Four-leaf-Clover
This fic is wonderful!! I cant wait for the next part to be posted!!!!!!!!!! You are a wonderful writer and I hope the next part is out soon!!
Aqua: *preens* Wai wai! Didja hear that? I'm a wonderful writer!! *preens more* Sanku!! You are a wonderful reviewer!
Isis Blue
Is Shuu-chan surprised to hear that he can manipulate plants? And as for Hiei's old flame, now who could that have been? *thinks she already knows* Having the twins raised by dragons is definitely one of the least angsty explainations that I've heard of their history. Nice job and thank you for posting early!
Aqua: You get to find out soon about the plants! Hehe. And, yes, I think everyone knows who Hiei's old flame was, but I'm gonna have fun playing with it anyway. The dragons was a last minute idea. I wanted a way for Hiei to still have Kokryuuha, becaues it is my favorite of his attacks. *grins* Plus, this way, it helps them go from scared and alone children, to adults who are certain of their abilities. *nods*
koashura ()
*twitch twitch* ... i think my previous review was cut off. oh well, i -had- mentioned it was too long.. stupid ff.net ..anyway. good story, yesh
Aqua: *huggles* Sorry that ff.net cut if off! ^_^ I like to get reviews, no matter of long they are. Thankies so much for re-posting one!!!
koashura ()
ee! leaving it at such a crucial moment! .
Aqua: *cackles* Hai hai!! Cliffhanger, baby, yeah! ^_^ and, yay, two reveiws from you for one chapter!!! hehehe
Yonaka no Inu-Ryuu
I did...? *feels like a freak* *bluuuuush* I DIDN'T MEAN TO!!!! Okeeeee...I loved the backstory! That was so cute and...ORIGINAL!!! *pats on back* ^.^ You did a REALLY good job! *starts packing tent* I won't need this for a while! ^.^ (is gonna stay in nice warm house instead of cold tent) Ummmm...oh ya. Write more or die blah blah yada yada (insert horrific death here) blah blah (obsenity) blah blah NOW!!!
Aqua: *beams and glompies* Sanku!!! Don't worry, you ain't any more of a freak than me. *blinks... cough* Not that that would make you feel any better. ^_^;; I'm going to post up as much as I can every day! I stayed up until three last night typing some more chapters! *grins* So here ya go!
Tifalee
This is a really great fic. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Keep writing! ^_^
Aqua: *salutes* Will do! ^__^ I am dragging things on rather well, aren't I? *grins* Patience is a virtue, grasshopper! (What is it with me and movie quotes today?)
Reaching Your Limits: A YYH alternate universe
Episode 24: Confusion. Mass Contemplations
Hiei watched as the humans exchanged looks. He couldn't tell what they were thinking beyond their astonishment from his and Yukina's explinations. Again, it was Yuusuke who broke the silence. "Can we have a while to think about this? I mean, it is all just so overwhelming. I'm sure we all need some time to let it sink in."
"We have tomorrow off of school," Keiko pointed out. "You could all come to my parents noodle house for some lunch and talk about it there. I'll make sure you aren't disturbed."
Hiei frowned at this. "You shouldn't be involved any more than you are. You are just like most other humans and this could place your life in danger," he stated.
Keiko looked at him for a moment, then shook her head. "No way. If my boyfriend is involved, then so am I. Besides, I already know your secret, and I'm one of Yukina's friends," she stated, her tone determined and angry.
Sighing, Hiei shrugged. It didn't look like she was going to back down, and he didn't want to be bothered with having to argue about it with her. Besides, if he mistreated Keiko, then that could lead to complications with gaining Yuusuke's help. "Fine," he stated. "However, you are not my responsibility. If you become a target, I am not going to fight for you. I've got more important things to take care of."
Ignoring his sister's startled gasp at his words and Yuusuke's angry shout, Hiei turned on his heel and began walking away. He needed to get to pass on this information to Koenma as soon as possible, so he would have to get back to Genkai's temple in order to contact Botan.
