get a sharp pain through it." Tai informed her.
Riley flipped through her clipboard. "This says you have a severely sprained, but don't worry, It'll be better before you know it." She smiled warmly at him.
"My friends? Do you know anything about any of them?" Tai's voice sounded desperate.
"Terrible accident ya'll were in. But yes right next door, there's a girl, Sora, she made it through with some broken ribs, a leg and a fractured shoulder." She told him. "I only just got here so I haven't seen anybody else. But when I'm finished I'll come back and tell you, if you would like."
"That would be great, thank you." Tai whispered.
"Oh, no problem, hun." She then left Tai alone with his parents.
His father began, as if Nurse Riley hadn't been there. "Tai, your sister was hurt very badly. She's in surgery now. The doctors told us it was internal bleeding."
Tai gulped, he knew how serious this was. A kid at his school last year died from internal bleeding when he was in a car wreck. "Will…will she be okay?"
"We don't know son." His mother held onto his hand. "We don't know."
Tai turned his head away from his parents so they wouldn't see the tears forming in his eyes. Kari was only 15, too young to die, she hadn't even experienced life to it's fullest yet. He wanted to scream at the top of his lungs, but refrained himself from doing so.
"Can you please leave me alone?" Tai asked his parents, still not looking at them. "Can you go see how my friends are?" He didn't hear them leave, but when he turned to look, they were gone.
A few hours later Riley came back in the room to give him her report. Tai's parents still weren't back. "Okay, well Matt has a fractured skull, but he was stitched up good and will be fine. T.K. walked away with only scratches and bruises. I already told you Sora she's pretty much hungover on all the drugs we've given her. Your sister is in recovery, and I'm happy to report that she's doing good. Yourparents are with her now."
Tai breathed a sigh of relief. "But what about Mimi, and Izzy?"
Riley flipped through the papers on her clipboard. "Mimi..Mimi, I don't have anything her on her. Another nurse must be with her, I'll go check, be right back."
A few moments after she left, his parents walked in, relief showed on their faces. "They said she's going to be fine. Apparently the bleeding wasn't that serious and they were able to stop it." His father told him.
"Oh good, I was so worried, I 'm so glad." Was all Tai managed to say, " Do you guys know what happened to Mimi or to Izzy, the nurse wouldn't tell me."
"Oh Tai, I'm so sorry." Mrs. Kamiya fell down next to his bedside and gripped his hand, "Izzy was dead when they found him."
So sad, so sad. Review please tell me what you think
1 I Could Cry all night
Isn't that so much better? So much more depth to it, don't ya think? Okay I'm going to shutup and write the story now….
2 Chapter 3
2.1 Beep Beep Beep
Tai slowly opened his eyes to the sound of the non-stop beeping. Must have over slept, he thought, as he reached over to turn off his alarm clock.
But no alarm clock was there, he turned his head and saw a monitor next to his bedside. Only then did he remember what had happened. Truck in the road….raining, dark…..Accident. With a sinking feeling in his stomach he feel back to sleep.
The next morning Tai awoke with sunshine streaming in through the one small window in the hospital room onto his face. He tried to roll over, but a sharp pain shot through his back, and he was forced to lie still. He saw his parents dozing next in the hard hospital chairs next to his bedside. His mother's face was red and streaked from were tears had fallen, and his father's face was full of too many worry lines, making him look many years older.
"Mom? Dad?" Tai whispered in a hoarse voice.
They instantly were awake. "Oh honey!" his mom burst into tears. "I'm so happy you're okay."
"Where's everybody else? Where's Kari? Why aren't you with her?"
They lines in his father's forehead deepened as he began to speak., but a nurse bounded into the room at that moment, so he shut his mouth for the time being.
"Hello Tai, I'm Riley. How are you feeling this morning?" She was a young nurse, probably just got her nursing license. She put two fingers on his wrist and took his pulse.
"My back hurts pretty bad, I can't move or I get a sharp pain through it." Tai informed her.
Riley flipped through her clipboard. "This says you have a severely sprained, but don't worry, It'll be better before you know it." She smiled warmly at him.
"My friends? Do you know anything about any of them?" Tai's voice sounded desperate.
"Terrible accident ya'll were in. But yes right next door, there's a girl, Sora, she made it through with some broken ribs, a leg and a fractured shoulder." She told him. "I only just got here so I haven't seen anybody else. But when I'm finished I'll come back and tell you, if you would like."
"That would be great, thank you." Tai whispered.
"Oh, no problem, hun." She then left Tai alone with his parents.
His father began, as if Nurse Riley hadn't been there. "Tai, your sister was hurt very badly. She's in surgery now. The doctors told us it was internal bleeding."
Tai gulped, he knew how serious this was. A kid at his school last year died from internal bleeding when he was in a car wreck. "Will…will she be okay?"
"We don't know son." His mother held onto his hand. "We don't know."
Tai turned his head away from his parents so they wouldn't see the tears forming in his eyes. Kari was only 15, too young to die, she hadn't even experienced life to it's fullest yet. He wanted to scream at the top of his lungs, but refrained himself from doing so.
"Can you please leave me alone?" Tai asked his parents, still not looking at them. "Can you go see how my friends are?" He didn't hear them leave, but when he turned to look, they were gone.
A few hours later Riley came back in the room to give him her report. Tai's parents still weren't back. "Okay, well Matt has a fractured skull, but he was stitched up good and will be fine. T.K. walked away with only scratches and bruises. I already told you Sora she's pretty much hungover on all the drugs we've given her. Your sister is in recovery, and I'm happy to report that she's doing good. Yourparents are with her now."
Tai breathed a sigh of relief. "But what about Mimi, and Izzy?"
Riley flipped through the papers on her clipboard. "Mimi..Mimi, I don't have anything her on her. Another nurse must be with her, I'll go check, be right back."
A few moments after she left, his parents walked in, relief showed on their faces. "They said she's going to be fine. Apparently the bleeding wasn't that serious and they were able to stop it." His father told him.
"Oh good, I was so worried, I 'm so glad." Was all Tai managed to say, " Do you guys know what happened to Mimi or to Izzy, the nurse wouldn't tell me."
"Oh Tai, I'm so sorry." Mrs. Kamiya fell down next to his bedside and gripped his hand, "Izzy was dead when they found him."
So sad, so sad. Review please tell me what you think