He heard footsteps following him and turned to see Shuuichi. The others were still a fair distance away, talking quietly. "What is it?" he asked, looking up at the red-head.
Shuuichi looked thoughtful as he came to stand next to Hiei. "You meantioned that you didn't know what ability I had besides manipulating plants. Is it true that I can do something like that? Wouldn't I of known?" he asked.
"Your energy works in a subtle way," Hiei replied. He carefully avoided meantioning youki. "Because you have such an interest in plants, you probably never noticed when you fed them your power. However, I was able to sense it the night that you and the others came to Genkai's temple."
"Does Koenma-sama think that this ability will allow me to help you?" Shuuichi questioned.
Hiei hesitated for a moment, then shook his head. "I don't know why Koenma chose you as one of the people to help us. So far, I haven't seen any evidence that your plant manipulation might help," he replied.
Shuuichi looked put out with this information, but nodded anyway. "I see. Well, then I will talk to you tomorrow. I think that I need to go home and digest the information I was given today," he said quietly.
As the youth turned and began walking away, Hiei found himself calling the other's name. When Shuuichi turned, Hiei wondered what he hell he had been planning to say. "Don't worry about any more attacks. I'm keeping guard," he finally stated, grimacing a little when his words sounded only half- hearted.
Still, Shuuichi smiled and nodded. "I'm glad," he stated, then vanished into the trees, no doubt on his way home.
Hiei vanished in a blur, following undetected in the trees. He reached out momentarily, sensing for any other demons, but was only able to detect that of his sister. He didn't want to admit it, but the thought that Shuuichi could control plants bothered him.
Twenty-six years ago, he had met someone else with a similar talent. Someone who had seduced him before he'd even realized what had happened, someone who had taken his heart before he'd known that he had one. The same person that had left him without so much as a goodbye. If Shuuichi had a similar talent with his plants, it would be like ripping open an old wound.
One that had never really healed.
End Episode 24
This fic is wonderful!! I cant wait for the next part to be posted!!!!!!!!!! You are a wonderful writer and I hope the next part is out soon!!
Aqua: *preens* Wai wai! Didja hear that? I'm a wonderful writer!! *preens more* Sanku!! You are a wonderful reviewer!
Isis Blue
Is Shuu-chan surprised to hear that he can manipulate plants? And as for Hiei's old flame, now who could that have been? *thinks she already knows* Having the twins raised by dragons is definitely one of the least angsty explainations that I've heard of their history. Nice job and thank you for posting early!
Aqua: You get to find out soon about the plants! Hehe. And, yes, I think everyone knows who Hiei's old flame was, but I'm gonna have fun playing with it anyway. The dragons was a last minute idea. I wanted a way for Hiei to still have Kokryuuha, becaues it is my favorite of his attacks. *grins* Plus, this way, it helps them go from scared and alone children, to adults who are certain of their abilities. *nods*
koashura ()
*twitch twitch* ... i think my previous review was cut off. oh well, i -had- mentioned it was too long.. stupid ff.net ..anyway. good story, yesh
Aqua: *huggles* Sorry that ff.net cut if off! ^_^ I like to get reviews, no matter of long they are. Thankies so much for re-posting one!!!
koashura ()
ee! leaving it at such a crucial moment! .
Aqua: *cackles* Hai hai!! Cliffhanger, baby, yeah! ^_^ and, yay, two reveiws from you for one chapter!!! hehehe
Yonaka no Inu-Ryuu
I did...? *feels like a freak* *bluuuuush* I DIDN'T MEAN TO!!!! Okeeeee...I loved the backstory! That was so cute and...ORIGINAL!!! *pats on back* ^.^ You did a REALLY good job! *starts packing tent* I won't need this for a while! ^.^ (is gonna stay in nice warm house instead of cold tent) Ummmm...oh ya. Write more or die blah blah yada yada (insert horrific death here) blah blah (obsenity) blah blah NOW!!!
Aqua: *beams and glompies* Sanku!!! Don't worry, you ain't any more of a freak than me. *blinks... cough* Not that that would make you feel any better. ^_^;; I'm going to post up as much as I can every day! I stayed up until three last night typing some more chapters! *grins* So here ya go!
Tifalee
This is a really great fic. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Keep writing! ^_^
Aqua: *salutes* Will do! ^__^ I am dragging things on rather well, aren't I? *grins* Patience is a virtue, grasshopper! (What is it with me and movie quotes today?)
Reaching Your Limits: A YYH alternate universe
Episode 24: Confusion. Mass Contemplations
Hiei watched as the humans exchanged looks. He couldn't tell what they were thinking beyond their astonishment from his and Yukina's explinations. Again, it was Yuusuke who broke the silence. "Can we have a while to think about this? I mean, it is all just so overwhelming. I'm sure we all need some time to let it sink in."
"We have tomorrow off of school," Keiko pointed out. "You could all come to my parents noodle house for some lunch and talk about it there. I'll make sure you aren't disturbed."
Hiei frowned at this. "You shouldn't be involved any more than you are. You are just like most other humans and this could place your life in danger," he stated.
Keiko looked at him for a moment, then shook her head. "No way. If my boyfriend is involved, then so am I. Besides, I already know your secret, and I'm one of Yukina's friends," she stated, her tone determined and angry.
Sighing, Hiei shrugged. It didn't look like she was going to back down, and he didn't want to be bothered with having to argue about it with her. Besides, if he mistreated Keiko, then that could lead to complications with gaining Yuusuke's help. "Fine," he stated. "However, you are not my responsibility. If you become a target, I am not going to fight for you. I've got more important things to take care of."
Ignoring his sister's startled gasp at his words and Yuusuke's angry shout, Hiei turned on his heel and began walking away. He needed to get to pass on this information to Koenma as soon as possible, so he would have to get back to Genkai's temple in order to contact Botan.
He heard footsteps following him and turned to see Shuuichi. The others were still a fair distance away, talking quietly. "What is it?" he asked, looking up at the red-head.
Shuuichi looked thoughtful as he came to stand next to Hiei. "You meantioned that you didn't know what ability I had besides manipulating plants. Is it true that I can do something like that? Wouldn't I of known?" he asked.
"Your energy works in a subtle way," Hiei replied. He carefully avoided meantioning youki. "Because you have such an interest in plants, you probably never noticed when you fed them your power. However, I was able to sense it the night that you and the others came to Genkai's temple."
"Does Koenma-sama think that this ability will allow me to help you?" Shuuichi questioned.
Hiei hesitated for a moment, then shook his head. "I don't know why Koenma chose you as one of the people to help us. So far, I haven't seen any evidence that your plant manipulation might help," he replied.
Shuuichi looked put out with this information, but nodded anyway. "I see. Well, then I will talk to you tomorrow. I think that I need to go home and digest the information I was given today," he said quietly.
As the youth turned and began walking away, Hiei found himself calling the other's name. When Shuuichi turned, Hiei wondered what he hell he had been planning to say. "Don't worry about any more attacks. I'm keeping guard," he finally stated, grimacing a little when his words sounded only half- hearted.
Still, Shuuichi smiled and nodded. "I'm glad," he stated, then vanished into the trees, no doubt on his way home.
Hiei vanished in a blur, following undetected in the trees. He reached out momentarily, sensing for any other demons, but was only able to detect that of his sister. He didn't want to admit it, but the thought that Shuuichi could control plants bothered him.
Twenty-six years ago, he had met someone else with a similar talent. Someone who had seduced him before he'd even realized what had happened, someone who had taken his heart before he'd known that he had one. The same person that had left him without so much as a goodbye. If Shuuichi had a similar talent with his plants, it would be like ripping open an old wound.
One that had never really healed.
End Episode 24